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I acknowledge the presence of my guys and bosses in persons of T.Dan, LogoDWhiz, Hameenat, and Adegwurulez.
Front seat for you all.

Hey guys am giving this story a trial so you should expect mistakes. But don't hesitate to correct me and i promise you a nice ride.
Signed:
d9ty7.

CHAPTER 1
Time: 11:30AM
venue: Golden shopping mall. Pretora. Republic of Latvia.
Anna Sylvester and her son Eric came out of Golden shopping mall located on the eastern part of the Republic of Latvia. Pretora to be precise.
They walked towards the mall parking lot where their car a mitsubushi was parked. On getting to the car a paper was clipped to the driver door handle. Anna picked the paper and read the words scribbled on it.
Suddenly there was a gunshot. Eric panicked but he became more afraid when he saw trace of blood through the car window. He ran to the driver's side to find his mother in a pool of her own blood.
"Mummy." he called but got no response.
The security men of the mall quickly ran to Anna's lifeless body to examine her after notifying the city's police command of the situation.
"Boy. Step aside." a man in his early fourties said to Eric.
Eric looked at him with a murdrous eye before he stood up crying bitterly. A security woman took him back into the mall to console him.
Eric turned back and headed back to where his mother lay. He picked the paper without anybody noticing and went back into the mall.
"Give me your father's number." the woman said.
Eric collected her phone and typed his father's number.
"Agent Richard on the line." a voice(Eric's father) said from the other end.
"This is Mrs Long reporting from Golden mall. There was a gunshot a few minutes ago but unfortunately your wife was hit." the woman said.
"Gunshot? ....Anna? Golding mall?....." Agent Richard stammered from the other end.
"The police are already on it." she added.
"I'll be there in a moment." Richard replied.
Venue: LATVIA ANTI TERRORIST UNIT.
Time: 11:40AM.
Richard left his office and headed for his boss office.
"Bill." he called his attention immediately he entered.
"Are you set for the debriefing?" Bill Cuevas asked.
"Debriefing? No. My wife was shot at the Golden shopping mall a few minutes ago and my presence is required." Richard explained.
"Then what will i tell the minister of defence concerning the investigation you are doing?" Bill asked.
"Let agent Chris continue with it." Richard said referring to his assistant.
"Agent Chris is still learning from you. I don't think he can handle the investigation." Bill replied.
"I trust him." Richard said impatiently.
"The state police command will be there to take report which will be forwarded to you later." Bill said.
"Bill? We are talking of a human being here." Richard said.
"And the investigation you are on with is about the lives of the citizens of the Country." Bill replied.
"Bill? Just twenty minutes and i'll be back." Richard requested pleadingly.
"Twenty minutes is very precious that we can not afford to waste it. Get your file and lets meet at the conference hall for the debriefing." Bill said and packed his file and laptop and headed for the door.
"I give you three minutes to do that." Bill said and left.
Richard sat down on a chair and wept bitterly.
"Anna i wish i could come to know how you are faring but my boss around here gave me no chance. Just know that i love you." he said to himself before he stood up and left for his office to get his things for the debriefing process.

--to be continued--

Don famous: Pls can i join the meetin. Want to witness it my self.

free world.

LogoDWhiz: Ghen ghen ghen.. An important decision is about to be made... Let's see how it turns out...
Sorry boss, I've been away for some while due to some unforseeable circumstances which I could have avoided.. Hope I'm forgiven...

You are man.

¤¤PROLOGUE¤¤
"you have no choice other than to work for this corporation in other to bring down these terrorists." Bill said.
"Work for the corporation my foot. Were you not here when my wife was killed? The government did nothing in bringing her killers to book despite the number of years i have spent in service. Now you are telling me to bring down some terrorist just because they attacked the development project on the east county." Richard said angrilly.
"What are you insinuating?" Bill asked.
"I'm not going into investigation without arresting my wife's killer." Richard replied.
Bill pressed a red button on his table. The security men showed up.
"Detain and disarm him." Bill ordered.
"Sir?" one of the security men asked in confusion.
"Do as i say." Bill replied.
Richard brought forth his hands to be cuffed with and handcuff. And off he was taken into detention.

Temitope Daniel: 1st prsn 2 comment ere! I'm following! #front seat tinz... Pop corn da bayi?

Thanks boss. Come sit on the high table where you have access to hotdog and a bottle of vodka.

This story is purely a work of fiction. Any character or events relating to a person either dead or living is highly coincidental.

All rights reserved no part of this publication may be reproduced or transmitted in any form either written or photocopy without prior written approval of the author.
You can reach the author via email on durodolad9ty7@gmail.com or 08166920449.

DEDICATION
This story is dedicated to the Almighty God, the maker of heaven and earth and the creatures in them.

--continuation--
¤¤CHAPTER 4¤¤
Segun rushed home immediately after the service. Nike had promised to come around by 1pm and thank God his parents will be waiting behind for the elders meeting while the two girls won't come home on their own.
He got home, took a shower and waited patiently for the knock on the gate.
THIRTY MINUTES LATER
There was a knock on the gate and Segun rushed to see who the person was. On opening the gate he saw Nike standing looking ravishingly beautiful dressed in a yellow top and a black skirt a little bit longer than knee length.
Segun stared at her and put on a charming smile.
"Won't you let me in?" she asked smiling.
"Oh! My bad." Segun said and opened the gate wider for her.
Segun led her into the house.
"How did you know this place?" Segun asked.
"Your mum invited me so she sent me the description." She replied.
"My mum?" he asked bewildered.
"Yes." she replied.
They both settled down in the sitting room.
"What should i offer you?" Segun asked rising on his feet.
"Water will do." she replied.
"Water? No way." he replied and went into the kitchen to get her a orange juice pack.
There was a horn at the gate. Segun knew at once that his parents are back.
He left what he was doing and rushed to open the gate for them.
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"Good afternoon sir. Good afternoon ma." Nike said kneeling down.
"Afternoon my dear." Mr Akinola replied.
"Thanks for honouring my invitation." Mrs Akinola said.
"Hi. Yov must be Mary?" she said walking up to Mary.
"Yes. And you are Nike." Mary replied.
"Its nice meeting you." Nike said.
"Its my pleasure." mary replied.
Jummy walked in moments later and saw Nike exchanging pleasantries with other member of the family. She felt jealous.
"Jummy good afternoon." she said.
Jummy ignored her and walked to her room to drop her church things.
"Segun!" his mother called.
Segun came inside the sitting room and sat down beside his father. Then the meeting began.

--to be continued--

Queen xstar: This one goes beyond fanning Duro.

Anything for you.

Temitope Daniel: No 4, Nairaland way,
D9ty7's story,
Teenage Lv Naivety,
Dec. 5th, 2013

D9ty7,
Manager and Commander,
Teenage lv Naivety


LETTER OF WARNING TO SEGUN



Hey, Mr man. What's your problem? Shey u want anger kill u ni? Go and read proverbs 14 and get in into your skull, that time you no wan go to church, if trumpet blow, where you think you go meet yourself. Mr Man, mate ooh.


More grease to your elbow My Boss, I still dey follow, just sent this to tell Segun to tread softly, make he use brain!


Yours Faithfully,
T.ÐÅÑ™®
Temitope Daniel.

This is great

kollyso: What a great piece u have here. Though more like narrating an experience yet could pass for a page-turner! Meanwhile as per your other stories, make it one step @ a time and round up with this one first b4 talking of others. Take to advises and corrections here and there being occasionally given by the gurus in the house as your reaction to such corrections will go a long way to persuade and encourage them subsequently. Above all, keep it up! It's a marathon but u will get there!

Thanks boss!

--continuation--
<SUNDAY MORNING>
Mr Akinola came out of his room followed closely by his wife. They were both dressed in the same native attire. Waiting in the sitting room was Mary and Jummy.
"Go and tell your brother we are leaving." Mr Akinola commanded Mary.
She left the sitting room and ascended the stairs to Segun's room. She knocked on the door.
"Daddy said i should tell you we are leaving for church." Mary said.
"Tell him i'll come on my own." he replied.
"But, we are one family, lets all go together." she adviced.
"I know but am coming on my own." he replied and shut the door.
"What you are doing won't pay you." Mary said and ran away before he could reopen the door.
Mary descended the stairs and walked to join the other family members.
"Where is your brother?" Mr Akinola asked.
"He said he will join us in church." Mary replied.
"Meaning?" Mrs Akinola asked.
"He's going on his own." Mary replied then collected her parents bible bag.
Mr Akinola gave his wife a "can you see your son" look. Mrs Akinola shrugged and pretended like it doesn't concern her.
"Lets go." Mr Akinola said and walked out of the house followed by Jummy and Mary, his wife gave a last look to the sitting room before she dashed out to join the others in the waiting toyota rav-4 outside.
Segun came out of his room immediately he heard them close the gate.
"Me, go to church with you. When am not mad. I'll make you know how stubborn i am." he said aloud and headed for the kitchen. He dished his breakfast and sat down on the dining and muched the food slowly. He finished eating and took his bath, put on his cloth, wore his perfume and off he went to church.
As he was about entering the chuch auditorium his phone ranged. He walked to the car park and picked the call. It was Olanike. Since the event that happened in her school after the football match. She never for once picked his call and Segun had since ignored her too.
END OF CHAPTER 3
--to be continued-

stefikal: now d story is clearer...tnks...Jummy sef too dey fall my hand...na wetin sef? Make she no go boil egg 4 9mths oooooo....

Iyaf tlk my own

thanks for taking your time in reading my modified post.
Don't mind that Jummy of a girl. I pray she doesn't boil egg for 9months like u said.

Queen xstar: sighs - children of these days.
Parents too.
mmmmmh.... (shakes head and sigh once more )

The Queen of this kingdom is sighing and shaking head. It seems as if she is sweating.
Secretery Whiz give one of those boys a hand fan so he can fan our Queen.
Ur highness!

Uduak your papa sef funny o. Hw him go register a bad boy like you in a computer school. You wey don tear eye, now i'm sure say u go bleep every babes you meet for that place. Dnt tell me you won't bleep Joy & Lami o. But no bleep customers o. Lol

Almuhsin: Ehm... I think some lines are missing here because you jumped to the part Segun replied to his mum >>>
["Mum i don't seem to get your question."
Segun replied.
"You me right." she replied.
"I am short of words." he replied.
"So, you mean you don't love anyone of them?"
she asked and stood up. She left his room
before heard he could reply.] You didn't mention if his mum was at the door with Jummy and you didn't write the questions his mum asked him. My observations :-)

Thanks for calling my attention to it. I actually thought i had updated that part but when i checked it i remembered it was one of those updates that was wiped off my screen by the network.
Anyways the last update has been modified and what you missed or looking for has been added.

[quote author=shegzi][/quote]I thought it was simplified in the first part that Segun and his brother's room was located upstairs while there parent's room was located at the extreme end downstairs.

Following patiently from now till u start the story. The two computer gurus.
Kabiyesi o my king.

--continuation--
"Baby please am sorry." Jummy apologised.
Segun ignored her and concentrated on playing games on his phone.
"I don't mean to put you into trouble with your parents." she said.
"So?" Segun asked as he advance towards her.
She stood her ground and fidgeted as she closed her eyes expecting another slap. Segun stopped in his tracks and turned back to his bed.
She quickly held him on his arms which was where he got a cut resulting from the beatings. He whinced in pain.
"Ow! Sorry." she said then excused herself as she went out. She re-emerged a few minutes later with a bowl filled with hot steaming water and a small towel to massage his wounds.
She gently massaged them so as not to cause him pains. Then she applied a pain killing ointment on the wounds.
There was a knock on the door, the door gently opened and Mrs Akinola walked in.
She smiled immediately she saw the care Jummy was giving to Segun.
"What a great couple they'll make." she thought.
"I can see she is taking good care of you." she said.
Segun kept mute and looked on as the drama unfolds.
"I came here to talk to you." she said referring to Segun.
Jummy packed her things(the towel and the bowl) and made to leave the room.
"I think i should excuse you." she said.
"Wait! You are also involved." Mrs Akinola said smilling.
"Segun, you know i am you mother. Tell me the reason why you behave that bad to Jumoke at the party." His mother requested.
"I reacted out of anger." he said.
"Are you telling me you got angry just because a drink got spilled on you?" his mother asked.
Segun kept quiet and looked at his fingers like he had never seen them before.
"I know you hate this girl." his mother said stressing each word.
Segun quickly looked up like he wanted to object the last sentence but no words came out from him.
"Now tell me who do you love between Jumoke and Nike? I want nothing but the truth" his mother asked.
"Mum i don't seem to get your question." Segun replied.
"You heard me right." she replied.
"I am short of words." he replied.
"So, you mean you don't love anyone of them?" she asked and stood up. She left his room before he could reply.
Jummy sat down transfixed.
"Segun, you mean you don't love me?" she asked.
"I couldn't remember when i said such." he replied.
"Segun, upon how i showed so much love to you, you have the guts to tell me you don't love me." she said raising.
"Don't dare raise your voice at me." Segun said as she kept quiet.
"Segun i love you. Please don't let me be at loss. I promise you anything." she said going on her knees.
Segun motioned her to stand up.
She stood up and walked towards him. They embraced and began kissing passionately. One way or the other they manouvered their way to the bed and succeeded in having hot rounds of s£x.
She laid down putting her head on his laps, he was caressing her hair.
"Segun. Promise me you won't break my heart." she said.
Segun stopped and stared at her for some seconds.
"Jummy, i don't deal with desperate people like you. Do you think i will love you if you allow me to have sex with you? Hell no, what i feel for you is lust. I can never date a cheap girl like you." he poured out.
Jummy looked at him with a teary eyes.
"Jummy am very sorry. We live under the same roof and we ought to behave like brother and sister and not like lovers. And you know i have my heart with Nike." he explained.
"Okay." Jummy said and left his room carrying the bowl and the towel.

--to be continued--

D.Ella.luv:
Make e no b kofo o,i dnt wana bliv she's bn feedn u lies

me too o

Guys am sorry i have been unable to reply your comments, its not my fault. Let me start typing now it seems the network is balanced nw.

amak12: that nice story i love it but pls updata pls

the network has been giving me trouble but i won't give up.

Within the space of 24hrs, i have typed like five times only for me to submit and loose evriting all in the name of network.
To be candid, i am fed up with the whole network ish. But to satisfy you guys, i'll kip on trying.
#Typing my second update within one hour#

Mr T.Dan i am here to congratulate you on your success in hitting the frontpage. I am here with two personalities.
1. As a writer: i congratulate you for a job well done in writing stories that teach us lessons. Your participation on this thread is well appreciated.
2. As a reader: you kept me entertained with your stories and i pray i'll one day become a writer like you.
Once again felicitation boss.

KingzPen: I'm still under ma Boss o, D9ty7... That's y am always hiding here...

Am bowing down apologising to the king. How will a whole king call me the boss. Am i not in a crious trouble?

LogoDWhiz: Lol.. @Mr Chairman I will try my best to discharge my duties to the best of my ability... So help me Lord...

Amen!!

My boss Mr Adeg pasted the link to this story and immediately i saw it i came around to feed my eyes. Hpe i won't be disappointed sha?
Btw a great job by you.

LogoDWhiz: wait o.. Before I resume work.. I will like yo know my duties.. And I promise to diligently carry them out..

1. You need to understand the story perfectly so when pple ask questions about it. You give them answers.
2. Comment on my behalf if after two hours, i am yet to reply or quote.
3. Mark the roll call or register everyday.
4. Help me get babes on this thread. I'll want Queen xster. Lol
5. Receive vips(writers and frequent commentors) with respect on the thread.
Hope this things are not too much. Btw am not trying to be rude. All these are just a way to catch fun.