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Intriguing. Suspense filled. Way to go girl, keep it up.

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I know since say na Richie.....I just noo wan talk am.


Nice story Bibijay.
I read your other stories: "Allen Avenue". After reading "The Devil has the money" my conclusion is just that you are simply amazing. I got stuck till I finished the whole story

I think you should be planning to monetize this your talent....publish a book, write story for movies etc.

Big up for you sis......

Uncle why you lying?

Lawlahdey:
Richie richie.. I been know say na you be the perpetrator seff
Bibijay123.. Better mention me in the next update, ehnehn

Aunty why you lying?

Wow, lovely
Please morrrrrreeeeee op





Still I read

Ooo ohh maaa Gawwwwd!
I never saw it coming! Didn't even think of it! Richie the murderer?!

Abeg Bibi you just too much. I raise my left nyash for you Chai! You took all of us by surprise.

Now you've won my heart for real
I can't help but love you

No, no, this is something else.

Wow, following steadfastly. I can soo relate

Please don't starve us with updates o

OP what happened? Who broke in?
Hope Mr Daniel is not sick upstairs?

Bikonu comman kill this suspense jor

Lol, OP, you keep talking about the day that changed everything. Makes me curious to see the next episode and know what happened, but it ends up going smoothly. Chai, this op sef

Anyways, like Mhiz said, it seems to be a cool storyline, but seems somehow rushed. Maybe if you could settle down to work on your descriptive and narrative skills, you would make a masterpiece.

Anyways what do I know? I'm not a writer like Bibijay123 and Skarlett, but I know you can do better dear.

Kudos

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Lemme goan readit

bibijay123:
Doctorflash? U did not call us nau, just saw it now. Following! Good job!

Cc
Skarlett
Jaguguli88
Dominique
Veekid
Crazygod
Aitee1
Anugod
Johnwizey
Mhiz
Thesociopath
Sotozo
Yorhmienerd
Olabantu
Justicextian
Talius

Food is ready

Ahh, food don done. Make I siddon for front row sharp sharp.

bibijay123:
Ride on girl! Loving it!

Veekid hubby ve u seen this?
Jay542
Girl360
Peachyp
Mhiz
Anugod
Johnwizey

Thanks for calling me girl, coming right away!

More data to your phone. You write well sis, please bring more updates o.

This family sha

Buh wait o, where do you get your ideas from?

bibijay123:
Dedicated to Mhi z and Anugod

Awwww... Thanks sweetheart

I'm sorry I've been very busy of late, so I just catch up with updates as a late comer

Believe me Bibi, this is more breathtaking than any of your previous stories on here. Girl you're going on stronger and better. I'm so in love with the story

Wish I could show my appreciation of this masterpiece somehow...

[size=2pt]PS: I love the synopsis of that Twine. It fits so perfectly. My 2 cents though. [/size]