Crocz.. You brought me here o
Now come give mama a welcome hug

Dicefrost.. Nice story
More data to your phone

Dicefrost, i hv patiently followed ur story page by page. Nice write up,i say again. My advice is dat u conclude dis story soonest cos people are loosing interest jst like me. Cheers!

cehz:


P.s, i believe as the story writer, you shouldn't take side with any character in your writeup, rather allow the comment section trash it out, so that it will not affect your future stories emotionally.
Imho.

I ll take this to heart sir

Come and finish dis story nah...

Pls am new here can smone welcome me?

@Adimloaded,,u're highly welcome

Mznaett:
@Adimloaded,,u're highly welcome

Mznaett dis ur signature enh,na real wa o

@hemjaylee,,na wetin do am?

Mznaett:
@hemjaylee,,na wetin do am?

Asin d prayer point mk senz
"if u cheat make e no catch u"
Lol

@Hemjaylee,,na so e suppose b na. "winks"abi na lie ah talk?

Mznaett:
@Hemjaylee,,na so e suppose b na. "winks"abi na lie ah talk?

No b lie o

BadCorrect guy na u b...lols

dechandel:

Crocz.. You brought me here o
Now come give mama a welcome hug

Dicefrost.. Nice story
More data to your phone

Really?

*Hugs*

You enjoying the story?...sure you are and that dude dicefrost is just Index finger to Middle finger distance from being a Legend

dicefrost:







I beg to disagree with you sir. No one is denying the influence of bad association in this case, but the parents cannot be absorbed entirely of the blame.

Every child is a" tabular rasa", and something must fill the blank space. It is either the parents mould the child or his/her friends do. And like the bible says, "foolishness is tied up to the heart of a child" hence teenagers are inclined to pursue the wayward course.

At that stage of development, Ella is not a child anymore who should be ordered, coerced and beaten. Neither is she an adult who should be given total freedom to act. What is needed at this stage is love, patience, understanding and loving guidance and direction, with firm discipline. But when she gets the love from a boy, and the understanding from her friends, she is bound to be like them. Her father beat her up with a slipper, her mum inspects her virginity. She is practically caged in the house. No one offered love and attention.

Ella's parents tried to control her actions, while Ehis and Ruth appealed to her desires and got her heart. Its about reaching out to her heart, and being her friend, not trying to control her actions.

On the other hand, hannah's parents were permissive, which is a dangerous kind of parenting too.

Ruthless parenting breeds rebellious children, permissiveness brings loose children. The key is balance.

You are soo in there!

CoCoLav:
Abi Ruth was the girl with Ehis?

tot as much 2.Ruth z enjoying her life with Ehis

It's sad things went that way but if I was Ehis too, I'd never believe her story...not even in another world



Keep calm dicefrost and don't rush to conclude the story...people will read, it's that Miss Nairaland Contest drawing attention...it will soon end!

cuteniva:
tot as much 2.Ruth z enjoying her life with Ehis

She saw d gals slippers now
Nd dey left 2geda.
Dey sha dey always dress 2geda.
Wit d slippers she saw, if 2 say na ruth she go don knw say na she now...
So datz not ruth....Shey u grab??

Tnks dear@mznaet

hemjaylee:
She saw d gals slippers now
Nd dey left 2geda.
Dey sha dey always dress 2geda.
Wit d slippers she saw, if 2 say na ruth she go don knw say na she now...
So datz not ruth....Shey u grab??

yp I grab buh remember dey were in a hurry.mayb she didn't care 2 check her shoe.shey u grab?

cuteniva:
yp I grab buh remember dey were in a hurry.mayb she didn't care 2 check her shoe.shey u grab?

Yea, datz tru sha
Letz w8 4 Dicefrost nd see aw it goes

hemjaylee:
Yea, datz tru sha
Letz w8 4 Dicefrost nd see aw it goes

fingers crossed

@dicefrost no do like dis na I beg cum complete am pls. Jah bless u wit dis 9ice piece

This is the first non-movie that will make me shed tears.I just shed tears for Ella

ddooskie:
This is the first non-movie that will make me shed tears.I just shed tears for Ella

lol
Bigbross Bigbross
U shed tears tru tru?

hemjaylee:
lol
Bigbross Bigbross
U shed tears tru tru?

didn't realise when it dropped from my left eye..twas like I could feel her heart thump when Ehis came in and the moment he said, "she was my girlfriend"

ddooskie:

didn't realise when it dropped from my left eye..twas like I could feel her heart thump when Ehis came in and the moment he said, "she was my girlfriend"

Yea yea bro.
I was just like; Ha Ehis

Op update nao

Crocz:


Really?

*Hugs*

You enjoying the story?...sure you are and that dude dicefrost is just Index finger to Middle finger distance from being a Legend

Yesh
I'm enjoying the story.. Should i say tnx for mentioning me earlier when the story started?

Index finger to Middle finger from being a legend??
I yaff learn another one today o .

Good morning

dechandel:

Yesh
I'm enjoying the story.. Should i say tnx for mentioning me earlier when the story started?

Index finger to Middle finger from being a legend??
I yaff learn another one today o .

Good morning

U shud come learn wordplay in my house. It'll be a Greek gift from Me2U

53cur3m0d3:

U shud come learn wordplay in my house. It'll be a Greek gift from Me2U

lol
Your house?
Y not ur school*wondering*
She resemble ruth abi hannah 4 ur Eyes?

Lol

hemjaylee:
lol
Your house?
Y not ur school*wondering*
She resemble ruth abi hannah 4 ur Eyes?

But U're Hemjaylee na, not Bangalee. Is it ur consign?