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shegs2009:
D action i am wait 4 is between Eric and dente...frm wat i have seen dente done, i don't tink he's a match. Even me can kiss a lady to sleep, abi essyprity no b so

we shall see about that.

donkross1:
See dz geh oo . Ello bae

hello donkross1, I see u're passing this way too? How has life been with u and the pretty Venessa? U remember,right?

Wey d guy?! We are waiting!

Good!

OP,when u said 'next weed' what do u mean?

ironkurtain:
Fellow Nairalanders there will be a slight delay in the update pls bear with me and sorry for the disappointment

Stop making these promises. Just put up an update when its ready n we are here.

U mean there has been an update here since Saturday and I no know? Nawa o! Oya next!

Wow!

Wow! Lets go there!

Observing.

LarrySun:
Please ma'am, always try to correct writers. Writing isn't an easy task. God bless you.

Oga Larrysun hw far now? I was misunderstood by d writer. Don't mind her shaa, she'll get over it.

Jonathan2787:
dont make this about me am the certain Jonathan shes referring to but check your comments and see if you actually merit an apology.

i want to hear from her. Can u please not meddle?

I really think Audrey should apologize to me for not keeping my comment between us. Y should she compare me with a certain Jonathan or anyother person. I thought we as her fans are friends too? To be frank I didn't intend for d former comment to be understood that way hence the later comment. Don't puncture this one too. Don't care about certain comments anyway.

AudreyTimms:
This looks like constructive criticism to you? U didn't get better after unfulfilled promises. That sentence alone killed my writing spirit. What's wrong in saying, 'Audrey, you're trying sha but you haven't gotten the descriptive part yet. Please work on it.' I really didn't expect you of all people to make an observation like that. I know my flaws, that was why i said i'm more of a story teller than a writer. After trying my best at descpition and trying to copy others, i had to tell myself the truth that my style of writing is different. I believe you read my reply to someone who praised my narration and i told her descrpition was what i was going to work on next.. So the online courses i took were for nothing? So i didn't improve in anything simply because i can't describe? Please put yourself in my shoes. Look at how Jonathan2787 put his own criticism and how i enjoyed replying him. You know i'm not a proud writer/story teller who doesn't listen to criticism. I took what he said and worked on it because of the way he said it. That said, thanks for the observation. I will work on it.

Secondly, a relative of mine was once a senator and another, a minister. Whatever i write about the senator and his family is from first-hand experience and that of friends who have experienced such too. I carry out researches before i start writing.

Lastly, it's a work of fiction with about twenty percent reality. So please bear with me. Thanks.

Well, let me continue reading. I didn't know I was supposed to sing ur praises at all times. Forgive. I hardly do read other people's comments so I do not know what dear Jonathan has written, I just put down mine.

To be frank Audrey, u are not doing justice to these characters and ur descriptions are still suffering. U didn't get better after unfulfilled promises. I don't know how to begin to point them out but am sure another person must hv noticed what am trying to get at. Unfulfilled promises is more compelling and smoother. Please u are over stressing on the wealth of d Ekwes making almost unbelievable. Make ur story more real except there's something am not used to.

Any refreshment here?!

blisscentre:
this story should end na

Yea. Why don't u write the concluding parts?

fretfingers:
Okiemute not Fejiro ma'am.

Tnx hon.

OMG! The Felix part is such a comic relief. Got me rolling on d ground in laughter. Wherever is the toe nail of a chick born blind going to be found? Now to think of d first poo of a frog!
Its me Essydiamond now Essyprity. I miss my friends from 'unfulfilled promises' especially ToriEmanson. Glad to hv u back. There are inadequacies but that's for another day.

Lets see.......Ebube tries to break a relationship but is unsuccessful as a result of d party involved(wole) Belinda fails to break Blossoms. Fejiro breaks Nat's halfway as they are together again. Nat breaks Ebube's own but we do not know how successful that one is. Hmmmmmmm! A bunch of home wreckers! Let me keep watching. I love d twists.

Hey Audrey! Hv misssssssssed uuuuuu! Now let me go and start reading#hurries to page 1#

Ossaifamous:
Nat sure was too hypocritical with her opinions but she has spoken the views of many folks here today

I concur!

Wow! Wow! Wow! Now Fantasy, ur conversations are super. Ur story has a perfect alignment. What a hot meeting.

ironkurtain:
Patience my fellow nairalanders......update coming tomorrow evening.

If I see update here tomorrow evening....hmmmmmm......... I go fear o!

Hmmmmm! Someone's coming for Isaac and Beatrice. This is not happily ever after o.

ironkurtain:
i just woke up ma sis.....going through the story to know where and how to continue.

Lol!

Am still waiting

Oga Solo shey ur sabbatical don reach? Safe journey jare!

What the h............!

Smiles. Will there be more? Will he meet aunty blessing again in the future?

I hope that's not all?

You are stuck to me like a tooth. I you pull out and its a pain and in your place none can grow.