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|Re: Shadows....... by tizblink(m): 11:57am On Jul 07, 2016|
Bruv! Haven't been here to read for some time. Just say the birthday post.
Happy Birthday bruv
*Back to the matter*
Abeg no kill dem again.
I like the ones remaining
I sha think you should improve on the writing.... Too many clusters.
All the same it's a good one
|Re: Shadows....... by Omotayelolu(f): 4:02pm On Jul 07, 2016|
Happy birthday. WULLNP
|Re: Shadows....... by ChizzyMaris(f): 4:28pm On Jul 07, 2016|
AustinBlinks this one is hot. Keep it coming!
|Re: Shadows....... by AustinBlinks(m): 11:07pm On Jul 07, 2016|
Hunter: Come out! No problem at all.
And like primary school pupils, matching from assembly in a straight line, they filed out one after the other. Still, none of them spoke, they just stared at the hunter who was about 6 feet plus tall and quite lanky.
With a surprised expression, the hunter asked
Hunter: What happen? All of you are plenty plenty before.
Lanre: (cleared his throat) Pardon us sir! We don’t know who you are and how did you know there were more of us?
Moji: (cuts in) Are you the shadow?
Hunter: Shadow? I don’t know shadow!
Mary: (pulls Moji out of her way) pls ignore her. Have you by any chance seen the rest of our coursemates? We got lost in the bush and can’t seem to find anyone anywhere.
Hunter: No i have not seen nobody. You have to come follow me, it is not good, going about in this bush this night.
Lanre: What do you mean?
Hunter: I know you no lost.. you all running from something because you think he kill you.
They all stepped back in fear. .
Hunter: But you no worry. Long long time, i have hunt in this bush and i am alive till now. Come with me, i will show you the way out.
Once again they all faced Lanre, as if to wait for him to make a decision.
Lanre: I don’t know guys? What should we do?
Uche: I think we should go with him
Emma: What if he’s leading us to our deaths.
Moji: Good point.
Temmy: But he said he is not going to hurt us.
Emma: So we should just believe whatever he says?
Daniel: I have a bad feeling about this but do we have any other choice?
They all went mute at the realization that there isn’t much of a choice for them.
Lanre: Ok sir! But where are you taking us to ?
Hunter: I take you to place i sleep in the bush or i show you way out of here.
Emma: Do you sleep in the Cabin?
Hunter: Cabin? No no Cabin. No cabin in this bush.
Lanre: No…. We entered a cabin when the rain was falling
Hunter: What rain? No rain at all! No rain no fall here in months.
It was then they looked all around them , to see the ground was so dry like it hadn’t rain in months for real . They looked at one another in disbelief, beginning to doubt their own sanity.
Lanre: Are you telling us no rain has not fallen tonight and there is no cabin around here at all
Hunter: No No! No rain tonight, no cabin here!
Emma: Guys, what the hell is happening to us?
Daniel: I told you all we are just high and seeing things not real.
Moji: If we all are just high, then where is everybody else ? Didn’t we just saw one of us dragged into a cabin that apparently doesn’t exist?
Uche: We can’t be high and be seeing and experiencing the same things. That’s not possible.
Hunter: Hurry! Too much time going, let’s go now. I help take you out of this bush.
They followed him as he led the way, his strides and pace were wide and fast so they practically had to be on their hills to keep up with him.
Lanre walked up to him…
Lanre: Sir, Can you explain what is really going on? Why are our classmates dying?
The hunter stopped abruptly, looked at them all, the shock in his eyes got them worried.
Hunter: Dying? No no…… No dying.
Hunter: No! “Oregun” no kill anybody!
Emma: What are you saying? You just told us, you know something is trying to kill us.
Hunter: Yes but “Oregun” no kill anybody. “Oregun” never kill anybody.
Uche: What the hell us “Oregun” ?
Hunter: “Oregun” is our tree protector in the village.. People come with big trucks every time to come and chop down trees in our bush. We in the village no like that so we prayed to “Oregun” to protect our trees. He just scare the people away, they run out of bush but he no kill.
Emma: Well Mister, Your “Oregun” has started killing now
Hunter: “Oregun” scare people, they think he kill them but he don’t kill. If you say something is killing you…..that is not “Oregun” i have to go, you go your way, i want no trouble.
The hunter’s face lit up in fear, they had no doubt in their mind he was genuinely scared of whatever has been hunting them all night too . He began walking away as fast as he could.
Lanre: Sir! Please wait! You said you’d show us the way out of here.
Hunter: No , can’t do that. You go that way and that way but i no help you.
Temmy: (crying) please sir, help us!
Hunter: I no want trouble
Emma: Please just take us half the way out of here and you can go back.. You know your way around this bush, only you can help us.
The hunter looked down and sighed like he was having a deep thought. He wanted to say no to this cursed people, he didn’t want to have anything to do with them.
The urge of setting off and running away so fast crossed his mind but finally he shook his head and spoke.
Hunter: Okay i will take you
He led the way again as they all chorused their “Thank You” in unison.
But right at that moment he began walking, he started coughing. They murmured their Sorries to him but became alerted when the coughing didn’t stop.
They watched on, as he dropped on his knees, clutching and his palm placed on his chest.
Lanre and Uche ran to him .
Lanre: Water… . Water! Does anyone has water?
But no one had water so they kept watching in horror as his coughing got louder and blood was seen coming out of his mouth.
It seemed like their horror would never end until Suddenly, he fell on his face, it was quiet now. Every single one of them stood their positions except Lanre and Uche who had run to the hunter earlier on to try and help.
They looked dumbfounded as Uche got closer to the body on the ground and felt the hunter’s pulse.
He stood upright, with his hands folded across his chest as the others looked on at him to confirm their worst fears.
Uche: Guys….. He’s dead
Emma: (Sighed) (giggles) It’s official,…..
. we all are totally f@#ked!
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|Re: Shadows....... by evaZee: 11:52pm On Jul 07, 2016|
For crying out loud am not liking this
|Re: Shadows....... by Nostradamus: 1:38am On Jul 08, 2016|
bad poo happening to this people,**austinblinks,it's official you are supremely creative,keep it up bros,you are going places**
|Re: Shadows....... by Kennitrust: 7:25am On Jul 08, 2016|
[quote author=AustinBlinks post=44068514]Shadows…….coming soon
Story by Austinblinks..
Are you afraid of the dark? Do you believe in spirits? Higher powers that walk amongs us everyday, do you think they really exist? …… I know you don’t!
Like you, i never thought they existed. I’ve seen the movies, read they papers, paranormal activities going on around us but i never cared, never listened……at least until now…..
Now! Means this moment! Here in this room behind closed doors. I’ve locked the door and wedged a chair against it, the windows are locked too….. But It’s of no use, he’ll come in anyways…. I’ve seen what he can do and he’s done it alot of times.
He killed them, he killed them all, leaving me to witness it all like he promised. He told me that I’ll be the last…….. You probably know him too, heard of him, see his work and he has most likely killed someone you used to know. Remember when you were alone in the house and you heard movements, the hairs on your skin rose as you felt the cold wind on your face….you’ve heard the whispers and his warm breath behind your ear but when you turned around , there was no one there….no one you can see anyways…
Shhhh….. i think he’s here….right outside the door, i see his shadows, the cold winds are blowing now , the door knob is rattling, the flower vase just fell, shattering in a loud bang…… someone please help…..someone….. anyone! Please….. and then the silence……………… .
I think he is gone, i hope he has…… I’m just 22, i don’t want to die yet……
OH God! He’s back…… the door wasn’t opened….he walked right through it! Oh Lord! We shouldn’t have let him in the first time, we brought this on ourselves. I and the others, i warned them but didn’t listen and now they are all gone… dead or missing. He’s here!!! Moving towards me! Please help me!….. His hands are stretched! If you’re reading this…… take my advice, don’t let him in! I Beg you! Look around you, he might be in already, learn from me,.but if he’s in already then i’m afraid it’s too late. Oh God! His getting closer, Please help me. Please heeedvsbssjsggggggggggggggggggkv
Picture credit: http://www.rebloggy.com
Story by Austinblinks
No part of this story may be published without the prior knowledge of the author.
...contact u for what?
|Re: Shadows....... by spokesman3k(m): 7:41am On Jul 08, 2016|
Niece start ride on pls
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|Re: Shadows....... by Amaga(m): 8:12am On Jul 08, 2016|
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|Re: Shadows....... by AustinBlinks(m): 8:30am On Jul 08, 2016|
Awww.... why? please explain....
|Re: Shadows....... by Silensa(m): 10:58am On Jul 08, 2016|
Uche: he is dead Emma: guys it's official, we are totally f**ked
this got me sighing
|Re: Shadows....... by WondaxRecords(m): 11:04am On Jul 08, 2016|
Autoblinks.... I catch your.... Wadup bro please update nah... Am loving the horror
|Re: Shadows....... by hefelove(m): 11:37am On Jul 08, 2016|
Horror film plus comedy LMAO Emma is really making me to enjoy this story.
It's official we are totally bleeped
Holy Spirit that impregnated mary
LMAO Emma na weyre
Ride on OP
|Re: Shadows....... by oceanp(f): 11:40am On Jul 08, 2016|
woow. this story is breath taking . am kinda shaking myself . all d best Austin
|Re: Shadows....... by Nobody: 11:59am On Jul 08, 2016|
Hmmm, scary sha. but u are left wt the tingling feel u had see the episodes somewhere
|Re: Shadows....... by nikz(f): 12:50pm On Jul 08, 2016|
This is really scary! Nyce story though
|Re: Shadows....... by mattyboy007(m): 12:52pm On Jul 08, 2016|
Buying land here..
|Re: Shadows....... by Basantio: 1:29pm On Jul 08, 2016|
This story is the bomb. Nice one brov. Following u bumper to bumper. Please try and make new uploads. Kudos
|Re: Shadows....... by Ultimategeneral: 2:41pm On Jul 08, 2016|
hmmmmm horro story
|Re: Shadows....... by Dugozpweeti(f): 4:23pm On Jul 08, 2016|
Nice write up @Austinblinks... I'm enjoying the suspense and thrill. Big up
|Re: Shadows....... by Mindfrick(m): 4:28pm On Jul 08, 2016|
Have Succeded In Reading Frm Season 1 N Jst Two Hrs....A Nice Write Up....Its One Of D Best... Hw I Wish Hawlahscho Z Viewing Dz.
|Re: Shadows....... by LivinaPatrick(f): 8:17am On Jul 10, 2016|
Well done o
|Re: Shadows....... by SPDAZZY(f): 12:09pm On Jul 11, 2016|
Wow, now I am officially scared.
|Re: Shadows....... by andreawills96(f): 1:01pm On Jul 11, 2016|
AustinBlinks:. Keep it coming but am scared oh, where's my mummy.
|Re: Shadows....... by Cykik(f): 4:58pm On Jul 11, 2016|
Austinblinks come and update na
|Re: Shadows....... by LivinaPatrick(f): 7:18pm On Jul 11, 2016|
Pls,you re making this story boring,update na.
Or should i summarize the story in my brain and stop checking for updates all the time.
|Re: Shadows....... by AustinBlinks(m): 11:32pm On Jul 11, 2016|
Please Cykik nd everyone... sorry for the daily, updating pretty soon, pardon me.
|Re: Shadows....... by kkash(m): 11:50pm On Jul 11, 2016|
AustinBlinks:take ur tym, finish ur story nd paste it at once, tired of dis short short thing....
|Re: Shadows....... by AustinBlinks(m): 12:08am On Jul 12, 2016|
Ok boss. I'll keep that in mind.Thanks bruh
|Re: Shadows....... by veekid(m): 10:24am On Jul 13, 2016|
I'm tired of refreshing this page everyday; please mention me when you're ready
|Re: Shadows....... by LivinaPatrick(f): 10:30am On Jul 13, 2016|
|Re: Shadows....... by Osjaay(f): 1:30pm On Jul 13, 2016|
jeez what a scary story
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