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[The Poet's Cave] / A Critique Of Poems Featured In Nairaland's "The Poets" Competition Season 2 (2) / THE POET (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Mynd44: 1:55pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
I can't help but be bored |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 2:27pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Mynd_44: I can't help but be bored This is definitely coming from an aspiring writer Come on show us your poetic side |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by firestar(f): 2:35pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
L'amour... Weep no more. For you Je suis L'ahou |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 2:38pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Oh, how I seek Seek for the one To travel a thousand miles to pick up the broken pieces. The broken pieces of my heart that lay wasted across the barren land. With arms that will cradle my withered soul. A soul so lost in the world. A world full of pretentious men. Men whose sweet words can destroy the tiniest flicker of light. The light which the broken pieces yearn for. They call out to each other with the tiniest of echos. Hoping that someday, they will be made whole again. To flutter once more at the touch of the one. Lol |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 2:42pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
firestar: L'amour... Qui baby Qui! J'aime la poetry 1 Like |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:24pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
mrseamy: awww . . . how did I ever miss this? This is so sweet. *hugs* |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by pops1(m): 5:39pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
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Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SimplySEA(m): 6:30pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Cuddlemii: Topic: 16 questions O my snowwhite, Where have u been all my life? Why were u not here to turn my wrongs around? Were u carried away by d magnificence of d forest..? Why couldn't my magic mirror (fate) find you? Is d splendour of d woods truly worth it? Is world of the fairies dat fascinating? So fascinating dat u couldn't hear d cry of my lonely heart....? ..... The sounds of d birds and crickets; were they dat mellifluous...? The breeze of d woods; was it dat serene? The atmosphere in there; is it very magical? So magical dat u couldn't sense d wave of my emotions in d air? ..... O cuddlemii, my love i'd lik to explore d splendour of yr world wit u, but wouldn't u rather have a glimpse of mine first? Wouldn't u like to lie on a grassy plain, under a canopy of stars? Wouldn't u savour the feelin of watchin d moon as it serenades our hearts wit illuminace? Wouldn't u lik to lie in my arms and listen while i read to u some poetic lines? ... O dear, u spoke of a private chamber in a cabin for history makin; do we really need dat? How about a little time together in a private galaxy i built for jus 4u and i...? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by SimplySEA(m): 6:57pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
masterpiecer: Soothe my soul indeed. For a moment, i felt shivers through my spine! Her words were lik mornin due from d Almighty's garden...! For dat moment, i tot it was real! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 7:29pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Come, my love Let me feel the sweet whispers of your lips. Let me feel the whiff of your warm breath upon my skin. Oh, come my love To see the hairs on my nape rise as you whisper the sensuous words of j'adore To smell the scented rose of your sweet body. Come my love Let me take a glimpse of your beauty before it disappears into the abyss Let me feel the love that I oh so deserve. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by firestar(f): 8:00pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Mon ami L'amour... Reste... Reste ici... Ici! sil-tu-plait! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by denzel2009: 8:17pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
This nice le le le le le elepe master oooooo le le le le le Nice nice elepe master o E bami kigbe ole o ole ole o |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Idowuogbo(f): 8:29pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
denzel2009: This nice le le le le leWerey! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 8:34pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Are other languages apart from english allowed? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 8:36pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
For: Freecocoa Title: Always Remember I may be out of credit to call you I may be too busy to text you, but my heart will always remember u every single second of the day Always remember how much I love you. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by firestar(f): 8:37pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
kandiikane: Are other languages apart from english allowed?[size=14pt]Oui! [/size] |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 9:06pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
^maneh, daam la saga hana? So eh mut teh sa muuti liiy duug |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 9:08pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
For: Freecocoa Title: I choose you to the end I never knew how it feels to be in love I never knew about joyfulness; I didn’t believe dreams came true; I couldn’t believe in love, as it were strange to me Then I finally met you, And everything changed You smiled at me and touched my Soul. I knew right then, we'd never be apart. We walked and talked and realized we were the same. I knew right then, someday you will share my last name. You're the closest to perfection I've ever known, Words can't show how much I appreciate your love My love for you is endless You gave me a reason to believe in love, A reason to fight for your love Oh, my love, how I need you! Your loving embrace and gentle smile Makes life worthwhile Your compassionate heart and caring soul Flourishes our love and helps it grow. You are my lover, my confidant, and forever friend. With all my heart, I choose you to the end. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by denzel2009: 9:19pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
kandiikane: ^maneh, daam la saga hana? So eh mut teh sa muuti liiy duug kuleta uke wako na nyumba yangu |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by kandiikane(m): 9:21pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
denzel2009: Sa taat. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 10:00pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Ode to my D.ick 9 inches of steel Cannon of non-static pleasure The verified real deal Jizz shooter without measure All the ladies will feel And then spasm in seizures My clothes they will peel to find my lost treasure When I reveal The number of pussy's injured The Hip replacement deals The number of p0rnn films featured(Its 9 by the way) The end. |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 10:06pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
orisisi, ogaju, "ode" ni eleyi tun pe nkan okunrin |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by denzel2009: 10:08pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Cuddlemii: orisisi, ogaju, "ode" ni eleyi tun pe nkan okunrin Melinda, so you speak yoruba? omo calabar ndie kampo |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 10:21pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
denzel2009: akoba adaba, osa fe ki gbogbo aye mo gbogbo nkan ni pa mi. Hahaa kilode? Ni gba wo le bere si ma feran literature? m |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by firestar(f): 10:30pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
kandiikane: ^maneh, daam la saga hana? So eh mut teh sa muuti liiy duugAno... saikin nani ka ari mashi ta ? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 10:32pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Cuddlemii, how far naw We no go hear results, where my freecocoa dey since naw I dey catch cold ooo |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 10:49pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
chucky234: Cuddlemii, how far naw U no dey enjoy am, the way e dey go so? make we give one or two more days for members to catch up na then we vote for the winner make i give u vicks? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:00pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Cuddlemii:Vicks no go hold the cold ooo.help me find my cocoa butter na,where my freecocoa come go since |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 11:13pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
chucky234: Vicks no go hold the cold ooo.help me find my cocoa butter na,where my freecocoa come go since ur love has brought her forth she is here! |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 11:20pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
chucky234: Vicks no go hold the cold ooo.help me find my cocoa butter na,where my freecocoa come go sinceOh my love I'm sorry to have kept you waiting My day was really stressing I had to do a lot of trekking Which caused me lots of sweating Its good to read from you my darling Cos your words are so relaxing Now you have me smiling. Like a baby that is suckling *I dey o my dear,my day was really crazy,how you? |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by freecocoa(f): 11:24pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
denzel2009: This nice le le le le lePerson wey do you this thing don die |
Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by chucky234(m): 11:25pm On Aug 06, 2012 |
Cuddlemii:Cuddlemii wetin I go do without you na,Nne thank you for bringing my cocoa butter back ooo This cold for kill me ooo |
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