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Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 5:14pm On Jun 28, 2008 |
lets write a rhymed poem portraying revenge, vengance or what have you in any narrative technique ie (first person, third person, omniscient ) make it bloody heres mine Am back in your life Determined to take your slutty wife With a gun, acid or bloody knife Just the way the love started When she was my boo the way it sure ended When she turned over to you Now nothing shall end this appetizing pressure But to feel those cold hearts under the seizure Of my hands, giving me then the only pleasure I need to appease this sensation Of vengance, revenge and sweet temptation lets see yours 1 Like |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 5:28pm On Jun 28, 2008 |
Determined he left home Not alone, but with that bloody hoe Which had taken the life of the farmer son Who had wronged this unforgiven soul And didn't live to tell the tale in this sun The next target is the new neighbour next door Who didn't know a devil lived across the lawn She thought they were one, thought they had love, Who would tell her, she would still see her God For not knowing, but had done wrong To this heart that never forgave cos He's the devil's son Like a sadist, he walks through her door from afar, i can only but watch Her screams, i hear make my blood run Now he's out, all clothed in blood The deed already far done With tears my eye catch the devil's pry . . . . . . Oh my God! i hope am not the next in line |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by clemcykul(f): 5:05pm On Jul 02, 2008 |
looking behind the abyss doom fast approaching beclouding my sense of judgement looking at an open invitation to lay my cold hands as death does on my prey. a shout of victory as i sniff out the living from my prey darkness hovers as a blanket wrapping me in its malicious cover, in exultation i embrace the darkness, around my shoulder, and i sigh in contentment, at last blood flows freely through the field |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 6:42pm On Jul 02, 2008 |
wow! what a suprise i thought you only had eyes for those clown who live down that line what a big big surprise |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by nanaboi(m): 7:13pm On Jul 02, 2008 |
Grace after meals I burp after meals I mop after deals My deals are grave -the graves, I dig. They always feel brave before their blood soils my bib. I am decent; this descent of the prime ex-Saint so I dispose of the bones disinfect the homes hence I dig and mop up - blood and epidermis; and I burp with grace after meals |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by janami(f): 7:56pm On Jul 02, 2008 |
My eyes they hurt just thinking just envisaging what i could do to make u pay My mind it sleeps i wonder i see hmmm , i see blood teardrops u don't want to know how u would look when i am through wit u |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Nobody: 8:01pm On Jul 02, 2008 |
Wish I could rhyme |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by protocol(m): 3:29pm On Jul 03, 2008 |
I LIKE ALL BUT THE RHYMING SCHEME OF THE FIRST IS AAABCDDEEEFF. STILL ANALYSING OTHERS. |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by simmy(m): 4:12pm On Jul 03, 2008 |
blurb after meals is exquisite writing! dog, if u wrote tht ure not bad at all |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by nanaboi(m): 7:51pm On Jul 07, 2008 |
@Simmy I wrote it infront of the computer after reading others' posts. Thanks for saying it's ok I only just noticed I wrote "blurb" instead of "burp" and have corrected myself. @ Stillwater But hey, u make good gory creations, edit them after creation and add rhymes while doing that. Even God had to edit man to create woman and here she is today, a good eye rhyme - her bossom and bottom, I mean. Ha ha! |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by LASIEFAIRE(m): 8:12pm On Jul 07, 2008 |
was a two word rhyme, like Kanye's Two words, |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 9:37am On Jul 08, 2008 |
dnt understand |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by nanaboi(m): 8:37pm On Jul 09, 2008 |
@ LASIEFAIRE were u talking about my work? |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:11am On Jul 10, 2008 |
someone is playing games with my eye where is the silly rhyme post someone put up there b4 |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 9:46am On Jul 12, 2008 |
THE SADIST Its time they feel the pain They made me feel It’s of no gain but deep within Fire, brimstone, let them fall For this mortal shall receive my call Sweet vengeance is hard to resist And with no ill-chance will I this miss They shall pay with their blood Soul heart and all For the sins of the father come To harm all even to their young No leniency shall prevail With no eye-wink will I even fail Not for love, nor for lust Nor for hate, nor for trust That I set out with this mission To bring them all to death submission Assassin, betrayer, executioner don’t call me this But call me simple and clearly a sadist THAT COLD MORNING That cold morning can testify For this knife inside your intestine ‘Cos I so wanted to do this To get u down on your cold knees And see the cries from those mocking lips Isn’t it so sad now that that passionate kiss u gave Means not a damn thing to me today? You are not even alive to tell the tale Cos your blood, sure fills this pail It would be used to appease the deities Whom you’ve shamed with the dirties Of your blood with the seeds from your testis Filling this virginal day spring Now nothing can be more fun-giving Like this gory sight Of your blood oozing so freely In this clouded night Telling of your once springing vitality But gone, when you touched the blackened heart |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by dosbel(m): 10:28am On Aug 20, 2008 |
LOVE ABUSE Dad, meet my fiancee have you done a blood test yes dad, we need rest what about the hiv test dad! don't be a pest and the fertility test stop this lest, lest what? you can't come here with a ridiculous quest we have tried our best i expected a terrific zest stop your jest have you done the sanity test i am taking her to her nest i am not finished yet it is like we are going east and you west leave and forget my consent Dad it is hard enough to find a girl who loves you It is even harder to pass this tests. what do you think? 1 Like |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:10pm On Dec 12, 2008 |
its a nice one, loved the rhymes but it wasnt that bloody |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Tgirl4real(f): 1:47am On Dec 13, 2008 |
Princesa, u and blood sha |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:45am On Dec 13, 2008 |
i have blood, you have blood so lets get bloody |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 12:26pm On Dec 16, 2008 |
another bloody piece the massacre of Lara I have one command “Kill the bitch, don’t let her live” Being the hit man of the “Dragon’s mind” I carry out my task, no one do I forfeit So all the cries and pleas Lara did Could be just baseless shrills, for all it could mean They want her blood on this hoe And am pulling and giving it out, not one withhold The hard days of training really did something to my guts For now feel no hurt as this hoe tears through her heart Her once pleading lips quivering, adding to the horror of it, Wrapping me in the sweet gothic splendour, of a first kill, a first task, a task well done So real as if the devil lives in me For I didn’t flinch o felt remorse as I watch her move her last, breathe her last And transit to the other side in cold blood To me, it was just another assignment, nothing more And to admit emotion is being unfit for the job, which am not. Now going back, carrying this hoe that holds her blood I cry within for the person I am, the person I’ve been For the devil that possess this hear, soul and being For it has come to say and am sure never to leave. |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by nature262(m): 10:37pm On Dec 19, 2008 |
Be carefull what you wish cause you might just have it Be carefull what you write cause you might just do it just kidding |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by nature262(m): 10:40pm On Dec 19, 2008 |
Be carefull what you wish cause you might just have it Be carefull what you write cause you might just do it just kidding |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:09pm On Dec 20, 2008 |
well atleast i can imagine doing it |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Krrush(m): 10:28pm On Dec 20, 2008 |
Your Time's Up O.k kiddos, let me give this here thing a try Brace yourselves, this ain't no sugary pie You cut me, I bleed You suck it to me I dry-up like weed Then you spit on my dead skull Overjoyed at my end-fall Only its the begining It really was never over and done because here I am, back and singing The fight's far from won For while I may appear killed I never quite get finished My indestructibility is willed Holy-Grail made and burnished Now I thrust my vengeful spear Deep inside your doomed breast Your whole being broken You face the mask of fear Your end comes quick and victory is mine You never once guessed it Your avengeful foe is I, almighty Time! |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by NaJaHaJe(f): 7:26am On Dec 22, 2008 |
errrr . . . bloody . . . . .ok . . . Knuckles knocking fists smacking Its only thru love Its only True love Baby, it's for better or worse An expired dominatrix i won't bleed you dry for death won't fix your painful lie Baby, its for better or worse Yes men don't cry so don't you cry everyday i slice your skin oh, the taste of skin Baby, its for better or worse I love you x |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 6:32pm On Dec 22, 2008 |
hey hey guess who is getting bloody guess who love the feel of blood upon their hands guess who doesent flinch while running a spear down a breast guess . . . . . . . . guess . . . . . . . . Krush! glad i got a co-murderer NaJa HaJe: i wish i got the plot of ur poem oh it was a little bloody though try to spice in more blood |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Krrush(m): 12:32am On Dec 24, 2008 |
princesa: Matter of fact, I do run a "spear" down women's breasts quite infrequently, though . . er . .a "scalpel" that is . . Professionally, I'm a surgeon. So you see I often get my bloody hands all over young flesh Another impromptu one . . Love Blast let me take your lips And suck 'em till they bleed They be mine for keeps 'c o s I'm all the nigga you'll ever need let me take you now Take you off like a kettle on steam Your thrashing claws showing me just how Much bloody love seems as you scream Now I ravage you from behind As I anal-ize the depth of your throaty cry You blow, in so many ways my mind As we lock and lurch, then end-up in an endless sigh Like two fighting foes in a death-struggle One to die and the other to last So it just then seemed even now as we snuggle Our bloody-sweet love blast |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:08am On Dec 24, 2008 |
Krrush:you must be geting all the fun Krrush:elicit imaginations i dont wanna even conjure so sexually bloody kudos first one bloodier than i am, best assured its not for long |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 11:46am On Dec 24, 2008 |
Matter of fact, I do run a "spear" down women's breasts quite infrequently, though . . er . .a "scalpel" that is . . Professionally, I'm a surgeon.is this poem or mojo |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:58am On Dec 24, 2008 |
dnt turn here to one of your unseriousness |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 12:04pm On Dec 24, 2008 |
but on a brighter note i could have you for breakfast skin you alive for my pleasure dance to the shrills of your pain suck every ounce of blood you have left discard your cacass to my snakes and vultures just for the pleasure of it the horror of it and the amusement it brings so stay dude, be my next plaything |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 2:54pm On Dec 24, 2008 |
dnt turn here to one of your unseriousness |
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