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I saw a thread with this type of questions on Romance section by Naijaboiy and this it's cool. We can try it out here
Remember, it's all for fun


These are the questions



Name

Age

Occupation

Are you single, dating or married

Those u like on Lit. Section

Those u dislike on Lit. section

Those u find annoying

Those u can't help but read their posts(u look forward to what they have to say)

Those you follow and wish follows you back

Why do you follow the people you follow

NLer that has sent u the most PMs

How many PMs do you get on average in a day.

Litlander(s) that u ignore or try hard to avoid quoting

Which Litlander is fake.


Lit lander you can date or have a crush on

why did u choose him/her above?? (what attracted you to him/her)

Your favorite Litlander(s)

Your favorite mod

Funniest Litlander(s)

Litlander/NLer with the best threads

Litlander(s) diary you stalk

Litlander(s) you used to get along with, but don't anymore. Reason(s) why?

Which Nairalander(s) has a personality that suits/ quite similar to yours.

NLer(s) u would love to give a dirty slap to in real life

NLer(S) you keep as a friend offline or you've met in real life

NLer(S) you consider smart

NL member that tries too hard.

NLer(s) you find intriguing

What phrases, insults, styles have you learnt from another NLer

Which NLer(s) did u learn the above from

Who do u often disagree with on Literature Section
Litlander that you secretly wish you can both get to know each other.

Who do u often agree with

Stories you can read over and over again

Best Story Character

From Which Story


Tag:

I know of Sally Dazie who made 150k in a month

Preferably, rename chapter 1. Make it the prologue. With that, you won't have to make people wonder why you move from 3rd Person Omniscience to First person.



And I see you're jostling between past and present tense, despite your effort at making it the present tense. Watch it.

Let the trouble begin.

Please avoid quoting thoughts. You can either italicise it or insert comma between the thought and your narration e.g


What a lively lady, Rita thought and....


Also, as much as you can, avoid the continuous use of ' it was'. It takes the reader's mind away I.e the psychic distance would suddenly be wider. You need your readers to feel what she's feeling. In other words, make the sentence more compelling.
For example.

Upon turning, she saw the fire evangelist- Bro. Chris......

But I'm enjoying the story. I'm pitching my tent here.

I hope that wasn't the end. If, by chance, that was the end I'll find your house and make sure you continue o

I doff my heart sir

All these are for published writers.

kinah:
sally rocks

As in

Lemmy123:
Chai. . . See Divepen wey me dey fan like 'OX' dey talk like this. . . This is heartbreaking!

Meanwhile, it's really inspiring. It motivates me to continue with my plan. Many times, I would want to give in to the temptation of posting my on going works but I discover from time that I might just pause for a while too and would receive such comment as this. So, it's inspiring.

welcome to Nairaland

Lemmy123:
Chai. . . See Divepen wey me dey fan like 'OX' dey talk like this. . . This is heartbreaking!

Lol... I was talking about all the rants
Check the new message board. There are lot of posts on this recently and a lot of responses. I will just sound like a broken record. Even me sef hate autorepeat.

Sally is a diva.

Now a days.. I just like to read people's rant.. It's inspiring..

Next!! !

param Param Parammmmmm

Tension rising.

Janeyinspires:
Hey op,are you coming back to continue,cos I'm pitching my tent here for now.

Go home. Tie the rope and fold the tent home. The mission has been stopped for now. My trumpet will sound when it's time. And that time is January. But for now, go home merry and drink.

Janeyinspires:
Found nothing there,Divepen.Have you moved?

Yes. But I've frozen everything for now.

Now following

ceedarlin1:
Like seriously divepen you can't do this to we reader Pls just end it well please..

No fex.. The story will be fully ready in January. I'll make the full stories available by then.

kingphilip:
huh

What? is it your crushing?

it's not always advisable to give translation of words in the same passage.

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Afianma! Afianma! Nna why na. why na. What dho yhou want in ae man oo.

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meanwhile, this your ERM. 3rd person Omniscience POV is still flowing well, but it's risky- running from one person's thought to the other. I hope you stick to it without confusing us.

Angelsss:
lols
y I no go vex?
I complete all my stories. Those two this person mentioned was paused for a reason, I was going through something difficult.
The annoying part is coming to tell me you wouldn't follow my stories. Abeg o, I am not like other writers, I am me and I don't want any wahala. If you no wan read, then silently move on, don't act like some cry cry baby

For this.. You're my one-day crush.. lol