Even B4 it started. . The Battle is a Draw! Oya Round 2!

tosinaded@:

its your boi

Roger That Bros. Na u b bros 0!

funkybaby:

@freestyle

not bad.

some lines were not too clear.
rhymes. . . . rather weak.

overall: 5 outta 10.

Thanks Ma. . . Bt can u plz give examples of weak Rhymes n how i cud improve on them, that's the purpose of the thread. Thanks once again.

swaggapee:

wow, that would be cool bro , did u rap on the 9ice ''talk i am listening'' beat? i will be eagerly waiting for this

won beri remix.-6/10 keep going bro .we support u

Thanks bro. Glad to know i got your support. Deuces!

'Gbe ra ga'? U na Urhobo boy?
I'm not 2 good on Topicals 0! But i'll try sha, Next up is Lost Bars (Talk, I'm Listening Freestyle), then after that i'm gon try my hands on Love Matters or Politics or Tribute or Sumtin else. Just expect greatness n Support me n my Music. Bless

Djswaggz:

Guy nice one but still love the other one more 

and whatz dat rhyme about fail for?

You guyz don't get it?
" I'm a Failure, I Failed, I Failed/
I'm A Failure only coz I failed to Fail"

I hpe u get it now. . . . i cudnt possibly write myself off as a failure naa. Thanks for the comment sha.

semid4lyfe:

I saw this thread immediately it was posted and it's sad no one has posted a comment since then. Ok, make I pity u drop comment

Hmmm. . .I didn't particularly feel the reggae-esque intro but I liked the main chorus & the rap. The lyrical content, rhymes and play on words were okay too. This was nice IMO:

_{I'm so fly the sun is my neighbour
And that's why my bars turn your flow into vapour}

I get the above part. . .it means u're v.good/hot but in the same breadth you contradict this claim & refer to yourself as a failure (with emphasis)? WHY? or is there something I'm missing? ONE SHOULD NEVER SACRIFICE MAKING SENSE FOR RHYMING O. I also liked the way u likened your "imaginary opponent(s)" to a weakling(s) with the play on the words - cottage, yam, porridge, barn & storage. Powerful imagery u conjured in my mind there, and something I can definitely relate with. .Brilliant!

However, your "audibility" dropped a "wee" bit in comparison to flyer than the rest. ._{probably becos you didn't chew kolanut and lick enough tom-tom & vicks before hitting the studio to record this time} .

I also feel u didn't ride the beat as well as u did for "flyer than the rest" and this beat was easy enough to ride IMO. _{All u had to do was follow the rapping sequence on the "won beri" beat.}. You also need to watch your accent, breath control & stop dragging some words unnecessarily e.g me(eeee)anest, fi(iiiii)nest. I felt these words would've gone more with the beat without them being stretched out.

Make I SMS here & leave my remaining comments to the scorecard. I'll give this a 5.5/10 and upgrade "flyer than the rest" to 6.5 (after listening to it repeatedly in the past week).

Enough room still dey for improvement.

Okay, i hope you don get the "Failure" thing now
As for the Voice drop and Delivery drop. . . I dont want to sound like am making up excuses, (because there is room for improvement) but it's probably because the work was rushed. We the whole song in less than 90minutes. but thanks for the comment. tthanks

bgees:

So many 'Nas fans' . But how many of una dey buy the guy album?

Ask them ooooooooooooo. na mouth fan dem be, to buy album, USSAI

Ahn Ahn, Nairalanders, no comment since, abi una no dey feel am?

Download my new freestyle here. http:///fZRzi . Thanks

Like a few peeps know, Ur boy's working on a Mixtape which should be out sumtime in November this year. I posted a track of the Mixtape last week, n it peeps round here kinda liked it.
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-525776.0.html
Thanks to Everybody who commented on it. . . . Ur boy's Loyal.
Here's the Link to A Freestyle on Knighthouse's Finest(Won Beri) Beat.
http:///fZRzi
Download, listen, Review, Comment and Criticize. Support your Boy. And like i always say, Y'all shoulp Help me Improve. Thanks
http:///fZRzi

Genuflect:

I'll seed that broad fast fast. Ain't no letting her go

Badt Guys!!

AqRiUs Age:

As the title says, post a clip and dedicate it (or parts/sections of it) to an NLer. Have fun!


This here, is dedicated to all my female NLers who can relate.

Jigsox Chwist!! See GBAGAUN!!!

Djswaggz:

Dude get me the instrumentals of this song! NICE ONE!!!! I only wish u left out the shout outs till the end. Awesome delivery on your verses and catchy hook. What more can I say?

I came, I saw and I conquered. . .
They came, They saw and went Bonkers

Glad U like it Bros. If u want a copy without the Shout out at the End i can provide it sha. Thanks.

kay_pumpin:

Is DBR Harry Okoh?

F9

Genuflect:

You guys are still on this shiiit? Where the fukk is 04kaa to stir up both parties?
Lemme see if I can impersonate him
LADIES AND GENTLEMEN. WE ARE ABOUT TO HAVING THE BIGGEST BATTLESHIP OF THE YEAR. DRAKE VS J. COLE!!!!!!!!
AS YOU ALL KNOWN, WE NAIRALANDERS LOVE CONTROLVERSEE. IT IS ALL FUN. AS THE EBORA METADILOGOJI AND THE CHIEF THIEF OF ENJOYMENT, I HAVE TO THRIVE TO MAKE THIS HAPPEN
DRAKE IS A FAYA SPITTER. DRAKE CAN SPIT HOUSE FAYA. HE IS A BOMBMAN. HE IS VERY HOT LIKE A FIRE
J. COLE IS NOT A FIRE. HE IS JUST 'COLE' LIKE A COLD WATER. JINADU COLE, YOU BETTER BE READY FOR DRIZZY DRAKE. YOU ARE NO MATCH FOR HIM. HE IS FAIYA DAN YOU,  YOU BETTER BACK OFF LIKE A BACK THAT IS OFF THE WALL. I HOPE YOU ARE SCARED OR ARE YOU SCARED? LMFAO. I KNOW YOU ARE SCARE. I'M EVEN SURE MY LIL' MISS EBORA STUDENT, DEELADY, RAP FASTER THAN YOU. YOU ARE A AMATEAR
OYA DRAKE, SHEBI YOU SEE THAT IVE WEEKEND HIM. OYA SPIT A WARNING SHOTGUN SO THAT JINADU COLE WILL KNOW YOU ARE A FAYA!! LET HIM KNOW WHAT YOU ARE MAKE OFF. WE ARE ALL WAITING PATIENT. Or you can send it OboLangido@gmail.com
Chai!! Americana Hip-Hop sweet o

ROFLMAO Razor, U na Idiot. . I Swear!!! E don finish 4 u if 04ka see dis 1.

Mobinga:

who be nickel 9 na?? Its Royce na. . But seriously they buried eminem

I saw DBR Call Royce dat one time like dat, na i cram am sharpaly so dat i fit use am take dey form 'hiphophead' na. , but na how SH take murder eminem for Session one? Flow abi Lyrics. Na only Royce wan try small but Eminem give am Warri Pattern, "kpatakpata na draw".

Mobinga:


I torrented bought their album and I must say they are the sickest group I've heard  . Four of them :: Crooked I, Joe Budden, Joell Ortiz and Royce da 5'9"
They are the only artistes to have murdered eminem on a track

They didn't Murder Eminem guy, only Nickel 9 Came close.

tosinaded@:

my crew is rugged, people wonder why am this[b](diss)[/b] nice(9ice)

I didn't mean it that way 0, bros . . . No let 9ice fans cum finish me like Mortal kombat 0!

tosinaded@:

my crew is rugged, people wonder why am this[b](diss)[/b] nice(9ice)

I didn't mean it that way 0, bros . . . No let 9ice fans cum finish me like Mortal kombat 0!

sledge406:

Na wa oo
So una still dey cry battle for hia.

eldee:

I think this is really sick . . . your voice accentuates your bars properly.
You mastered the delivery and all that.

And the hook of the song is catchy . . . .

This is one of those tracks you do and you know you've done a good job.
Looking forward to hearing more from you.

Thanks. . . I'll post a new freestyle on KnightHouse Finest Beat here 2moro, looking forward to seeing ur comments on it. Thanks again.

bjmighty:

Da-whizkid. . . . Nice one.

D.amn!! Mahn u got my respekt. . . I was expectin a negative comment from u coz we had a lil quarrel n u Called me an Almighty f.0ol on d 0ther thread but here u are commending my work. Thanks mahn.

@eldee
abeg enta here first. Thanks.
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-525776.0.html

da-whizkid:

Walai, all these NL Modey C.ock.Suc.kers na Bigger F.ools.

bjmighty:

And da-whizkid na the ALMIGHTY f.ool.

And this is a proof! Q.E.D

Walai, all these NL Modey C.ock.Suc.ker's na Bigger F.ools.

chimarra:

da whiz-kid, if no be say u beg make i comment e, i for still lock up. guy abeg i send u mail for facebook but u just shun your man. i sent it with my facebook name, SNIPIZLE, i go try send you another one,
abe make sure say you reply am o, ok na
GOD BLESS EVERY NAIRALANDER

Bros, i no c your msg 0. U sure say na me u send mesg give. Find me on facebook here www.facebook.com/JuztCourage or for twitter, follow @Juzt_Courage. Thanks.

mykali:

@da-whizkid

Nicely done, but i didn't feel the lyrics that much. but your delivery covered up for that.
6.8/10

That na grade B na. . . I no lyrics' not my strong point sha, bt i'm working on that. Thanks.

kashmo:

Just listened to No Love, funny [i]s[/i]hit towards the end

'RAT' ish. . .

una wan just die my thread like that? make una comment na,

mykali:

Please somedody should upload the zip on 4shared. Thx

long things

My faves are STar, PAy Attention, Rhymefest and 50bars of my Mind.
"And I'm UnderGround like Hades" - Modenine
My Personal rating 4/5Stars

Okay, now on Pay Attention(Testing Microphone), the Terry G sample is not too great, but the album is f.u.cking dope so far, My fave so far being "Star". Did Mode 9 just admit he is Broke?

Ok now downloading from sendspace, it's the first Modo material i'm downloading, it better not be wack 000000000.

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Introducing Taiya Soul? ? ? ? Huh? ? ? Smh