kamura: My dear 9jadelta, you are not far from it oooh. . .

Most hit songs are inspired out of true life experiences. . . same with great movies. .

All producers need to do, is just to introduce good characters. .

Money, done dey roll be dat oohh. .

you r right o.
the only difference is, we have seen too many horror movies about hunted/haunted houses.
so, I'm not sure this one go sell at all especially because it's not bloody
people want bloody, gory horror movies that will get them shaking.

may be u should edit this script a little.

like the girl that crossed her legs.. instead of saying u woke her up, u could say she turned to a ugly, hungry hobo with alligators hands and probably a Dracula's teeth and Frankenstein's height. she started chasing u up and down till u found ur bible and started praying. then she became normal again
and u kissed her
the end

@OP come complete your story o, I sit down here with my pepsi

* continues. ..

My relationship with Obinna had not be cordial, and we have not had time to refresh it . . . i guess it was due to d distance. . and we basically dont have much to discuss if we most be on a call. . So i left him to himself. ..

Now, i am enjoying my new place, great nebos. . . and a nice landlord. . far better than my former. . .

I remembered wen i moved to the former compound. .

I was initially living in a three bedroom, in an estate called TMC estate, owned by the default.. . All State Bank. .

I made some good cash then, so paying for it wasnt a big deal. . but after much persuasion from friends and family, i decide not to renew the rent, with the intention of moving to a small apartment, a two bedroom apartment and safe more money for investment.

I got an agent, who brought me to the house. . A land with 3 nos, two bedroom apartments. . . but no tenant yet, and the building wasnt a new building neither. . .

So wat happened to the flats, why would their be three flats, all just empty. . . just like that. .

An agent wld always want to lease or rent a property so quick. . . they wld never give you full details. . .

As, we were talking. . . the Landlord came around, and i was introduced to him. . i complained about the house. . He pointed out, that water was the reason why most people left and, or few had fail to commit any payment. . That he is willing to fix the water issue if i pay him the rent in advance. .

After much inspection, i kinda like the setting and arrangement of the house. .

I told him i wld visit the place the next day with my girl. . if its ok with her, i wld pay, and give him a month to get the water and other issues fixed. .

After all and all, i paid. . . The place was fixef, after 6 months, i got a nebo, 4months later, i got my second nebo. . They the compound became full and more lively. . .

Suddenly. . . i witness the first armed robbery case in my compound. . and i was the victim. . .

But, wen the thieves where caught by the community vigilante boys. . . The theives claimed they robbed me which was quite true . .

. . . But, also claimed they robbed a woman at the other room. . . and a man at the sitting room too. . .

WHEN DID THAT HAPPENED? I was alone in that house. . . Which man and woman did u guys rob in my flat. ?.. it cant be true. . .


But, it was the statement of two theives against mine. . .
. . . even when the evidence of wat they stole were on the police table, and there were all mine .


* to be continued. . ..

@ 9jadelta. . .

Yea, i cld introduce bloody scene, if na to act am for movie ooh. . .

If i try bloody scene for a real life scenerio. . . na life imprisonment be dat ooh. .

Ordinary self defence way involve blood scene, dey cos serious wahala for naija. .

Who go defend your case.? . no forensic analysis for naija police ooh. . you are on your own . . Shekina. .

You jam goat for road, as u come out to remove the goat. . . the goat turn to person mama. . as u dey look am, police just nab u. . . U go try to explain to the police for police station, make them believe ur tori. . . so u go waka as freeman. . . hahahaahaha

@Op,abeg continue..if anybody no believe,make e comot 4 d thread na...abeg stop derailing.

kamura: @ 9jadelta. . .

Yea, i cld introduce bloody scene, if na to act am for movie ooh. . .

If i try bloody scene for a real life scenerio. . . na life imprisonment be dat ooh. .

Ordinary self defence way involve blood scene, dey cos serious wahala for naija. .

Who go defend your case.? . no forensic analysis for naija police ooh. . you are on your own . . Shekina. .

You jam goat for road, as u come out to remove the goat. . . the goat turn to person mama. . as u dey look am, police just nab u. . . U go try to explain to the police for police station, make them believe ur tori. . . so u go waka as freeman. . . hahahaahaha

hMmmmmmmmm

@Op,abeg continue... stop derailing.

Now that u are mentioning names of places, it is getting ' more real'. Op kari on, if others no believe u, I believe u. This is a dangerous and a wicked world we are living in

In all we thank God for your life

Honestly, as i ws reading ur message, one american film jst came to my memory. Guys, u hav to see this film.. Title is 1408. It's an horror film wit no bloodshed at all. I really lyk d film and i think this your story is good enough to mak a movie after some editin.

U can also write a novel on this piece wit dat ur title..

* continues. . .

After the robbery incidence. . . i was forced to get me a dog. . . so i got me a puppy. . . a cute puppy. . . so lovely

But, actually. . . when i went to buy one around Orazi, close to a fastfood joint known as SKIPPERS.. . . . i saw very cute and fat ones. . . as i stretched forth to pick one of them. .. a skinny looking one walked close to me. . looking hungry and weary. .. . but, it walked up to me, like there was an attachment. . . it was staring at me. . as if saying. . . GUY, IF U DONT GET ME OUTTA HERE, U R ON UR OWN. .

. . I looked at it with a smile, picked it up. . . Paid 75K for it. . took it home, then name it Kaptain. . And it became a beast after 8months. . fierce looking. . . caucasian and asaltian mixed breed

I wld upload the pix of kaptain shortly. . .

. . . . My dog roars . . . hardly barks. . dunno how dat started. . .The dog loves me so much, and so loyal. ..

. . . . kills anything that crosses my door at nite. .. Cos i do let it loose by 10pm. . . All the cats in dat compound had ran away, except the stubborn ones. . . had killed snakes many times. . . even big rats. . . and the likes

I cant even tell where the snakes were coming from sef. .,

Kaptain started barking most nite. .. wld come close to my window. .. and roars like a lion. . . and barks. . .


Then, after a period of months. . . Kaptain stoped barking or coming close to my window. . . i guess lt got familier with whatever it used to bark at. . .

What it does now. . . is to hide, and attack u from behind. . .

. .. . . it keeps digging holes everywhere, sniffing around. . . tryna get something out of the ground. . only Gods knws what. .?

There had never been a morning that i dont cover up excavated pit with soil dug by Kaptain. . ..


Now, i knw why those holes where being dug by kaptain. . Maybe tryna get wat was buried beneath the ground. . .


* to be continued. ..

Hmm Omo things are happening o..but if na me I don park out since no waste of time!..God help us!!

Na religion abi na literature section this story suppose dey?

I KNO SOME TINS

iykofias: Ds reminds me of wot i use to go thru several yrs back, dias always ds gal coming to me at night, she would b jumping ova my body forcefuly but happily, hugging n kissin me, telling me am all she desired, then wen she's done ,she would bring out my pennis n av sex wit me, while all ds goes on,i wil jux b staring hopelessly, i wil b so weak to even say a word, jux tears wil b comming outta my eyes.
Ds is jux 1 out of mny diffrnt xperience i av encounter. Tins r around us, only God cn save us.

I believe the good lord has set you free .

Passionately following.

I just got back from Church. . .. Wow, 408 views on a trend that is 2days old. . dats nice. .

*continues. . .. .

I got a dog, not to apprehend any thief. . . but to bark and be restless, be agitated. . .. . over any suspected moves.

The dog grew so huge. . . and loving to all except my Landlord. . .

I leave home early and come home late most times. . obviously, i am the one who releases the dog at night and cage it up by morning. . . .

Most morning, wen i get outside to get the dog caged. . . it rarely answers my call. . . i wld end up finding it sitting close to a particular well. . . sitting attentively and so focused, like one receiving a lecture in class. . .

Yes a well, inside the compound. .

I recalled asking the Landlord why was there an open well in d compound. . . that its so risky. . . kids cld slipped, tripped and fall into it. . .

His answered was. . . 'the pit was originally dug as a well, to get water for the construction of the buildings. . '

But, we can use it as refuse dump. . . and fill it up with our carbage and spoils. . . so i bought the idea of it being used as a dump for refuse. . . so i dropped d case. .

So when Kaptain barks at nite. . . and i look thru the window. . . it's always facing the direction of the pit or open well. .. and end up sitting close to it by morning time. .

Then, I cld not understand why. .. i never cared. . . i thot it was normal. . .


But. . now i disagree. .

*to be continued .

kamura: * continues. . .

After the robbery incidence. . . i was forced to get me a dog. . . so i got me a puppy. . . a cute puppy. . . so lovely

But, actually. . . when i went to buy one around Orazi, close to a fastfood joint known as SKIPPERS.. .


* to be continued. ..

Orazi in Port Harcourt? Oh my, this just got a lot more interesting...and my pop-corn is almost running out..

*runs out to Skippers to get more pop-corn*

@kamura abeg come continue I beg you, I'll be back soon...

I'm following you all the way, with my gala and pepsi, come continue the story

May God protection never runs out of our life's.

*continues. . .

I just realise dat i have been living my life with so many spiritual forces around me. . .both evil and good stretching towards my angle. . . Na waaoooh

Now, that i am in tune with the will of God . . .

I kinda ask God why all this. . .?

I graduated at a very young age. . . got a job that brought me into Phc. . . even before my NYSC programme started. . . I was already a manager even before my call-up letter came . .

Yea, a company came to my school in search of young graduates. . and my HOD recommended me to them as one of the best. . . so i passed the interview. . and got me the job offer. . . i worked for 6months before the call up came. . .. so i was doing just great. .

Now, you knw why my house was alwayz filled with friends. .

Now, they are all gone. . . .Just biz colleagues around me now. .

I ask God why. . . .?

Then, by revelation. . I recalled an event that happened, when i was in school. ..

One faithful December on a 31st night, breaking into a new year. . .. i dress up, left my hostel about 10pm. .. . in a bid to meet up with my friends and cross over into a new year. . . chilling in a nite club, drinking and smoking, for i kept alot of bad company as friendz.

As i left the room . . and took a walk down the street. . . I found myself entering into a church. . i dont get it!

I found myself walking with an usher to a seat. . . hmmmmmm. . . How did dat happen? i cldnt not explain it. .

So i remained calm. . . and said to myself. . . lemme just pass into the new yr inside the church. . afterwards i wld run up and catch up with my friends. . . that its just 11pm. . it wont be long. . it wld be all over.


After the happy Newyear exclamation. . . jumping and shaking hands in church.


... Everybody sat down again and the service continued. .

Still astonished at why are they not rounding up, my eyes quickly went up to the church banner. . . and wat was written on it was. . CROSSOVER NIGHT / VIGIL. . . COMMUNIUM AND ANOINTING SERVICE. .

. . . I got agitated. . and tried to leave the church. . i cld not. . There and then, i knew that God has arrested me today. .

I was clued to my seat. . . no bible, no joter, no pen. . all dress in black. . . so different. .


* to be continued. . .

*continues. . .

When i was time for holy communion. . i did nt get up. . everyone did. . except me. .

So you can imagine the number of eyez that were staring at me. . . I just did not feel i was ready enuff, was clean enuff, wasnt prepared. . . i just sat on my seat. . i prayed earnest. . . begging God for His forgiveness. .

Everybody that came to that church that nite, new wat the programme stood for. . i just bumped it. .

When it was time for anointing. . i still did nt get up. . i closed my eyes. . . but when i opened them. . . i found myself standing before the altar. . . So i moved to the Altar of God without knowing? i asked myself. .

There i was, standing. . uncontrollable tears dropping down my chick. .. as the choir sang. . .'I surrender all, all to Jesus, blessed saviour, i surrender all'

My knee trembles, so weak. . and so trapped in His presence. . . like a sheep prepared for a slaughter

As the man of God walked by and was anointing people. . when he got to my front . . . . . . . he paused. . told me to kneel down.. and. .

*to be continued. .

* Continues. . .,

So i knelt down before the Altar. .. and poured anointing oil all over my head. . He soaked me with the oil. .

And told the entire church to stretch their hands towards me and pray. . ., Afterwards, he told me to go to my seat and write up my prayer request. . .

I did write a full sheet with in my eyes full of tears. . . everything i wrote and has asked God. . He remained faithful and has fulfilled them . . .

The His word came into my head. .. saying. . .SON I ANOINTED YOU FOR A PURPOSE AND FOR EXPLOIT. . MAKE YOURSELF AVAILABLE FOR SERVICE


When God gave me the job i requested for. . i went carnally again. . forgetting the source of my miracle. . .

I got carried away. . .

Not until, recently when i met another man God, who told me. . . God needs me for a purpose. . . there is something He deposited in me. . My lifestyle is grieving the spirit of God. . that i shld be zealous in the things of God. . .

And i wld be amazed what my eyes wld see. . . that spiritual things are very slippery. . and not far from me

That he see a Prophetic calling in my life. .

So, i became serious with the things of God again. . Attacks started coming. .

One was a young girl, about the age of 10 or 12yrs old. . . a nebo, at the next compoud. . who accused me of having carnal knowlege with her. . . accusing me of molestation. . .

This was a case of a full grown man and a very young girl. . whose story wld you believe?

Even after the medical report states she has never been crossed before, no evidence of rape, cuts or bruises. . .

She still maintained that i raped her. . and she categorically and in details, described her ordeal in my hands.. . Oops. . . i was so shocked..

. I was the accused person ooh. . yet i believed her story. . she was so convincing. . so sure about it, i was even hating myself for doing what i did not even do. . .

The police was so angry with her and her family over a case that had been proof medically, that it never happened. . . I begged her severely to say the truth and vendicate me. . she never did. .

I have never felt so bad in my life over that case, i cried most nite, most people didnt believed me. . i was so down casted and depressed. . . for months. . .


After six months later, i heard the little girl had died over a brief illness.

I felt sooo bad. . . i had she was seriously sick, and told her mum to look for me and beg me for forgiveness. . .

That she had accused me for something i never did. .

When i had about her death, and confession. . i now recalled the voice. . .. SON I ANOINTED YOU FOR A PURPOSE. . .


So living in that house has open up my spiritual understanding .


*to be continued. . .

iykofias: Ds reminds me of wot i use to go thru several yrs back, dias always ds gal coming to me at night, she would b jumping ova my body forcefuly but happily, hugging n kissin me, telling me am all she desired, then wen she's done ,she would bring out my pennis n av sex wit me, while all ds goes on,i wil jux b staring hopelessly, i wil b so weak to even say a word, jux tears wil b comming outta my eyes.
Ds is jux 1 out of mny diffrnt xperience i av encounter. Tins r around us, only God cn save us.

You no mean am!

*continues. . .

Yes, my spiritual eyes has open, i see things to an extent. . .

I told you all once. ., that many nite, i have watched headless people walked thru my room to the other room. .. walking thru walls like the walls does not exist. . .

Some wld walk by, pause and whisper into their ears. . what where they saying?

But, why were they headless. ?

Cld it be that they noticed i cld see them too. . ? are then hiding their identites?

All this happens when i am in deep sleep, yet awake. . .

I also recalled . . .

Wen i was about 8yrs or so. . . i always have a little girl who comes around to play with me. . . always smiling and filled with love. . .

I stammered a lot as a little boy, so quiet and always confined to my space. .

She comes, to play the sand games with me. . i have never met her parents before, nor her siblings. . . not even her own friends. .

As i grew older, her coming around wasnt frequent as usual . . as at 12yrs or so, she finally stopped. . . after telling me to be strong. .

I walked up to my mum months later, and asked her if she knows Kiyora's mum. . cos that wat she told me her name was Kiyora. .. . .

After my speech. . i left my mum speechless. . . with her mouth opened for like 5mins. . .

That, was the first time i knw i was born a twin. . . but lost my sister a month after we were born. .

According to my mum. . . she was alive and not me. . then she gave up. . holding my little finger. .

Then, i cried out. . .

Nobody cld explain wat happened dat day. . . doctors, my mum. . nobody. . .

I believe Gods' mercy sprung forth. . .

. . . So who was that little girl?

. . . i never met her again. .

My name is kamura. . . i lost my twin sister Kiyora as a child many years ago . . and this is my story so far. .


* to be continued. . .

* continues. . .

The innocence of a child gave me a clear insight into spiritual things. . .

Wen i broke my innocence. . . i completely lost everything,
But until recently. . .

The Haunted House drama. .

Ha!!! Nkan be!!
What a strange/mysterious world we live in.

nice update.