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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 6:50pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
ewawumi:Thanks for the ghost mode deactivation. lol. |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 7:02pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
emmytemmy:Amen, thank you. God bless you. |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by DemiKOL(f): 7:47pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
Thanks for the update! 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by favch(f): 8:33pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
[quote author=rachealfst post=64256578]Dedication: pweetymhi, Pricelessangel0, divatolaz, obepeace, favch, Ebigbola, kikiwendy, afolabiwunmi, XCELsis, bigbauer, mrsPT, hypmoment, chiexcel thanks for the dedication mam,its a honour but u must have had eagle eyes to know those viewing ur story cus am sure I have never commented on this story this one crystal is finding it hard to forgive, will she b able to forgive her dad ride on pls,following 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by olaolutreasure(m): 8:45pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
We are gettin there. Iamvictor Seun thankyouJesus seunM Xbee007 Melancholy
this is a story I would love u see 2 Likes |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 8:51pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
Eeyah, everything would kuku be okay 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by pweetymhi(f): 8:56pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
thanks for the dedication.
crystal and soma hmmmm am just using one side eye to b viewing u both. 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by jdluv(f): 9:13pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
olaolutreasure tanks for the mention.@ the story crystal s dialogue with sliver got me rollin 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Sanniboi(m): 9:29pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
intresting 2 Likes |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by ayomikun95: 10:55pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
Nice work ma...more strength. 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Eddyella(f): 11:16pm On Jan 16, 2018 |
Tankz 4 d dedication,xpecting more updates. |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by olaolutreasure(m): 3:00am On Jan 17, 2018 |
jdluv:In Crystal's mind, she ll b like 'My secretary is my in-law' |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Melancholy(m): 5:18am On Jan 17, 2018 |
olaolutreasure:Thanks man. I've been here since the beginning o. |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by XCELsis(f): 7:45am On Jan 17, 2018 |
jaksmillioniar:Thank you |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by XCELsis(f): 7:49am On Jan 17, 2018 |
[quote author=rachealfst post=64256578]Dedication: pweetymhi, Pricelessangel0, divatolaz, obepeace, favch, Ebigbola, kikiwendy, afolabiwunmi, XCELsis, bigbauer, mrsPT, hypmoment, chiexcel Thanks for the dedication. |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by chiexcel: 8:37am On Jan 17, 2018 |
Tenks so much 4 d update |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by thankyouJesus(m): 8:44am On Jan 17, 2018 |
olaolutreasure:Thanks for the mention. |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by mrsPT: 9:27am On Jan 17, 2018 |
[quote author=rachealfst post=64256578]Dedication: pweetymhi, Pricelessangel0, divatolaz, obepeace, favch, Ebigbola, kikiwendy, afolabiwunmi, XCELsis, bigbauer, mrsPT, hypmoment, chiex thanks |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 10:45am On Jan 17, 2018 |
I've been on ghost mode since... Secret admirerer of good works.. #Give me a shoutout too. |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by emmytemmy: 11:31am On Jan 17, 2018 |
Aunty Racheal,pls we're expecting update faa.i've been checking and checking for update ooo.pls help us wit update o |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by afolabiwunmi: 12:02pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
Thanks for the mention ma'am, this story is getting more interesting every day by day. Kudos to the writer and more energy for updates. |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by bigbauer(m): 12:08pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
Oops, I'm busted! Thanks for the dedication, if I'm not wrong, it's the first time on Nairaland. You've made history. I'm loving and dedicated to this story. I would've said and the OP too, but I don't want stories that touches the eerm. rachealfst: 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 1:47pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by oluwaseun15(f): 2:05pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
Am beginning to think Afam is crystal's father,all the same thanks for this beautiful masterpiece,you got me glued to my phone @ rachealfst,God bless you...more grace 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pricelessangel0(f): 3:35pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
rachealfst:Wao!!! ma'am tnx for the dedication |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by mercyymai(f): 7:44pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
emmytemmy: Same here o |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by stizzy(f): 8:15pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
Love ❤ dis story,all your stories Av always being a bomb.more ink to ur pen pls mention me in your next update o.God bless u ma. 1 Like |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by kikiwendy(f): 8:26pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
rachealfst:Thanks dear for the dedication and also nice update.. More wisdom fall on you |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nickibeauty(f): 8:36pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
I keep on checking for updates |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 8:38pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
Dedication: Sanniboi, rchilee, emmytemmy, ewawunmi, elvi01, toyine1, jdluv, ayomikun95, Deckline, oluwaseun15, Stizzy. Shout out to Divepen1 who unbanned me again. Thank you...... ENITAN We had a group chat on WhatsApp and we all concluded and fixed a date to meet with my mom. Everyone agreed to be present including Ezinne. I went home to see my mum praying not to meet my stepfather at home. Anyway he was home when I got there. I greeted him not waiting for his reply and I went straight to my Mummy's room. One of my siblings was with her when I entered. We exchanged greetings and told her about my friends plan to visit her. "Se ko si? Hope there's no problem, it's been long I saw them here" "They just want to come discuss somethings with you. Se ema wa available?" (will you be available?) "Yes I will. I'll tell your siblings to help me prepare something we can entertain them with" " Mummy ko need(No need for that) they won't be staying long because we have other engagement for that day" "I know you will say that, you've poisoned your friends heart against us. If it's Mummy Ejiofor's house, you will eat and drink o, no problem" "Oh! You expect them to be free here when your hostile husband 'the lion of the tribe of Keshinro family' is around abi" I said gesturing with my hands. "Really, why do you two hate each other like this? Ehn... right from when you were young, you never get along for once" "Mummy please free me. He never liked me and you know it, so I can't waste my love on someone who doesn't deserve it” My sibling did not like the way I addressed her dad. “Anty mi!” And I replied sharply. “What! Tell your Daddy to free me” "Ok o, tell your friends I'll be expecting them" My mum said. "Ese ma(Thanks) I'm leaving, good bye" "But you just got here!" "Your husband is around, and the last thing I want right now is wahala" She just sighed. "Odaaro ma"(good night ma) "Odaaro oko mi" (good night my child)She replied and I left her room. ____________Toyin Taiwo FESO My plane landed safely at the airport, Senator had already sent a driver to pick me up. I was supposed to come with Hauwa but her container arrived the previous day and it needed to sort somethings out. I got to their mansion and Hajiya, Hauwa's mum gave me a warm welcome. She even apologized for the inconveniency. Senator wasn't around, so showed me to the guest room. Hajiya is very hospitable, I was well entertained. Later in the evening, Senator called Hajiya that he won’t be coming home that night, he has an all night meeting to attend. Hajiya felt sorry when relating the message to me. I was so furious that I had to talk. I shaked my head at first. Hajiya do you know why your husband was able to do this to me? It's because I love your daughter" "I understand, just be patient with him" she said patting my back. "I can't remember the last time I was controlled, or been ordered around" "Don Allah( please ) exercise more patient, do it for her. I promise to talk to him, I will make sure this ends soon" "Thank you ma, infact I couldn't have done this without your support. Mungode ma” I said in hausa. I called Hauwa to tell her the situation of things, she said she's already on her way to Muritala Mohammed airport. The next day, Senator came in, in the morning and went straight to his room, to rest off course, he looked stressed out. Two hours later Hauwa arrived. The driver went to the airport earlier to get her. _________Toyin Taiwo HAUWA The first person who caught my attention when I stepped into the living room was my darling. He wasn't smiling but he put up a little smile when he sighted me. Hajiya too was there so I greeted her first. "Ina Kwana(good morning) Hajiya" she also replied me in Hausa. “Ina kwana. Yaya anya?(how was your trip?) "Lafiya"(Fine) I walked up to my baby and gave him a peck. "I bet if you have a gun, you will shoot the senator without hesitating" I said playfully and kissed him on the cheek. He smiled. "Thank God you are here, how was your trip?" He said as he lighten up a bit. "Cool" I replied. "Don't worry we'll finalize everything today, the next time you'll be meeting him here again will be after the wedding venue" I assured him. "I pray" "Let me inform him that we are set for the meeting" I said and went to my father's room. "Ina Kwana Baba" I greeted. He was dressed up. He replied me. "Don't tell me you are going out again" I said angrily. "I just got an urgent call, I have to be in Nigeria" I laughed scornfully. "Father, if you step a foot out of this house without giving Feso audience..." I stopped to ensure that the words are sinking. "I swear you will never set eyes on me again" "It's not my fault, duty calls" "What stupid duty, you want to frustrate him so he'll leave me abi baba" "What are you talking about I already accepted him" "See I will not allow you boss him around the way you did with my brothers. I mean what I say, you don't finalize this marriage meeting today, then you will never see me again" "Hauwa..... ____________________Toyin Taiwo "If you think he'll leave, yes he'll leave but with me. Thank God he wasn't a nobody. Only God knows what you'll have done. You will even tell him to lick your shoe because he wants to marry your daughter, right!” "Ok ok, I'll spare 10minutes and you are already using up the time" "No way father, 10mins, so you can reschedule another meeting? Call the Senate, tell them you have an emergency" "Emergency! Stop been dramatic" "Is this not an emergency! Put your house in order first before obeying Nigeria's call" He took a long look at me and realized I was determined. He pulled off his Guinea Agbada remaining the buba and sokoto. "Let's go" he said. "Better" I said and followed him. ___________Toyin Taiwo BEATRICE I ran everywhere for help, I kept getting the same answer. "Your husband is gone forever" that is what I get from all the herbalists. One even said. "If you try to harm him, you will just loose your life" That God me scared but still I will find another way. I decided to go to my village. My mother has a friend who can help. I know the woman as powers like mother. But unfortunately when I got there I was told the woman had travelled. 10 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pinkfeet: 9:33pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
thanks for dedication |
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pearl05(f): 9:52pm On Jan 17, 2018 |
Wow! Enough is enough for Senator joor. What just happened? I read an update commented then went back to read again but couldn't find it. |
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