Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition - Poems For Review (5) - Nairaland
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[The Poet's Cave] / A Critique Of Poems Featured In Nairaland's "The Poets" Competition Season 2 (2) / THE POET (2) (3) (4)
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| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 3:07am On Jul 19, 2012 |
OAM4J: ehn. . . .ok sha. Don't worry   |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 4:02pm On Jul 19, 2012 |
For Cuddlemii Cuddlemii is really angry at me Sorry I was harsh I didn't mean to be mean Now I hope you see what I mean I was just being me To make you see things as they be |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 8:33pm On Jul 19, 2012 |
maclatunji: For Cuddlemii Save your breath The harm has been done Shall we move on |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 9:14pm On Jul 19, 2012 |
Cuddlemii: Indeed and I have forgiven you #Hehehe. You know within your hearts of hearts that I am right but pride has inhibited you from acknowledging it. Never take people for granted and know that it is not everybody that criticises you that hates you and vice versa. Laughing at your sense of indignation over the matter. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 9:23pm On Jul 19, 2012 |
maclatunji: Maybe you need to stop advising and seek help yourself. I am out |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 9:33pm On Jul 19, 2012 |
^Bye! Get better not bitter, ok. I mean that sincerely. I will be taking a break soon too. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 11:00pm On Jul 19, 2012 |
maclatunji: ^Bye! Get better not bitter, ok. I mean that sincerely. The harder I try to stay mad I rememeber, "hey, thats my man"! I will like to take you on a journey Some place only your ex, god and I know Buckle up, cos once I become a habitant in your heart You would never wanna let me go!  1 Like |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by bknight: 7:16am On Jul 20, 2012 |
Cuddlemii:   I likey |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 1:45pm On Jul 20, 2012 |
bknight: Lolz.Na make up poem! Dont get it twisted  |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by mufex(m): 2:23pm On Jul 20, 2012 |
MY LOVE My love, your voice is delightful, And if humans’ voice are sexy Yours is godly! You are beautiful, And if beauty walks Yours would sprint! 1 Like |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 2:56pm On Jul 20, 2012 |
Cuddlemii: Na wa o. What do we call this? The return of Cuddlemii.lol Nice one. Where is Mac na? Please be a gentleman. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 2:57pm On Jul 20, 2012 |
mufex: MY LOVE Thanks. I love it. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Rocktation(f): 3:03pm On Jul 20, 2012 |
Oo oo. I forgot we're still in a competition.  |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 9:57pm On Jul 20, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: We are cool now. I have no fight with her. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 10:03pm On Jul 20, 2012 |
It's Swell It's so swell When friends make up so well A nice tale to tell It just might sell To those who want to raise hell Or jump into a well 'Cos they feel trapped in a cell. Dedicated to Cuddlemii |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 4:47pm On Jul 21, 2012 |
@ Mac, U sha like rhyme sha. Swell, cell, tell ... |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 4:57pm On Jul 21, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: @ Mac, Is that a good or bad thing? It is a great test of one's intellect when you seek to give meaning whilst rhyming. I look forward to putting together more complex rhymes in future. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Dubemkelly(m): 5:51am On Jul 22, 2012 |
Yeah! Yeah!! Yeah!!! Its working nd da flows are kul BRB |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 6:14am On Jul 22, 2012 |
maclatunji: It's Swell We ain't going to hell We are just doing what lovers do well If you have an objection, please tell Peeping through my psychic crystal, I foretell Our union would dwell Shall I cast you a spell To forever be your damsel I promise a swell time at the stairwell Or we could sit on the beach at sunset to pick seashell By the way, who wants cowbell? (our milk)
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| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Nobody: 12:27pm On Jul 23, 2012 |
Nna na wa ooo. Where una fix me nw? |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Flashaldrin(m): 3:31pm On Jul 23, 2012 |
Cuddlemii:your being a mod i never could fortell i'm sad as your bestie you never did tell but now you are, you'll be the model your super talents you'll now unshell oh what a chance to show your inner jewel to portray you externally as a belle cos many a fight your words will quell and set a record that'll always ring a bell! 1 Like |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 3:47pm On Jul 23, 2012 |
Na wa for nursery rhymes o.  |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 3:54pm On Jul 23, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: Na wa for nursery rhymes o. And na me start am. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 2:10pm On Jul 25, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: Na wa for nursery rhymes o. Why Rhyme? I say it’s time Love rhyme not mime You should try some See how it comes Quite awesome It expresses freedom Doesn’t make you tiresome Killing boredom Makes you feel handsome And not lonesome Can never be gruesome But always Welcome |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 2:11pm On Jul 25, 2012 |
I have water on my mind. Water Feed my heart Quench my thirst Refresh my mind Make me feel kind In you there is life Beauty so clear Creatures look so dear They make me feel bright You are abundant You are so scarce This is no farce Neither is it scant Life is water Water is life Life for life Water for life Dedicated to you if you love water. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 2:13pm On Jul 25, 2012 |
ME They want to know me How can that be? I am as busy as a bee Thinking constantly What is? What if? And how can? Questions upon questions Needing daily answers To know me Is to feel me To feel me Is to understand me To understand me Is to recognise me To recognise me Is to be me Crazy! I am the only me If you have ever tried to figure me out or wondered: "who is this guy?" This one is for you. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 2:14pm On Jul 25, 2012 |
Across the Niger Across the Niger Various tribes differ Making rifts deeper Making hearts harsher Some say it has to be Some say it is not to be Can’t the two just let us be? Be as in be Make of this one what you will. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Tgirl4real(f): 3:18pm On Jul 25, 2012 |
hmm . . . I can see you are having fun. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 4:48pm On Jul 25, 2012 |
Tgirl4real: hmm . . . I am just expressing myself. It has a calming effect. |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by Cuddlemii: 5:16pm On Jul 25, 2012 |
I can see some peeps having fun That is good Keep it up! |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by JacobsAdewale: 1:11pm On Jul 26, 2012 |
THE OBLOQUY by Jacobs Adewale. Credited to the constitution Is the freedom of prostitution, That the yearnings of the masses Are tagged a carcass in the state of ashes. In retrospect lies the embodiment of shame, Making reality a game for infants to become lame; Synonymous to a roller coaster Is the tenets of corruption in a legislative roaster. Is this democratic? As political leaders become renowned dealers and autocratic Possessed with lust for power And stealthily slaughtering hope in every hour. With each dawn Comes a muddling wind Polluting our munificent minds To embrace debacle in debilitation. For too long, We bluff by singing a contrite song; Forgetting our wounded etiolated bones In the quest to cease our conscience contentions. All is bewildered, Knowing not who possess the onus of emancipation; Far from the milieu of regeneration, Segregation continues to deter rehabilitation. When, how Will liberation surface To annihilate these political two-faced tyrants, Who aspire to multiply the sorrows of the downtrodden? I stand anonymous For the earth has been polluted; When the head is rotten, The parts are conserved for direct destruction. Who will salvage all? Some questions are best left unanswered, Till the revolution in evolution is born. 1 Like |
| Re: Nairaland's "The Poet" Competition by maclatunji: 1:32pm On Jul 26, 2012 |
Rumour Mongers Have you heard the latest? Have you seen the newest? Isn’t he the worst? Who says he’s the best? A few questions Emanating from mentions That portray notions And different motions You lot can’t resist Your hearts insist You can’t desist It has to persist Rumour mongers Remind me of fish mongers Peddling stale fish And utter rubbish 1 Like |
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