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The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 6:55am On Jan 23, 2016 |
Copyright © 2016 by Akhigbe Oziegbe. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced or distributed, without the prior written permission of me. Whatsapp Contact: 08066418379 Mail: ozilla111@gmail.com This story is a horror story, how me and my friend sold our soul to the devil to get money, if you think the devil is in hell fire, my guy you are wrong he's living among us and exploiting us, well thank God we have the greater one inside us (Jesus). If you have health issue please dont read, as somebody told me she cant sleep after she finish my first story "Adanna the mysterious aba girl", and as usual, sit down like Peter Pan, order for a cup of coffee like madam Bisi and put the tea on your table and cross your leg like Barrack Obama, afterall everybody na Boss. Copyright © 2016 by Akhigbe Oziegbe. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced or distributed, without the prior written permission of me. Whatsapp Contact: 08066418379 Join Our WhatsApp Group For Constant Update Your Comments Determines The Numbers Of Update. INTRODUCTION. Am a native of Owan West local government area in Edo state, my dad is a retired civil servant while my mum is a nurse, she work in Owan East local government thus growing up with her makes me know every area in Owan East because they always transfer her from one community to another, but my dad live in Owan West, this event took place in Ogute emai, Afuze is the headquarter of owan east local government, owan east have many villages i cant really name all, though i still remember some like Afuze, Uanhumi, Eteye, Okpa, Ogute, Ojavun, Okpohumi, evbiamen e.t.c (please remember those names because i go drive una go there) the bolded is where i grew up while the last is where my mum chemist store is located, they are not that far from each other though you have to walk from ogute for at least 10minutes and cross the dangerous bridge before you get to evbiamen where my mummy store is. when i was born my mum told me that i was very hairy like lion because of the hairs on my body, thus they call me Ozeto in school meaning (hairing person). This story start when i was 18 years old, during my SSCE exam, follow me as i take you on a ride, i will update twice a day (long update), no pressure please (i believe nobody thrive under pressure thank you). And yes i am Akhigbe Oziegbe the author and finisher of Adanna the mysterious aba girl https://www.nairaland.com/2837885/adanna-mysterious-aba-girl And Brouhaha in the house of God https://www.nairaland.com/2865458/brouhaha-house-god EVENT HAPPEN IN REAL LIFE [b]Chapter One Me and Austin my friend coming back from school in a hot afternoon, me dey think how I go take sama garri when I reach house while Austine dey talk about kiss of the dragon film wey im go watch when he reach house how jet li take use needle kill boaz, I live in ogute while Austin live in eteye we go to school together our school dey uanhumi, from my house to Austine house na ten minutes walk while from austine house to school na like 45 minutes waka, so imagine the distance. We dey road jejeje dey waka dey go house after a boring day in school, after five minutes of walking and discussing something happen, one small boy was trying to cross the road then out of nowhere a fine peugeot car came out and pump the boy up like champagne bottle, the car almost smash one building for im front after e don jam the boy finish but the driver reverse the motor go enter one corner for inside bush and land in a gutter almost resulting to a summersault, austine run to meet the boy while me i run follow the motor, as i near i saw two guys on suit they look like lawyers with their dressing, they are bleeding badly on their head i try to help them by opening the door, but the door no want open so i took one big stick from ground and break the glass of the door i put one hand inside and open the door, the two wey stay like person wey don die for front sit begin shake head as i open the door, i hold his hand wanted to drag the first person out of car then my eye saw something, i saw a brief case small one at the back seat of the car, i look at the case e be like say na money go dey inside oh, i look main road people don gather for where the car hit the small boy, augustine dey center kneel down for the road blowing air inside the boy, none of them even say make them come help me rescue those guys, i took the case from the back sit (make i run go hide am before i come back come help those people) as i say make i carry the briefcase commot one of the injured guy inside the car grab my hand, (i think say im faint, u hit small boy you nor think of that one na briefcase you de think about, thunder fire your head) i took the stick i used to break the glass and use it to hit him on his injured head he fell back on the seat i took the briefcase and dissappear like wind. Chapter Two Me: guy how far na, the boy survive? I ask austine after he met me from where i was waiting for him Austine: na only God go save that boy oh. Me: them don carry am go hospital abi? Austine: yes one good samaritan carry am go hospital after i don try revive am with no success, by the way na where you enter? Me: i be go rescue the guys wey dey drive the motor na Austine: so wetin happen i hope them nor injure. Me: injure for where, them escape, i reach there i nor see any of them again. Austine: na wa oh, people dey heartless oh, how them go just hit small boy like that and escape, and the boy just return from school im go buy groundnut wey im go take drink garri na im them go hit am so, god no ever forgive them in jesus name. Me: how you know say na groundnut im go buy and na garri im want drink. Austine: the sister na im talk am oh, and the groundnut even scatter for ground self. Me: eyaa i pray he survive it oh. Austine: Amen oh, wetin make you bag come get belle like this? Me: na mango wey i plug for here just now wey i dey wait for you. Austine: me go eat oh. Me: make we reach house first. me and Austin continue our waka like johnny walker wen we get to Austine house he escort me for two minutes before he decided to go back, after some time i got home, we live in a building with three room, parlour, kitchen and other minor things like bathroom, we have a garden also, we can follow our garden inside our house, the garden is close to main road, in our community we have two road, the old and the new, our house dey close to the new road while my church dey the old road, and yes i forget to tell una am a choirister also, we newly come this house i dont like it much because its too expose, many houses dey close to our own and yes one big upstair probably the biggest and most beautiful house then in ogute stand still in front of our house, na there the landlady and her children they stay, in our left you will see the new road, in our front you see big upstair while in our right you see another building, where the carpenter dey stay, though i dont know him, but i believe they call him ogijio from anyangba. 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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 8:28am On Jan 23, 2016 |
[b]Chapter Three I dont know him, anytime i pass that upstair i will just greet him and he will reply my and add sir, talking about age he is miles ahead of me, he may be 28 or even 30 i dont rily knw y he always add sir. I look at the case again, the key look like a silver bronze, i hide the case under my beg while i went out, i went to the front of the upstair, i saw the carpenter with two other guys, i know them but i dont talk to them as if we are friend, one is called chris, hes father is one of the strongest man in that village, the meaning of his father's name is (them no they shake me) rumous had it that hes the strongest ogboni man in the whole of emai, he have many wives and many children and he live downtown of the community close to the junction between old road and new road, the other person with them is called ben, he's from a poor background (later one of the richest in that community) he stay center of the community in old road close to my church anglican. I wanted to go and meet the carpenter but when i saw the other guys, i just pass them and greet them, they were looking at me probably saying something that concern me, i pass them and walk to one street, i enter the street and burst out in new road, i cross the road to go and visit my friend called, vareeth, hes from a rich background, hes father work in an oil company and he has two cars with two wives, one in warri and the other in ogute here, rumous had it that the one in warri is a witch that she confess sometime ago (shes still a witch), they have three buildings with big borehole in the center of the houses and also a big compound, i enter inside the first house and come out inside the compound, i saw his mom doing akpu. Me: good evening ma. Vareeth mum: good evening oziegbe how you dey? Me: fine ma, vareeth dey house. Vareeth mum: yes im dey im room. Me: okay ma. I turn left to the second house, i enter and knock, nobody answer so i open the door, there i saw him in bed sleeping with a woman while music they scatter for speaker, i open the freezer and took cold (almost block) water, i pour the water on his body, come see how him jump getup naked, the shout shock the girl as she stand up as she see say i dey view them like video camera she took quickly took blanket and use to cover her body. Julieta: Oz na why you come just enter without knock na? Me: you dey craze me wey don knock tire wey una no gree open. Vareeth: na since when you dey here, he said as he stoodup naked with his cobra dangling along with him, he went to his drawer and took a shot while he lower the music. Me: i just enter now. Vareeth: ha na you come pour me water abi? Me: next time na hot water i go pour. Ju: oz go outside na make i wear my clothes. Me: you dey craze, na wetin you get wey i never see before, or you don forget say na me open.... Ju: e don do, i go stay like this till you commot. Me: then you go commot tommorow be that. Vareeth: na wetin even carry you come self. Me: guy i need that my film. Vareeth: that blue film. Me: yes na, abi you carrry another one join? Vareeth: the film dey inside dvd oh. Me: so na im una dey watch before una start the wrestling. Ju: im peenis no gree wakeup na im make us put the film. Me: eyaa, i don tell am make im no dey lick sugar well well again, im nor dey here. Vareeth: i don stop sugar na. Ju: maybe na marstubate im dey marstubate. Va: yes na with your unclad picture. Me: hahahaha, wetin dey her body wey you go fit use marstubate, she no get yash, she no get boobs, she just dey dry plantain. Julieta stood up angrily and took the cold water from ontop fridge to pour on my body, i ran to the door, open it and ran out, telling vareeth till tommorow. [/b] 4 Likes 1 Share |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by D9ty7(m): 8:44am On Jan 23, 2016 |
Here in the literature section, there are critics everywhere. I believe you don't mind me or anybody doing that to your story. Btw #Following |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by NidaxJ(m): 9:16am On Jan 23, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by girlhaley(f): 10:03am On Jan 23, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 10:20am On Jan 23, 2016 |
D9ty7: lol bro i dont mind oh bring them coming, i need improvement and i cant improve without critics. |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 10:21am On Jan 23, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 10:22am On Jan 23, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by D9ty7(m): 11:29am On Jan 23, 2016 |
Ozila Nice narrative technique there, but I think names should start with uppercase letters. Instead of owan east, something like Owan east is suitable. I had to read that part twice to understand they are names. Also, there is a part where you wrote ozeto(hairing.....). Methinks it should be Ozeto(hairy....) Lastly, it seems you are comfortable writing in pidgin. This is going to be difficult as grammatical errors cannot be spotted in pidgin. I quote this place from CHAPTER THREE; "the other person with them is call ben, hes from a poor background....." It should be; the other person with them is called Ben. He is from a poor background...." If you have to use 'he is' in short form, then it should be 'he's.' Its a good work generally, proofread before every update to avoid spelling errors. Read through my corrections and correct them in subsequent updates and chapters. 10 Likes |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 11:38am On Jan 23, 2016 |
tnx D9ty7 1 Like |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 11:45am On Jan 23, 2016 |
[b]Chapter Four I check time 6:30pm, oboy time don go oh, i ran home and took my small bag and hed straight to store, i followed new road, on my way i saw the hospital where my mum work by my left, and my right i saw the great ogboni man house far far the old road, i reach the junction where our market that has been close for a decade now is, they close it because of the witches disturbing the market, though they said they will open it this year after all pastors for that community don fast and pray for 3 days and when all the women in that community will walk naked in the night around the community, swearing and coursing all the witches disturbing the market to die, i cant wait to see that day because i must surely comeout that night even though they say nobody will comeout that night. I pass the market and walk for three minutes, then i saw it, the dangerous bridge, i look down and saw some people bathing under, i wanted to go and join them but i later kick against it am late already and my mum will be waiting for me, so i continue my walk till i reach Evbiamen where my mummy store is, the village self na ontop hill e dey, i walk to the center of the community where my mum’s shop is located,. Me: good evening ma, i said as i walk straight inside the shop (she sitdown for front discussing with our neighbour, my mumy sabi talk well well. Mum: welcome, how school? Me: fine ma, how market. Mum: fine. I go inside the store and sat down pressing my phone as usual, my mum came inside and told me she's going to service this evening that she has to leave early, she took her bag and sat outside waiting for bus, i was chatting on 2go and selling drugs at same time, after like ten minutes my mum left and i was alone, out of the people that came to buy drugs, na only one girl catch my attention, she just walk in lacadestically and shouted. “hello na who dey sell i wan buy something”. Me: wetin you wan buy?, i turn and saw her, shes a bit okay but not that perfect. Girl: na you dey here? Me: yes na, anything. Girl: oooohh, were your mummy go na? Me: she go church, tell me wetin you want i go sell am for you. Girl: i nor fit tell you, na girls thing. Me: like? Girl: forget, when is she coming back? Me: tommorrow. Girl: na wa oh, anyway i don go, you don finish school abi? Me: yes na how you know.( i don finish but i never write waec) Girl: na who nor know miss last born wey get hair for body like rabbit. Me: hmmm since you know me well, me fit know you? Girl: no need, bye bye. She turn and left showing me her back ass, she try small sha, after like ten minutes later, one small boy come say im wan buy cd. I look at the boy and ask. Me: na you wan use am? Boy: no oh na one aunt send me, i nor even know wetin e be. Me: hmmm the aunt yellow? Boy: yes, she yellow and tall small. Lol yeye girl, na condom you nor fit talk for my presence abi?, i gave the condom to the boy and tell him to return the money to the girl and tell her i dash her because she look pretty. The boy dash out like antelope, i stay store till 9pm when time don reach for me to dey go house, i arrange things and count my money only eight-k-five for evening sales only, chai market no just dey today wey e be say i dey make like thirteen thousand naira before, waiting come happen today na abi wether no cool at all, i pray make rain fall tommorrow oh, so that cold go dey make people rush come buy paracetamol (imagine praying for people to fall sick so that they will buy medicine, imagine wetin coffin seller go come dey pray for). I took the money and my bag, i switch off the light and close my door. Girl: wait wait wait abeg. Me: oh you again, i know you will return, i said as i shine my teeth. Girl: so you purposely give the boy condom wey don expire? [/b] 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by alabikunlekam(m): 12:00pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Lol .....keep the update coming @ ozila .... |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 12:05pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
alabikunlekam: na everywhere you dey? |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by alabikunlekam(m): 12:08pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
ozila:of course unless I don't notice your update |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by alabikunlekam(m): 12:35pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
ozila:bumber to bumber boss ... As he dey hot |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by girlhaley(f): 12:38pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by girlhaley(f): 12:38pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 12:45pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
[quote author=alabikunlekam post=42249542] bumber to bumber boss ... As he dey hot [/quote welcome |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ritababe(f): 2:20pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 7:52pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
[b]Chapter Five Me: eyaa i nor know oh sorry you here abeg come tomorow make i give you another one as you can see, i just close my door. Girl: which kind thing be this, abeg take your condom and give me my money joor. Me: which money? Girl: my 50 naira for the condom na. Me: i didnt take the money i told the boy to return it. Girl: seriously, so the boy ran with my money, and why would you return the money by the way? Me: because is not everyday i see pretty girl like you in this community, so just take it as a compliment. Girl: hmmm anyway give me my condom (see as she just talk am, wetin she nor first fit talk before. Me: hahahaha am close already come tomorrow please. Girl: i cant, i need it this night. Me: i cant open again. Girl: please. Me: hmmm or maybe we can strike a deal. Girl: okay tell me,. Me: well if you give me your contact, maybe i will reconsider. Girl: okay bring the condom first. Me: no your contact first. Girl: okay, cherrymay222@gmail.com. Me: what i meant your number. Girl: no you said contacts, and thats my contact, a deal is a deal. I was kinda angry and yes a deal is a deal, so i put hand inside my bag and brought out a real condom,. Girl: so you have it all this while. I just vex give the girl the condom and enter road they go, she stood akimbo looking at me, then she shouted " cherrymay is my name" i look back and smile and wave her bye, i wonder what type of name is that, cherrymay, abi na cherry wey them dey eat perhaps cherrybrown . Shud tel us d meaning, I beging waka go my place for inside night wey everywhere dey quiet, well thanks to God there is full moon, i reach the dangerous bridge, the brigde dey so narrow thus two big lorry cannot go through at same time and everywhere dey bushing, i walk fast when i get to the bridge, i was tempted to look down again but i was kindof afraid to do so, but i heard a splash of water, i stop and move to the edge of the bridge, i look down as if i dey find something wey fall, i didnt see anything inside the river only the reflection of the moon wey dey up, inside the river through the reflection something start coming out, the thing look like hairs, yellow hair, i wanted to run but i must see whats that thing, i continue looking, the thing started rising through the reflection of the moon inside the river, i lookup and saw nothing in the moon, i look down again the thing don rise just like hairs yellow like the sun, then i saw the body a yellow beautiful woman, facing the other side of the River backing me, she wear cowries on her neck, then as if something told her sombody is looking at her she turn and face me i saw the glowing eyes like a star then i ran. [/b] 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by Nobody: 10:02pm On Jan 23, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 5:42am On Jan 24, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by NidaxJ(m): 7:46am On Jan 24, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by girlhaley(f): 9:31am On Jan 24, 2016 |
Lol U supposed not to run Waiting |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by joanee20(f): 9:41am On Jan 24, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 12:37pm On Jan 24, 2016 |
joanee20: thank you ma |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 12:38pm On Jan 24, 2016 |
girlhaley:lol, update drop by 8pm |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 12:38pm On Jan 24, 2016 |
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Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 1:53pm On Jan 24, 2016 |
[b]Chapter Six I ran like usain bolt till i exhaust all the strenght in my body finish, i look back continuously to know if somebody is following me, i saw nobody so i slow down a bit. Who the hell is she? they use to tell me that owan river has many Mami Water i didnt believe it, as i heard from someone that the first bridge was destroyed by mermaid and the second one was build by white men, and they said two white men lost their live when building the bridge, if you still go there today you will see the failed bridge there covered with sand and grasses, i continue walking, i check time still after nine, waoh time still dey so i follow old road, maybe i will buy pepper soup meat for junction when i reach there, after i pass the ogboni man house, four blocks after the house i saw people rushing inside one building, i was adamant to know whats going on so i followed them inside the building, on my way i ask one of the lady carrying baby on her back as if na Jesus she want go see, Me: sorry ma, please whats going on here,. Madam: na some guys for uzebba them come do programme here and them they perform miracle. Me: okay thank you ma. Chai my uzebba boys, uzebba is the headquarter of iuleha local government, my papa village, they are known for their strong witchcraft around edo state, and i believe this one they are doing here now is a form of magic to decieve people. I go inside, see as people many, chai people like miracle well well oh, i look time 9:45pm so i decided to wait for like ten minutes. Pastor: i dont know why people will be running from their various places to look for miracle when miracle is in their doorstep, we are here today to spread the goodnews of god (no be my God oh) and heal the sick,. He continue preaching for some minutes before he later call the sick people, one woman wey blind come forward, the pastor took one handkey and put inside water he use it to rub the woman's face and alas she regain her sight and started rejoicing, (na wetin they that water me i nor oh) see as people dey follow her rejoice. the man continue healing people like pastor chris while people continue rejoicing like people freed from slavery (well na slavery sha) i just stand they look the miracle wey im dey perform, after some time he shouted "put ur hands in any area in your body that you know is paining you" see everybody begin they check themself, wetin me go since i nor get where they pain me, i put hand for head, then the man started praying, come see as people they fall scatter for ground, the one wey interest me pass na the ladies wey dey fall open yash for ground, chai omo i swear some people go get attention oh like me . Then after some time, the man walk inside the crowd, me wey i stand jejeje the pastor no know who him want bring comeout na me im see to carry out, base on say na Uzebba boy i nor fear am, he took me to the altar and said. Pastor: you are oziegbe right? He ask me, na how im take know. Me: yes i am. See as people they shout because of only my name wey im get talk. Pastor: there is an evil spirit monitoring your life. Me: how? Pastor: my god showed me in a vision that you will be great, but that cannot happen until that evil spirit is cast out of you, would you want to be free mr oziegbe Me: yes sir. Pastor: thats very easy, i will band and lose that spirit but you have to drop everything in your bag as a sacrifice (people wey him dey heal since im no collect money na my turn im want chop money abi). Me: dont worry i dont need the prayer again, i said as i turn back and walk out of the congregation church, he shouted at me as i leave "mr man i tell you, you will come back here sooner than later " thunder fire im head. [/b] 5 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ritababe(f): 10:50am On Jan 25, 2016 |
Ozila wey you? |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 1:13pm On Jan 25, 2016 |
ritababe: right here dear |
Re: The Carpenter, The Witch And The Mysterious Mirrow by ozila(m): 1:14pm On Jan 25, 2016 |
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