Plz who will help me review my SOP? Thanks for everyone that has been of great assistance to me. God bless you all.

If the way people are so kind and helpful is the same way everyone in Nigeria behaves, I tell you, no one will like to travel out but just for vacation. I found out that almost everyone here tries to assist in one way or the other not minding whether his or hers has been approved. GOD PLEASE GRANT EVERYONE THEIR HEART DESIRE. LET YOUR MERCY SPEAK FOR US. THANKS BELOVED BROS AND SIS.

lummy11:
Good morning house
This is my second application submitted last week Thursday paper route got medical request Nov 22.Just a week after submission

Trying to send you a message but not going thru. Could you plz contact me with this no zero nine zero two two two two one nine three five.
Tnx

lummy11:
Good morning house
This is my second application submitted last week Thursday paper route got medical request Nov 22.Just a week after submission

Was your first application paper route. I did paper route before was denied but contemplating of taking online route but someone said i should still take paper route. Confused.

Tnx dear.

How do you PM someone here apart from sending this athomatic message?

Tnx

The sources of fund for your 2yrsprogram u stated, was it in your SOP u stated that?

How did you provide a detail analysis of your fund on excel b4 transfer to msword?

Can one tick yes in his CIC form that he has written ielts even though it has expired?







Long post alert!!!!! (Family application)
I am eternally grateful to God for this Testimony. When I wrote that Jesus did it I meant every word.



I am Goingforward.!!!! Forward only.



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Paper app also includes UCI. I saw one it has UCI and it's paper app.



Can I order for gcms note without UCI (unique client identifier)?
The person went through paper route and UCI wasn't included in the application only student number.
Please someone should help me with this[/quote]

You are nice.




Hello Adedayo, sorry to hear you're unable to access your inbox messages. Nevertheless, I'll post my reviews here.

Having gone through your SOP, I have the following to say:

1-) Your passion for your proposed program was extensively expressed and the manner in which you linked your current job role and past experiences with your intended program is great.

2-) Why the program in broadcast journalism is too lengthy. Please reduce it as it can bore the visa officer. It should be concise and focus on a few key points.

3-) The sub-heading where you discussed about WHY CANADA NOT NIGERIA was well substantiated and convincing.

4-) Your reasons for coming back is not so strong. More practical and logical reasons should be highlighted and not surface reasons which you gave. There was this particular area where you mentioned about your NYSC and how you deployed just to stay close to your family is not relevant and I have scrapped it off. Talk more about your parents properties which you're traditionally heir to as you did and must return home after studies to continue managing, discuss about the obligations and responsibilities which falls on you as the only son and why you will be coming back to continue discharging your duties and can't abandon them for a foreign education, your family business (if any), your career prospects in Nigeria etc... All these mentioned can be your unwavering commitments back home.

5-) In every SOP, you are expected to talk about your finances, who is your sponsor? Who will be responsible for your expenses while studying in Canada should also be explained.

6-) You also did not make reference to your school of choice in Canada, what facilities does the college in Canada offer that has interested you so much to further your postgraduate studies there and not in Nigerian higher institutions.

7-) Finally, I found so many errors (Which includes punctuations, and spellings) while going through the letter and I have corrected them.

Do the needful and resend me the letter for final vetting.

Regards,
Frank[/quote]

Thank you so much dear. I really appreciate.



It expires in 3months from the day u got it so yes I believe u have to get a new one[/quote]

Must one leave the cash in the account for proof of fund for this 15weeks? So confused!

I AWAIT your reply sir. I sent you am email and no reply yet. Plz help. Tnx



I do not see why a new VO cannot approve application in 4 days. I have seen a new first time application approved in 2 days.[/quote]

Please do I still need another police character certificate for replication? Or I shouldn't bother since I used it in the first application although paper app.plz help.

Really?
Nawao!



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A simple google search will bring out your post secondary information.[/quote]

I think I believe this. My spirit keeps telling me that since the application has it's number definitely it will easily be assessed and be handled by the same person even though you take another route, I keep thinking that they might still refer you to the same person that handled it initially. My fear is just this online application that one has to upload and don't need to exceed their mb and print and attach some pages on study permit form.

Naijaforeigner:


You may be correct. There is a guy here called wheyme who was refused initially and applied almost immediately (like the following week) and got his approval for his second application within 4 days.

In wheyme’s case one can easily conclude it must have been the same VO who handled the first application that handled the second one again. There is no way a new VO would have approved his application in 4 days.

Thank you so much. My fear is actually how to upload all those documents of mine without exceeding their usual MB.

I really want to get help on how to reduce the size of documents when I scan in a cafe or can I scan with my phone using CAMSCANNER?

Tnx


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Both of you are correct!
There’s a higher propensity it could go back to the same VO if the application is going to the same consulate[/quote]

I really appreciate this. Thanks for helping out.

jnyuwa02:


Yes ooh! It doesn't go back to former VO. All VOs enjoy considerable latitude on making independent decisions on any application and can look why an application was denied before and whether the applicant has now met the prior objection.

Really? Hmm! Nawaoo!






Just a correction. If you were denied before and you apply again, the application usually goes to a different VO than originally made the first decision. In fact it makes sense for a reapplication not to go go back to a prior VO who made the first decision so as to keep the process fair, to give a new VO the ability to make a new decision on your case. For example those who applied last year know all applications were processed out of Ghana. Those that applied again this year know that all applications do not go to Ghana anymore and should not expect that their application will be reforwarded to Ghana again on reapplying. It will be London, Lagos or Kenya's bite on the proverbial apple.[/quote]

This is what I thought too. Tnx dear.

With the little I know about embassy and consular practice, your application will definitely go to the initial VO that handled if-the same visa office to know how far you have addressed his concern. If not satisfied, he will forward it to another VO for a fair and none biased review but if he is okay, he will just send you a medical request straight away. [/quote]

Thanks for your reply. I thought since I have been refused b4, I was wondering if they will still send my 2nd application to the initial ppl that reviewed it since my application no will be stated. So I thought it makes no difference of using a different route from the initial one I usedd(paper). I am afraid of uploading many papers since they said its only 4mb that's acceptable. So confused.

Hi all,
If you did paper application and got refused, is it better to apply via online now or to still repeat paper application? Must it be the same people that handled it initially that will handle it when you reapply or will be treated by different people?