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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 1:38pm On Feb 05, 2013
hayoakins:

This is awesome bro... smiley wink

Awesome ko...don't make his head swell jor.

Urs was very nice as well. *thumbs up
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 1:38pm On Feb 05, 2013
~vicky~:
you re kind enuf to be stingy tongue

aradite! super glued fingers tongue
i go wait till next year jare cheesy
ha!
smh! o ye of little faith.. U no wan 4low me chop wen d thing dey small abi? When hin dey big i no go give u chop o tongue
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Caracta(f): 1:39pm On Feb 05, 2013
Where is inspired_m? There is no time to waste. Lets fix a date abeg.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 1:42pm On Feb 05, 2013
uj_sizzle: Mynd and Dope Jemi I looooove your poems, who are they for? I'm laying claims oo.

Tmama i can have two vals shebi? Plssss say yes!
I'm calling dibs on these two

Embargo placed grin grin

Yes na! As many as u can lay claim on. grin

Me sef don dey eye Debosky. wink

@ Asis, nice one. cool

@Bosun, YES!!!

So, when am I getting d gift? tongue grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 1:48pm On Feb 05, 2013
Hand in hand I watched them go.
Lovers in love.
Who could blame them?
Love was in the air
and they breathed it.
A toast to their wounds,
the shots from cupid's arrow.
That baby witch
that missed me every time.

So pen in hand and paper empty,
I sit again in my shell.
With all the time in the world
I could write a long letter,
and decorate her name with roses.
Problem is,
there is no name.
Who would be patient enough
to read my gibberish?

Two words I scribble neatly
BE MINE.
And out the window
I set it free.
Let the wind take it
wherever it wishes.
Maybe...just maybe,
somewhere not here,
a lonely heart beats like mine.

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 1:48pm On Feb 05, 2013
yuzedo: ItsModella,

You must chop my money
Chop my moneyyyyyyyyy
Chop my money,
I don't care,
I don't care,
'cos i get am plentyyyyyyy!

- Yuzedo angry angry angry
LMAO!! wa gbayi. Is it not to chop money? I'm am ever ready, let's go there!!
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 1:50pm On Feb 05, 2013
bennyraz: smh! o ye of little faith.. U no wan 4low me chop wen d thing dey small abi? When hin dey big i no go give u chop o tongue

cry cry cry
u re wicked angry lol
oya bring am, i go manage am grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by hayoakins(m): 1:53pm On Feb 05, 2013
Tgirl4real:

Awesome ko...don't make his head swell jor.

Urs was very nice as well. *thumbs up

lolz...those were the last romantic poem i wrote, now i see nothing good in "LOVE" cos people just say it without meaning a S H I T... LOVE truly put asunder... his poem expressed my present conception of love.

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 1:56pm On Feb 05, 2013
@ OAHRAY
Who's d lucky babe wink
9CE POEM
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by pauldesimple(m): 2:06pm On Feb 05, 2013
Ifunaya
Odinaka
Two but one
Bringing fun
All seasons
With uncountable reasons

Blessed be me
For an answered plea
You are mine
Nine out of nine
A dream come through
Oh what gladness whenever you say 'I love you'

Read my lips
This promise I'll keep
No more Cindy
Or any other lady
Your side
Shall I abide
Henceforth
Everyday I live on earth

Cross my heart
You, I'll never hurt
And our love shall never crash
For I shall cherish
And water it
Daily till late
For you are mine
Nine out of nine

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 2:07pm On Feb 05, 2013
~vicky~:
@ OAHRAY
Who's d lucky babe wink
9CE POEM
there is no name sad
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 2:08pm On Feb 05, 2013
Oahray: there is no name sad
cheesy cheesy cheesy
put my name then tongue grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 2:15pm On Feb 05, 2013
~vicky~:


cry cry cry
u re wicked angry lol
oya bring am, i go manage am grin
now u're talking grin u see what i mean... True love suffers grin By d time i buy u hummer jeep then, dem no go no say u don suffer suya and zobo b4 tongue

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 2:17pm On Feb 05, 2013
^^^
cheesy cheesy cheesy
smh
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by donifez(m): 2:25pm On Feb 05, 2013
Love is an adventure...best attained when even.

your reflection always grazing my mind in diverse ways.

Emotion is an ocean which cant be diverted.

My fingers trembling..no one to grasp it.

Let me be you adam and you my eve.

Let our love be like the first 2 in paradise.

WILL YOU BE MY VAL.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 2:31pm On Feb 05, 2013
~vicky~:


^^^
cheesy cheesy cheesy
smh
shaking my legs cheesy
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Redmosquito(m): 2:38pm On Feb 05, 2013
uj_sizzle:
sharrap n write me something

U first

Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 2:46pm On Feb 05, 2013
I didn't write this, but it's for me. tongue

An e-proposal

Waiting patiently on Nairaland for the love of my life (Tgirl)to come online
I've kept my life's savings
Just to spend on her
To buy her some jewellery
So she might dazzle in the morning sun

I would hold her hands
And go on my knees
I would overcome fear
And tell her my heart online

It may be difficult
It may be impossible
So much hate on that forum
But it's worth it
I won't care what other members might say

Though I stammer...still I shall linger on
Though I doubt her response...my heart shall not quake
I would search my heart for the right words,
I would shun other Jealous Nairaland members
I would began a thread and ask her politely
Will you marry me be my val?

I say YES!!! Where are u o? I need a gift. Lol tongue
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by timpaker(m): 2:47pm On Feb 05, 2013
I have one heart beating and yearning for you
A breath in search of your lost aura - love,
my guide to you, my pearls and ruby rock
My trophy of happiness and reason for life


I only wish to walk you on wet roses
And slow - dance with you at potter's bay
Path your hair and whisper you sweet words
And ferry you around the paradises on earth

But I'm choked with some killer words here
With none-no-idea on how to voice it
I only longed to show you rather than tell you
on the sacred alter of love

My freaking fingers frights in frost
As i scribble these heavy words
Baby....Baby...Baby...!
Will you be my Val?


Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 2:54pm On Feb 05, 2013
~vicky~:

cheesy cheesy cheesy
put my name then tongue grin
you want make all those many guys proclaim jihad for my head? grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by LarrySun(m): 3:03pm On Feb 05, 2013
How many angels can dance on the point of a pin?

How many wings can we count from an exaltation of larks?

When giant are toppled, what hope is there for the midgets?

The day approaches,

And to thou, I'm proposing.

Even the arrow has been sheated in a red quiver,

And my heart bleeds for a lover.

Will Cupid take kindness?

By puncturing my ventricles with mildness?

O! There she sits, my val.

Her skirt billowing, even at the hem.

But my brows are furrowing, given how she reads my poem.

Now I know,

Now I know,

That after many words of love confessed,

With me she is not slightly obsessed.

I have been deceiving myself me,

Thinking the val she'd spend with me.

Go with him, my darling val,

Have fun with your lovely pal.

Lo, I have been too late,

To alter the course of fate.

My val has been claimed,

By that with a faster aim.

I shall be here waiting for you,

Even if Valentine extends till June.

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Caracta(f): 3:29pm On Feb 05, 2013
Awww Larry, now you gonna make me cry!
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by bosun11(m): 3:29pm On Feb 05, 2013
Tgirl4real....: tanx a bunch...u'a darling! .so what's d plan naw...holla @ my inbox. Tot u wuld either comment or liked d poem tho.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 3:35pm On Feb 05, 2013
Caracta: Awww Larry, now you gonna make me cry!
water plenty 4 ur eyez then grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Caracta(f): 3:37pm On Feb 05, 2013
bennyraz: water plenty 4 ur eyez then grin
Leave me alone jor. Go and meet your partner.

*wipes tears*
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 3:41pm On Feb 05, 2013
Caracta:
Leave me alone jor. Go and meet your partner.

*wipes tears*
ha ha ha ha.. Crocodile tears.. No guy would buy it ok tongue tongue
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Caracta(f): 3:43pm On Feb 05, 2013
bennyraz: ha ha ha ha.. Crocodile tears.. No guy would buy it ok tongue tongue
It's not for sale. Go and write a poem na. My val will soon be here. Watch out for my Inspired Jeep tongue
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by LarrySun(m): 3:44pm On Feb 05, 2013
bennyraz: ha ha ha ha.. Crocodile tears.. No guy would buy it ok tongue tongue
Go and meet your val, stop disturbing Caracter.

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 3:47pm On Feb 05, 2013
Caracta:
It's not for sale. Go and write a poem na. My val will soon be here. Watch out for my Inspired Jeep tongue
for your mind abi? Cuz wetin hin go dash u na inspired keke napep tongue
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 3:49pm On Feb 05, 2013
Larry-Sun:

Go and meet your val, stop disturbing Caracter.
na testing microphone 1,2,1,2 i dey do her o!
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Caracta(f): 3:51pm On Feb 05, 2013
bennyraz: for your mind abi? Cuz wetin hin go dash u na inspired keke napep tongue
Gerrout! He doesn't sell keke. Stop derailing. Vicky has been looking for you.

@larry, who is the poem for? Give us a name pls.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 3:57pm On Feb 05, 2013
Caracta:
Gerrout! He doesn't sell keke. Stop derailing. Vicky has been looking for you.

@larry, who is the poem for? Give us a name pls.
smh

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