Mavikolo2020:



Seriously man, don't you get tired of displaying your stupidity, wasn't the ban enough for you to realise how childish and stupid you're acting, guy abeg mature.., even the senseless ones act mature sometimes

No wonder u act mature sometimes

Wadewaltz:
Thank u,d work dey wud give me is to baby-sit u

LMAO, now you are a babysitter. Dude you are confused.

ObaKlaz:
Hi, Bro! Maybe you should criticise the story constructively first. I'd like to read yours though. And believe me, I'm coming at every update of your story with every artillery of constructive criticism in my arsenal when you start. Criticise him CONSTRUCTIVELY, don't just bad mouth his effort. What's up?

Chose a date and inform evryone abt it.I want to lift writin inside Nairaland to a new level.Sumtin out of d box.Not all dis low-budget movie storyline

Wadewaltz:

No wonder u act mature sometimes

I can't wait to see that story of yours

BOMA2912:
LMAO, now you are a babysitter. Dude you are confused.

Am not ur dude,over-sized head

Mavikolo2020:

I can't wait to see that story of yours

Don't come to my page wit grudge but wit ur literary sense switched on

Wadewaltz:
Before u praise dis lame story ask ursef "if it was shown on T.V will my butt still cling to d couch?".Hell no!.Y'all readin dis cus dere is no electricity at home to watch a good movie.I would be starting a story soon so u can see how a story is written.Silver1996 take note.NwaAmaikpe take note.Mavikizolo2020 take note.SokoDobo take note.Infant take note.Shreder take note.

start your own first,we will see how far you'd go with it...




Silver1996,don't mind this guy above oo.just prove him wrong by your consistence.

As for kess,i pray he doesn't land himself in hot pepper because of the unstable lady she took in.sonia always bring trouble to those around her with her folly,i won't be surprised if after sometime she get access to kess gun and decide to do another stupid thing.

Philip will be extra vigilant now since kess is already suspecting,he will try very hard to cover his track and become really slippery.

Pious team will have a great setback in their plans that will totally disrupt their plans and might even reveal their true intentions.

The ever cold and calculative carlous will become more ruthless and very suspicious now,so pious plans to install camera in carlous' house might likely not work.

Francis(octova) should really watch-out.if the police discovered that gun to be pious(ferico carter),carlous will hear about it and come for francis in palace(carlous will also break every interraction with pious and see him as a deadly enemy)

I see pious team winning but at a great price,sonia manage to escape peacefully without much casuality,kess loosing his life at the end,carlous will be captured by the police(pious won't be the one to subdue him,it will be the POLICE)..

that single move of sonia trying to kill carlous and later escaping arrest just trigger a chain of events that will alter the course of this story.

Nostradamus,or watever u call ursef,u make potheads so readily available to insult but I choose to restrain myself.I have a story cumin up and I dont want to get banned becus some crackhead skipped his meds and now wants me to insult im

Wadewaltz:
Nostradamus,or watever u call ursef,u make potheads so readily available to insult but I choose to restrain myself.I have a story cumin up and I dont want to get banned becus some crackhead skipped his meds and now wants me to insult im

I hear.

I might hv been harsh wit my words but Silver1996 d storyline is average,I just cant asskiss.It is lyk sumtin written by a primary two kid who is tryin to experiment wit a pen.First,I wud love to see more thought-provokin lines,D imperfection of humanity and many more not a straight-jacket story

Attention seekers, they will stop at nothing until they get it

Silver don't mind that guy, infact shut him up by giving us another update, let him go and kill himself

Most of d readers here just prefer a story dat will pamper deir thots,I AM HERE TO END THAT.ANY WEAK,AVERAGE OR FRINGE WRITER SHOULD QUICKLY PACK-UP AND LEAVE.GAME OVER

kelvyncruz:
Silver don't mind that guy, infact shut him up by giving us another update, let him go and kill himself

Now go and stand near ur wheelbarrow u use for sellin toothbrush.U know notin about writin ,Attention-repellant

One thing i have learnt in life is that.. Dont let nonsense stop you, criticism or not, am moving forward


Am in no competition with anyone, if you're not okay with the story, people are okay with it and that's all that matters

Expect an update soon guys.... Love you all...

Silver1996:
One thing i have learnt in life is that.. Dont let nonsense stop you, criticism or not, am moving forward


Am in no competition with anyone, if you're not okay with the story, people are okay with it and that's all that matters

Expect an update soon guys.... Love you all...

That's the spirit man... Am waiting patiently

All the wacky writters in the house,please MOVE FORWARD!,this is not drill,I repeat dis is not a drill!

Mavikolo2020:


That's the spirit man... Am waiting patiently

Asskissin Continua

Nostradamus:
start your own first,we will see how far you'd go with it...




Silver1996,don't mind this guy above oo.just prove him wrong by your consistence.

As for kess,i pray he doesn't land himself in hot pepper because of the unstable lady she took in.sonia always bring trouble to those around her with her folly,i won't be surprised if after sometime she get access to kess gun and decide to do another stupid thing.

Philip will be extra vigilant now since kess is already suspecting,he will try very hard to cover his track and become really slippery.

Pious team will have a great setback in their plans that will totally disrupt their plans and might even reveal their true intentions.

The ever cold and calculative carlous will become more ruthless and very suspicious now,so pious plans to install camera in carlous' house might likely not work.

Francis(octova) should really watch-out.if the police discovered that gun to be pious(ferico carter),carlous will hear about it and come for francis in palace(carlous will also break every interraction with pious and see him as a deadly enemy)

I see pious team winning but at a great price,sonia manage to escape peacefully without much casuality,kess loosing his life at the end,carlous will be captured by the police(pious won't be the one to subdue him,it will be the POLICE)..

that single move of sonia trying to kill carlous and later escaping arrest just trigger a chain of events that will alter the course of this story.

Hmm, i don't see the police arresting Carlos o, i see him dying, a very painful death

Silver1996:
One thing i have learnt in life is that.. Dont let nonsense stop you, criticism or not, am moving forward


Am in no competition with anyone, if you're not okay with the story, people are okay with it and that's all that matters

Expect an update soon guys.... Love you all...

You're the man silver..,i dey here dey wait

Silva u sef dy quick dy update

Silver don't mind that guy, he's just jealous

horluwatosin:
Silva u sef dy quick dy update

im nor dey quick update reach., at least he updates everyday unlike some writers that update twice in a week

egwolopretty:
Silver don't mind that guy, he's just jealous

I won't insult u becus one


1.U are frm Delta State

2.U are an Urhobo

3.U are not rilly pretty

4.Dere is too much insult on ur body already and I don't insult d challenged

U guys should stop quoting him,, silence is the best answer to a fool.


U will just be prolonging matter when answering or quoting him

Silver1996:
One thing i have learnt in life is that.. Dont let nonsense stop you, criticism or not, am moving forward


Am in no competition with anyone, if you're not okay with the story, people are okay with it and that's all that matters

Expect an update soon guys.... Love you all...

Better oil dey your head

skubido:
U guys should stop quoting him,, silence is the best answer to a fool.


U will just be prolonging matter when answering or quoting him

No wonda me and ur finance have been giving u silence

so someone is doing a real good job and one waltsdisney is blabing rubbish. silver1996 abeg dont mind that troll .

paulgabrielz:
so someone is doing a real good job and one waltsdisney is blabing rubbish. silver1996 abeg dont mind that troll .

Yes o and a certain PaulGayboil is yet to construct sense

skubido:
U guys should stop quoting him,, silence is the best answer to a fool.


U will just be prolonging matter when answering or quoting him

That's true man. Silence is d best answer to such comments.

Silver baba let's go on.

Wadewaltz:
Yes o and a certain PaulGayboil is yet to construct sense

simple

You too much silver