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Re: Five and Six by cassbeat(m): 9:22pm On Jun 29, 2020
Creeza:
well that's the problem sir. Capital crime gives the whole plot away. And its a bit too upfront. Nevertheless, I will explain at the end why I changed it.

BTW dm me on whatapp bro. Urgent
Done that bro.. I'll check back tomorrow
Re: Five and Six by EbonyQueen001(f): 10:25pm On Jul 01, 2020
Thanks for the mention.
Name change, I understand your reason for doing so.

Keep up the good work Creeza.

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Re: Five and Six by yungbanks(m): 7:14am On Jul 02, 2020
Nna creeza u don murder me oooo more pls abeg no hang leg let it flow we are here

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 3:46pm On Jul 10, 2020
Episode 23- She is dead

Kelly
To be honest, I am startled. Okay I am puzzled. Even more now as Seth gives the young man the cup in his hand. Inside a chimney, just about five metres from Seth's position, laid a steaming sauce. Fresh pepper and oil scent filled the air. I sniffed but yet still puzzled.

He ordered him to scoop the sauce from the pot.
They young man had no choice than to obey as three other terrorists raised their guns at him.

He focused his weapon at me, “ The codes.” He said “ Give them up.”

I replied “ What? I don't understand."

To start with, I thought; where the hell are we? Who built this place? Very sophisticated structures with colonial traits. What's the connection with the codes and hot oil sauce?
I immediately asked before he could say anything else: what are you going to do with those?

He paused for while. “Very well then” He says “ I will show you"

He ordered his men to decapacitate Salamatou's clothings. Her dress was ripped apart, legs grabbed and stretched wide open. Just then, cold breeze from the night grew on my skin and sent chills into my pores. The breeze stuck in an aggressive manner to my clothes as we arrived here. So I thought maybe Seth put up a chimney to warm the environment. Why have her clothes ripped out? except-.

Salamatou's arms were held backwards, private parts open to the eyes of everyone. Including her own little daughter- oh God!- in front of her little baby? You sons of the devil are beyond berseck. Can't belive this is happening.

Those meaty lips of flesh in between dark hairs, down her pelvic region.
Salamatou screamed and begged in tears.

“ Hold her!” Seth yelled out.

He raised a gun at the young man. So did Kendrick who held on to Salamatou with his other arm- very tight behind her.

“ You wanted in right? ” Seth asked the young man“ Away with it! Do it!”

The man hesistated.

“ Do it! Seth screamed at him

Wickedly, without flinching , he poured the hot peppered sauce into Salamatou's wide open private part.
She vibrated and squirting in pains as the stench of burning flesh filled the atmostphere.

Aisha cried out. “ Mama!”

Awestruck. I could feel my toes cringe as I watched Salamatou struggle to withstand the pain.
“ No-” I began in tears“ You can't possibly be this evil? No- no”

The men held on to her as she fidgeted one last time before the white of her eyes revealed. She is dead.
He killed her.

“Mama- ” Aisha screamed and rushed the young man. She hit him hard on the lap. “ Wicked. Wicked. You are wicked. You !! You killed my mama”
He stood numb and let go off the cup in his hand. It hit the floor.

“ seize her! ” The devil gave more orders.

The men left Salamatou's lifeless body and Kendrick immediately grabs Aisha.

The young man eventually threw up in disgust.
“ Hold the little girl. " Seth said “ Bring her!"
“ No! No! " I rushed in and cried “ Please I beg you. Please don't . I'll give you the pass code. I will. Just-- spare the girl. I beg you!”

He stared at me without saying a word. I ain't going to wait for him to say something else. I better take the lead
I rushed to the device and powered it on. Caiden requested for the password.

I quickly said. “I MISS MOM”
“Password correct.” Caiden replies .
Seth pushed me off the device with such strength id never seen before. I fell to floor and broke a finger in the process.
“ oouuuu-cchhh!"
I moan.
“ Let go off the little girl” He told his men. “ Keep an eye on Jerry.”

Oh! So the young man's name is Jerry. Jerry you are such a wicked soul. While I'm in severe pains and having crazy thoughts in my head, little Aisha rushed to help me up. Poor child.
I just have to be strong for her.“ Its alright. Shhhh! Don't worry. I got you baby. I got you- you are safe now!”

I noticed sympathy and regret in the eyes of the young man- Jerry. Underneath Aisha's whimper and shock I noticed his lips move in the dimly lit room. He uttered something like " I'm sorry. I really am"

The fire in the chimney illuminated the room.

Seth said“ Caiden. Retrieve at once the coordinates of the French Missiles. Drones on patrol preferably. ”

“ Excuse me sir!” Caiden replies“ Who are you? Unfamiliarity in your voice and choice of command. Where is Miss Kelly?
Seth Devin stares at me from above the table. Shock in his eyes.

“ Im- I'm here. Cay. I replied. " I moan in pain. “ I'm here. Just do what he says... Just do it-”

“ You dont sound fine" The AI replied. “ I - you are hurt. Strain in your voice.”

“ I'm fine, Caiden."

Seth picks up his gun from the table. Aims it at me.

“ Are you kidding me? He asked

“ What did I do?

“Make her stop asking me stupid questions and wasting my time."

“ I can't"

The story continues...

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 3:53pm On Jul 10, 2020
EbonyQueen001:
Thanks for the mention. Name change, I understand your reason for doing so.
Keep up the good work Creeza.
Thank you dear.
Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 3:54pm On Jul 10, 2020
yungbanks:
Nna creeza u don murder me oooo more pls abeg no hang leg let it flow we are here
I no hang leg bro... It is flowing already. thanks for reading
Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 3:57pm On Jul 10, 2020
Continued

Kelly
He said I can. Or he will shoot the little girl.
“To do that." I hastly replied“ It will take almost a week. To change commands and voice recognition."

“ What? A week?

“ Seriously?! ” He yells. Then stares at me. “ How do I get it to work?

“ Repeat the command."

He did.

Caiden replies “ Updating in progress..... Drones located. 36°, 48' North of the Atlantic Ocean... System hack in progress... Please stand by"

Seth asked how long this would take?

“ I cant tell. A while"

“ Damn!”
*****

Narrator

That same cold Tuesday Night. Gerrard and his men surreptitiously arrived a safe spot about 100 meters away from the camp. They hid behind thick bushes and enjoyed the camouflage of the night.
They advanced towards the camp of the terrorists.
His night vision cam became very useful and the gps locator which the tech guy- Mr Itoro Abasi- gave him was still blinking. It was obvious that the boy or Seth was around these parameters.

He squatted. Told his men to halt. He spot two guard on patrol. They walked above a bamboo raft supported by large mahogany woods. The camp had a single entrance with high steeped bamboo fences all around.
He spotted a bent chimney to the right. It's walls were made of brick. Smoke escaped the nozzles towards the East wind. He checked his GPS locator once more- seems like the red blinking dot was in the East direction- hopefully. That is their goal. The chimney.

“ Proceed with caution.” He whispered into his intercom.
****

ITORO

From the big screen in the Emergency Room 001 we watched the operation. Gerrard Finder's night vision Camera was our eyes in the darkness. I felt cold shivers travel up my spine. I took a good look at everyone's face and contenances. The president was no doubt tensed up, she ran her index fingers over each other consistently as she watched the screens. Mr Green kept adjusting his blue tie. Samantha Walsh did not seize to tap a pen against her lower lip. Many others had different reactions.

My gaze finally rested on Ife. She perched like a bird at the entrance to the large office. Did not speak a word.
After two minutes I was forced to repeat the process. Everyone still doing the same thing in anticipation. Tension made my toes cringe in my shoes. I dropped my files, and told one of the tech guys to take over and monitor the schematics on the map.

For a moment, I had a gut feeling telling me to turn backwards. I did. And spotted Ife leaving the room. From her movements I could assertain her to be trailing someone.
I followed them. This led me into the much isolated parts of the building- the holding areas for suspects on detention. She was trailing Rumeh Kadiri. I noticed him installing bombs at different corners along his path.

Rumeh came upon holding room 004. Thats where Aremu Johnson is.
I watched from a distance as Rumeh sneaked upon the guards and killed them silently.

.....
Re: Five and Six by enirock(m): 2:50am On Jul 11, 2020
This just keeps getting interesting. But Seth is heartless o. I hope Kadiri would not alert his co-conspirators ? And him placing bombs in strategic areas means he really must believe in the plan or he is blinded by ideology, or his loved one is in Seth's custody or his love for money but whichever it is, I hope he is foiled by Itoro before Ife gets herself killed.

Thanks boss for the updates

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 2:41pm On Jul 11, 2020
enirock:
This just keeps getting interesting. But Seth is heartless o. I hope Kadiri would not alert his co-conspirators ? And him placing bombs in strategic areas means he really must believe in the plan or he is blinded by ideology, or his loved one is in Seth's custody or his love for money but whichever it is, I hope he is foiled by Itoro before Ife gets herself killed.

Thanks boss for the updates
I couldnt have summarized the updates as good as you did. Wow! Made me re-visit and read the update again. Thank you for the apt and conscise comment.
Re: Five and Six by Blackween(f): 5:01pm On Jul 11, 2020
This got me on my toes, I hope jerry getting into the camp is part of the plan though

I love the crimes, well done sir

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 9:08pm On Jul 11, 2020
Blackween:
This got me on my toes, I hope jerry getting into the camp is part of the plan though

I love the crimes, well done sir
Thank you for the concern. We crime writers love you too.
Yeah I hope so , quite a lot has happened so far.
Re: Five and Six by cassbeat(m): 10:58pm On Jul 11, 2020
What an update bro

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 3:41pm On Jul 12, 2020
cassbeat:
What an update bro
glad you liked it. smiley

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Re: Five and Six by enirock(m): 10:19pm On Jul 13, 2020
Creeza:
I couldnt have summarized the updates as good as you did. Wow! Made me re-visit and read the update again. Thank you for the apt and conscise comment.

Why you dey pull my legs na? Thanks all the same

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 8:26pm On Jul 18, 2020
Hello guys! it's Jay here a.k.a Creeza as you all know me on Nairaland. I went for a bit of detour a while and I beg you to have mercy. Its an awkward business trip that - well didn't go as planned. But thats by the way. I just wanted to make you realise that I know you all have your own daily ups and downs and still make out time to read my updates. I'm glateful. And in that light I'd like to to know we are soon arriving the end of this beautiful story- Not there yet but very close.

PS. you are my favorite reader. I admire you alot. smiley
Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 8:29pm On Jul 18, 2020
Episode 24- " Uh-Uh!"
Itoro

“ I did not tell them anything. I swear” Aj's voice sipped through the air.
“ Yes I know. I wont tell this too. I promise”
He shot him dead. The silenced gun gave a "pippp...pippp" sound.
Just then.

Rumeh turns.

“ Dodge" I whispered as though Ife could hear me. She could not. But she ducked down anyways. She had enterd the observatory room and I was at the door.
She picks a gun which Rumeh had left on the table and entered into the holding cell. Rumeh hadnt noticed her advancing and stalking like a shewolf.

I touched my sheath. I left my gun back at the emergency room.
Fuvk.
I picked another from the floor- belonging to one of the dead guards.

“ Drop it” She said to Rumeh.
I noticed he had a detonator with him. It already began countdown.

“Or what? ” He replies “This whole building is coming down" He continued “ And there is nothing you can do about it?

“ The gun and the detonator" she says“ drop them! Now!”

“ You cant save everyone. The president's going to die," He continued “ You are alone. What can you- a woman- possible do?

“ No. She aint!” I said as I entered the holding cell. “ She got me. Drop your fuvking weapon”.

****
Narrator
Gerrard Finder climped one of the shafts and sneaks upon a patrol guard. He cracked his neck. He gives his men signals as the other guard was quietly stabbed by his Nigerian surbodinate.

“ Move into the position. Stealth mode. Only engage with fire when spotted by enemy troops”
“ Copy that captain!” Came the replies.

He placed a timed C4 explosive at the base of ladder when he climbed down.

He crouched after spoting a terrorist taking a leak in the dike. From behind he sneaked upon and stabbed the man deep into his heart. Pulls out the dagger and spits upon his corpse.

“Pisx in hell motherfuvker!”

He spoke into his intercom quietly. “ Surround the camp... Team B on me. ”

***
Itoro

“All these while I wondered who was behind that camera footage at the American embassy. It was you after all.

You threatened Stella. Gave her scripted speech, afterwards force her to take a walk out because you had the whole place miraculously wired to a bomb.”

Rumeh scoffs. “ Okay buddy. You got me there. And now what?

“Now you will be arrested. Hands up!”
He had tossed his weapon and the denotor to the ground.
I stretched an handcuff to Ife while monitoring Rumeh.

“ Cuff him!”

He made a quick move. Picks up his gun.
I fired a shot. My gun clicked. It was Jammed. No bullets.

“ Bleep me!”

I smile sheepishly. I must have exposed my set of thirty-twos’.

“ Oh! I forgot. ” I said gesticulating the metal in my hand “ There is a part in the users manual that says : Won't fire against friends and family”.
“ Really? ” He said“ guess it doesn't apply to this one too"

A punch clouded my grin.

Ife fired. Her gun jammed too.

“ I took the bullets out” Rumeh said as he made his way toward her “ Never under-estimate your enemy"

From the floor, I felt my head spin. A sharp pain erupted from inside my nostrils. When I viewed my palms, blood covered the strokes on them.
“ Nighty night princess”

I raised my eyes to behold Rumeh knock the daylight out of Ife.

“ Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! Damn niggar. That's a lady”

He paces toward me.

“Uh-uh!”

I picked up everything and anything from paper, lampstand, pen to trashcan, tossed them at him. He dodged every attack. Rushed suddenly towards me. I slid under the table where AJ's lifeless head lay. Rumeh throws punches. Tried to grab me. Hell nah bro. You won't lay your fingers on me. Finally, I used AJ to wield a blow.

“ Oh Man!” Rumeh says “ Have some respect for the dead!”
“ He doesn't mind.” I stare at the corpse“ Do you?
“ Lord! Who is this guy? Rumeh says and the next thing that followed had me wondering. My feet left the floors as he yanked me into the air.
“ I don't have wings” I said hoping he'd drop a brother down.

“ Don't worry. You will land safely”
He pulls me up from behind the table and I found myself taking a flight across the room. . .


The story continues....

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 8:30pm On Jul 18, 2020
enirock:

Why you dey pull my legs na? Thanks all the same
My pleasure. smiley
Re: Five and Six by enirock(m): 4:29pm On Jul 19, 2020
'won't fire against friends and family ' - na finger activated abi watin?
SO Rumeh outsmarted both Itoro and Ife?
Thanks for the update

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Re: Five and Six by cassbeat(m): 6:34pm On Jul 19, 2020
Can't help but have some few laughs over the last episode....

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Re: Five and Six by Odoogu(m): 1:37pm On Jul 21, 2020
Meeehn.. loved the whole plot and story telling grin ... please come and continue.

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 3:26pm On Jul 21, 2020
enirock:
'won't fire against friends and family ' - na finger activated abi watin?

SO Rumeh outsmarted both Itoro and Ife?

Thanks for the update
grin Na finger activated o ... Rumeh is not that smart he only learned from experience. take a trip down memory lane : “ I took the bullets out of the gun because I know something like this would happen....all that muscle and no brains” Matthews words .... “ Lesson learnt sir..”


You are welcome. abeg don't mind me: Seun and mods banned me for two days.. I don't even know what I did wrong.
Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 3:26pm On Jul 21, 2020
cassbeat:
Can't help but have some few laughs over the last episode....
grin
Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 3:31pm On Jul 21, 2020
Odoogu:
Meeehn.. loved the whole plot and story telling grin
... please come and continue.
Thank you sir. grin We love you too.

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Re: Five and Six by silverlinen(m): 11:14pm On Jul 21, 2020
Have been away for too long, now i'm back. Creeza i want Seths manhood to be boiled with hot water while it's erected and on his waist. Continue man...daalu. grin grin

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Re: Five and Six by enirock(m): 1:16am On Jul 22, 2020
Creeza:
grin Na finger activated o ... Rumeh is not that smart he only learned from experience. take a trip down memory lane : “ I took the bullets out of the gun because I know something like this would happen....all that muscle and no brains” Matthews words .... “ Lesson learnt sir..”


You are welcome. abeg don't mind me: Seun and mods banned me for two days.. I don't even know what I did wrong.

Welcome back. *Runs back to look through past episodes.

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Re: Five and Six by enirock(m): 1:17am On Jul 22, 2020
silverlinen:
Have been away for too long, now i'm back. Creeza i want Seths manhood to be boiled with hot water while it's erected and on his waist. Continue man...daalu. grin grin
Senior man, you mean o.
Re: Five and Six by silverlinen(m): 9:11am On Jul 22, 2020
Oga mi Creeza...I no mean oo, i just want him to feel the same pain he inflicts on other.

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Re: Five and Six by Creeza(m): 10:28pm On Jul 22, 2020
silverlinen grin Make i give you one chapter to write na so you can vent your anger on Seth. Lol. how you see am na? E make sense abi?

enirock thanks bro. smiley
Re: Five and Six by cassbeat(m): 7:48am On Jul 23, 2020
Hello guys Creeza wasn't able to serve us hot hot cos he was banned by the antispam bot.... Let's please hold for a while.. Thanks...

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