Djswaggz:

Dude. . . I've been off nairaland for a while but thanks for bringing me back by bringing this song to my notice via twitter. Na so I for miss out sha!!!

Never doubted your rhyming power sha just needed some clarity in that voice which you brought to fore on this track but still u need some consistency on it.

Go harder dude!!! Listen to yourself mayn and nothing would stop you.

This is entering my rotation sharply

. . .Flier than the rest of 'em

OK!! ''I'm done swimming in the sea of ma own tears. . . I'm out d shore.''

I FEEL YOU SO I SAY YEAH!!!!!

U just made me smile mahn. . . The points u made are noted. . . I really really appreciate mahn, U 3 Much. Thanks.

jamez3d:

^^^ ofoka u talk sense oh! But i think its cos of d monopoly ish

Monopoly? ? ? Nah. . . It's because of their followership mahn. The same reason i'd post a song here and not on naijapals. Their other Promotional websites na. . 360nobs, Nigerianhiphop, Jaguda e.t.c, it's just dat dey don't have as much followers as notjustok.

kkizzel:

its your boy k kizzel frm kd ,we feelin u die ,keep em comming

Wooah. . . So I don enta KD? damn. I 'preci8 bro.

DBR:

Courage da-whizkid, clap for urself. .weldone! *in M.i"s voice*

Keep grindin' boii. .u can only get better.
Good lookin'

oNe

Yaaay, i wan go climb nepa pole go dance disco. Lol . . . Thanks 4 Checking it out, bros. I really 'preciate.
oNe

Incase You like the Chorus. . . Download/Listen to edtunez joint, your boi also did a coupla bars in it 2. It's a cover of Nicki Minaj's Your love. U can also Criticize and Give opinion on how he can Improve himself. He's viewing the Thread. Thanks Y'all. This is the link to the Song! http://mp3skull.com/mp3/edtunez_ur_luv.html
Note: The joint was his first recording Ever!

Ibime:

^^^Sup bros. I woke up with serious flu this morning so I've been lying in bed all day. I just reach living room to listen to the track now now and I think its the best so far. I wasn't a great fan of the previous ones na im make I been comment my reserve.

Altogether the track was good, the lyrics were clear, you didn't stretch the intonation like the previous ones, and nuccas could relate to the introspective nature of the lyrics. . .and nice chorus as well from your friend.

Get well Soon bros. . . . Thanks 4 checking out on the Joint.

04kaa:

i am here my blood, i went to bahamas this weekend for my honeymoon with ileke idi, i am back now and i am downloading.
i will be back wit my comments, observations and criticisms. keep it going fam. ! start working on the next track immediately ,
u know i will keep pushing u until u blow up big time.! thats what ebora is about ., success and eventual blow up!

I 'preci8 Bros! Waiting for ur criticism bros!

Where d eff is o4ka? Where u dey bros?

jamez3d:

I gbadun the track sha! Nice stuff. . I love the way you crafted the story sha. . Make sense, this one and won beri freestyle are my best two. . Keep it up

No let semid4life hear you o, Thanks mehn.

Ibis, plz see this
https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-581732.0.html

All those MI 2bars diss no fit work for KH 0. Kelly took dis round, hands down imo.

tosinaded@:

gay alert

Hahahahaha Tosin u are mahd! Btw, i don't want no problem with Rapjunkie 0. . . Hehehe

semid4lyfe:

Question - Shey na (your) true life story?


I love these opening lines. . . .very smooth flow, properly arranged sequence of the story/plot and it set a direction for the song early on. As in person go know se na grass to grace story sharp sharp Good story telling, Brilliant and thumbs up!

All in all, the rapping was better than okay, it had a good rhyming sequence, decent play on words woven around some concepts [(i.e relating the street to the company and how you're Micheal Scoffield fighting against all odds to get scylla and survive (make it)], well crafted story, chorus blended, in sync and was in line with the rap lyrics.

I have problems with the production though. . .it could have been better. Still it's your best effort IMO and definitely flyer than the rest of 'em.

I'll put my remaining comments in the scorecard - 7.5/10

Semid4life. . . . U'll definitely get a shout out in my mixtape!
Thanks mahn. . . 'preciate ur analysis. And 4 the question U ask, Yes 0, it's a true life story 0. . . My true life Story!

dj sean:

hommie, it's ya boy holdin' ish down for you, @djaysean

I see You bros. . . . Like Intensive Care Unit

rapjunkie:

its cool. check your flow on  the rhyming scheme  on 3rd verse which ends something like ' only u can break it through'

i think you should use these types of changes in the inflection in your voice on a more regular basis in your rhymes. Up  and down in places to add more emphasis in parts and also to break it up to make it sound more interesting for repeatability value.

my 50 kobo

Thanks Bros. . . Points Noted!

eldee:

I am El and I co-sign this message.

I was kinda hoping for an eldee's review sha. . . . Especially one filled with Negativity. . It's all Good tho.


How come Nobody is say anything bout the hook. . (My homey @Edtunez did the hook) and the Beat.

dj sean:

hommie, it's ya boy holdin' ish down for you, @djaysean

I see You bros. . . . Like Intensive Care Unit

rapjunkie:

its cool. check your flow on  the rhyming scheme  on 3rd verse which ends something like ' only u can break it through'

i think you should use these types of changes in the inflection in your voice on a more regular basis in your rhymes. Up  and down in places to add more emphasis in parts and also to break it up to make it sound more interesting for repeatability value.

my 50 kobo

Thanks Bros. . . Points Noted!

eldee:

I am El and I co-sign this message.

I was kinda hoping for an eldee's review sha. . . . Especially one filled with Negativity. . It's all Good tho.


How come Nobody is say anything bout the hook. . (My homey @Edtunez did the hook) and the Beat.

Okay, Once again it's Your boy Juzt Courage. I recorded this Yesterday and as usual, I uploaded it for Every one of You to Download and Listen and Criticize and Rate. Pls, i would like Y'all to tell me what u feel it Good about the Song as well as what's BAD about it. Pls don't Mince words, Remember the essence of this thread is to help me IMPROVE! Thanks.
This is the link http://www.4shared.com/audio/eMwiVP9u/Better_Day_feat_Edtunez.html and this for mobile users http://mp3skull.com/mp3/better_day_edtunez.html Thanks!

Scorching HOT!!!!!!!

he’s still a prime suspect in the eyes of many people who’re witnessing the drama . . . plus, why didn’t he ‘clear the air’ over him sleeping with his dancers?? He’s still ‘that guy that shags his dancers’

Ruggedman Shag Dancers? ? ? ? Perhaps/
But him na single man na, u try do am 2 but your Marriage Collapse
- Chinaydu - The beef goes On!

DBR:

clown
U use to think im objective? Now i proved u wrong, and so u'v com to a conclusion that im nnot always objective? lmao. .too bad,
cos u only proved urself wrong, i tot u pay attention, but your comprehension skill needs work, so i'l pardon u.
Apparently u didnt read the fadabasi points i responnded to.
If u wanna quote me do so, stop hookin a cart of dung to ma train of thot and remixing wat i said.
There are 2songz talked about, CRY and BADMAN, y u leave d other one out?. .Howeva pause to think, if the chorus of those two
songs was wat made them A LITTLE LISTENABLE. .will it be right to say his other songs witout Nnena and A1 is not not listenable? . .yea?
yet he's got the award 5times in a roll. . So na d hook, make am get LYRICIST award for BADMAN??
Guys, think naauu, u shud learn to resist d adrenaline rush to pounce on your keyboard, only to realise u didnt allow intelligent fluid supply b4 u typed.Ok sir. .
kinda sound like u been waitin to do this for soooo long. .
If u hav asked urself y, and u hav an answer pls tell me. Different pple hv different reasons, tell me urs.
1st i go like hear this remixe[b]s[/b] cos i kno of just one. so i dunno watchu mean by MOST.
Also, its a 50/50 chance that remixes retain d hook or not. Its not d 1st, wont be d last.
So i fail to see your point here, sorry.errrmmmmm . .im as confused as u r now, re-reading what u posted here. Hook and beat not ORIGINALY his? im lost, pls find
me and clarify, thank u.
U alredi said arguably? Its your opinnion. Need i argue again? i think not. When i heard the skit, i didnt chuckle, i LOL!
I neva said it aint funny, and thats not even the issue here. Boy. .read up and stop spewin insolence here.
Ma point on the 1st thread it was talked about was : if y'all say its SOLEY a jab at M9, it doesnt make sense.
Cos Mode got a passport (dude is in Uk dishing ou project, na Camel back e ride go? )
M9 didnt wear shinnin suit on his ALBUM COVER.
He has a car, ann Infinity. .honestly Whiz, i dont kno y u even stretchin this. .im disappointed.

Since u urself say u tell am-RM that tha b[i]i[/i]!tch move was AWFUL and u be 'imperfect analyst'. .
wat did u profer b4 calling his move awful??

All that said:
This are ma points that u didnt get so i'l ask u as questions:
Accordin to @fadabasi who i responded to,

1-Do u think it was Nnena's hook that made CRY win an award, as against wat i said that its d story poetically told by M9
and its societal relevance?

2-In the thread that discussed BADMAN, the HOOK got less mention than the BEAT, some LYRICS, and m9 FLOW ,VOICE, and RYHME SCHEME.
PS: evidence dey o, so be careful and choose your words carefully

These were ma objective points. . So Oga da-whiz kid, lets see how much of your name u really IS sayin i wasnt objetive!

oNe

And Bros is going 'eldee' on me. . . . Throw subliminals at me all i know is that Tosinadeda listened to Badman because of the hook and beat. . . C'est fini.

And i ask one simple question. . . "if u think RM leaking of that priv8 convo is bit.c.hy and awful like it's really is, What 'better' way can u profer to him to clear the rumor?", and instead of u to answer, u paraphrased the question and threw it back at me. . . Like a proper Nigerian. That's enuff fact to prove u've got no concrete answer to dat. . Yes, NO

Btw, how many Modenine song(s) don get reach 4 remixes? Mode9 himself remix the song. . Mo Eazy remix badman. . One PH boy like dat remix am, and i've heard of 3 remixes wey i never play. So i believe say Badman na one of mode9 Most remixed songs. . . #JustSaying

DBR:

@da-whizkid, I read all your stuff. .and I laffed. .just seein this, so will respond tmoro, even tho I think this issue is unnecessarily overflogged, but u asked question, and I'l give u answers.

oNe

Kpam!! Bros need a day to take tackle my question!! Damn. . . Na be say d questions hard pass JAMB oh. . . Coz na 2-3hours na dem tey dey answer jamb question kpa kpa. .

tosinaded@:

beeef? sauce na my homie!
am burnt that his album didnt move units

He didn't put in enuff work jor!

slimshay:

Stand in as how. Didn't initially get the first point.

I argued against it on the other threads cos of the songs it was up against. Sample and Somebody wants to die.

But if you think Badman is lyrically weak and M9's first commercial song then I will leave you to DBR. ;-)

U don't get it ryt? DBR argued that people listened to Badman coz of the Lyricism and not the coz of the Beat and Hook. . . I say it's the other way round, and i gave facts to support my stance. . Hope u got it now?

slimshay:

Ha Whiz, I get that point now. On the contrary people have always scoffed at M9 lyricist on the roll. They just think its Ayo, tryna satisfy his friendship.

That said, I too didn't support badman for the award that year.

slimshay, i tot u wanted to stand in for DBR, bt u didn't answer d questions i asked. . . U just sounded funny. . .

@DBR,
Bros, i'm sure u knw the level of respect i have 4 U. . . I used to think u r objective in ur analysis bt U proved me wrong a couple of pages ago. Mode 9's 'out of the world' Punchlines/Metaphors/Rhyme patterns made Badman 'Listenable'?. . . I just gives sum facts to prove u wrong, u can argue all u want later sha
1. Badman was the only Modenine song that won Lyricist on the Roll and MOST people think it didn't deserve it. . . Ask urself Y.
2. Badman is Mode9 MOST remixed song. . . And ALL of the Remixes got the hook in 'em. . . Ask urself Y.
3. Badman one of the few(if not the only ) mode9 songs that the Beat and Hook wasn't originally his. . . Ask urself Y.
4. Badman is arguably Mode9 first COMMERCIAL song, Yes, no? . . . Ask urself Y!

As per the skit. . . If u listen to that skit and u didn't at least chuckle. . .mehn, U've lost ur sense of humor. Great skit no doubt.

As per Rugged/9ice issue. . . E'erbody knws leaking a Priv8 convo on the internet is AWFUL(I even told him dat), but can u 'perfect analysts' profer a better way of clearing the air off the rumor plz? ? ? And plz don't give me that 'he shudda juzt kept quiet crap'. . . Coz if it Were YOU, u wudn't have kept quiet.

Btw, Tosin, u dey fall my hand!

@DBR,
Bros, i'm sure u knw the level of respect i have 4 U. . . I used to think u r objective in ur analysis bt U proved me wrong a couple of pages ago. Mode 9's 'out of the world' Punchlines/Metaphors/Rhyme patterns made Badman 'Listenable'?. . . I just gives sum facts to prove u wrong, u can argue all u want later sha
1. Badman was the only Modenine song that won Lyricist on the Roll and MOST people think it didn't deserve it. . . Ask urself Y.
2. Badman is Mode9 MOST remixed song. . . And ALL of the Remixes got the hook in 'em. . . Ask urself Y.
3. Badman one of the few(if not the only ) mode9 songs that the Beat and Hook wasn't originally his. . . Ask urself Y.
4. Badman is arguably Mode9 first COMMERCIAL song, Yes, no? . . . Ask urself Y!

As per the skit. . . If u listen to that skit and u didn't at least chuckle. . .mehn, U've lost ur sense of humor. Great skit no doubt.

As per Rugged/9ice issue. . . E'erbody knws leaking a Priv8 convo on the internet is AWFUL(I even told him dat), but can u 'perfect analysts' profer a better way of clearing the air off the rumor plz? ? ? And plz don't give me that 'he shudda juzt kept quiet crap'. . . Coz if it Were YOU, u wudn't have kept quiet.

Btw, Tosin, u dey fall my hand!

eldee:

Number 2 . . . 'Mo lenu bi . . .' is up on Page one.

Here's the direct link. . . thanks for the sustained anticipation guys.

https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-577434.0.html#msg7448041

@juzt_corage, DBR and Basildon

Thanks guys, this was an audition-ish thingy for a site . . . I'll put in your comments when I send it in.

And @He_is_El just murdered my Name. . .

Nobody Does it Better. . . . Bros Eldee, I hail!

Can sum1 give me a link to like 3 or 4 songs off the mixtape pls? Including Rap Justice. . . . Let me see what the hype's about.

rapjunkie:

ok

@da whizkid

I beg, no vex. . .we go still do other mixtapes.


@tosin

The NL mixtape needs to be organised by an iron hand to get it through to completion.  The problem is that people will want their substandard, badly produced, badly rapped tracks included. Under the watchful eye of Rapjunkie, this will never happen.

So, for this to work, I need to be at the helm of affairs. The  RCJ has learnt it lessons and is prepared to offer a more transparent approach for the inclusion of tracks to the final list.   

I am happy to work with elrazur as long as he is objective. I am sure he will want one of his own tracks included.

@ eldee

k16 no fit enter this mixtape.

Bros, No Worry. My 'Poorly Produced, recorded and Rapped' Song(s) no fit ever make 'Your' Mixtape. . . Ever! Thanks.

Ibime:

Nice one, Nice one. . .Ill download it when on ma PC later. . .

Also, make una coolu temper. Every DJ has the right to put whatever the hell he wants on his mixtape. If you don't like it, don't download. Rapjunkie owns the "NL mixtape of the year" brand just like Eldee owns "Warcraft" brand and Skillz owns "Wrap up". Make una create una own brand jor!!!

If anyones putting an NL mixtape together, holla me make I enter studio proper. At least make man submit something thats properly produced for once.

If na dis excuse e dey give since e 4 make sense, no be to they say i dey whine. How many promo the mixtape wan give me sef? My song the atleast 3blogs and even tosinadeda 4shared folder. . . If u knw waaaah mean.
I juzt felt like he shud do things the right way. If the votes didn't count, y did he ask 4 votes, and if it a Nairaland Mixtape, nairalanders opinion shud count. But as na 'Rapjunkie' Mixtape. . . I understand. C' est fini.