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Yes o! As usual there were mistakes as u mixed up the three new characters in the unknown time. U are trying anyway.

Yes o! As usual there are mistakes as u mixed up the three new characters in the unknown time.

heemah:
Hello famz! Today is my day, donkross1 pls do the needful..

oh Heemah dear Happybirthday to u. But u see, d self acclaimed lazy writer may not be able to do much for u.

so we'll wait until next month for another episode?! Keep it coming though.

donkross1:
Hello to you too . Okay what can I say now.

1) The story is totally mine body n soul

2) I am not a professional writer ma'am, I am just an ordinary literature section Bartender so I really don't know when am writing wholeheartedly or half-heartedly.

3) This is practically my second story, I abandoned the first one half way due to my laziness. What I mean to tell you is that I am a very lazy writer and that might be the reason why you are not feeling that x-factor you are looking for.

4) If frank 3:16 wants the story, he should come and collect it (na joke oo bros frank317)

5) Thanks for the advice, I will try and get better.

Bless.

No wonder! Ur reasons are not good enough.Anyway get serious.

Donkross, u are telling ur story half-heartedly. Leaving unfinished ends. Is this story urs or u are telling it for a friend because u are hardly reaching its depths and I'm not exactly awed?. I didn't see where u said it's ur first story. U hv a good story line more like d kind of job Frank3:16 would do excellently well. Get better. Following!

ironkurtain:
Guys i am sorry i havent updated. Being quite sick and the winter got me under the weather. I will try my best to update soon. Have a good weekend

Just climb on top of d weather and get well soon.

Foolish girl dancing on a weak rope!

Skimpledawg:
U be Ryback??.... Calm down, miss fantasy is still cooking

I only made a request or was it my mind I said? Don't know any Rabacks.

shegs2009:
**leave his trousers ** na because of essy Ooo

Tnx dear. I like it when people say they did things bcuz of me

Why didnt Richard mention that Zeus put something in him that makes him irresistible to women? I don't get sometimes,I think everyone is possessing more powerful traits each new day. By the way d Angel person is almost useless as she is a never do well in ur story. There isn't anything good abt her so far. I like d twists anyway.

I want more!!!

shegs2009:
Wait wait o, did i just hear u say oder tins, wat is more after all dis butchery and fire blazing **hold oga iro trousers**guy u must state oder worst violence apart frm dis or u go nowhere

Bros abeg leave am. I just wan make im write as e don buy diet pill and d others. Btw women dey get mind these days o. U know say Nina don wake? Tighten ya seat belt cuz show don start.

shegs2009:
Iyalaya e irokuntain i fucking love u....just imagine d statement *It an open season for gus and his boys* dose anybody know d meaning of open season, leave dat one aside come check d part wey dem tel gus wey dey form boss say him day del wit sombodi mama, o boy see sweating naw...abeg iro put me 4 d tori i wan bcom badoo apprentice

Bros,u geh mind? U no say oga Eric no dey need hammer to bend iron? Abeg I wan be audience I no fit use my life do trial n error.

The hard Gus is about to pee on his pants lol! But I really wonder what Allen is up to. Ironkurtain I wasn't expecting an update. Kudos!

Eb's my problem.

Don't tell me u abandoned this beautifully enticing story for this long. Let one of ur new year resolutions be completing this story o!

Ironkurtain for Bloodline fantasyisland for Three paths

I have a feeling this is gonna be a really long story but I'm not complaining as I'm enjoying it. U writing is really mature.

I hv read ur story till d end and I must confess that I was moved to tears when at last Tobi's sister said she wud join d next available bus to asaba. I also love d part when Tobi turned back to hear Dimeji's explanation. You did a good job but I wud advise u get firmer with ur writings.

Pabon. Great piece u have here. I think u should make d updates a little more often so we don't lose interest easily. Merry Christmas

U really need to update like seriously. Do it now o! Lol guy this is good. Waiting for more tonight.

olashas:
Lolz. Silly.

The days of Joseph are long gone. Wole is going to act like a typical man. Do the deed and blame the devil afterwards. You'll see

My dear, there are still those men who take to heart the good words they hear. Joseph still stands as an example not to do the deed.
By the way,if Mrs reports Wole, the husband won't believe her seeing her cravings in d past 6months.
Fantasyisland na u biko!

Oya come and update fast fast! Merry Christmas Ironkurtain?

virtuedagirl:
dis story make sense o. Fantasyisland well done ma

Seconded!

VanTee20:
Thanks ma'am. I think that particular scene came off like that because of Xesandra's mastery of archery. She was shooting multiple arrows at a time and the sect members didn't get half a chance. Anyways, I'll strive to make the upcoming action scenes more relatable with. Thanks again.

That's ok. U are telling a very good story here.

Vantee let me quickly say that I like ur story but then I find it unable to relate with certain action scenes,e,g what happened when xesandra came to help in d sect temple.

iAreMozelle:
I see another tyler perry in my oga plasticKurtain...i don show...oya do come drop fresh updates

Lol! Plastickurtain? Isorait. Lets wait for d update and hope its not airkurtain this time