souloho19:
@honourable356 rchilee jide219 kikiwendy queenjuli and everyone confused by the last update I appreciate your critic comments. most times its easier to spot irregularities when you're watching from the stands than the referee himself..
Remember pa Kenneth is the number 1 citizen of Amaife, respected by everybody..the crowd urged him to make a speech. There has been doubts and rumours within them but nothing concrete and it is safe to say he was given the podium to clear the 'air' well that was my perspective while writing it
As for mama Ezinne and the palm wine it is strange to start gyrating when Bartholomew still has life in him
just wait for the next update sha..everything would be worked out.
once more thanks and Jah bless

We are waiting o infact we are running out of patience pls update! more data to your phone

and here I was thinking that identifying and catching the devil will bring us to a conclusion. How wrong was I..... more twists

One thing i have learnt in reading stories from great writers is not to critize a story untill it's conclusion.
More...........quick update.

I doubted this story at the beginning, but the suspense held me close like a spouse.

You are gifted.
More brain fall on you.

I've been reading for a while now. Just caught up with the waiting crew. welldone dear but update fast oh.

Mr soul.u finish work for dis ur story.....if say u be sm now i for say make u chop egede...nice one

badohemmy:
I doubted this story at the beginning, but the suspense held me close like a spouse.

You are gifted.
More brain fall on you.

which head him go take carry am

souloho19:
@honourable356 rchilee jide219 kikiwendy queenjuli and everyone confused by the last update I appreciate your critic comments. most times its easier to spot irregularities when you're watching from the stands than the referee himself..
Remember pa Kenneth is the number 1 citizen of Amaife, respected by everybody..the crowd urged him to make a speech. There has been doubts and rumours within them but nothing concrete and it is safe to say he was given the podium to clear the 'air' well that was my perspective while writing it
As for mama Ezinne and the palm wine it is strange to start gyrating when Bartholomew still has life in him
just wait for the next update sha..everything would be worked out.
once more thanks and Jah bless

when should we wait for the update

TeekayCarter:


you like designers abi? you can help patronise him....

Lolz who doesn't like good thing
But for it to be sold by the devil ....I run
Look at all he did when selling okrika
What more if he starts selling designers

smileing:


Lolz who doesn't like good thing
But for it to be sold by the devil ....I run
Look at all he did when selling okrika
What more if he starts selling designers

lol..funny girl

will somebody please help me with the link of delayed diagnosis.

joshnes:
will somebody please help me with the link of delayed diagnosis.

https://www.nairaland.com/3571801/delayed-diagnosis

it's an amazing, witty story...enjoy!

light4life:

https://www.nairaland.com/3571801/delayed-diagnosis
it's an amazing, witty story...enjoy!

hehehehe link giver how far

Exactly why i dont like reading NL stories till it completed..u go jez dey wait for update,dey refresh page like livescore

ILLICITblood:
Exactly why i dont like reading NL stories till it completed..u go jez dey wait for update,dey refresh page like livescore

Alaye calm down

Leesah:

hehehehe link giver how far

wahala sombori

Leesah:
hehehehe link giver how far

Amebor Leesah! u don find me for here ba?
I don dey run commot before u expose me.

[quote author=donblazer10 post=62329015]lol..funny girl[/quote

Aww am blushing o

Observer3:


wahala sombori

hahahahahahahahahaha me?? wahala somebori chai

light4life:

Amebor Leesah! u don find me for here ba?
I don dey run commot before u expose me.

lolzzzzz u know I won't coz your crush is here... my baby girl4life

ILLICITblood:
Exactly why i dont like reading NL stories till it completed..u go jez dey wait for update,dey refresh page like livescore

Alaye!!!

NairaBet legend

smileing:

Lolz who doesn't like good thing But for it to be sold by the devil ....I run Look at all he did when selling okrika What more if he starts selling designers

It would make sense oooh.... it would be a classy hell.

Touché

This story has not ended yet


Nice write up btw...

Where is the rest of the story? ���

TeekayCarter:

Alaye!!!
NairaBet legend

lol

TeekayCarter:

Alaye!!!
NairaBet legend

lol

TeekayCarter:


It would make sense oooh.... it would be a classy hell.

Classy hell indeed
Scary

light4life:


https://www.nairaland.com/3571801/delayed-diagnosis

it's an amazing, witty story...enjoy!

thanks, if its anything like the devil wears okrika, I think I will enjoy it.

2 much lesson to learn

Hope Mr souloho19 is in good health, this one we've not heard from him.

souloho19:
@honourable356 rchilee jide219 kikiwendy queenjuli and everyone confused by the last update I appreciate your critic comments. most times its easier to spot irregularities when you're watching from the stands than the referee himself..
Remember pa Kenneth is the number 1 citizen of Amaife, respected by everybody..the crowd urged him to make a speech. There has been doubts and rumours within them but nothing concrete and it is safe to say he was given the podium to clear the 'air' well that was my perspective while writing it
As for mama Ezinne and the palm wine it is strange to start gyrating when Bartholomew still has life in him
just wait for the next update sha..everything would be worked out.
once more thanks and Jah bless

Hey souloho19 thumbs up to you.

I think you should just do the writing and let us try our very best to do the decoding and stuff.

I learned Wole Soyinka went for a foreign exam and when he saw the questions in the exam hall he chose not to take the exam. The questions were drawn from one of his books. The question was on reviewing the book. How true this is, I do not know.

May be you should watch FINDING FORRESTER and see what makes a writer an enigma. You have class.

queenjuli:
pa Kenneth is one elder they place very highly, beside they might be some jazz involved if not how can mama ezinne whose daughter was killed by this same pa Kenneth/ Bartholomew be sharing poisoned palm wine to angry villagers who are about to execute her daughter's killer. just saying

Mama ezinne is the mother of Bartholomew too which is only known to PA Kenneth and she.. Hope u understand