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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Missyajoke: 7:37pm On Nov 07
My view is that moyin is pretending to get the ring and once she gets it Full house is permanently Hooked with her. See ehhn what full house did is right.
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by crossfm: 8:00pm On Nov 07
damis28crown:
he dated her for more than 4years,even proposed to her and he didnt know she is the jealous type
were have u heard such



You just said dated and proposed, not married.

Relationship is not marriage, this is the mistake most people make and the end product in most cases is broken homes.

They need to correct all this things before they walk down the ailse or it will never get better.Marriage is a lifetime contract and as such we deserve at list happiness.

As for dating for years which you made mention of its normal to date before marriage. If you can recall the relationship was suppose to be platonic until they get married. But Moyin compelled him that sex will strengthen their Union.

I don't blame Moyin hundred percent for the sex stuff,because full house should have stood his ground but its obvious he also enjoyed the act.
My point is that she can't say he used her and dumped her like in most cases where the girl will say no sex,but the guy will say but you will be my wife in future so why wait.

Mind you am not saying this because I'm a guy,but just being objective. If the table turns, I can never advice any lady to marry a violent man.Because such has led so many to their grave.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by oluwatosin070: 8:24pm On Nov 07
I would not advice Fullhouse to marry moyin..

Jealousy is very bad in a relationship especially when your partner is a people's choice...

Fullhouse, use your brain and do the needful....

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sensitivity1254: 9:33pm On Nov 07
Thank you for this.

A broken courtship or relationship is better than a broken marriage.


crossfm:
You just said dated and proposed, not married.

Relationship is not marriage, this is the mistake most people make and the end product in most cases is broken homes.

They need to correct all this things before they walk down the ailse or it will never get better.Marriage is a lifetime contract and as such we deserve at list happiness.

As for dating for years which you made mention of its normal to date before marriage. If you can recall the relationship was suppose to be platonic until they get married. But Moyin compelled him that sex will strengthen their Union.

I don't blame Moyin hundred percent for the sex stuff,because full house should have stood his ground but its obvious he also enjoyed the act.
My point is that she can't say he used her and dumped her like in most cases where the girl will say no sex,but the guy will say but you will be my wife in future so why wait.

Mind you am not saying this because am I guy,but just being objective. If the table turns, I can never advice any lady to marry a violent man.Because such has led so many to their grave.
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Sensitivity1254: 9:36pm On Nov 07
Don't marry someone that don't trust you. He/she may claim to have loved you. It's not love but lust and desperation. You cannot love someone you don't trust.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by enirock(m): 9:55am On Nov 09
May God not allow you meet someone who has trust issues(insecure), jealous,proud,nagging,without empathy or sympathy(them nor go just put fire on your head,but it will rub everybody God has placed in your path). A change predicated on the actions of another person is simply deception. Moyin cares solely for the title 'mrs fullhouse' and she would assume any and all 'forms'(deception) to achieve her goal. Where she should see a friend and ally, she sees a rival and even when she gets the title, she would still continue rivalry(family members). Flee from people who have these traits been displayed by Moyin, because they suck life's joy from you and leave you sad and broken. Thank God Adekunle has those who bring him joy(classified as family). Flee from the likes of Moyin(you nor go understand).

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by KingAbdulazeez: 10:20am On Nov 09
Fullhouse's Love For Moyin Crumbled When The Later Slapped The Former's Colleague.
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Advantaged: 11:56am On Nov 09
bimberry1307:

Ma'am, sometimes girls pretends to be what they are not just to get what they want. Their real color surface after.

If I read the story well, I think the writer did mention at the beginning or so that both Adekunle and his friend had a common problem with their ladies- their over possessiveness.
It didn't just begin.

One of the guys didn't think that was enough to end the relationship, so he went ahead and married the lady. The other is so indecisive cos that moyin is not ready to change and he knows it.
So why is he acting like she only became like that recently. He should know what to do, that is if he has sense.

He is wasting his time and her time at the same time

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Kaycee9242(m): 12:07pm On Nov 09
Nice one Rachael u are doing great work here
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by emmytemmy: 1:08pm On Nov 09
Aunty Rachel, update oooo
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 4:33pm On Nov 09
UNDERRATED
Written by Toyin Taiwo

Chapter 14C
He got back to his bedroom and met Moyin who was on her knees apologizing. She knew the guest will soon be coming in and the look on Fullhouse face is nothing close to that of a celebrant.
“What do you want me to do to make you happy? Please say it and I’ll do it” Moyin said.
“You don’t need to worry about my mood. I’m a good actor” He said and left the room.
Some close friends arrived earlier than the party time. Moyin’s friend too who assisted her in cooking came early.
True to his words Fullhouse acted so perfectly that no one will notice how sad he was on the inside, he was only masking his unhappiness. Only Moyin and Ireoluwa knew what’s beneath his smiles.
Gbotemi and his wife came a little bit late; they also had an important function at his in-laws place. Every invited guest turned up and at the end, the party turned out great. After the party, Ireoluwa went back home with her parents.
Moyin had downloaded everything that happened the previous night to Darasimi, Gbotemi's wife in the course of the party. After hearing her side of the story she advised her to apologize to Fullhouse. Moyin saw Darasimi off when she was ready to leave she needed to go home and attend to her baby. Gbotemi still waited behind to help with cleaning and some other things.
Later that night after the party, Moyin knew she had ruined whatever happiness Fullhouse should get on his birthday. She knew that all those smiles for the camera and guests was feigned. She could see the bitterness in his eyes all through the party.
The only one left in the house with them was Gbotemi. They just finished cleaning up. Fullhouse sat on the couch with his friend and Moyin walked pass to pick something from the couch next to his. Gbotemi excused himself; he wanted to use the bathroom.
“Moyin, when are you leaving?” Fullhouse asked harshly. Gbotemi was already out of sight.
“Tomorrow morning” She replied softly.
“No need to stay till tomorrow, you can leave tonight. Gbotemi and I will handle the rest” He said.
“I know you two can fix things but I’m staying back because we need to talk” She said.
“You and I have nothing to talk about. So, just leave”
“Hold on guys! What exactly is going on here?” Gbotemi who walked in on them asked.
“Gbotemi please help me beg him, I know have wronged him but I’m truly sorry” Moyin said.
“I noticed his mood during the party. I know he was smiling and all but I know it’s not from the heart, he’s my friend and so I know something was wrong. It’s just that I decided to ask him later”
“I know you would have figured it out, just help me beg him”
“Moyin what did you do this time?” Gbotemi asked.
“I'll explain” She said.
“Don’t explain anything, just leave and I mean, now!” Fullhouse said sternly.
She eyed him, hissed and walked away from him without saying a word. She went into the room where she kept her things, carried them and left.
“What happened again this time? Gbotemi asked and Fullhouse narrated all that transpired between the three of them to him.
“So…..the two ladies that are in your life right now are the one who ruined your day” Gbotemi concluded.
“You need to see how I pleaded with Ireoluwa till midnight and still she told me to my face that she won’t eat the food. A girl I had made so many sacrifices for and still she couldn’t do that one thing for me!”
“Fullhouse…..Ireoluwa is still very young she only acted irrationally”
“She even left without saying a word to me knowing fully well that she was instrumental to all this” He poured out.
“I’ll call her and talk to her” Gbotemi said.
“No need for that, at least, I brought are here to be ridiculed by my fianceé. It’s understandable and I think we are now even” He shrugged.
Gbotemi sighed. “And I use to think Moyin was cool with Ireoluwa”
“Obviously she’s not. And that has been my fear all along. Moyin is such a great actor; she only pretended to like her whereas she detested her”
“Well, what I will say is that you are the man here, just find a way to mend up things with them or what do you plan to do now?”
“Look, for now, I need my cool. I don’t even want to think about anything” Fullhouse replied. “I think you should be on your way, your wife and baby will be waiting” He added.
“Okay, let me be on my way then” He said they both stood up and side hugged each other.
“You’ll be fine my guy. Just forget everything that happened today. More beautiful birthdays are still ahead” Gbotemi said patting his back.
“Sure. Thanks my guy” He said and saw him off.
That night Fullhouse sent a text message to everyone who attended his birthday party. His sister, Oreoluwa called that night to ask about the party. She noticed her brother wasn’t flowing well with her. She confronted him but he told her sister he was fine.
That night he called just his parents, he didn’t bother to call Moyin or Ireoluwa like he used to every night. Those two ruined his day and he was not ready to let it slide, not at that moment.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Ann2012(f): 6:37pm On Nov 09
Thanks for the update ma’am

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by KingAbdulazeez: 7:36pm On Nov 09
Thank You For The Update.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Missyajoke: 7:39pm On Nov 09
Thanks for the update ma'am.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Dara2: 9:06pm On Nov 09
Thanks for the update ma'am grin

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by damis28crown(f): 9:46pm On Nov 09
Advantaged:


If I read the story well, I think the writer did mention at the beginning or so that both Adekunle and his friend had a common problem with their ladies- their over possessiveness.
It didn't just begin.

One of the guys didn't think that was enough to end the relationship, so he went ahead and married the lady. The other is so indecisive cos that moyin is not ready to change and he knows it.
So why is he acting like she only became like that recently. He should know what to do, that is if he has sense.

He is wasting his time and her time at the same time
abiii ooooo


nobody wants to see this
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by emmytemmy: 10:16pm On Nov 09
Tnx for d update ma bt d update is short now

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Gracie18(f): 10:32pm On Nov 09
Thanks for the update ma'am

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by enirock(m): 10:49pm On Nov 09
I don't know how to put this but I will say it sha- this update ehn... Moyin has someone else in her life(my opinion). For her to size him up and hiss, knowing fully well what she's done just amazes me. Thank Rachealfst for the update and your consistency.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by mhizv(f): 5:21am On Nov 10
damis28crown:
abiii ooooo


nobody wants to see this




We can't all have same level of tolerance! Little excesses you can tolerate in your relationship,most people can't.

My only problem with him,is why he hasn't called of the relationship yet cos they are both obviously wasting their time.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by bigbauer(m): 8:37am On Nov 10
Rachealfst it's always a refreshing pleasure to read your stories. Apparently you're a believer and an advocate of Christ, I love how you use your writting (gift) as an avenue for evangelism. Your husband truly has found a good thing, and is highly favoured. (For the guys who'll think I'm shooting my shot, I have a happy family, and wouldn't trade my wife and kids for anything/anyone). Keep up the good work. More grace, blessings, inspiration and abundance is what I pray for you.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Kaycee9242(m): 9:32am On Nov 10
Nice one Rachael

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by hadayshawlar(f): 9:36am On Nov 10
Fullhouse likes Ireoluwa. Its certain. I think moving forward she is going to stay away from him and distance makes the heart grow fonder grin
Moyin's wahala is too much but I think Fullhose shouldn't have invited Ire for the night out of respect to his Finacee.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 10:07am On Nov 10
bigbauer:
Rachealfst it's always a refreshing pleasure to read your stories. Apparently you're a believer and an advocate of Christ, I love how you use your writting (gift) as an avenue for evangelism. Your husband truly has found a good thing, and is highly favoured. (For the guys who'll think I'm shooting my shot, I have a happy family, and wouldn't trade my wife and kids for anything/anyone). Keep up the good work. More grace, blessings, inspiration and abundance is what I pray for you.
Amen. Thanks so much, may the Lord continue to bless and uphold your family in Jesus name.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by rachealfst(f): 10:09am On Nov 10
CHAPTER 15
The next day, he came back from work, showered and changed into casuals. He went into the kitchen to make eba ( garri ) for himself, he was still warming the soup, then the door bell chimed. He put off the gas and left the kitchen to get the door.
He opened and it was Ireoluwa who was standing in front of him with a straight face. Fullhouse wasn’t smiling either, he only opened the door wider for her to come in and then he closed the door after her.
“Sit” He said but she said she was okay standing.
“I’m sorry for the other day” She said.
“Do you really need to apologize for that? Ireoluwa, I pleaded with you that night and you still do as you wish so what’s the apology for!”
“Wait! Are you blaming me for all that happened?”
“I’m not but you knew what you did will hurt me but of course you cared less about my happiness. All you wanted that night is to spite me for whatever my fianceé did to you!”
“Fullhouse…….”
“Ireoluwa” He cut in. “Just think, do you really think I deserved that dish you served me that night. Have I ever made you sad for once? You know I will do anything to make you happy but you didn’t think I deserve the same from you”
“So I’m the villian now, right! And your fiancée the angel. Who started it all? Did I even talk back at her? I was quiet all through and still I’m the bad person, right”
Ireoluwa didn’t understand why she is more at the receiving end. Her case is just like the case of to whom much is given, much is expected.
“Fine, I'll tell you what you don’t know. I don’t know why but you hurt me most. I kind of don’t care about what Moyin did to me that much. But you….” He said pointing his hands at her, shaking his head.
“So what she did to you is pardonable but what I did is unforgivable?”
“I never created that impression. You over heard everything that night. I even scolded her for you. What I’m saying is that the least you could do for me that night is to eat and I could have had a wonderful birthday!”
“Don’t worry it will never happen again. You, your fianceé and I will never get caught up again in a web. You won’t need to be in between again.”
“What exactly are you driving at?” He asked curiously.
“Let me just tell you the reason why I’m here”
“Go ahead”
“I’m cutting all ties with you. I think I’m too young for all this melodrama”
“You….are…..saying…..”
“I want to go back to a life without you in the picture. I was fine before you came into my life and I’ll be fine without you as well” She said. Fullhouse starred at her trying to process everything she just said.
He feigned a smile. “Ireoluwa, you think you haven’t hurt me enough and that is why you are trying to add this to it, right. You came all the way here to tell me this trash! Ireoluwa! I loved and cared for you like my blood” He said and those words stung her and she broke down into tears.
“Your fiancée and her friend said you are just fooling me….” She gasped as she cried while Fullhouse listen with rapt attention. She continued,
“They said you only wanted to use me and dump me”
“What! Use you! How” He asked with a confused look on his face.
“They said I’m not the first girl you’ve used and dumped. That all the love, care and pampering will end once you’ve succeeded in sleeping with me” She revealed.
“And you believed Moyin and Darasimi, right?”
“Fullhouse I’m……”
“Did I ever strike you like someone who is capable of doing all these?” He said but she kept quiet. “Answer me Ireoluwa” He raised his voice at her. She shivered.
“I’m sorry” He said. He then asked calmly, “Do you believe them?”
“What do you expect me to believe, they know you more than I do and you’ve been doing all this good stuff ever since I met you and..and….” She stammered.
“And what, Ireoluwa! Have I ever made any advances at you? I even spent a whole weekend alone with you in school. Did I for once touch you inappropriately or assault you sexually because you are standing here telling me you don’t know what to believe. Really!”
“I know you never did and I trusted you until…”She was saying and then he cut in.
“Until my fiancée came to tell you who I really was” He took the word from her mouth. “Moyin told you my motive, right, the secret she kept away from you all along till you guys crossed each other on my birthday eve! I thought you were smarter than this Ireoluwa”
“Fullhouse…..”
“Can you please allow me talk” He said sternly and she kept quiet.
“Ireoluwa, you must really think high of yourself”
“Really!” She said, taken aback.
“Yes. If I wanted sex so badly, you think it will be from a seventeen year old girl, right! Well for your information, contrary to what you hear, I don’t do child abuse”
“Fullhouse!” Ireoluwa exclaimed.
“Ireoluwa! Even if you stand in front of me naked, I will never get an erection!” He shot at her.
“What did you just say to me?” She said with a shaky voice.
“I’m telling you to get off your high horse. I don’t sex babies. Now get out of my house this minute”
Ireoluwa's eyes were heavy with tears but she held it till she left his house. And outside, she cried so hard. Fullhouse humiliate and crushed her ego as a woman. She cried all through her way home but had to stop when she was close to her house so her parents won’t find out anything. Luckily for her they were not back, so she just went straight to her room.
Immediately she left, Fullhouse picked his car key; he left the house in rage and went straight to Moyin's house that evening. In half an hour, he was already standing in front of her door. She opened the door and welcomed him with a smile then she saw his look and knew she was in for another trouble. She ushered him in and he followed.
“How was your day?” She asked subtly not knowing what to say.
“I didn’t come here to exchange pleasantaries with you”
“I knew it” She said.
“I want to applaud your effort in breaking myself and that girl apart, cos you eventually succeeded. As for that little brat, I’ve put her in her place. I just threw her out of my house. So you could know!”
“Did you just say you threw her out of your house?” She said sounding scared not knowing what was coming for her. She was like if he could do that to Ireoluwa then she’s in a bigger mess. Fullhouse interrupted her thought while she was still at it.
“As for you Moyin, It is over between us. Read! My! Lips! I am not coming back to you, ever again! There is no more us! Not in this life, not in the next!”He charged at her. He turned to leave but Moyin who was still in shocked try hard to talk and she finally voiced out.
“Fullhouse!” She called out and he stopped in his tracks.
“If this is about your birthday, I’m truly…..”
“One more thing, I don’t want to ever see you near me, my family and my family house inclusive. Nobody! Moyin, I repeat, nobody can force you on me so don’t try to write any script on how to get me back because the movie won’t happen. Goodbye and have a nice life without me” He said and walked out.

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What happens next, now that Moyin and Ireoluwa are out of Fullhouse's life. Find out in the complete book "UNDERRATED"

Available on okadabooks:

https://m.okadabooks.com/book/about/underrated/37855

Thank you all for reading, I pray the Lord will bless you abundantly in Jesus name.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Missyajoke: 11:03am On Nov 10
Thanks ma'am am buying the book next week or probably this week I must read the complete story.
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by bimberry1307(f): 11:14am On Nov 10
Rachealfst, is there any other way I can buy the book apart from Okadabooks? I'm not a fan of that platform. Maybe bank transfer or recharge card. Pleassseeee
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Pofgrace(m): 12:43pm On Nov 10
bimberry1307:
Rachealfst, is there any other way I can buy the book apart from Okadabooks? I'm not a fan of that platform. Maybe bank transfer or recharge card. Pleassseeee
I support this okada book is trashy reason why I didn't read the complete version of pastorzoned till this moment....I hate anything that gives me headache

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by olatex25(m): 1:00pm On Nov 10
bimberry1307:
Rachealfst, is there any other way I can buy the book apart from Okadabooks? I'm not a fan of that platform. Maybe bank transfer or recharge card. Pleassseeee

There is nothing wrong with okada book sis, just download d app and put money in ur wallet...
U will enjoy reading it dere.. When u closed d app, u don't have to stat afresh when u open it. U continue rite from where u stop...

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by hadayshawlar(f): 1:47pm On Nov 10
bimberry1307:
Rachealfst, is there any other way I can buy the book apart from Okadabooks? I'm not a fan of that platform. Maybe bank transfer or recharge card. Pleassseeee


I have never had issues with the app .Try it. I just got my copy of underrated on the app this afternoon without hassle. You even have payment options.

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Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by damis28crown(f): 3:36pm On Nov 10
mhizv:



We can't all have same level of tolerance! Little excesses you can tolerate in your relationship,most people can't.

My only problem with him,is why he hasn't called of the relationship yet cos they are both obviously wasting their time.
yea



am not trying to say that moyin behaviour is right but fullhouse knew he cant tolerate that instead of him to end the relationship he kept leading her on because from the beginning it didnt just start so y complain now
Re: UNDERRATED: A Story By Toyin Taiwo by Ann2012(f): 4:34pm On Nov 10
I’ve never had issues with Okadabooks, I just bought the book.... reading continues

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