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On our way to uduak place Miss Grace and i started discussing, we laughed and joke about issues,
We debated on many things concerning this life, love etc before Grace changed topic of discussions

"Prince do you have a girlfriend?". Miss Grace asked.
"no. I dont have girl,"

"why will big boy like mestay without havin girl friend?" i question her back.

"prince, you are very handsome, gentle,But i dont see you around girls."
"apart from that I L*** you, before she could finish what she had to utter I spoke in.

"now here we're!" announced moving forward against the door.

I knocked on the door, and someone with a familiar tiny voice answered from inside. Uduak came out and hugged and kissd me but when she noticed the sight of Grace she immediately turned and ran into the inner room.
The next events that happened that day was like drama to me. I waited to watch the event, Perhaps as one of their actors

"na who be dat witch were beat my uduak huh..?, you wan come kill my daughter again!?" her mother shouted out louder.

Uduak mum ran into house and later came out with a mighty stick to pursue Miss Grace. I tried begging her but she couldn't listen , I instructed Uduak to calm her mother down, But all that our advices were just in vain.

"mother!, pls stop this act of your pls!" Uduak pleaded But her mother turned and bounced on her.
I stood up when i saw the seriousness uduak mother had, i warned concerning her behaviors, i also informed her about the gathering crowd, But she turned and gave me a slapped that made me spin round for 2 minutes.
I could see stars of different colours and lines which no ordinary eyes can see.
Before i could say lack!, Miss Grace was no way to be found, She actually escaped from uduak mother's hand to save her life.
Uduak carried me to my house that day, because i was a little beat blinded.
I couldn't see clearly with my eyes due to excessive blows.

" i'm sorry prince, i shouldn't have informed my mother that Grace was the actually person who gave us punishment, pls forgive me?" Uduak pleaded with me.

"it's okay." i mention.
Uduak escorted me to my front door, and greeted bye before walking out my sight.

That night my mum saw my swollen face she requested for the person who injured me. I told her everything,but i didnt mention the actually person that gave me the punch. That night she shouted that she will see to the end of all this rubbish.
My mother display how she would have beaten the person back, i sat on couch and watched her in demonstration of her skills.


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did my mother actually go fighting ?

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By 4:00pm Someone knocked at the door and my mother went for it. My mother opened the door and i could hear her laugh with someone familiar.

"wow.. You again? Please come in. " my mother welcome the person.

"good afternoon mummy." Miss Grace greeted again as she walked towards my mum..

Grace was offered a chair to sit, she dropped her big hand bag and made use of the stool chair.

"mummy how is work ?" Grace asked.

"we thank God oh! everything is moving fine." my mum kindly replied giving her space to balance the chair.
When i noticed Grace present i stood up to leave the room for two of them, but my mother observered my tricky moment. Mother quickly gave a hand job to do... She gave me a bag containing beans with a tray and ordered me to select them one by one.

"mummy wetin be this na? "

" you know what to do.. Or do you expect me to show you how to do them?" my mum asked and i nodded.

I sat down counting beans. my ear phone were stocked in my ears and the music banged in my head. I could not hear what they were discussion. I began to select the beans.

"Prince.. Are you not gonna greet me?" she asked But i was too busy. The music was so loud that i could not listen to her speeches.

Sooner, i completed what i was doing and i advanced to where my mother stood. I plead with my mother to grant me the permission to leave the house.. I told her that i wanted to visit my friend Uduak. My mother agreed but then, she instructs that i should come home early.
Miss Grace would not allowed my mother to speak further, she interrupted us.

"hmmmm, Prince you said you're going to Uduak place, right?... can i accompany you there ?" Grace asked.

"no madam." i replied immediately.

My mother must have realized i was angry, so she came closer to settle our misunderstanding. My mum calm me down and told me to allow Grace go with me.
I did something crazy because the house was mine, i had the power to controll her. I told my school mother to sit & wait for me, while I reach to the bathroom to frashen up. After my bath, i rub cream on my skin, i wore a simple cloth.

"am ready... lets go" i announced when i came out.

"Mummy let me accompany your son, and when i return i will see you again before i take my leave " Miss Grace uttered. She waved bye to my mother.

We both walkout and headed to Uduak place. when we arrived there, Uduak and mother were in but when her mother saw Grace, good day turns bad......



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The rock5555: Where dis 360na abi u don lose inspiration like carzola, come cont. Ur last update was perfect. Btw. Its 'continuation' not 'continuetion'

. My oga am not quittin on this thread. Thanks tho..

The rock5555: Where dis 360na abi u don lose inspiration like carzola, come cont. Ur last update was perfect. Btw. Its 'continuation' not 'continuetion'

my oga am here. Am not suspendin this thread oh. Beside i will lik to know why the last page of this thread is not show when you open it from the literature section.

Chimaritoponcho: Omg @360prince u r d luckiest pesin on d literature section 4 havin ROCK as ur teacher i jus hope u'd b a gud student

am trying my best. You know it not easy, even when i write. I believe that i wrote everything well, but it some how suprising when someone will just correct you. Thanks tho..

Obinnau: update your thread and it will appear on the first page. If you leave it like that It will continue to go down the list.

Thanks boss for your understanding.

Chai.... E no easy at all... See as prince the suffered for him school mother hand. But all those one na small tin now, because very some i go take control. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. I don modify all my write up.

The rock5555: Check my words in bracket and use it to read again.

What kind of phone are you using self. If u have shift key it would help with spacing.

Thank you, your write up is becoming alittle better, pls add suspence

. Thank you sir.

[quote author=Chiamaka01][/quote]pls tell him we are waiting.

[quote author=Mynd_44]Front page? What do you mean?[/quote]my thread is suppose to appear in the literature section for everyone to see. But it not there!

Obinnau: lol at Mrs. Does he look like a female.

my oga at the top. I still hav nod problem left. Why is my thread "SMOKERS ARE LIABLE TO DIE YOUNG" on shown on the literature front page , after releasing me from barn?

==CONTINUETION== Kano state is one of the nicest place in nigeria. It is also know as the center of commerce, because trading are mostly done there more than any other part in nigeria. This was my first time being here. We stop at the international bus park in kano, boarded a taxi to our different destinations. My dad and i move along in one bus, from there we walk with our foots, to where my dad lives. ~~~~~~~~~~~The house was an apartment, containing 15 rooms, with two bath rooms and two toilets for every tenant. In the compound occupied different people from different tribes or states, speaking their different languages. My uncle too was living there, his name is (MAN-TU-BO). He is a cool and gentle man, but the only things that force him to display or show stupidity at times was his smoking act. ~~~~~~~~ My uncle lived an un-godly life style. He was a member of a strong powerful church (MOUNTAIN OF FIRE MINISTRY), but he stopped going to church, when he started the habit of smoking and drinking. There in the compound lived a man who was addicted to smoking as well since when he was 17 years of age. The two of them do seat outside the compound shade to smoke 15 packets of ciggarette at a spot. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ One faithful monday evening when they sat down to gist, and argument took place and the two smokers started fighting. It was a deadly fight that spilt blood. [Continue reading to know how it happened] *giggle* *TO BE CONTINUED*

The rock5555: Yeah, i beat the time.

Nite y'all.

Lets watch out how Uduak would scale through with Anita, would he also lose her. Tomorow would tell.

Still i ROCK

MR ROCK. my oga pls i really need your assistants. Hav got problems on my thread. So i quest for your help to put me through or enlighten me on something. Pls.

[quote author=The rock5555]~DEDICATED TO RITABABE~

THE RUNS APPRENTICE
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The lady i was asked to go toast was a very classy chick, she had on heavy make-up, painted fingernails and plush shoes on, she held an expensive handbag which could pay my school fees, she even fixed Brazilian hair so you could imagine my suprise when Solomon told me to go toast her as my assignment.

I looked at myself,i was putting on okrika or bend down select as some people called it but the english name is called second hand clothes.

I was putting on okrika three quater shorts with a white big shirt which i collected from Solomon, i folded the arms to make me look rugged. So i knew i never had a chance against the girl, she was not my age or mate or size atall, i felt like entering ground at that moment.

"Guy, you go do am, this one no be my mate abeg" i pleaded.

"No, i go fit but you wont still learn if i do it" he said before pushing me forward.

I walked with shaking legs to her side, her perfume was underwhelming i quickly passed her like i was passing by as soon as she turned. I could hear Solomon trying to suppress his laughter.

"Uduak no be your mate dey carry big babes round town, oya handle this one, you go fit, you forget the scripture wey your father preach from last sunday, oya practice am" my mind told me.

The scripture was from philipians 4:13 which said i can do all things through christ who strenghtens me. I summoned courage since toasting an older babe was not impossible.

"Ehm goodevening ma, em babe, no sister abi na aunty" i fumbled at my first words.

"Yes how can i help you?" she asked in perfect queens english.

"Em, i came to see you" i continued while i was glad she managed to talk to me without slapping me, my moral grew.

"Ow, are you Kola from facebook?" she said excitedly.

Facebook gini, that was the first time i had that name, abi she was telling me if i always faced my book so i answered her back.

"Yes its me, am facing book" i said nervously.

"Wow, you did no tell me you are short like this na, your voice was so sweet on phone and you said you had a car, i have been waiting since for you so where is the car?" she said.

"Oboooy" i screamed in my mind, this babe don spoil my ministry o, car ghini, i realised that she was waiting for someone else but i wanted to show Solomon that i could be rugged if i like.

"Em, dont worry babe, i left my car with my mechanic, it got spoilt so i had to change my nice clothes because of the car, thats my bodyguard there(pointing at Solomon who looked at us wondering why he was pointed at), he guarded me because i was trekking" i invented a sweet lie that could put the devil to shame it actually worked.

"Ow so sorry to hear, i was angry that you were short and a little bit underage but since you are the one that had been sending me lots of cash, i would go with you, maybe you are small but mighty, so where is your house?" she said.

"Wait, this was getting out of hand, i never expected this to reach this point but i had to act quickly so i pointed to one akara woman's shop near there.

"Lets wait there while my driver bring my car" i said hopping that Solomon would save the day but instead the guy was giving me thumbs up, if only he knew what problem i was in.

We walked together and i was tempted to put my hands around her bootilicious as's but i resisted the temptation. We sat down and began talking, before i could say anything the akara woman landed a plate of fried potatoes and akara on our table and left.

The problem was getting so out of hand but Solomon was no where to be found, i was in deep s;hit and the dude just neglected me.

The babe began eating shyly like a big chick she was telling me that i hope the Mr Biggs food was not what she was eating that moment, Tiv girls would never change, she was forming clean babe but was eating potatoes and yam in a mama Akara place and still talking of Mr Biggs.

Her phone suddenly rang as she fumbuled in her bag and brought out her BB, i wished i had accepted Anita's offer of BB. Her contenance suddenly changed as she talked on the phone.

Her long oiled stain fingers released a hot slap on my face which left me blind, hot pepery scents filled my eyes as i began shouting water, my eyes dey burn o.

"So you this tout area boy decieved me, you think you can use me for rituals, back to sender" she shouted and dashed me two more slaps and walked out.

"My pikin na wetin you do your aunty na?" the akara seller said.

"She chopped your yam" i shouted back as tears began pouring from my eyes, Solomon walked in and began consoling me which increased my cry.

"Guy no worry, you don pass my test"

"So na three slap be my test abi?" i screamed back and left the place. He quickly paid and hurried to catch up with me.

MR ROCK, hav got problems on my thread. So with all due respect i kindly need your advice.

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Miss Grace was cruel to us that day in school due to the fact that i intentionally disobeyed her. she summoned everyone outside and commanded us to frog jumps, picking pins, and all sort of punishments that could make someone faint instantly. Some students disobeyed her, those who had a rough way of living vanished from the school compound, while some students abscond to search for a place to hide.

"ah...pls madam can you please tell us what we'd done wrong that made you decide to torture us this way?" i worriedly asked her.
She fixed her eyes on me and came closer to warned me.

"Prince..., do you think you can disobey me and go free?" she questioned yelling on me.

After sometime, Grace kindly respected herself and walked away. sweats poured all over me and grieved came upon me. I felt worried for all the wrongs & misbehaviors as i bent my head downwards. Later on, some of the students were squating at their spot started complaining that their knees were weaken, while some blamed me for not releasing them from my so called school mum's hand.
Few moments later Uduak on her picking pin stand, tumbled on the ground and fainted.

"ah! Somebody pikin don faint oh!" one of the students shouted.

I quickly lifted up my face when i hear that someone has fainted. I look around and saw Uduak lieing on the ground, she was breathing slowly and weak. Uduak could not stand to her feet anymore.
I stood up and ran to the school clinic and gave report. I left the clinic and located our principal's office, while Uduak was taken to the clinic for immediate treatment. During break hours i went to check on Uduak, and this time she was her normal self again.
"hey! Uduak, how are you feeling now?" i'd happily asked her. Uduak was now in a good condition

"am fine" she'd replied still sleeping on the foam

We chatted for sometimes before the school close that day. I kindly took Uduak to her home before heading to my own direction of my house.
I got home very late. I could feel my little stomach rumble continously because i was very hungry, tired, and i needed some rest. I greeted my mother and when she answered i move to the bed and threw my body on the foam.

my mum turned to gaze towards me, "Whats wrong? "My mother politely asked

"nothing mum" i said and made an heavy sigh.

moments later i shut my eyes and slept off.
Two days later Grace did'nt see me in school. But by 4 :00pm on wednesday evening someone visited my house.

Someone knocked at the door so my mother quickly went for it.


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The rock5555: Em atleast make i talk some thing.

1) ur story make sense but e dry.

2)i wan know if ur are through with sec skul bcus ur write ups is really filled with errors(no pun intended)

3)pls are u from akwa ibom state? Bcus u kip on calling those names but the one that is provoking me is the way u spell my name- its UDUAK and not UDAUK, abeg correct that. Its my name so i hate when pple mispell it.

4)make use of ur commas, full stop, exclamation marks, apostrophs an other tenses, it makes us understand better.

Example: "prince, are you not eating before you go to school?" my mother asked.

"No mummy, i would eat in school" i replied back.

U see the space and my punctuation marks i used. Do it like that it would be more easier.

5)space ur work, it makes the post longer and easier to read.

I actually jumped all ur updates to comment bcus it was hurting my eyes. I would come and check back on u. This ur story is front page material if u polish it well, mistakes are bound to occur so dont too bother urself, just avoid making them too often.

I fit use a whole 5000 words encouraging and slamming and correcting u. But i have only one promise for u.

If i come back and see this story has improved i would bring my entourage of fans over here, u want comments abi, u go see am tire then, dont just lose focus.

Nland is ur stepping stone to greatness.

Peace..

thanks ROCK555. Am your brother in the lord, and also your brother from the same state. I have seen your commenting and i plead with you to continue the good work by putting me through where i go wrong. As for the mistakes, its due to the fact that after typing it i refuse to check and correct my errors. Punctuations makes are necessary too, so i promise to correct and put things in the right place where they are need. Thanks for commenting big bro.

Chimaritoponcho: her grammar has improved drastically sef

let me ask you this question. How did you get to know her grammer has change ?

mcdokwe: I guess Mrs Jonathan is also responsible for your poor grammar and articulation... pity I couldn't get myself to read through

oga why saying lik this now..?. Are you trying you to say that you dont understand what am explaining in story?. Besides i wrote a simple english for everyone to understand and not fooling ppl with grammers. Pls follow up. Just correct me where i go wrong. Well thanks for commenting sha.

[quote author=Mynd_44]You were banned by the spambot and I already unbanned you and showed the post[/quote]thanks my guy. I promise never to go above the law. Thanks for releasing my thread.

Obinnau: lol at Mrs. Does he look like a female.

my main guy. Pls i really need your assistant. My thread was barn "SMOKERS ARE LIABLE TO DIE YOUNG". Since you guys are the one holding or seating on high chair, i guest to know what fault i made.

Obinnau: lol at Mrs. Does he look like a female.

. Mr man. Pls help me in solving my problems. Well he is not a female. It just an error i made when typing. *wink*

[quote author=Mynd_44]Sorry I was drunk when I closed it. I was hiding the posts of some people who registered after September 1 and still voted.

But the thread will be closed by Sunday.....I made a mistake in the November. I wanted to write October 11[/quote]MRS MYND I HAV A PROBLEM HERE ON NAIRALAND AND YOU ARE THE ONE PERSON I CAN RELIE ON NOW. Can you pls help...?

===CONTINUETION=== When the police got involve in the case it got worst. Imagin police taking both the driver and passengers to the police station for questioning. One thing provoked me at the police station. One police man with a protruding belli came out from no where and ask why we are here. All of una be criminal..!" he asked. No one answer him any way but am sure everyone one had answers to his silly question in their minds. After all the interrogations by this big belli man, we were told to stand out side. One of the passengers was called out to confirm what our driver reported. The man said..' oga police, dis driver na smoke him smoke so teh....! Him carry us go jam "BAM..", and the man also reported about my own case. I was summon some munites later to come and report as well. I explained everything to them, how it started and how everything ended too. After that..something took place" INTERROGATIONS". The same police man i explained things to started asking me { WAEC~QUESTIONS} lik, whats your age..?, whats your height...?, whats your name..?, where are you from...?. In my own mind, this was my answers {my age is 419, my height is 1 inch, my name is freeme, where i come from is GOD knows where or NO MANS LAND}*chuckle*. And i had only 2 answers to it, lik "YES..! or NO..!" ~just as waec does at times, either TRUE or FALSE. i wonder why nigerian police the be lik this, instead of them to go out there and look for my dad, he is here giving me (something lik that of frank edogo *winks*)' yes or no. I said this to no one in particular' after spending about 2hours at the police station, my dad finally came. I also told him about what happened to us, and what brought us to the police station. As for the man that was injured, i did'nt really know if our bus driver pays for his bill or not, all i know was that i was happy seeing my dad again. We hop (lik frog) into the bus and drove off. After crossing the river niger, we pass many other states lik, kaduna etc to a state quoting this : [MOTOR: center of commerce]. Thats kano state. ** TO BE CONTINUED**

***CONTINUETION*** We started prayer meeting right there in the bus. It was some how funny the way people prayed, because many of us there started asking God for forgiveness. A man was praying and he started confessing how he slept with his landlords wife before arranging for his travelling, { 'he prayed so that when he died, his soul will be taken by GOD' }. After the prayer some people were thirsty for water and food to eat to keep them strong through out the journey. People who had the money to buy snacks quickly buy theirs through the bus windows, while some people claim down from the bus to buy things they want or needed. The driver too did go out to relax in the near by bar to have rest or whatever. I barely could not move myself to go and urinate or at least go out to buy and relax, because of the event that took place days back, [ I was weak, feeling dizzy too ] . Prince...! How are you doing ?. you look weak, and your face look so sad, whats the problem..? ' My dad ask'. emm.. ¡, Dad..i...i...am just having this cronic headach right now, ' i said '.My dad did not even allow me to finish what i was complaining about, he just disappeared(move quickly) without me blinking my eyes twice. He reached to where he sighted a chemist , and bought some tablets and a bottle of water. On his way coming back, the driver had already entered the bus getting ready to leave. I quickly called my dad to come immediately that the bus is leaving, but i was too late for that. The bus left without carrying my dad. I complain to the driver but he gave deaf ears to my voice. Everyone in the bus started complaining how wicked the driver man was, by leaving someone [my dad] behind.~~~~~ {I dont blame the driver, i only blame the ciggarrete, and the strong alcohol he took before starting the bus}. I shouted at him, because it was lik my low voice i use in speaking to him was'nt loud enough for him to hear[ it was obvious i did'nt hear me the first time]. When i shouted at him, he turn and commanded me to go back to my seat. No one supported what he did tho..!, but an insult from the passengers made him mad. He drove us as if (we paid for him to kill us by bus)*SIGHT*, the little mistake he made, threw the bus to the road side with the speech he drove us, not too long or should i say, in 15 munites time, we heard something lik[.... BANG...!!! ]. The bus stop, and everyone came out to see that the bus was destroy at the front beyond repairs, and by the other road side led a messedisben, it was totally damaged from the front to every part of the body. Actually no one died but the other man who had the mesedisbens had an injury. We took the man to the nearest hospital for treatment. The bills was left for us to pay since it was our drivers fault that causes the accident. Argument took place since all the passengers were ask to pay, but we all refused to pay for the bills and thats when the black on black out took control [ police ] :-) or got involved in the matter.***TO BE CONTINUED***

DisneyAngel: Prince where are u

. Hello...!!! DISNEYANGEL, am here with you. Keep on reading.

***CONTINUETION*** finally after struggling through out that night in the bus perceiving the smelling odour of the drunk man, we urgently needed help of the driver, we pleaded with the driver to stop by the road side in order to hav good breath as humans and not lik [pigs] of course you know where pigs stays *WINKS*. The driver drove to where he can freely parked his bus. We all came out of the bus with intentions of recieving fresh air that is good for the body , but it came to us as a shocking news, when one of the passengers came out and told us that one is dead in the bus. We all peep to see who the person was, it was very painful that someone died in the bus [the man who vomited on me]. Some people started shouting... Saying something lik ~~ "pastor why didnt you force us to pray..! ". Many options came up, all this descended on the man [pastor]. Some where afraid to enter the bus, some where shocked that they started wondering if this is how people die..(as in, you see someone today, and next thing you can hear is dead). Well we decided to pray, even those that do not know anything about the christians, people lik{muslims, papa-lawo}, we all prayed together. ===we enter the bus, everyone praying in his /her heart the way they know how to pray best. The bus moves for about miles before an accident happened that destroyed a young man life. The driver was on high speed, he was actually smoking when this terrible event happened. And this is what happened.... *TO BE CONTINUED*

chuks87: nyz story... But compose ur writing without directly/indirectly make fun of our political leaders... noticed in d line....."Patience .... Badluck jonathan"... Nyz story though... *following*

@ CHUKs i see you..!. Thanks for commenting. You are really encouraging me on my writing skills. As for the quote"bad luck jonathan", i promise never to make such mistakes again.

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I came back from the river late by 9:25pm in the evening,,. My mother was extremely unplease with me because i refuse to stay order to escort my Grace... My mother shouted at me,, asking me Where i have been since afternoon while I left my visitor. I Was ashamed as everyone in the compound peep to watch, especially youths like me in the Compound.. They must have mocked.. I felt guilty of what I'd done.. Atleast I was supposed to stay and wait for her to Conclude her discussion with my mother before taking my leave. Well,,,That evening i purposely base in my room through without going out... The next morning
I woke up early when I heard birds singing with lovely tone from a tree top outside the Compound. Firstly,,, I normally pray before engaging myself in house chores or preparing for school.. And for that reason I knelt down on my knees and conducted my morning devotional prayers & I conducted praises and worship myself. A new day had finally come,, the day with terrible happenings at school... it's either fighting or any other annoying unexpected happenings.

****************** MONDAY MORNING
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I reluctantly prepared for school that day with all hope... Having the confident that i will apologies Grace in her room or at any meeting occasion somewhere. But then; it's wasn't a smooth suggestion. having everything properly arranged, i left For school That morning... I gave out instructions as the class captain... I gave portions for my fellow students to start school compound cleaning. Sooner,,, I barge into the classroom wit concerntrate pace agility & occupied an empty seat beside my desk... Thereafter Uduak came along with her friends to greet me as usual... Uduak started her morning comment whenever she sees me.. She began to interrogate me about what Happened a day ago.


"Prince,,, when did you leave the river yesterday?" Uduak said


" i dont know... But I left there because it was'nt fun anymore, especially without you" i replied smiling.. And further more i began to narrate what happened on my return.


"Well i had a terrible night when i came back from the river.." i told her everything and how my mother reacted.. and I also informed Uduak about Grace visit to my house,,, how she came to my place to stay till dawn yesterday. On that very Moment Udauk was reminded of somethin... She quickly informed me that Miss Grace came very early to ask her about me.


"This is serious 0o0", "Upon what i did to her yesterday...? it baffles and i wonder what she's looking for again".. Uduak suggested i should meet her Confirm why she'd Come seeking my present. The idea was perfect &
I stood up after concluding I'll apologies. I left for Miss Grace hostel... Miss Grace was very busy arranging her lesson textbooks for teaching that monday morning when i went to meet her. She sighted me from afar but she ignored... Grace didnt care to welcome me inside her Room.. Perhaps,, i didnt Care to Go in without being instructed or call in my her... I waited for her to invite but she did'nt. After i had waited without hearing her call... I barge into her bedroom as if i had quarrel with her. I greeted her first.

"Prince.. Leave my room right now!!!",
she shouted at me and i jumped backwardly with fear. She Continued;
"I came to your house and you claim to be a big boy... Prince you left me!". Grace yelled at the top of her voice.

I got scared and ran away from her bedroom... I relaxed in my classroom thinking on how; passing thought differently on how to approached Grace. "Will she listen to me?" I silent question myself with giving any answers on how to do So..
Moments later I heard foot steps of my familiar seniors.. They were Coming to our Class.. They came and started accusing us that we the sss1 students stole their money. To me,, the amount of suffering was gonna descend on me as the class head.. And As the head of my class,, my partner uduak, we were blamed. They asked the two of us to come front immediately... Just before they Could end their instructive words we reached the front of the class.. Of course, nobody would hesitate. respectfully, uduak obeyed and So did I.


"hey..! Carry dis desk for your head make your fellow students put their thights and offerings inside." said one of the seniors.
I quickly did what am appointed to do,,, I carried the desk on my head... One thing is you dare not disobey the seniors Command.. And if you being disobeyed you're in a huge trouble with them. My seniors were busy collecting money when my school mom walked into the classroom & everyone stood up to greet as normal. But At that very occasion i was extremely Excited in my heart.. I was actually thinking our saviour has Come.. that Grace would save me the second time. So i thought.. But to my best knowledge for that day
It all became worst when she assisted in making us faint.



**TO BE CONTINUED**

glo3nity: Hesitate not! Murmur not! Grudge not! Over an impromptu errand before attending to it otherwise, result into a faulty job... Happiness shall be stolen by blames.

nice work. Am waiting to see more from you.

Chimaritoponcho: ma guy i know say u need comments naim mak i comment .incase u need mor comments jus lemme knw

@ you.!. Yes you. Thanks for commenting on this thread. I just want you guys to encourage me to do more. And pls do correct me where i go wrong. Thanks

april wise: It's a nice story I believe there is room for improvement. More ink to ur pen

. Thanks my guy mr WISE. it really a nice idea you made (wise one). I promise to do as you wish