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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:37pm On Oct 22, 2015
donem:

@ Classcaptain this your writeup nah bomb, in fact e be like nah Wole Soyinka and late Chinua Achebe join hand write this fiction.

No fail to feature me in other of your stories, even if nah to pay give me your bill/charge I go pay, after all money nah paper

oya bring 5k as per say na u
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by donem: 9:40pm On Oct 22, 2015
ClassCaptain:


oya bring 5k as per say na u
alright but confirm first say I go play major role before I proceed with payment cheesy
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ThisMeansWAR: 9:43pm On Oct 22, 2015
@classcaptain
i was enjoying the story till you ended it with superstory kind of ending which i really dnt like or watch....sounds all nollywood in the end.... I would have prefered more realistic ending like the other 2go girl story... Waiting for the part 2 of that one.
Anyway, keep it up. You are a good story teller.

Wale adenuga got nothing on u wink
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Davidovinci(m): 10:57pm On Oct 22, 2015
Classcaptain,Thumbs up niggi.........
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Iamoluwaslim(m): 2:16am On Oct 23, 2015
Laitesmart:
Class Caaaaaaaaaaptain..... U BE BAD GUY OOO.. See as u dey make guys dey wish say na them dey ur shoe... Crazy imagination going on in their heada... Wildest fantasies.... Last episode bplease
because dat's d way u feel! U better work on urself! If u can prevent Aids! Magun (thunderbolt) is real
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Iamoluwaslim(m): 2:33am On Oct 23, 2015
Dtwoabbey:
You know one thing. This ur story go show face for film industries soon o. Watch out for film with likely titles, " ikoja-aaye, olokanjua, inchibong, aye oloju-komu kolo, abbl"
ar u a yoruba student? I am in OAU
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Iamoluwaslim(m): 2:46am On Oct 23, 2015
Mariojane:
nooooo you cant say you find out she is not a student in the school after the whole thing cos you heard about her from your friends before you ask her out. had it been you met her in one of the school functions and ask her out that would have been a different case. also remember her fellowship is in the school where you met with her pastor. so nooo for this ending
Very Thoughtful! U'r intelligent!
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by RichieAngels(m): 6:56am On Oct 23, 2015
ClassCaptain:
Episode 14 ( Going The Spiritual way.. scoping the man of God )


Na the Fourth day be this ooo.My guys don day ask me how far with the package ...dem sabi say he no day take me long like this before parole go click.

Rokiatu no take me pass 2 days even almighty Ishilove na d first day we meet i chop am,na only tantalizers meat pie and Cold Fayrouz he cost me .why dis inchinbong own wan con different. Na ??.

I sha dey whine dem sey work is in progress ,then show dem our previous chats .dey sef dey nod day await result.

Me wey i no get myself..Na different foolish ideas just day come my brain..

Make i try my luck with this one.



The next day, I chop the concontion rice wey i cook yesternight...I no finish am as salt too much.. i sharply do rub and shine, Wear my nigerian super eagles Jersey ,jeans and timbaland.


Spray my aboki perfume,rub damatol full my hair and set out to ichinbong's fellowship center..



this guy dressing sha. na clown u be?

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by mikkybellami(m): 10:05am On Oct 23, 2015
ClassCaptain:
Episode Finale and The Final Episode is Left ...


follow and pm me if u want your moniker to appear I'm d next Stories

" Lost in Lagos
" A day with an Upcoming artist "
" Why I no go do money ritual again"
" The Community Robbery
" Dating a Church girl"
" How 2go relationship led me to Psychiatric home 2"

bless.
Abeg help me feature classcaptain in the next story the guy just dey make me laugh out my intestine
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 10:18am On Oct 23, 2015
mikkybellami:

Abeg help me feature classcaptain in the next story the guy just dey make me laugh out my intestine

lol..I go try my best
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Eleniyan15: 11:56am On Oct 23, 2015
am tired of reading captain

sha keep featuring me
cos i don dey follow since dey one


mak I book space for page
34


#SPACEBOOKED #NEXtMOVeNEXtMOVeMeNt
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by spicy244(f): 7:07pm On Oct 23, 2015
ClassCaptain:

lol..I go try my best

make i feature for ur next movie oooo
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by shegxi(m): 10:54pm On Oct 23, 2015
OmowumiJ:
lol.. no be only reflex action.... "Acute" action nko.
lmao, dis got me.

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by pussypounder(m): 10:50am On Oct 24, 2015
ClassCaptain:


waka pass 5k
character wey go die quick 2k
Baba feature me for ur next piece
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 4:34pm On Oct 24, 2015
pussypounder:
Baba feature me for ur next piece
no p boss
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 4:34pm On Oct 24, 2015
spicy244:


make i feature for ur next movie oooo
OK
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by RichieAngels(m): 6:22pm On Oct 24, 2015
nacosprof:
with ur flate face that look like wall of jerecol, hope u produce ur own soon

lol... wicked
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by eunisam: 10:29pm On Oct 24, 2015
lol
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by surbrown(m): 7:34am On Oct 25, 2015
Today is my birthday! how many likes for me

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Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by onizsure: 5:12pm On Oct 25, 2015
Nice piece, you are a talent! Keep it up.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:37pm On Oct 25, 2015
onizsure:
Nice piece, you are a talent! Keep it up.

Thanks Sir.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 9:42pm On Oct 25, 2015
eunisam:
lol
thanks G
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Audraey(f): 10:33pm On Oct 25, 2015
ClassCaptain:


EPISODE FINALE

I lost d 40k bet.i lost 250 thousand naira plus d Gifts ,clothes and shoes Found in mrs akorowem car which obviously she was bringing for me

I lost my fine boy face as even if it did heal up,d deep scar would still be visible, i lost four of my closest and most trusted friends,i lost my gateman,i lost my home ,i lost my education, my chances of ever getting pussy again ,marry or even give birth.

Greatest of all ,what even caused all dis trouble in d first place, I lost inchinbong's pussy ..i could care less about her death if i had bleeped her already before the Devil came.

I Laid in the accused box.All hope lost,weak from d beatings and extreme torture from d police officers while in detention,broken by the severe pain and bleeding in my asshole after several assaults in my short time in d prison by numerous Hot prison mates,shattered by d betrayal of friends and most trusted associates and haunted by the deeds of my turbulent past.

, I looked back to see the Face of my anxious and scared Beautiful Mother, as the Judge,gathered his papers to announce d Final judgement after enough time of investigation and argument..

" After the various arguments by the counsels and the evidence and witnesses brought to the notice of the court which all have been properly examined and checked to follow constitutional procedures in fairness,equity and good justice ,this is my judgment,










..






.It does not matter whether i go to prison..It does not matter when i am released to go free..Neither does it matter whether i am going to be killed..None of these will transform me.The real lessons God wanted me to learn i have learned..I have learnt not to trust.i have learned to desist from a wayward life and most inportantly,i have learnt that no matter what.God is in Control..

.I have leant my lessons and the purpose of what i went through as been served
..

I could only think of one thing as the Judge readied his paper and was about to pronounce my fate ..NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS",GOD IS IN CONTROL .




THE END.

Lol. I read this post as a guest, I followed through buh couldn't finish up. I also wanted to check your profile buh as I wasn't a member, I couldn't. Today, I rejoined Nairaland (as a blogger, i'd want to use all social forms of getting known). I had to go through my browser history to find when I read your story, I opened and now I've finished it up. Nice write. Hope you have a book?
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by DonZaggy(m): 12:15am On Oct 26, 2015
kudos bro. u too much.
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by awesomegenius(m): 9:19pm On Oct 26, 2015
bukatee2015:
Na dose chinese product on alixpress






LoooOOL
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by sophietosyneabou(f): 12:42pm On Oct 27, 2015
actually,av bn a silent reader since i was reading this story,buh avin finished it,i can't keep mute anymore,its very fantastic,ur such a gifted writer,kudos 2 u,keep it up
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 12:46pm On Oct 27, 2015
sophietosyneabou:
actually,av bn a silent reader since i was reading this story,buh avin finished it,i can't keep mute anymore,its very fantastic,ur such a gifted writer,kudos 2 u,keep it up

Thanks
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by Nobody: 1:16pm On Oct 27, 2015
ClassCaptain:

Thanks
oga come and continue your story now
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by jhuzcoyle(m): 2:26pm On Oct 27, 2015
ClassCaptain:


Everybody just dey rub Grease for my elbow since...Una no go like use Reflex Action rub another part.. or rub am with money """ lol

thumbs up bro. I followed silently and u berth it *in Jon champion's voice via play station*. I had to come out from my shell to congratulate u. U rock.

BTW I was with Thor so no thunder for me
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by ClassCaptain(m): 3:50pm On Oct 27, 2015
jhuzcoyle:


thumbs up bro. I followed silently and u berth it *in Jon champion's voice via play station*. I had to come out from my shell to congratulate u. U rock.

BTW I was with Thor so no thunder for me

Half time is Upon me .John champion and Jim beklin. Lol..Thanks boss
Re: How A Girl"s Visit to My Room Changed my Life ( Short Story) by cheerokee(m): 12:47am On Oct 28, 2015
ClassCaptain:


Half time is Upon me .John champion and Jim beklin. Lol..Thanks boss


I've followed you boss, and I've also read your three stories..
abeg do me the favour and feature me oh..


I'm a hustler like you, I for don arrange something for you..


#TeamClassCaptain!!!!

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