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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Pinkfeet: 11:10pm On Feb 03, 2018
thanks for the update.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by wumsgreen(f): 11:17pm On Feb 03, 2018
@pinkfeet I wasn't referring to Oba o its that yeye daddy Afam's personal driver o. Oba na correct guy na can't wait to see him and crystal falling hopelessly in love. thanks for the wonderful update rechealfst

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by VeeAbuede(f): 11:38pm On Feb 03, 2018
I didn't have the patience to wait for the next update so i decided to go buy the book from Okada books and, i must say, i wasn't disappointed. After reading ANIKE, i made it a point of duty to follow @rachealfst. My sister, i pray for you this day, that your latter years shall be better than your former years. This anointing & gift that God has blessed you with shall be used to win souls for the kingdom of heaven. You have touched me (and i believe many others) in ways that you can least imagine. May you reap the fruits of your labours in Jesus mighty name, amen. I really do have a lot to say to you. I wish to know you better. Can you possibly contact me? Thanks.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:56pm On Feb 03, 2018
VeeAbuede:
I didn't have the patience to wait for the next update so i decided to go buy the book from Okada books and, i must say....Can you possibly contact me? Thanks.
you can send me your WhatsApp no via email. Or add me up on Facebook: @toyinfst
email: toyinfst2@yahoo.com.
Amen to your prayers. Thanks, love you plenty.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 11:57pm On Feb 03, 2018
tillaman:
May ur neurons and dendrites never go on strike, u got it all, may God bless u continually and as u keep contributing to our lives in ur own little way, God will perfect all his works in ur LIFE!!! THANK YOU TOYIN.
Amen!!! Thanks so much.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cyndy1000(f): 5:15am On Feb 04, 2018
lonesome501:
nobody z saying soma is a bad person,,the mutual feeling z nt there anymore,,or do u want dem to venture into loveless relationshp,,god forbid badt thing...weldone jare,,rachealfst... SOMA/EZINNE...



Soma n Ezinne can't be together cos one of their rules you don't date an ex of the member.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 10:40am On Feb 04, 2018
Hmmmmm

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 10:41am On Feb 04, 2018
cyndy1000:




Soma n Ezinne can't be together cos one of their rules you don't date an ex of the member.
Rules can be broken, you know.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nphzzycute(f): 12:07pm On Feb 04, 2018
thanks for the dedication ma'am God Bless You

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Sexyolori(f): 1:01pm On Feb 04, 2018
Keep dropping it like its hawt hun.btw its ofe nsala not ofia sala.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by JMK9600(f): 1:31pm On Feb 04, 2018
Thanks for the mentions ma'am. Beautiful story. I smell something between Oba and Crystal. Soma should go and rest biko. Happy Sunday beautiful TT

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Bdemmy4real: 2:13pm On Feb 04, 2018
Weldone sis

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by dsimple1(m): 6:33pm On Feb 04, 2018
Thanks for the update... More please...

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cbella(f): 8:10pm On Feb 04, 2018
queenitee:

Rules can be broken, you know.

Like broken hedge... They will break their own rules and build a wall this time

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 11:08pm On Feb 04, 2018
cbella:


Like broken hedge... They will break their own rules and build a wall this time


Exactly

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Nobody: 11:13pm On Feb 04, 2018
Thanks 4 d mention, great update as usual.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 11:13pm On Feb 04, 2018
Thanks for the dedication sis @rachealfst

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cyndy1000(f): 8:02am On Feb 05, 2018
cbella:


Like broken hedge... They will break their own rules and build a wall this time






Yes rules can be broken but I guess the broken hedge is about the spell Beatrice cast on Afam which he later found out n reuniting with Amara n Crystal. Probably at the end they will marry. just my thoughts tho

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 8:45am On Feb 05, 2018
@Sexyolori, thanks, point noted.
@JMK9600, thank you....
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 8:46am On Feb 05, 2018
Dedication:
To Everyone, Happy New Week.



CRYSTAL
Oba's phone rang too.
"It's your dad" He informed. "I think we should leave now, I'm sure he wants to know if you are home already"
"Pick his call then we'll leave"
"What will I tell him, I should have taken you straight home and not here"
"I don't know" I said frankly. I know my dad won't like the fact that I'm not home by now.
"Kai, you just ditched me" he said and picked the call when the call came in again. He placed it on speaker.
"Hello sir"
"Where are you?"
"Ehm...we stop over on our way to the house but we are very close to the house sir"
"Oba, she should be home resting by now. It’s almost night fall" He said with a firm tone, I knew he won’t like the idea that his daughter is not yet home.
“I’m sorry sir” he said but I didn’t say a word.
I wondered what would have happened if I grow up with him when I was a teenager. I would have gotten a lot of grounding.
"Call me when you get home" he said and disconnected the call.
"Now let's go madam" he said and helped me up by pulling the unaffected hand.
"All this because of Daddy! I haven't finish my drink nau.." I protested.
"Seriously we shouldn't be here this long"
I feigned anger as we leave the restaurant. Some minutes later we entered into my estate.
He stopped at the gate and I alighted.
"You don't want to come in?" I asked
"Maybe some other time. My regards to Mummy. Good night"
"Ok, good night" I said and waved as he sped off.

____________________Toyin Taiwo
OBA
I got home a bit disturbed. I don't know if I'm passing my boundaries. I'm sure Daddy Afam didn't like the fact that I was with his daughter for those few hours. He didn't sound as if he bothers though. But I felt a little not comfortable that he called to find out about his daughter and she was still with me.
While I was thinking, I heard a knock. It's obvious who is at the door. I opened the door.
"Hi, good evening"
"Ayo, Hi"
"How was your day?"
"Not bad"
"You came back early today"
"Hmm....yes"
"You look tired" she said. I quickly take a cue from her statement.
"Yes, I'm very tired. I'd like to be alone so I can rest. Can you come back some other time"
"Sure, rest well. You need it. Good night"
"Thanks, sleep well. Good night" I said and bolted the door when she stepped out.
I pounced on my bed and slept off almost immediately.
I woke up around 11pm. I put on my data. I had some WhatsApp messages. I got a message from Crystal too which I read first. It reads:
'Thanks for today. I've a lovely night rest'
I replied her message immediately and typed 'You are welcome. Anything for my second family' I sent the message and she replied.
‘Second Family! Hmm!’ her message read. Then I replied surprised that she was still awake. That was how the chatting started.
‘You are still awake!'’
‘Yes. And you, why are you still up?’
'I slept earlier, I just woke up’
'Why it's just 11:09pm?'
________________Toyin Taiwo
'Don't know, I just have some things on my mind'
'I noticed that when you drop me off. Care to share?'
'Ehm....no. it's nothing really'
'Oba I thought we are friends'
'And I'm so glad to have a wonderful lady like you as a friend'
'Now that you see me as one. Do you care to share?'
'Yes'
'Let me call you'
'Don't worry I'll call you'
I switched off my data sighed heavily before placing the call.
She picked at once. "So what's eating you up" I heard her speak.
"Can we please not talk about it" I tried to wave the matter.
"Oba, you promised to tell me. I thought you would be open to me the way I did to you. You know everything about me and my past" She said sounding disappointed.
"Hmm....see emotional blackmail"
"I'm sorry if it sounds like that. It's just that....
"Okay!!"
"I sense it's a matter of the heart" She guessed.
"Mm... you are right"
"Let's hear it, a sister can help"
"I'm liking someone I'm not suppose to like" I said and she coughed.
"O...kay, but it's there someone who is not worth liking!"
"That's not what I said imply. It's just that I doubt if I can have her" I corrected.
"Why! If you love her, talk to her"
"We are world's apart" I confessed.
"You still have to tell her. Then it's her loss if she allow her class come between you"


____________________Toyin Taiwo
"Her loss?"
"Yes, her loss. To me you are every woman’s dream forget about money. You have ambitions. Life is about finding happiness. Once you have someone that can make you happy. Why allow class come between you" She stated.
"Some ladies don't think that way, you know"
"I know. So who is the girl?”
"Crystal, please don't ask!"
"It's just a simple question that needs an honest answer"
"I'll tell you about her later. I promise Thanks for giving me a listening ear. I should let you sleep now. Good night, see you on Monday" I said hurriedly.
"Seriously! You are discharging me!"
"Crystal....
"You know what, I give you 48hours to get your act together. And tell the girl in question how you feel about her. Stop torturing yourself. Good night" she said and disconnected the call before I could even respond.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by nerd51(f): 9:12am On Feb 05, 2018
Lovely update, ma. Thanks

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by queenitee(f): 9:25am On Feb 05, 2018
Hmmmm

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Ennyolah: 9:47am On Feb 05, 2018
Nice update.thumbs up

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Mcweber(m): 10:04am On Feb 05, 2018
Crystal sef don fall finish....this is getting interesting

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Sojikhing: 10:41am On Feb 05, 2018
wow this is getting more lovely

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Ennyolah: 11:03am On Feb 05, 2018
Superb

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Deckline(m): 11:36am On Feb 05, 2018
I still stand for Soma. Oba should go and find his class na. Ayo likes him. Oloju kokoro.

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by jullyrosy(f): 11:51am On Feb 05, 2018
WAOH!!!! crystal give soma another chance now.... oba clear road!!!!

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by hpymoment(f): 12:11pm On Feb 05, 2018
Mcweber:
Crystal sef don fall finish....this is getting interesting

i dey tells u. kikiki.......love is good sha.
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Mcweber(m): 12:16pm On Feb 05, 2018
hpymoment:


i dey tells u. kikiki.......love is good sha.
love is a beautiful thing you know....the only wahala is going to be Soma

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Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by Adesina12: 12:18pm On Feb 05, 2018
Wow!!!!!
It is happening already
Emotionally attached
Sweet popcorn for you dearie TT rachealfst
Re: BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo by cyndy1000(f): 12:42pm On Feb 05, 2018
please you people should stop hating Oba because of class what matters is feelings LOVE it's crystal clear that Crystal herself loves Oba n don't have any feelings for Soma again so I see no reason why they shouldn't be together. Besides Oba is even educated just that he has got a substantial job yet. Which I believe with time God will pick his call.


Biko Team Oba n Crystal....

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