Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition - Poems For Review (3)

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 1:37pm On Jul 17, 2012

Special women ko . .. tongue

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by MissyB3(f): 3:07pm On Jul 17, 2012

Tgirl, thanks for the poem, correct woman cheesy

I'm running off to copy, I'll be back to paste. tongue

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 3:24pm On Jul 17, 2012

Missy_B: Tgirl, thanks for the poem, correct woman

I'm running off to copy, I'll be back to paste.

lol. datz my girl kiss

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 3:28pm On Jul 17, 2012

i think long poems would be tedious to read. i suggest we keep it to limericks and whats-that-japanese-thingy-called? haiku

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 3:44pm On Jul 17, 2012

so, where do i start..

First i really must warn
I do spin many a yarn
But still i love wholly
With passion throbbing warmly
from dusk at least through morn tongue

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 3:46pm On Jul 17, 2012

Cuddlemii: For Example-

Contestant Odunnu,
You lite my world,
And give me a ground to stand firm on.
Gold and silver I have none
But you are in my heart infinitely.
Pick me and I will lick you

i like this lol.
btw, that your list of contestants hmm

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 3:53pm On Jul 17, 2012

Nice one!

I cant remember if I have congratulated you on your appointment as a mod cuddlemii, Congratulations! You are doing a good job already.

@Tgirl: Thanks for the poem. I want more poems, you are yet to win my heart.... ok am just an olivertwist cheesy

@Rockstation are you dedicating those poems to me? You might just win my heart if you do wink

@Cuddlemii: Am expecting some poems from you dedicated to me wink

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 3:58pm On Jul 17, 2012

OAM4J: Nice one!

I cant remember if I have congratulated you on your appointment as a mod cuddlemii, Congratulations! You are doing a good job already.

@Tgirl: Thanks for the poem. I want more poems, you are yet to win my heart.... ok am just an olivertwist

@Rockstation are you dedicating those poems to me? You might just win my heart if you do

@Cuddlemii: Am expecting some poems from you dedicated to me

OAM4J
He hugs the dedications
With his flirtation
Setting in motion
A plan in rotation
To take over every damsel
in literary nation

tongue

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 4:06pm On Jul 17, 2012

Maclatunji tongue

Oh the jealous one
Break not your head over it
Some are just born to be loved
While others struggle to be noticed
Yeah life is unfair
But break not your head over it
Someday you will be lucky

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Rocktation(f): 4:08pm On Jul 17, 2012

OAM4J: @Rockstation are you dedicating those poems to me? You might just win my heart if you do

If you're sure undecided

...the second is about some dead lover grin

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 4:18pm On Jul 17, 2012

Rocktation:

If you're sure ...the second is about some dead lover

No I dont want dead lover poems, I want the live happily forever ones.

So write me new ones and win my loving, caring & romantic heart wink

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:19pm On Jul 17, 2012

OAM4J: Maclatunji

Oh the jealous one
Break not your head over it
Some are just born to be loved
While others struggle to be noticed
Yeah life is unfair
But break not your head over it
Someday you will be lucky

hmm... so u can write and u couldn't write one for me, ehn? sad

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Ishilove: 4:21pm On Jul 17, 2012

BoboYekini: so, where do i start..

First i really must warn
I do spin many a yarn
But still i love wholly
With passion throbbing warmly
from dusk at least through morn

Dusk to dawn? You get power o. Lol

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:21pm On Jul 17, 2012

OAM4J:

No I dont want dead lover poems, I want the live happily forever ones.

So write me new ones and win my loving, caring & romantic heart

and u are even flirting right under my nose

U are so forgotten angry

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Ishilove: 4:25pm On Jul 17, 2012

I'm not much of a poet. Let me try sha
*cracks cramped knuckles*

Here goes

In the beginning was a man and woman. . .

Ahh sheeit!! embarassed

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 4:27pm On Jul 17, 2012

Goldieluks: Nice poems guys.
One secret in writing a good poetry is adding a twist
to it, whilst using simple and understandable structural language, so that it sounds
sweet, even to a lay man's hearing.

I love your poem breezy.

Thanks Goldie and Tgurl4real. . .
Much love

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 4:29pm On Jul 17, 2012

Tgirl4real:

hmm... so u can write and u couldn't write one for me, ehn?

Ah! You wan put me for trouble?

She wants a poem
I say no problem
You can have this one
It is done
A poem for you
From me to you

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 4:32pm On Jul 17, 2012

Ishilove:
Dusk to dawn? You get power o. Lol

haha, how d'you think i got my name? wink

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:32pm On Jul 17, 2012

Ishilove: I'm not much of a poet. Let me try sha
*cracks cramped knuckles*

Here goes

In the beginning was a man and woman. . .

Ahh sheeit!!

hehehehehheheeee

grin

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 4:32pm On Jul 17, 2012

Tgirl4real:

and u are even flirting right under my nose

U are so forgotten

Oh my dear

Dont worry, there is enough of me to go round.

You should be writing me more poems and not fighting me

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:35pm On Jul 17, 2012

maclatunji:

Ah! You wan put me for trouble?

She wants a poem
I say no problem
You can have this one
It is done
A poem for you
From me to you

I can't see no poem na. tongue

I wasn't referring to u though. Thanks for trying. cheesy

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 4:37pm On Jul 17, 2012

OAM4J: Maclatunji

Oh the jealous one
Break not your head over it
Some are just born to be loved
While others struggle to be noticed
Yeah life is unfair
But break not your head over it
Someday you will be lucky

Nice one
But not nice enough
Taking swipes is fun
It helps to get work done
Away from the Sun
Taking things turn by turn

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:41pm On Jul 17, 2012

OAM4J:

Oh my dear

Dont worry, there is enough of me to go round.

You should be writing me more poems and not fighting me

I still dey manage to accept u with ya plenty wives, u wan add more join. Mbanu! I no do.

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 4:42pm On Jul 17, 2012

Tgirl4real:

I can't see no poem na.

I wasn't referring to u though. Thanks for trying.

I see the error
Not in the mirror
But on the Screen
Screen to eye
Seems quite far
Far enough
To see in reverse

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:42pm On Jul 17, 2012

Maclatunji,

try writing me a proper poem na tongue

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:45pm On Jul 17, 2012

maclatunji:

I see the error
Not in the mirror
But on the Screen
Screen to eye
Seems quite far
Far enough
To see in reverse

Sounds good...but can be better.lol

Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by OAM4J: 4:48pm On Jul 17, 2012

Tgirl4real:

I still dey manage to accept u with ya plenty wives, u wan add more join. Mbanu! I no do.

Is this a poem?

Its not winning my heart o.

Write another beautiful and loving one.

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