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@Stef, so you knew about the round leather game?

It is with happiness i announce to you that the secretary on this thread is LogoDWhiz.
Assumption of office with immediate alacrity.
¤¤Other vacant posts are;
1. Publicist
2. Bouncers
3. Peace making committee.
Hpe to see applicants vewi soon.

KingzPen: I dey feel you walahi...

Na ur footstep i follow.

LogoDWhiz: Lol.. I'll accept it in good faith...

Really? Then lets make the announcement.

I sat down this afternoon and got an inspiration of a new story to write. Already i have one which has been completed(it involves the travail of a girl who has numerous health issues). But this new one is a crime story. It will be a long story which will start next year.
Ur opinion is needed, which do you want first?
Pls give me your replies asap.

LogoDWhiz: it seems u skipped some updates...
-He was beaten for slapping a girl(Jummy) in public. That's not an attribute of a responsible guy..

Thanks for answering the question on ma behalf. Just like a secretary does. Just kidding

--continuation--
¤¤dedicated to my new readers Shegzi & Speeder¤¤
Segun held his cheeks as he stared at his mother with a look of disbelief.
Its been a while his mother beat him last.
"You father never for once laid his hands on me. So where did you get that trait of yours?" she asked as she moved towards him.
He retreated and moved towards the dining area. Just then the door to the living room opened and Mr Akinola walked in.
"Welcome dad." Mary and Jummy greeted in unison.
"How are you girls?" he asked.
"Fine sir." the chorused.
"Welcome hon." His wife greeted.
"Yeah, thanks dear." he replied.
He looked at Segun angrily.
"Are you dumb? Or don't you know how to greet?" He asked as he walked towards his son.
"He has grown wings, he now has the ability to beat a woman in public." His mother cuts in.
"Who did he beat?" his father asked as he looked at Jummy. Then he concluded she was the victim.
"Were you the one?" Mr Akinola asked facing Jummy.
"Yes. But its not in the public. We were....." she was saying.
"Hold it there." mrs Akinola cut her short.
"But where did you go and what made him slap you?"Mr Akinola asked.
"We were in a wedding ceremony, then i mistakenly spilled a drink on his shirt." Jummy explained.
"The ceremony i gave you two the money to buy the cloth?" Mr Akinola asked.
"Yes sir." Jummy replied.
"Segun is that true?" His father asked him.
He kept quiet and looked down at his feet.
"Go and wait for me in my room." his father commanded.
He walked out of the living room and headed for his father's room.
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Segun came out of his father's room with marks on his body. He was beaten like a thief. It took the intervention of his mother when the sound of his beating became unbearable for her, before he was released.
He walked to his room in pains. He got inside removed his shirt and looked at himself in the mirror.
"Beaten like a gladiator." he said and smiled.
There was a knock on his door. He pretended like he didn't hear. The person at the door made the knock more persistent.
The door opened gently and Jummy walked in.

--to be continued--

##t¥ping## with cheetah's speed.

Ur last update got me wondering as to the relationship between Banji and Joseph. U too dey drem!
I guess sey Joseph for inside bible na ur ancestral father.
Just laughing ma ass out.
Kingzpen u're dah best.

dele-paul:
*sees Queen xtar with lacasera* grabs it 4rm her*..Make i use dis 1 compensate myself

@Queen xtar..Don't cry, i will get u cabin buscuit and iced water

Ogbeni u beta return the lacasera back to Queen nw or neva.
Don't you knw she is feeling sumhw, and i gave her d lacasera so she'll be ok. Return it o.

Mr Rock come and update b4 u go work o because, if you no update ur oga go query you. Just joking.
But am begging you to update o.

Oga u're doing a very great job here. Kip it flowing.

Gud mawnin guys. Next update as said earlier is gonna be posted around 3pm.
And i promise you at least 2 updates.
Signed:
d9ty7

Sorry dear. Take today off, so you can rest. I dnt want you to breakdown o.

shegzi: Omo see gobe which kind segun be dis o. I different o

This one na version 2.0. Btw you got a dedication to yourself in the next update.

arolexwalex1: Hey, dearea, more ink in ur pen

Amen

blekko101: Pretty work you've got here. Keep it coming.

dammygoody: Move on Brother,nice update...........have a good night rest.

spactacus: more power to your elbow. keep it up

Thanks very much @ all.

speeder: I'm the kind of those who read and won't comment. I love books that talks about love. And urz caught me in the web. I shall try come a day with my own novel which I intend to use the "First Person Narrative. The name "Foot-Print."



nice one dude. I hope you dedicate the next one to my honour.

thanks 4 d compliment. Can't wait for foot-print to start.
Btw next update is dedicated to you.

Tuniks2: Segun too dey vex... Me I'm looking for a wife I won't mind if he dash me Jummy

make i give you jummy's number. At your own risk ni o.

adegwurulez: in as much as i appreciate your advice, i dont think you should tell him what to write. I believe he already has an idea of how the end would look like so if he decides to change the storyline to suit what you pointed out, it might not really pass his message. Btw d9ty7, u r doing a great job

thanks

heywhy.kum:
I'm endorsing this for thr front page....
www.nairaland.com/1447941/total-love

seconded

--continuation--
"Oh my God! Are you mad?" Segun asked angrily.
"Aw! Am very sorry dear." Jummy stood up and tried cleaning the mess.
"Take you hands off me." Segun yelled and walked out of the hall.
Other guests were looking at the student's table with keen intrest.
"You better go and apologise to him." Odunayo advised.
"No don't go yet, let him calm down first." Titi advised.
Jummy left the hall and went in the direction where Segun headed to.
She saw him leaning on the water tank base. She walked towards him fidgeting.
"Baby please am sorry." jummy said.
Segun kept mute without looking her at all. He concentrated on whatever he was doing on his phone.
"Segun, it is you am talking to." Jummy said trying to win his attention by touching him.
He responded her with a thunderous slap.
"How dare you slap me." she said holding her cheeks as tears rolled down.
Segun looked at his hands to confirm maybe it was the one he used in slapping her. Yeah it was.
Segun looked at her with an apologetic face but couldn't apologise because of his pride.
Jummy walked out on him and went back to the hall to pick her purse and phone. Then she left for home.
Segun cleaned his cloth with water. Even though the stains were not completely removed, the stains were reduced that you wouldn't notice unless you move closer.
Segun walked back into the hall bade everyone goodbye, left without answering any of their questions about why Jummy came out crying, if they had settled it to mention a few.
Segun left the wedding reception and went home.
He entered the house and saw his mother reading a newspaper in the living room.
"Goodday mum." he greeted and waited for no reply before walking to his room.
"Come back here." his mother shouted. At once he knew he was in trouble.
Jummy and Mary came outside with tears in Jummy's eyes which means she had been crying and Mary had been consoling her.
"Why did you beat her in public?" his mother asked.
He kept mute and looked at the angry faces before him.
"Are you a bastard? Did you ever heard that you father laid his hands on a woman?" she asked.
"Am not a bastard. She spilled......" he was saying before he was paid in his own coin by his mother when a more thunderous slap landed on his face.

--to be continued--

Hello dearest readers.
I apologise to you all for not updating today. As i said yesterday, my subscription finished. I subscribed an hour ago. Btw i had a very hectic day today, so am very tired and i promise to update 2mao around 3pm.
A miracle could happen tonight that will make me update tonight.
Signed:
d9ty7

My Queen i knw u must be mad at me for not greeting u concerning ur fp sucess. I just subscribed my phone now even tho i saw the story on fp.
But wait o did you say am your publicist? Dats nice to hear.
Congrats dear.
Signed:
d9ty7(Queen's Publicist)

Holuwahvicky: jummy mst av tld shegzy's mom dt he gets beaten by nike's ex-bf

Boss thanks for the observation. But as per Jummy clinging to Segun, there was a flashback at the end of part 1 where the reason for Jummy's acceptance was revealed.
Thanks tho!

Yemxy005: Wow!...i don kom show face again..........i don miss oooooo.....whr i go sit down¿

Cme sit beside Queenxstar

buoye1: 1st of all we are on FP....we stated from page 1 uptill now.......Now to my oga D9ty7 dis guys r still in secondary schln but I wonder y u r making their r/shp so so matured......there should b some silly things to make us know they r teenagers

Noted

--continuation--
They both turned their heads to see who the intruder was.
Alas! It was their mother.
"You must go to that wedding together." she stressed.
"But why?" segun asked.
"Who invited you?" she asked.
"A classmate." Jummy cuts in sharply.
"Since its a classmate of yours, and you two are familiar with him/her. I guess, its more proper if you go together." Mrs Akinola said with a tone of finality.
"But mum......" Segun was saying before his mother cut him short.
"My daughter please go and dress up jare and stop looking at me that way." Mrs Akinola said.
Segun seeing that he had been defeated walked dejectedly back to his room in order to wait for Jummy.
Jummy re-emerged twenty minutes later dressed in a native attire the same as Segun's.
"That's my beautiful daughter." Mrs Akinola complimented.
"Thanks mum." Jummy said.
Segun walked out on hearing voice to check if Jummy was set. He stopped in his track and could not help but to admire the beauty before him. He was carried away to the extent that he didn't know when he whistled out in pleasure.
"Won't you compliment her looks?" Mrs Akinola asked facing Segun.
"She's not dressed to impress me." Segun replied and headed for the door.
Jummy and his mother giggled and Jummy ran after Segun.
They both walked to the bus/stop where they'll board a cab to the wedding reception(brights comprehensive college hall).
Ten minutes later they were at the entrance and they need to be walked in by a guest who was already in. Segun brought out his phone and dialled Wilsons number. He requested him to come walk them in.
Wilson came and walked them in.
"But i thought you said you won't buy the cloth?" Jummy asked after exchanging pleasantries with Wilson.
"Yes, but my mum gave me the money to buy some yards for myself." he replied.
They all walked to a table where members of the class were seated. They exchanged pleasantries and complimented their looks.
Bunmi came and greeted them.
"Do you guys care for more foods and drinks?" she asked.
"Yes." Chioma said.
"Igbo people too like food." Segun said as everyone at their table bursted into laughter.
It was during the course of their laughter that Jummy mistakenly hit the table and a bottle of juice spilled over and it poured on Segun's cloth.

--to be continued--

##typing## the last update for the day. Since my subscription has finished but anyways miracle fit happen o.

Coolval22.com:
Nice story! *Following/

My boss, you are here. When is betrayal, life as a corper and sister mary commencing. I've read crush and it was great. Long live val.

Hey guys, i just typed an update now and the moment i submitted i couldn't find it again.
I don't know when to update again cos as i dey talk to you my MB don finish.

I dey enjoy u jare, waiting patiently for the next update. Btw, Taiwo is a learner for walking out on Fave. Anyways, fave's got her I.D card. She'll pay for her rudeness.

KingzPen: Congratulations Boss... More Vaseline To Your Elbow...

Thanks oga.