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festwiz: Dude,nice.keep it up,and update regularly.

. Thank oga at the top. Am happy for everything. More up dates are coming.

4getful: I just started reading your story and i have some corrections to make. You said miss Grace is a corper who came for teaching practice in your school, corpers dont go for teaching practice only Fedral College of Education students go for teaching practice..e

. Thanks for comment. And thanks goes to you for asking for more explainations.

jukwesino: you have really adjusted to the advice(s) given just try and add suspense to the story it helps build interest on the storyline. the story is actually interestin. more ink to ur pen.

. Yah it good to aid to advices. Well i really made those mistakes at first because it was my first thread, and it was full of errors and mistakes. So after the first five pages. Some pplp just advice me. And here i am now. Thanks too for commenting. Follow pls.

4getful: I just started reading your story and i have some corrections to make. You said miss Grace is a corper who came for teaching practice in your school, corpers dont go for teaching practice only Fedral College of Education students go for teaching practice..e

. Yah you are right. But to ask as emaka discribe her that day to me. He said the female teacher was a copper. But if you check my story well, you wont see were i wrote she had the nysc uniform. So she was a student of fedral collage of education afaha nsit akwa ibom state.

DisneyAngel: Must u wait 4 us to tell u to update,abeg come continue before I send boys come kidnap you

. Hahahahahahaha. Abeg no send kidnappers come oh. I go up date soon. And disneyangel i was thinking you had forgotten about me.

Pls followers it been long time since i abandoned this thread. I promise to up date tonight for those who are interested in reading it. Thanks. Drop your comment. Am gonna continue this story soon. Pls stay tune

***CONTINUATION***

Hot sun flamed up me. what a sunny monday morning, a day full of so much activities. I had already planned of escaping from the house that day. Sooner, my mum call on me to assist her in some house choice. As i was busy helping my mum, i felt a sharp prank and i relax my back on the wall. I was so tired that even when i wash the dishes, i reluctantly pushed the plates aside, and i close my eyes to have a brief sleep, but the slumber drove me into my nightmare world again.

Here i landed again in my nightmare world, a place i should otherwise call my dream world. At first, the scene i actually stopped as at that very time my mum flogged me; my second adventure kicked up from where i first stopped. Vicky's mum showed me around, she took time to educate me. She showed me the beautiful flowers in the garden which adore the dream world. The hills where you can make love with your lover. She took me to a blue spring water fall in the valley between the two hills.

V*KY's MOTHER: " prince all these can be yours if only you wish ".

ME:" ma! Pls i dont like this place, i dont know anybody here! "

As i turned to leaves vicky's mum there, the direction i was heading to, i sighted a young girl, she had a fair skin, dark eyes, she was tall and beautifull. She wink at me and i advance to where she was standing. I guess that was the begining of my awareness. Actually i did not know my age in my nightmare world, but in reall life i was 18. Vicky and i started discussing love issues and all sort of stupid things. * how foolish i was as at that moment i had an interesting conversating with vicky. My mind was deep in my nightmare world.
[......HOOPS.....]


A knocked this time, i sharperly opened my eyes to see my face dug in a basket of water in used in washing, and my mum was by my side looking at me with range anger.

MY MOTHER: " prince whats wrong with you, are you sick or what?, you have been behaving this way since last week", my mum shouted at me.

ME: " am sorry mum, am so tired thats why "
MY MOTHER: " stand.., we are meeting the chemist right away".

* TO BE CONTINUED *

litelov: When will the book be out?

. Litelov are you are girl ?. As for the book am gonna publish it when God give me the grace. Thanks for commenting.

Youngzicco: I see u brov....nice write-up!

. All thanks goes to you as my friend and viewer. Thanks for commenting. Should in case you need more up dates pls inform me. And tell your friends to read this story too. Thanks

*CONTINUATION*

On saturday morning, i wake up early by 5:30am. I felt dizzy but i still stagger to move straight to my mum's room to bang at the door.

MUM : " Yes!, what is it ?"

ME : " Good morning mum, ehrmm... Mummy i came to ask you if we will be going to farm today "

MUM: " No.., we wont go today, and by the way why do you came so early to ask? "

ME: " mum mrs Grace actually invited me to come see her "

MUM: " You may go, but before you leave this house make sure everything is done, before going there.."

ME: " OK mum "


i left immediately as my mother granted my request. I quickly sweep the entired compound, wash some of my mum cloths (RAPA), wash all the plates, and i arrange the cocking utensils. In one hour time, i was done.

I wrapped a towel around my waist, and took a bucket of water, dash into the bathroom to take a cool shawer. I later finished bathing, i move into my own room and put on my body fitted cloth, i put on a scent perfum. i left for mrs grace house.
I entered the school compound, it was so big, and i could see the beauty of it, not lik school hours that you can barely see the buildings. I walk towards the female hostel where she lived. I knocked on mrs grace door, and to my suprise, it was as if she knew i was the one knocking, she quickly opened it and hugged me. We hugged for like five munites, before she beckon on me

MRS GRACE: " Come in ", she was chuckling when she called me in. I move in like a gentle man, and mrs grace banged the door close .....!

* TO BE CONTINUED*

DisneyAngel: Lobatan,see gobe

. Disneyangel is lik you are forgott about me. Right ?

*CONTINUATION*

The man who sat close to the girl beckoned on me.

THE MAN: " come, prince. Tell me what you want and i will make it come into reality "

The way the old man looked at me disturbed me. I felt desperate and tensed suddenly. I was not so sure of this man in my dreams, neither was i sure of what the man also wanted from me. I turned my eyes from his face. It was then, that i sighted someone by the door post, the name " HER MOTHER ", leaped to my mind.

I haven't seen people like this, i try memorizing her face. She called on me

V*KY's MOTHER: " prince, how are you?"

ME: " am fine ma..,
and you?"

V*KY's MOTHER: " am also feeling fine, and am happy you are here with us in this part of the world "

I ran to hug her, i hang on her like she was my own mother, because with her there will be no doubt, no uncertainties, with her everything was always Ok. She folded her arms about me and held me tight, she whispered love words, comfort to me in that strange dream land of my night mere.

I felt cool after she had advice me that moment, as she was about showing me things around, all of a sudden, i felt a painfull wiped that nearly peeled my skin off. I jerked up from my dream and night mere land to see my real mother standing close to my bed. She was holding a big KOBOKO.....

MY MOTHER: "prince.... Commot for dat bed right now!, you`v been sleep since last night and now it 1:30pm already" she shouted at me.

As soon as i heard my mum called 1:30pm, my eyes opened wide, my mouth actually acted the same way too. I opened my mouth in amazement, i sigh and jumped down from my foam. ...... My night mere as cause my mum to flog me, i said.

* To Be Continued*

* STARTING *

I pushed my nose and lips against the pane and i tried to lick a raindrop sliding down on the other side. As it slid past my eyes, i say the mobw colours in the raindrop...... It must be warm in there. Warm and dry. And perhaps the sun would be shining in there. The green must be the trees and the grass; and the brightness, the sun.... I was inside the raindrop, away from the misery of the cold damp room. I was in a place of warmth and sunshine, inside my raindrop world.

"prince".

The round jerked me out of my raindrop world. I was at the window, looking out, feeling damp.

"prince..".
I sensed that, that was the sound my which i was identified. I turned and looked at the man who had called. He was talk, thin and dark. He had a big head, wide forehead and long face that swell down to his chin. His eyes were big, round, and hooded. There was a softness in them. He learned back in a chair, his legs stretched in front of him, the right crossed over the left. He held his right hand out to the fire in the center nod the room.

With his left hand, he touched the hair of a young beautiful girl of 13 years who sat on the floor beside his chair. I knew that girl. Although i seemed to be seeing her for the first time, she was no stranger to me. She naturally and intimately to me and my world.

* To Be continued*

This story is all about my night mere adventure with V**KY. It was actually a total world to me when this adventure started, blissfull world of enjoyment.

*CONTINUATION*

The molestation has cause mary to act strange in everything she does . She hardly stays at home to care for her little sisters, all she does was going around guys, but before she started this new character of hers. She visited frank her boyfriend that evening by 7:44pm.

Marry weeped on her way, she could not hid her tears anymore, she just pour it out lik a spring water.

MARY : " Is anyone at home ?" she shouted as she banged on the door.

FRANK : " Pls wait a munites.., i'll be right there! "

Immediately frank recognises mary's voice, he hurriedly came to open the door for her.

FRANK : " Mary.., why are you here to check up on me by this time of the night, it late, you should go back and stay with your little sister. Then by tomorrow i will come and check on you "

MARY : " Nooooo.. No., i cant stay in that house anymore, i wanna be here with you tonight "

They seated together and hug each other . Mary weeped bitterly on frank's shoulder, while frank heart burn hot why those guys had to raped her.
By 10:30 mary and frank were still outside the compound yard discussing. Sooner mary started kissing frank, and that was the very first time she had ever kiss frank. Mary personally got hold of frank shirt, and rub him on his chest, and then she got hold of Franks joy stick. Frank could feel the sweet sensation, and now had the opportunity to take mary inside and they had hot moment {X} that night. And ever since then, mary was now ready to give her body to any suitor that comes into her life, but if only you have (ego, kudi, money).


* TO BE CONTINUED *

*CONTINUATION*

EMAKA : " Oooo boy!, abeg na wetin be dey numba one answer na ?"

ME: " emaka, as u de see me so, i dey meditate say mak wetin i write correct "

EMAKA:" prince.., why u dey yan like dis na, but u promise me say... U go work tins out na "

ME: " guy sorry oh!, i no know say na like dis tins go be na "

Before i could further explained to emaka,Uduak interrupted.....

UDUAK: " hey guys, any expo at all? "

EMAKA: " so since were you dey busy de write, i tink say u don write all dey tin were de your text book? "

UDUAK: " see your big head lik person were go fit contain everytin were de book"

ME: "Guys..guys... Pls enough of dis talk, mak we finished quick go summit oh"

we ignorantly forgot that the principal {mr akpan} had not returned,we copied to our satisfactions and seated peacefully, and patiently awaiting mr akpan to collect the papers.Mean while, mr Akpan had already sighted the three of us from the window. Shortly, mrs akpan came and summon us to follow him,

MR AKPAN: " Prince., uduak and emaka, the three of you should follow me"

Mr Akpan collected all the students scripts, and disperse our own test papers . He leaded the way to his office, while we followed him from behind. The three of us kneelt down in his office for good one hour before he agreed to dismiss us to our classes. Before closing hours, the principal {mr akpan} call us to the assembly ground, he disgraced us, hatred feeled our heart against those who laugh at us. We were given 15 strokes of cane each before leaving the hall to our different houses.
Mr grace met me on my way walking back home.

Mrs GRACE: " EHmm., prince meet me anytime you have vacant, i have a gift for you "

ME: " na which type of gift dis woman get for me na?, or abi na play she wan play me?".
[OK TIL DEN, I GO C WETIN SHE GET FOR ME... Dat i said]

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~ TO BE CONTINUED~

superkings: .nice story prrinceee. Pls up date

. Am here to up date oh.

Holanid: i dnt lyk imaginary tinz

. Ok. Since the malt is invisible. I promise to up date tonight. Will that be ok for you?

Valentinooo: I can see you are working on your punctuations as corrected. Keep it up.

. Thanks menn!. It good to take corrections. I guess you are happy for me?. Thanks for commenting tho!

***CONTINUATION***


A test weaken the strong mind of some student, it was hectic, stressful and at same time boring.
However, many pupils must have gotten testimonies to uttered if they had the chance to hold a microphone for pronouncement concerning the test.
Uduak was sweating profusely due to the level at which Mr. Akpan gave the test , i could sit at my place to sight her from my front, She was focused on her test script and Uduak barely had time to answer anybody who call her for attention. Perhaps, i guess she had many things to write. so i'd thought..
Emaka at the other hand bent forward to peep other students papers, He was also wet from his face to his waist regions.
I actually did my own style, i tried my very best ability to solves answers to the exams questions.
Sooner, Mr Akpan walk out of the class pretending to have an emergency meetin with the school staffs, while he hurriedly left the class.
As soon as Mr.Akpan stepped out of the class all the students formed their groups to solve the question. Some students stupidity would have exposed us to the principal, firstly Some were behaving like animals throwing papers, while some showed how idiotic they were by fighting because of an expo piece of paper.
Few minutes to stop the test Mr. Akpan didnt returned when Emaka and uduak left their own seat and came to where i sat. SHORTLY.....
[ The burden i was suppose to bare alone became theirs too].


**TO BE CONTINUED**

[quote author=festwiz]Bring the malt,what are you waiting for?. Dont worry yourself. Pls help me use your own pocket money to buy it, then i will pay you. Hahahaha

Pls followers it been long time since i abandoned this thread. I promise to up date tonight for those who are interested in reading it. Thanks. Drop your comment.

dasagacious: [/*TO BE CONTINUED*]

I DEY WAIT 4 U O, #SKELEWU

. Dont worry my dear friend, it just the begining. I will up date twice this evening before going to bed. Thanks for following. One luv*wink*

Holanid: folowin silently

. Oga it not easy commenting oh!, so i use this very opportunity to say thanks for your comment on my thread. Well to every person's that follow me, HERE IS A CAN MALT FOR YOU. i will up date soon.

The rock5555: i dey check u, but i have been kinda busy, coming ova soon

. I hope you wont go into your GHOST MODE again, and forget about me?

Obinnau: just organise. I will give my endorsements

. Ok then. I'll try my best

festwiz: Great improvements bro,but you really need to work on your tenses. Anyway sha,i sitdown for front row.

. All thanks return to you. You really helped me when i needed you, by enlightening me, correcting me as well. I salute sir !. I hope you wont mind, if i give you one can of malt so that you can relax well at the front roll?*winks*

*CONTINUATION*

Mr Akpan enter the class looking so calm and well dress in white t-shirt, red tie, and black trouser with a shiny shoe to match his out fit, he look cute with his fashion of dressed that morning.

"Good... Morning .... Sir...!" everyone greeted him in unison.

"Good morning students" mr Akpan greeted us back. You may now seat.
How good and patience students we were as at that time we greeted him, knowing that today was to be a of sadness and grieve, everyone who had this ability of talking and gossiping were now muted, calm and quiet as the grave yard.
Mr akpan advanced to the board, pick up a dusted and personally clear it, and wrote {TEST ON ECONOMICS} and in no time, he began to jot down his first question on the black board. He then turn around to face the whole class and change his motives and his face appeared to be that of a wild beast. He actually change to show us that he was serious that day. His tune also change in other to shaken the mind of some students who had the intention or who had planned of indulging in doing expo [test malpractise].
MR AKPAN: " before we start answering any questions, i request to see every student notes at the front ".
Students stood up to pass their notes to the front seat. I stayed calm and glued to my seat thinking untill my principal walk up to me and brought me back from my thought.

MR AKPAN: " why is your economic note here?, didnt i warn everyone to summit their books?"

ME: "am sorry sir, i was thinking ".

Mr akpan chuckled, he knew what i was thinking about ( the reason why he had to take control of giving us test instead of mrs Grace), he moved closer to the board and wrote the first question which drove everyone to night mere, or something i should otherwise called wanderland, Some students sweated, some had fever that moment, while some had high blood pressure.

* TO BE CONTINUED*

dasagacious: [**TO BE CONTINUED**]

am rily enjoyin dix story,be fast abeg

. Dont worry, more and more updates are coming your way, but before they come. Take this can of malt, use it to chill yourself.

tmamuda: Kip it coming

Good day sir, I salute you. Thanks for devoting your time to follow this thread , as for the comment ;More and more are coming your way soon. Take this pop corn and relax yourself.

ritababe: must u always bold ur words

if u quote the whole post again me and u go fit for dis thread oh

@rock
i dey oh i nor go anywhere, hackerjay no want give me space again

. Oga the rock. You abandoned me and have turn your back on me, why ?. You dont even care to check on your home boy any more!. Am expecting you

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, my g, are you like forming sharp guy?. Wont you contribute for the occasions to take place.