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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sensitivity1254: 11:42am On Nov 06
This story is a very big lesson to everyone in a relationship, marriage or intending to go into a relationship.

Don't suffocate your partner. Learn to trust your partner.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 12:35pm On Nov 06
Sensitivity1254:
This story is a very big lesson to everyone in a relationship, marriage or intending to go into a relationship.

Don't suffocate your partner. Learn to trust your partner.
Thanks for this great advice. God bless you.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Missyajoke: 3:00pm On Nov 06
I hope this moyin won't plan something bad for oreoluwa. My advice to both guys and the madam of the house is that if you no longer love a person its better you talk early before it becomes problem ohh. As a lady or guy once you see your guy or girl is getting closer with someone and its becoming deep I'll advise you to speak with your guy or lady and if she doesn't bulge leave the relationship, I repeat leave the relationship. You will meet someone else that will appreciate you don't try to force love where their isn't. If I were moyin I would have left a long time ago because the love full house has for her is disappearing. My humble opinion

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by kimoyo: 3:26pm On Nov 06
Moyin please calm down. This hot body won't do you any good

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sheddee(m): 3:30pm On Nov 06
Am a guy,but personal I won't treat a lady the way full house is treating moyin.
She should leave
She deserve better

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sensitivity1254: 4:31pm On Nov 06
Wait until your girl or finance behaves the way Moyin did before you can know if you will follow Adekunle's footsteps.

It's easy to say what you will do and won't do until you find yourself in the same exact situation the other person is.

If you Moyin can behave the way she does now, what happens when she becomes Mrs Fullhouse?? She will go farther than she is doing now.

People in the Church can't come close to your husband. Colleagues can't come close to your husband. If they do, it means that he is sleeping with all of them.

Personally, I can't be with someone that I don't and can't trust.

Man hasn't even paid your dowry, taken you to the Altar, and you are forming monitoring spirit and what not.



quote author=Sheddee post=95753566]Am a guy,but personal I won't treat a lady the way full house is treating moyin.
She should leave
She deserve better[/quote]

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sensitivity1254: 4:31pm On Nov 06
Wait until your girl or finance behaves the way Moyin did before you can know if you will follow Adekunle's footsteps.

It's easy to say what you will do and won't do until you find yourself in the same exact situation the other person is.

If you Moyin can behave the way she does now, what happens when she becomes Mrs Fullhouse?? She will go farther than she is doing now.

People in the Church can't come close to your husband. Colleagues can't come close to your husband. If they do, it means that he is sleeping with all of them.

Personally, I can't be with someone that I don't and can't trust.

Man hasn't even paid your dowry, taken you to the Altar, and you are forming monitoring spirit and what not.



Sheddee:
Am a guy,but personal I won't treat a lady the way full house is treating moyin.
She should leave
She deserve better

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Missyajoke: 4:44pm On Nov 06
Sensitivity1254:
Wait until your girl or finance behaves the way Moyin did before you can know if you will follow Adekunle's footsteps.

It's easy to say what you will do and won't do until you find yourself in the same exact situation the other person is.

If you Moyin can behave the way she does now, what happens when she becomes Mrs Fullhouse?? She will go farther than she is doing now.

People in the Church can't come close to your husband. Colleagues can't come close to your husband. If they do, it means that he is sleeping with all of them.


Personally, I can't be with someone that I don't and can't trust.

Man hasn't even paid your dowry, taken you to the Altar, and you are forming monitoring spirit and what not.




You're right she will soon show her true colour one more time

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by cyndy1000(f): 5:03pm On Nov 06
Fullhouse should just tell Moyin its over or Moyin should just leave the relationship.
Because, the Love, trust and communication is no longer there at all.
The earlier the better.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Gvnl(f): 6:33pm On Nov 06
God bless you brother.

He should end things with her already if he isn't sure he wants to be with her or not.

Sheddee:
Am a guy,but personal I won't treat a lady the way full house is treating moyin.
She should leave
She deserve better

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by emmytemmy: 6:38pm On Nov 06
Dis dere r/ship Don end a long time.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Ann2012(f): 6:47pm On Nov 06
Thanks for the update ma’am

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sheddee(m): 7:57pm On Nov 06
Sensitivity1254:
Wait until your girl or finance behaves the way Moyin did before you can know if you will follow Adekunle's footsteps.

It's easy to say what you will do and won't do until you find yourself in the same exact situation the other person is.

If you Moyin can behave the way she does now, what happens when she becomes Mrs Fullhouse?? She will go farther than she is doing now.

People in the Church can't come close to your husband. Colleagues can't come close to your husband. If they do, it means that he is sleeping with all of them.

Personally, I can't be with someone that I don't and can't trust.

Man hasn't even paid your dowry, taken you to the Altar, and you are forming monitoring spirit and what not.


Won't it be better if he told her to go?
She's pretending, we all know that,
Tell her to go
How difficult can that be?




Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Pricelessangel0(f): 7:58pm On Nov 06
I may not really have an idea of the foundation of their relationship and how it all started. But if i were moyin, would have ended the relationship or taken a brake because its glaring that its one sided and seem moyin is getting desperate and ready to endure a little more maybe because of the time and effort invested.
Ride on ma'am! We dey gbadun you

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Melancholy(m): 9:48pm On Nov 06
rachealfst:
Wrong Number! You've missed a lot o. So you've not read:
Anike
Broken Hedge
Pastorzoned
Tolerated

You really have a lot of catching up to do. lol.
BTW, welcome on board.
I read broken hedges na. Thank

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sensitivity1254: 7:12am On Nov 07
Maybe he still loves her. He still want things to work out.

Maybe he just want her to learn how to trust him.

But remember he once broke off the relationship but people had to beg him to steady the course.


[quote author=Sheddee post=95761407][/quote]

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by mhizv(f): 7:25am On Nov 07
They are yet to realise this,but they are holding on to nothing! And beginning to think fullhouse agreed to take her back out of pressure or pity.

Moyin can save her self the stress,by staying away from full house and truly work on herself! Learn from her mistakes.
And if he he wants her back he'd go look for her!

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 9:20am On Nov 07
mhizv:
They are yet to realise this,but they are holding on to nothing! And beginning to think fullhouse agreed to take her back out of pressure or pity.

Moyin can save her self the stress,by staying away from full house and truly work on herself! Learn from her mistakes.
And if he he wants her back he'd go look for her!


Hmm.....I love this.
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 9:21am On Nov 07
Chapter 14B
Ireoluwa on the other hand was oblivious of all this. Although she noticed that after Fullhouse left the kitchen, Moyin stopped talking to her. Ireoluwa bent to pack another souvenir but Fullhouse stopped her.
“Your things are in the guest room. Go shower first and come out for dinner when you are through” He said and she obeyed.

Fullhouse stood up and went into the kitchen and to his utmost surprise, Moyin didn’t prepare dinner. He went straight to his room. He entered and realized she was in the shower.
“Moyin!” He called out. She stepped out of the bathroom cladded in Fullhouse’s towel that was wrapped around her chest.
“What are you even doing here? I specifically told you to use the other room. We are not married for Christ sake!”
He said and the only response he got from Moyin was a long…..hiss after she had ran her eyes all over his body in a condescending manner. Fullhouse ignored her actions; he cared less about her attitude towards him at that very moment.
“Moyin, we have a visitor and you left her all alone in the sitting room and you came over here to have your bath! I had to do what you were supposed to do. Is that how to treat people?”
“Oh! She’s now a guest here, right. I thought you said she’s your little sister so I thought she should be able to find her away around here. More so this is not her first time of coming. Reason why I left her to herself” She said.
“Moyin! Did you hear yourself? This is her first time of sleeping over and you expect her to find her way around!”
“Huh! How am I supposed to know that your sister is spending the night for the first time” She said raising her voice.
“Moyin will you stop raising your voice. She can hear us, I hope you know that”
“And you think I care. At least you’ve slept in her house before; you even spent three days with her in school”
“What has that got to do with this? Oh! I get it; you’ve once told me you are only tolerating her. Now you just proved it”
“You know what, take her back to wherever you pick her from cos she’s not sleeping in this house” She said and Fullhouse laughed.
“If you think you can dish out orders in my house just because you are wearing my engagement ring then you must be joking. She’s passing the night here and if you are not comfortable with that, then use the front door!”
“So, it’s her over me?”
“That depends. On this issue, it’s a yes”
“Fine!”
“Hold on, you didn’t make dinner. Why?”
“I’m not hungry”
“Ah! Moyin! You didn’t make dinner because you are not hungry! And we have a visitor in the house! You know what, its fine. I hope you know you don’t need all this” He said and walked out. Then he saw Ireoluwa who was heading towards the front door.
“Hold it right there! Where do you think you are going at this time of the night” He questioned.
“I heard everything” Ireoluwa said.
“So! Are you thinking at all, you want to endanger your life because someone said something to you?”
“She wants me to leave, what do you expect me to do, of course it’s her fiancé’s house and she has a say”
“This is my house and I singlehandedly brought you here”
“I never knew she hated me this much. And she pretended to like me all along” She said and busted into tears. She had never felt so horrible like the way she felt that night.
He walked up to her and held her. “I’m truly sorry; you shouldn’t have heard all that”
“Fullhouse I can’t stay. I need to leave”
“You are staying, just try and calm down. I’m really sorry for putting you through all this” He pleaded with her.
He led her back to the guest room and went back to the kitchen to cook her noodles. It was already past 11pm. He served the noodles and picked one of the fried chicken and placed it on it. He put it in a tray and put a bottle chilled drink and water. He took it to the guest room and pleaded with Ireoluwa to eat but she refused.
“Ireoluwa, for my sake please eat the food. I will feel bad if you go to sleep with an empty stomach. Imagine, I came over to your house to pick you up myself, that should tell you that I never intended to make you suffer at my place. Baby girl eat, please……”
“I’m not eating. I’m not hungry”
“What do you want your parents to think of me if they find out that you slept without food?”
“Don’t worry, I won’t say a word to them and for the record, you didn’t mistreat me. It’s just that I found out late that I’ve over stepped my boundaries”
“Don’t talk like that Ireoluwa. I promise I’ll make it up to you”
“How? She’s your fiancée. For how long will you take my side? She doesn’t like me. She doesn’t want me near you” She stated the facts.
“You don’t have any business with her. All I want from you now is to eat” He said and continued pleading but still she didn’t eat, even the food before her was already getting cold.
The wall clock in the room buzzed. He looked up and checked the time; it was 12:00am.
“Its 12:00am Ireoluwa, the best birthday gift you can give me is to eat this food” He requested.
“Happy birthday big brother, long life and prosperity, I wish you all the great things life can offer. She said and hugged him on the bed where they both sat.
He didn’t say a word. “Fullhouse I’m sorry. I can’t eat this food”
He sighed, carried the tray and left. He dropped it in the kitchen and went to his room. He was surprised to still meet Moyin in his room after telling her to make use of another room.
“Happy birthday sweetheart” Moyin said.
“What is happy about the birthday when you cannot even give me happiness on a day like this” He snapped at her.
“Adekunle….” She wanted to come closer.
“Stay away from me!” He warned. He picked a pillow and a cover cloth and left the room for the sitting room.
On Sunday morning, Fullhouse woke up and started preparing for church, same with Ireoluwa. Moyin said she still has a lot to do, so she stayed back. When the two were set, they left the house in Fullhouse's car.
“Good morning” Ireoluwa greeted him calmly. They haven’t said a word to each other that morning.
“Good morning” He replied.
“I’m sorry about last night” She apologized.
“I’m sorry too” He said with his face focused on the road.
Ireoluwa greeted Moyin that morning before they left the house but she didn’t reply her. Fullhouse too heard clearly when Ireoluwa greeted her and she didn’t respond. He couldn’t believe that the woman she planned to marry would be that malicious.
They got to church and parked neatly in the parking space. They arrived early, they alighted from the car. Fullhouse took the lead and Ireoluwa tagged along that was her first time in his church.
Instead of entering into the auditorium, Fullhouse took another route that led to the church cafeteria. She didn’t say anything, she just followed him in.
He pulled out a chair for her to sit and she sat down quietly. He left the table and came back with two plate of ofada rice with assorted meat, two soft drinks and two bottled water. He made that choice because they’ll still take either jollof rice or fried rice at his birthday party and more so Ireoluwa love ofada rice. Fullhouse sat with her and they sat quietly without saying a word to each other. He was the first to finish his food and he waited for her using that opportunity to go through his phone. Birthday wishes were already flooding in. His parents had called as early as 5:00am to pray for him that morning, despite that he still saw their message among the messages.
They left the cafeteria when she was through. She thanked him and they went into the auditorium.
During offering time, he dropped his normal offering and his birthday ‘Thanksgiving offering’ as well in gratitude to God who counted him among the living.
After service, they returned home. Ireoluwa stayed quietly in the guest room. She would have returned home that morning but it’s going to look fishy and she doesn’t want her parents to find out, reason why she stay behind in that cold atmosphere.
Fullhouse went to the guest room later in the afternoon to check on Ireoluwa. He asked if she needs anything but she said she was okay. He was about to leave but Ireoluwa told him to hold on.
“Fullhouse, today is your birthday and sadness is written all over your face, if this is about last night, I think you should let it go. I mean I apologized, I even ate the food you got me at the cafeteria, so you would know I’m not holding any grudges against you”
“You should have eaten the dinner I served you last night if really you want me happy” He said to her and left the room. Ireoluwa still wanted to talk but what she heard was the sound of the door.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Gracie18(f): 11:30am On Nov 07
Moyin has crossed the line again..I see a real break up this time..thanks for the update ma'am.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sensitivity1254: 11:33am On Nov 07
Out of pity and pressure...


mhizv:
They are yet to realise this,but they are holding on to nothing! And beginning to think fullhouse agreed to take her back out of pressure or pity.

Moyin can save her self the stress,by staying away from full house and truly work on herself! Learn from her mistakes.
And if he he wants her back he'd go look for her!


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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Missyajoke: 11:35am On Nov 07
Aunty rachelfast this story is sweet can't you post two updates per day.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Missyajoke: 11:35am On Nov 07
Aunty rachelfast this story is sweet can't you post two updates per day. Don't worry we promise to buy the books on okadabooks.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sensitivity1254: 11:41am On Nov 07
Proverbs 14:1 comes to mind here.

Moyin is tearing down her relationship and she don't know it yet...

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by KAssybabe(f): 12:03pm On Nov 07
This is really underrated but who is the underrated.
Keep it coming Aunty Rachel kiss

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Advantaged: 1:49pm On Nov 07
Both Adekunle and Moyin need a big knock each from me.


Insecure and over possessive lady

Man isn't even treating the lady right. Doesn't even carry the lady along in his plans where it matters.
If he can give Moyin the kind of attention he gives his second sister, that would be really good. But he claims he can't cos she has put him off with her over possessiveness. Reason why they need to release each other from this entanglement, especially since none is ready to change

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 2:08pm On Nov 07
Advantaged:
Both Adekunle and Moyin need a big knock each from me.


Insecure and over possessive lady

Man isn't even treating the lady right. Doesn't even carry the lady along in his plans where it matters.
If he can give Moyin the kind of attention he gives his second sister, that would be really good. But he claims he can't cos she has put him off with her over possessiveness. Reason why they need to release each other from this entanglement, especially since none is ready to change
Hmm.... I like this perspective
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by bimberry1307(f): 3:01pm On Nov 07
Oh! Moyin have bleeped up. And I was beginning to reason with her fa. I think fullhouse had lost interest in her right from the day she slapped his colleague. He only accepted her back out of pressure.
Moyin on the other hand is so full of jealousy and she's not accommodating at all. There union can't work. The earlier they go their separate ways, the better for them all.
BTW, aunty Toyin, you're doing well. Really. But pleaseeeeeeee! Can you make it two updates per day? I'm just whispering o

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by crossfm: 6:13pm On Nov 07
mhizv:
They are yet to realise this,but they are holding on to nothing! And beginning to think fullhouse agreed to take her back out of pressure or pity.

Moyin can save her self the stress,by staying away from full house and truly work on herself! Learn from her mistakes.
And if he he wants her back he'd go look for her!

Your comment caught my attention.
You are the only lady that spoke my mind.

She should work on herself first. The first solution to any problem is to accept you have a problem. Then you start working on the problem.






Your comment caught my attention.
You are the only lady that spoke my mind.

She should work on herself first. The first solution to any problem is to accept you have a problem. Then you start working on the problem.

Moyin is on self denier.She don't see anything wrong with her behavior, instead she is drawing comparison between Gbotimi's wife and herself.
She forgot that full house and Gbotimi are not the same.

As for the guys and ladies saying they don't see anything wrong with her behavior,its well.Just pray you don't find yourself in such situation.

We often hear how jealous lover kill their spouse,this is how it starts. Never you ignore important details in a relationship. If not it will come back to torment you later.

The both of them need serious heart to heart discussion, if possible go for counseling.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 6:51pm On Nov 07
crossfm:


Your comment caught my attention.
You are the only lady that spoke my mind.

She should work on herself first. The first solution to any problem is to accept you have a problem. Then you start working on the problem.

Moyin is on self denier.She don't see anything wrong with her behavior, instead she is drawing comparison between Gbotimi's wife and herself.
She forgot that full house and Gbotimi are not the same.

As for the guys and ladies saying they don't see anything wrong with her behavior,its well.Just pray you don't find yourself in such situation.

We often hear how jealous lover kill their spouse,this is how it starts. Never you ignore important details in a relationship. If not it will come back to torment you later.

The both of them need serious heart to heart discussion, if possible go for counseling.

I love this..."Never you ignore important details in a relationship. If not it will come back to torment you later."

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by damis28crown(f): 6:53pm On Nov 07
crossfm:


Your comment caught my attention.
You are the only lady that spoke my mind.

She should work on herself first. The first solution to any problem is to accept you have a problem. Then you start working on the problem.

Moyin is on self denier.She don't see anything wrong with her behavior, instead she is drawing comparison between Gbotimi's wife and herself.
She forgot that full house and Gbotimi are not the same.

As for the guys and ladies saying they don't see anything wrong with her behavior,its well.Just pray you don't find yourself in such situation.

We often hear how jealous lover kill their spouse,this is how it starts. Never you ignore important details in a relationship. If not it will come back to torment you later.

The both of them need serious heart to heart discussion, if possible go for counseling.

he dated her for more than 4years,even proposed to her and he didnt know she is the jealous type
were have u heard such
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by bimberry1307(f): 7:23pm On Nov 07
damis28crown:
he dated her for more than 4years,even proposed to her and he didnt know she is the jealous type
were have u heard such



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