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Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 6:17pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
Plz has any1 seen kingphilip and chade |
Re: Meant To Be by walewunmi(m): 7:16pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
stefikal: My ba3 ran flat and see comments way I miss chai!Hmmm tanks 4d permission let me go kick her behind,as for king phillips n chade I never c dem oh but I will organise a search party 2go look for them,in dis thread we take d safety of our readers very seriously...wud report bak 2u stef!!! We are here |
Re: Meant To Be by SenatorPope(m): 7:31pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
I finally caught up wit u Guys*dancing skelewu* I knew u were also gonna be a good writer and dat prompted me to check ur profile on Kingzpen [my life on campus] thread.....and hear u are written beautifully... Kip up d good work One more thing Help me tell princess dat I want to meet her. |
Re: Meant To Be by Hameenat94(f): 7:48pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
No update yet? |
Re: Meant To Be by dammygoody(m): 7:53pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
Waiting for update oooooh |
Re: Meant To Be by LarrySun(m): 8:42pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
stefikal: -5-Rough review. I'm sorry for my absence. I noticed in this update excess rhetoricals/unanswered questions. Good jobs though. |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 9:40pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
Senator_Pope: I finally caught up wit u Guys*dancing skelewu* *dancing with you* tnks 4 reading, following and commenting. Don't worry I'll tell Princess |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 9:42pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
Hameenat94: No update yet? dammygoody: Waiting for update oooooh updates are in d morning now...plz thou shalt not vex with me..please |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 9:47pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
Larry-Sun: Larry-Sun is back! Yay! Dancing...I missed you Sir, thanks for the review. Editing it asap...thank you. |
Re: Meant To Be by Yemlizzy(f): 10:41pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
Filled with suspense! Nice one,still following |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 10:43pm On Dec 16, 2013 |
Yemlizzy: Filled with suspense! Nice one,still following tnks dear...u remember u still have something to tell me |
Re: Meant To Be by dammygoody(m): 8:35am On Dec 17, 2013 |
stefikal:lol..was just pulling your legs.. |
Re: Meant To Be by LarrySun(m): 8:35am On Dec 17, 2013 |
stefikal: *continued*Rough review. However, there is an error you need to correct in the former post. The word should be 'okada rider' not 'okada driver'. You should know that my reviews are only rough. The work still requires some professional scrutiny. Keep up the good work. The more you write, the better you become. Shalom. |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 8:53am On Dec 17, 2013 |
dammygoody: lol..was just pulling your legs.. Update coming soon |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 8:56am On Dec 17, 2013 |
Larry-Sun: thanks sir, despite the fact that they are rough I've learnt a lot and the goal is to get better, thank you. |
Re: Meant To Be by Hameenat94(f): 9:14am On Dec 17, 2013 |
Waitin impatiently# |
Re: Meant To Be by Yemlizzy(f): 9:52am On Dec 17, 2013 |
stefikal: Dont mention,its nothing. I have not forgotten what i said 1 Like |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 10:05am On Dec 17, 2013 |
Hameenat94: Waitin impatiently# I'm done writing...just to post...I hope u enjoy it |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 10:10am On Dec 17, 2013 |
*continued* The thought of going to Omoye's parents house scared the hell out of Osagie, things would have been easier if Omoye was happy with him. At least he now knew the reason behind her attitude to him, this Sandra issue had totally complicated his life, he now had so many tasks. He had to apologise to Omoye, he had to beg her parents. What if she had informed her parents? That would indicate that there was fire on the mountain. And besides he had to find a way to break up with Sandra. He took his phone and dialled Omoye's number, he would keep trying till luck decided to smile on him. The attempt was futile as the operator informed him that the number was not reacheable. He made a second attempt, this time he was lucky as the phone rang, he prayed she would pick up. Maybe today was not his lucky day, he sighed as he ended the call, she still was not picking his call. He wanted her back, he had been foolish to make a mistake in Lagos and if he had the chance, he would rectify his mistakes, see what the quest to make quick wealth had done to his relationship. He leaned back against the chair while resting his head, he would keep calling her till she picked the call. "You abiii?" The man flogged him again. "I'm sorry sir," he begged while trying to rub his back where he was flogged. The man did not stop but kept on flogging him, all his pleas, screams and cries fell on deaf ears. He was to weak to even stand and run away, the man kept flogging him with so much energy and gusto. With each stroke that landed on his skin, Osagie thought his breath would disappear from him, but it seemed his body chose otherwise. The man however kept flogging him, when the cane broke Osagie felt joy gladden his weak bones, at last the man would stop with the punishment. But to his utter dismay, the man brought out a pistol, "Since the cane is slow and ineffective. Let me just teach you a lesson you'll never forget." he said while cocking the gun. Osagie hid his face, "please sir, I beg you, forgive and forget. I'll marry your daughter in the proper way, I'll be a good son-in-law." He kept on begging and making promises, if Omoye's father was bent on ending his life then he was truly dead. Was this how he was going to die? He had dreamt of the day he would walk down the aisle with Omoye. But things had fallen apart, every of his plans had totally shattered. Where was Omoye? She should come and beg her father on his behalf, why was the man even wasting time to pull the trigger? He looked up and saw that Omoye was kneeling before her father with tears in her eyes. The man had then pocketed his gun and left, Osagie crawled towards Omoye and hugged her, "Please, forgive me, I made a mistake and I'm sorry, please." he kept on crying, she was not saying anything but the fact that she kept quiet and hugged him back was enough. The ringtone of his phone woke him from his dream world, with the rate at which he was dreaming nowadays he would beat the record of Joseph the dreamer. He looked at his phone, Omoye was calling, was he still dreaming or was he finally awake? --------------------- "Dami?" Dare shouted, "Hanhan, what's going on here? Why are you fighting your best friend?" Dami just stood looking fierce, she used her hands to wipe away the saliva on her face. She had mixed feelings, a part of her was happy that brother Dare had come to her rescue while another part of her wished she had gotten extra time to beat Evelyn. She looked at Evelyn who was packing her bags, stupid girl she thought. Dare looked at the two girls in front of him, he asked a question and none of them was providing an answer, why would Dami fight her best friend? He walked up to Dami, "Dami what happened?" Dami who had been acting strong suddenly burst into tears, how would she explain to her cousin. Evelyn hurriedly took her bags and sandals and ran out of the sitting room. Dami just kept on crying, Dare who was confused just simply embraced her, he did not know what transpired but he knew children and teenage fights resulted from nasty issues. Hopefully they would settle when the time came. Tinu had then come into the picture when Evelyn and her mother kept on tormenting her. She had no idea what Tinu had done to them but the problem of Evelyn troubling her had been settled. That was the last time she saw Evelyn, the girl had transferred to another school months after and now she was back to torment her life. She looked at Chinaza's cousin who still had her head buried in a magazine. Her phone started to ring again, it was still a private number. She was infuriated, Evelyn seriously needed to free her. "Evelyn, would you free me?" she shouted "Ehn? Who is Evelyn?" the caller asked. 3 Likes |
Re: Meant To Be by Ziziola: 10:18am On Dec 17, 2013 |
Huh! Who can the caller be then? Patiently waiting for the next update |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 10:29am On Dec 17, 2013 |
Ziziola: Huh! Who can the caller be then? Patiently waiting for the next update I wonder who d caller is ooo Also waiting 4 d next update tnks 4 following |
Re: Meant To Be by missterious(f): 11:16am On Dec 17, 2013 |
Re: Meant To Be by DEllaluv(f): 11:34am On Dec 17, 2013 |
Tl 2mr abi |
Re: Meant To Be by funlover1(m): 1:00pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
Dis update is too short nah ! |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 1:19pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
miss.terious: Plz I need u to tell me d name of ur toothpaste D.Ella.luv: Yes fun lover: Dis update is too short nah ! That's about 5k words ooo I'm sorry. |
Re: Meant To Be by SenatorPope(m): 1:41pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
stefikal: "Evelyn, would you free me?" she shouted. I guess Tinu is d caller...patiently waiting for the next update*Grabs Pop corn and cola* |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 4:54pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
Senator_Pope: it appears I have two popes in d building... Senator tnks 4 attempting...I wanted 2 ask pple 2 guess who d caller was...but dropped d idea... Next chapter should reveal a lotta tinzzz. Thank you |
Re: Meant To Be by Zellie: 5:15pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
But to his utter dismay, the man brought out a pistol, "Since the cane is slow and ineffective. Let me just teach you a lesson you'll never forget." he said while corking the gun. I think it should be "cocking". Anyway I Love your story, started reading not long ago now I'm finally here , keep it up! |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 5:21pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
Zellie: But to his utter dismay, the man brought out a pistol, tnks Zellie, I'll edit it asap...tnks 4 following my story...hope not to disappoint 1 Like |
Re: Meant To Be by stefikal(f): 5:33pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
all ye relationship experts in d house...If you have d opportunity to counsel Omoye, what advise would you give her? waiting 4 ur replies...make una no fall my hand oooo |
Re: Meant To Be by missterious(f): 6:19pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
stefikal: all ye relationship experts in d house...If you have d opportunity to counsel Omoye, what advise would you give her?Even though Fola made money the wrong way, it's clear that he loves Omoye. I'll just advise her to follow her heart. BTW, I'm using chewing stick. |
Re: Meant To Be by walewunmi(m): 6:21pm On Dec 17, 2013 |
Hmmm I would just say to omoye dat she should @ least give him a chance 2hear watever rubbish he has 2say,u knw she should tink abt wats best for her son victor its nt all abt ha now cos her son is also involved in d big picture,she can't just cut the ties between fada n son just like dat,dis sought of tin is presently happening 2a family member of mine only dat d guy in question wasn't doing it 4d family bt rada 4 himself... Bt newaiz I hope she makes d best decision!!! |
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