Am enjoying the twists and turns but I fear the comments will tell on our dear fiyah's original path!

Also appreciate the fact you just keeping us in suspense as to the marcus and Tori event that got tobi mad

Biko fiyah do not settle for the normal nollywood accident-reconciliation line.....


Fiyah there is a lesson a two you wanna sell through your writing, don't sacrifice It on the slab of "happy-romantic endings"!!!!

We are waiting

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49cents:
Am enjoying the twists and turns but I fear the comments will tell on our dear fiyah's original path!

Also appreciate the fact you just keeping us in suspense as to the marcus and Tori event that got tobi mad

Biko fiyah do not settle for the normal nollywood accident-reconciliation line.....


Fiyah there is a lesson a two you wanna sell through your writing, don't sacrifice It on the slab of "happy-romantic endings"!!!!

We are waiting

Lol... seriously? Just because Tobi went for a drive now everyone thinks he's going to end up in the hospital.

Well, we shall see.

9Z WORK FIYAH

fiyah:


Lol... seriously? Just because Tobi went for a drive now everyone thinks he's going to end up in the hospital.

Well, we shall see.

lol @ seriously? sorry no vex....your way "apter" than that

Huh!!!! So the extra I was waiting for was just Jo thinking about what her life might have been?? Really ?? Just *JO'S* *THOUGHTS*..... It's like fiyah has started doing awun with her story..... Anyway good night.

Hmm, now i undastand why tori left wit Marcus.. Tobi shud av handle it maturely, he shud av atleast heard frm her b4 makin dat unimaginable decision to evacuate her frm his residence.. I bet Tobi wil pay dearly for it..

Folding my arms and observin frm far

m already connectin d dots....... quote mi if m wrong.... jo nd tori re siblings dats why they look alike........ lets watch nd see thou.

Damn!!! Comments everywhere. Well here's mine. *spoiler alert* tori and jo are sisters we all know the guys they are gonna end up with but still the story is too sizzling hot to just let it go because I know the end. Fiyah thank you for this, makes me want to go back to writing "I will, I swear I will" see you tomorrow, goodnight!!!

1 am already pls update??

TheBlessedMAN:
hmmm well, lets just 4get this issue dear.... Not only Tobi is regretting, Am also regretting ever calin Tori a big head... Am afraid this pen mistress called FIYAH might send me out to the street to go and hawk wit Tori.....

Good for you....hope u have learnt ur lessons, never to conclude like that. Now u see she ditched tobi to go save a life, and tobi ditched her to go flirt with his crush dat dont regard him. "Life is a teacher.... Learn and get better"

So Jo was adopted .then I guess it's time Tori goes back home.maybe her grandma is not her
real grandma

TORI and JO are Twins ooooo

My thought though!!!!!

Thnks for d update dear!!!



Happy New Month to y'all Nairalanders and My VEry Own TEAM HERO : Royh,SmartestPopQueen,TheBleSsedMan,Fikfaknue,AOB1,Mrlemuel,Fiyah...

Never forget Xamilola,princedami and co!!!!!

Tgold1:
TORI and JO are Twins ooooo

My thought though!!!!!

Thnks for d update dear!!!



Happy New Month to y'all Nairalanders and My VEry Own TEAM HERO : Royh,SmartestPopQueen,TheBleSsedMan,Fikfaknue,AOB1,Mrlemuel,Fiyah...

Never forget Xamilola,princedami and co!!!!!

*rush here, furious mode...
Calling Tgold1 On Phone: Dude, You No Know Say Today Na My Bornday Abi, Well, Kindly Place A Call To Theblessedman, Tell Him That I Said He Should Call Mrlemuel And Make Lemuel Also Call SmartestPopQueen, Make All Of You Cum Stoodown With Una Hands On Your Back... UNA GO RECEIVED PUNISHSENSE TODAY...*

Fiyah!!!
Come And Dedicate A Post For Me O, Today Na Mai Bornday, If Not, I Go...No Lemme Talk 4 Now...BUSTED CITIZEN
Adikij(f), Agromuda(m), elskillful(m), slimyshady30(f), Olayibo, YINKS89(m), Countrygirl(f), daretodiffer(f) and 4 guest(s)

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ROYH:
Fiyah!!!
Come And Dedicate A Post For Me O, Today Na Mai Bornday, If Not, I Go...No Lemme Talk 4 Now...BUSTED CITIZEN
Adikij(f), Agromuda(m), elskillful(m), slimyshady30(f), Olayibo, YINKS89(m), Countrygirl(f), daretodiffer(f) and 4 guest(s)

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Happy bornday man llnp/ggmub nd happy new month

YINKS89:
Happy bornday man llnp/ggmub nd happy new month

thanks Dude...
My Busting Dey Pay Sha
BUSTED CHITIZEN
kaybee09(m), loyce234, ChyEndowed(f), hebenz(m), daretodiffer(f), Shakyroh320(f), ambitionlife(m), Elzak, hebenz(m), Shakyroh320(f), ambitionlife(m), okesgift, Agromuda(m), jewelflakky16, johnjay3150(m), Tessyhorlar(m), Michelle55(f), amly6(f), davestead(m) and 8 guest(s)

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Tgold1:
You guys are only shouting for new updates...... Atleast you'll encourage her for the ones posted earlier!!!!!!

that's also an encouragement

ROYH:
Fiyah!!!
Come And Dedicate A Post For Me O, Today Na Mai Bornday, If Not, I Go...No Lemme Talk 4 Now...BUSTED CITIZEN
Adikij(f), Agromuda(m), elskillful(m), slimyshady30(f), Olayibo, YINKS89(m), Countrygirl(f), daretodiffer(f) and 4 guest(s)

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Happy bornday ROYH.....Hope Fiyah will dedicate three chapters to you today.

Why do some of you try so hard to constitute nuisance? You need stop flooding my mentions. I don't know you and I certainly don't owe you anything!

ROYH:
thanks Dude...
My Busting Dey Pay Sha
BUSTED CHITIZEN
kaybee09(m), loyce234, ChyEndowed(f), hebenz(m), daretodiffer(f), Shakyroh320(f), ambitionlife(m), Elzak, hebenz(m), Shakyroh320(f), ambitionlife(m), okesgift, Agromuda(m), jewelflakky16, johnjay3150(m), Tessyhorlar(m), Michelle55(f), amly6(f), davestead(m) and 8 guest(s)

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HAPPY NEW MONTH Y'ALL,FIYAH CARRY GO,NOW TOBI INPATIENT ACT WILL MAKE HIM LATER APPOLOGIES IN THE END,WELL AS THINGS IS TURNING OUT NOW,JO WILL MARRY MARCUS,TOBI &TORI OFCOZ

geedimple:
you harsh oooooo,after all both didn't make their intentions known.
Tobi went too far, the fact that Tori didn't apologize I pike that

this is the epitome of hatered and hateblue.. Why people especially ladies and gay's dey prosecute me ontop diz issue na......... I go go kill my self o.. I say am sorry na.. Or u wan make i go beg Tori ni?

Elzak:
that's also an encouragement

Says?

TheBlessedMAN:
this is the epitome of hatered and hateblue.. Why people especially ladies and gay's dey prosecute me ontop diz issue na......... I go go kill my self o.. I say am sorry na.. Or u wan make i go beg Tori ni?

Neva kill ursef oooo... Wait till after Ileya,

Abi u no wan chop meat b4 u die?

ROYH:
*rush here, furious mode...
Calling Tgold1 On Phone: Dude, You No Know Say Today Na My Bornday Abi, Well, Kindly Place A Call To Theblessedman, Tell Him That I Said He Should Call Mrlemuel And Make Lemuel Also Call SmartestPopQueen, Make All Of You Cum Stoodown With Una Hands On Your Back... UNA GO RECEIVED PUNISHSENSE TODAY...*

Haaaaa!!!!! Happy Womb Escape To My Realest Team Mate...... Paddi to gbayi, millitant to gallant, comerade to jasi, ati Nigga to Baddo......


Many More Years to cum inside grandmama p*ssy....

Ok ManY more years to come in sound health and great wealth... Oya hope say u don buy drinks o....

Them other team mates dem go fetch water to bath u ni o

daretodiffer:
Why do some of you try so hard to constitute nuisance? You need stop flooding my mentions. I don't know you and I not we you anything!

Babe, calm down abeg. Don't you have any sense of humour

I do but not when I keep receiving stvpid mentions to congratulate God-knows-who.

Percentile:




Babe, calm down abeg. Don't you have any sense of humour

fiyah you're just too good. More wisdom is all I pray for you you're the bomb book haram dey use.

Well let see how those would work things out....Fiyah it a new month so i am expecting longer update in the month with the longest name.......

A little observation: the switch between past and present tense.

Shouldn't your story telling be in past tense? Except for the dialogues which of course will be in direct speech.

[quote author=ROYH post=48972371]Fiyah!!!
Come And Dedicate A Post For Me O, Today Na Mai Bornday, If Not, I Go...No Lemme Talk 4 Now... Happy birthday to you .

Tgold1:

Says?

of course me