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[The Poet's Cave] / A Critique Of Poems Featured In Nairaland's "The Poets" Competition Season 2 (2) / THE POET (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Mynd44: 1:55pm On Aug 06, 2012
I can't help but be bored
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 2:27pm On Aug 06, 2012
Mynd_44: I can't help but be bored

This is definitely coming from an aspiring writer
Come on show us your poetic side wink
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by firestar(f): 2:35pm On Aug 06, 2012
L'amour...

Weep no more.

For you

Je suis L'ahou
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 2:38pm On Aug 06, 2012
Oh, how I seek

Seek for the one

To travel a thousand miles to pick up the broken pieces.

The broken pieces of my heart that lay wasted across the barren land.

With arms that will cradle my withered soul.

A soul so lost in the world.

A world full of pretentious men.

Men whose sweet words can destroy the tiniest flicker of light.

The light which the broken pieces yearn for.

They call out to each other with the tiniest of echos.

Hoping that someday, they will be made whole again.

To flutter once more at the touch of the one.


Lol
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 2:42pm On Aug 06, 2012
firestar: L'amour...

Weep no more.

For you

Je suis L'ahou

Qui baby Qui!
J'aime la poetry grin

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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:24pm On Aug 06, 2012
mrseamy:
@Tgirl4real

my fondness for you
constantly Deepens
cos each time I think of you
my heart starts to Weaken
this fondness seems to increase
with every Breath
that it tests the limit my imagination
can Stretch
you make everything else appear
Hollow
cos wherever you are loveliness is to
Follow
You shine so bright that you cast your own
Shadow
A beauty that others would like to
Borrow
But try as they might, your beauty they will
never Match
cos someone like you they could never Catch.

awww . . . how did I ever miss this?

This is so sweet. *hugs*
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by pops1(m): 5:39pm On Aug 06, 2012
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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SimplySEA(m): 6:30pm On Aug 06, 2012
Cuddlemii:

You haven't been lucky with luv, you say?
With me your name would be changed to lucky!
Your hurting is in the past now,
I shall re-write your story
And give you a love tale

Ask the mirror again,
I am the snow white you have been searching for
I shall wrap my arms around you
And soon you would feel like a new born
I shall feel your heart with so much joy
You shall wear a permanent smirk for life

My simplesea,
you have made it so easy to sail away with you at sunset
So I can get lost in your embrace where no one is watching
No prying eyes to stop me from caressing you
If there is a private chamber on the ship,
The rest is history, gbam!


Topic: 16 questions
O my snowwhite,
Where have u been all my life?
Why were u not here to turn my wrongs around?
Were u carried away by d magnificence of d forest..?
Why couldn't my magic mirror (fate) find you?
Is d splendour of d woods truly worth it?
Is world of the fairies dat fascinating?
So fascinating dat u couldn't hear d cry of my lonely heart....?
.....
The sounds of d birds and crickets; were they dat mellifluous...?
The breeze of d woods; was it dat serene?
The atmosphere in there; is it very magical?
So magical dat u couldn't sense d wave of my emotions in d air?
.....
O cuddlemii, my love
i'd lik to explore d splendour of yr world wit u,
but wouldn't u rather have a glimpse of mine first?
Wouldn't u like to lie on a grassy plain, under a canopy of stars?
Wouldn't u savour the feelin of watchin d moon as it serenades our hearts wit illuminace?
Wouldn't u lik to lie in my arms and listen while i read to u some poetic lines?
...
O dear, u spoke of a private chamber in a cabin for history makin; do we really need dat?
How about a little time together in a private galaxy i built for jus 4u and i...?
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SimplySEA(m): 6:57pm On Aug 06, 2012
masterpiecer:

perfect reply, this should soothe the soul of simplesea, the unlucky lover

Soothe my soul indeed. For a moment, i felt shivers through my spine!
Her words were lik mornin due from d Almighty's garden...!
For dat moment, i tot it was real!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 7:29pm On Aug 06, 2012
Come, my love
Let me feel the sweet whispers of your lips.
Let me feel the whiff of your warm breath upon my skin.

Oh, come my love
To see the hairs on my nape rise as you whisper the sensuous words of j'adore
To smell the scented rose of your sweet body.

Come my love
Let me take a glimpse of your beauty before it disappears into the abyss
Let me feel the love that I oh so deserve.


tongue
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by firestar(f): 8:00pm On Aug 06, 2012
Mon ami
L'amour...

Reste...

Reste ici...
Ici! sil-tu-plait!

sad


Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by denzel2009: 8:17pm On Aug 06, 2012
This nice le le le le le
elepe master oooooo
le le le le le
Nice nice elepe master o
E bami kigbe ole o ole ole o
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Idowuogbo(f): 8:29pm On Aug 06, 2012
denzel2009: This nice le le le le le
elepe master oooooo
le le le le le
Nice nice elepe master o
E bami kigbe ole o ole ole o
Werey!
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 8:34pm On Aug 06, 2012
Are other languages apart from english allowed? tongue
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 8:36pm On Aug 06, 2012
For: Freecocoa
Title: Always Remember

I may be out of credit to call you
I may be too busy to text you,
but my heart will always remember u
every single second of the day
Always remember how much I love you.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by firestar(f): 8:37pm On Aug 06, 2012
kandiikane: Are other languages apart from english allowed? tongue
[size=14pt]Oui! angry[/size]
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 9:06pm On Aug 06, 2012
^maneh, daam la saga hana? So eh mut teh sa muuti liiy duug
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 9:08pm On Aug 06, 2012
For: Freecocoa
Title: I choose you to the end
I never knew how it feels to be in love
I never knew about joyfulness;
I didn’t believe dreams came true;
I couldn’t believe in love,
as it were strange to me
Then I finally met you,
And everything changed
You smiled at me and touched my
Soul.
I knew right then, we'd never be apart.
We walked and talked and realized we
were the same.
I knew right then, someday you will share my last name.
You're the closest to perfection I've ever known,
Words can't show how much I appreciate your love
My love for you is endless
You gave me a reason to believe in love,
A reason to fight for your love
Oh, my love, how I need you!
Your loving embrace and gentle smile
Makes life worthwhile
Your compassionate heart and caring
soul
Flourishes our love and helps it grow.
You are my lover, my confidant, and
forever friend.
With all my heart, I choose you to the
end.
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by denzel2009: 9:19pm On Aug 06, 2012
kandiikane: ^maneh, daam la saga hana? So eh mut teh sa muuti liiy duug

kuleta uke wako na nyumba yangu
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 9:21pm On Aug 06, 2012
denzel2009:

kuleta uke wako na nyumba yangu

Sa taat. cool
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 10:00pm On Aug 06, 2012
Ode to my D.ick

9 inches of steel
Cannon of non-static pleasure
The verified real deal
Jizz shooter without measure

All the ladies will feel
And then spasm in seizures
My clothes they will peel
to find my lost treasure

When I reveal
The number of pussy's injured
The Hip replacement deals
The number of p0rnn films featured(Its 9 by the way)

The end. cool
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 10:06pm On Aug 06, 2012
orisisi, ogaju, "ode" ni eleyi tun pe nkan okunrin
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by denzel2009: 10:08pm On Aug 06, 2012
Cuddlemii: orisisi, ogaju, "ode" ni eleyi tun pe nkan okunrin

Melinda, so you speak yoruba? omo calabar ndie kampo
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 10:21pm On Aug 06, 2012
denzel2009:

Melinda, so you speak yoruba? omo calabar ndie kampo

akoba adaba, osa fe ki gbogbo aye mo gbogbo nkan ni pa mi. Hahaa kilode? Ni gba wo le bere si ma feran literature? m
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by firestar(f): 10:30pm On Aug 06, 2012
kandiikane: ^maneh, daam la saga hana? So eh mut teh sa muuti liiy duug
Ano... saikin nani ka ari mashi ta ?
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 10:32pm On Aug 06, 2012
Cuddlemii, how far naw
We no go hear results, where my freecocoa dey since naw
I dey catch cold ooo
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 10:49pm On Aug 06, 2012
chucky234: Cuddlemii, how far naw
We no go hear results, where my freecocoa dey since naw
I dey catch cold ooo

U no dey enjoy am, the way e dey go so?
make we give one or two more days for members to catch up na
then we vote for the winner
make i give u vicks?
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:00pm On Aug 06, 2012
Cuddlemii:

U no dey enjoy am, the way e dey go so?
make we give one or two more days for members to catch up na
then we vote for the winner
make i give u vicks?
Vicks no go hold the cold ooo.help me find my cocoa butter na,where my freecocoa come go since
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 11:13pm On Aug 06, 2012
chucky234: Vicks no go hold the cold ooo.help me find my cocoa butter na,where my freecocoa come go since

ur love has brought her forth
she is here! smiley
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 11:20pm On Aug 06, 2012
chucky234: Vicks no go hold the cold ooo.help me find my cocoa butter na,where my freecocoa come go since
Oh my love
I'm sorry to have kept you waiting
My day was really stressing
I had to do a lot of trekking
Which caused me lots of sweating
Its good to read from you my darling
Cos your words are so relaxing
Now you have me smiling.
Like a baby that is suckling

*I dey o my dear,my day was really crazy,how you?
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 11:24pm On Aug 06, 2012
denzel2009: This nice le le le le le
elepe master oooooo
le le le le le
Nice nice elepe master o
E bami kigbe ole o ole ole o
Person wey do you this thing don die grin
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:25pm On Aug 06, 2012
Cuddlemii:

ur love has brought her forth
she is here! smiley
Cuddlemii wetin I go do without you na,Nne thank you for bringing my cocoa butter back ooo
This cold for kill me ooo

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