₦airaland Forum

Welcome, Guest: RegisterLoginWith GoogleTrendingRecentNew

Stats: 3,331,368 members, 8,449,983 topics. Date: Wednesday, 22 July 2026 at 03:54 PM

Toggle theme

EvaJael's Posts

Nairaland ForumEvaJael's ProfileEvaJael's Posts

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ... 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 (of 59 pages)

LiteratureRe: Meant To Be by EvaJael(f): 7:35am On Jun 09, 2017
True true...devil no get shame
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 6:53am On Jun 09, 2017
stephenGee12:
All of u dat is praising evajael don't let her head swell oooo grin grin grin

Shebi queenitee is telling u to update u are saying earlymorning lazy gal grin tongue tongue
Better come and update. It is already late morning
Lol stephengee12 I'll cry for u o ah ah. Can't a girl sleep in peace again.
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 10:24pm On Jun 08, 2017
Kimkardashain:
evajeal so u updated and u didnt even tell me.chai? there is god oh.
I'm sowi darling
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 10:23pm On Jun 08, 2017
XtremelyCoded:
Evajael you say this is ur first novel?
this is simply alluring... you are simply a star in the making dearie..

I only noticed some errors up there like writing Mille in place of Gloria about two or three times.

You doing greatly writer and the steady updates are awesome...

the sky is relatively your starting point...
Aww thank you. I'm really honoured. My first o,I'm still praying for grace. I only had the beginning and end in my head when I started just like Lilyjoe567. The middle na God
LiteratureRe: HOPE By Mhizdherbee by EvaJael(f): 10:08pm On Jun 08, 2017
Lilyjoe567:
@Mhizdherbee, I know exactly what you need. Evajael, please bring bullet for her? She needs it to calm her nerves
I dropped it at her doorstep ma
LiteratureRe: Torn by EvaJael(f): 10:05pm On Jun 08, 2017
Goodie goodie good
LiteratureRe: Entangled by EvaJael(f): 10:01pm On Jun 08, 2017
Shalomdee:
A short update is ready, crislyn, EvaJael, holuwanoisy111, Lilyjoe567, mhizgap, Ifecoded, talk2saintify, and other followers. Still waiting for criticism.
Thanks bae. Abeg let Lancelot continue like that and may God bless him
LiteratureRe: CHOICES AND Chances(a Story) by EvaJael(f): 9:57pm On Jun 08, 2017
Lilyjoe567:
But I have tissue for you already. Lol
Mammmyyyy oooo come coz am about to cry
LiteratureRe: CHOICES AND Chances(a Story) by EvaJael(f): 4:38pm On Jun 08, 2017
I don't want to cry lilyjoe567 pleaaase
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 3:58pm On Jun 08, 2017
DrClemzzY:
Make una live Elliot for me o. He's a nice quy
Lol...okey na
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 3:57pm On Jun 08, 2017
kelvinhilton:
Nice update. Keep dropping em lyk a bomb!! Buh not in my head tho grin
lol...sure
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 3:56pm On Jun 08, 2017
Tychamps...sorry I forgot to mention you when I updated
LiteratureRe: HOPE By Mhizdherbee by EvaJael(f): 3:54pm On Jun 08, 2017
I'm here. I want the biggest seat for my small body
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 11:23am On Jun 08, 2017
queenitee:
Excuse ma, what's early morning?
Sowi na...u sef
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 11:22am On Jun 08, 2017
princ007:
you are such a good writer
Thanks
LiteratureRe: Shadow(vengence!! by EvaJael(f): 10:48am On Jun 08, 2017
I've missed plenty o. Bring it on kimkardashain
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 10:19am On Jun 08, 2017
queenitee:
Eva, Eva, Eva how many times did I call ya? Comman do justice to this update before I punish ya come hither. Queenitee book says thou sha come when thou art needed
Lol wetin na for this early morning
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 8:37am On Jun 08, 2017
Gloria

Jason went inside the house. He was really angry. Mille had told me how defensive of her he could get but I had never witnessed it first hand. Everyone went in one after the other. I was left alone with Elliot.
"You're welcome Elliot and thanks for ruining my night."
"Wait Gee. I'm sorry,I really am."
I just stared at him like he was a ghost.
"I got you a gift Gee."
I missed that. Elliot loved calling me Gee.
"Let's go to my room. I dropped it there."
"Na wa o. He barely came back and he has mind to say 'my room' " I thought as I followed him upstairs. He brought out a small box from his drawer and handed it to me.
"Thank you Elliot."
"You're more than welcome." I turned to leave the room.
"Won't you open it?"
"Not yet. I'll..."
"Gloria!" Mum yelled.
"Yes mum" I left the room "Where are you mum?"
"My room." She yelled back.
I went there and she was pacing.
"What is it mum?"
"Niel isn't picking my calls Gloria. He took Mille with him."
"Mum relax. I'm sure they're fine."
"Did you just say sure? Your brother can do silly things when he's angry and you know it."
"They'll be fine mum. Mille's phone is in her purse and it's in my room. Maybe Niel left his phone at home too. Rest your head first."
"Gloria if only you're a mother you'll understand what it means." The mood wasn't just right for any stories so I left her. I dropped the gift in my room and headed downstairs.
"We'll be leaving Gloria. Tell your mum okay?" Uncle Liam said.
"Alright uncle. Thanks for coming. I'm sorry for the drama you had to witness.
"It's okay child. These things happen." He replied.
"What about Mille and Niel?" Aunt Liz asked.
"Sincerely,I can't guess where they are right now." I answered.
"Jamille's at home mum. I can feel it." Jason put in.
I almost laughed. How on earth could someone feel where another person was.
As if reading my thoughts Jason said "Twins always have a connection Gloria."
I nodded.

Jathniel

"He's my twin brother and his name is Elliot like you heard."
"Niel,I know that already." She said.
"Since we were little,he had always been the troublesome one. I was a lot more quiet and I can't count the number of times I got punished for him."
"And you kept quiet?" She asked.
"You yourself has seen how alike we look."
"Yeah. If you had left my side,I wouldn't have known the difference."
I laughed "Same applied to my dad. My mum knew the difference between us from day one but she always chose to defend Elliot all the time."
"Do you have any idea why?" She asked.
"Elliot was never as strong as I was from birth so she felt she had to protect him no matter how naughty he got."
"Oh I see. So what made him leave?"
"He left after our father died. My dad willed the company to me while all his other properties were willed to Gloria and Elliot. Obviously,he wasn't satisfied. He had access to everything mum had. Somehow, he tricked her and emptied her account."
"Seriously?"
"Yes Mille. He emptied her account and also took more than half of her jewellery. Mother wept her heart out. She even got sick thinking of him. I suffered for my mum. I went up and down trying to help her get better. It took some months but she finally got over it. I've been enjoying my life since then and now,Elliot shows up to ruin everything. You see why I got mad?"
"I understand Niel and I'm so sorry."
"It's okay. Any more questions my lady?"
She laughed and said "Yes."
"And what would that be?"
We heard a car horn honk.
"I guess they're back." She announced. Their new gateman opened the gate.
They drove in and we got up to welcome them.
"Well, it seems Jason was right after all. You guys ran here." Uncle Liam said.
"Yes Uncle. I'm sorry about what happened at the house."
"It's okay son."
Jason and Mille were hugging like they hadn't seen each other in decades. I wondered when Elliot and I would become as united as they were.
"Jason let Mille be. Let them finish their discussion."
"No uncle. It's late and I have to get home."
"Bye son." Uncle Liam and Aunt Liz chorused.
"Bye Jathniel. Mille escort him na." Jason said and that earned him a playful punch from Mille.
She escorted me.
"When will I see you again Niel?"
"Tomorrow my lady."
"Alright. Have a great night." She said.
I gave her hand a gentle squeeze.
"Have a night that's better than great your highness."
She laughed "Go jor. Remember we have one more question to solve tomorrow."
"Yes ma."
6 Likes
LiteratureRe: Torn by EvaJael(f): 9:43pm On Jun 07, 2017
Kimkardashain:
hahahahahahaha, i laf in spanish.
evajeal,queenitee,kimberleywest,akinwale,come and see stephs new found courage,she reli needs to stand up to that tony of a guy.
Ayaf see o. I thought she'll stay and be doing softie
LiteratureRe: Love Hiccups by EvaJael(f): 3:14pm On Jun 07, 2017
queenitee:
Oya come and chop kiss
Mmmmmwaaaahhhh
LiteratureRe: In Search Of Dreams (a Story Of Love And Racism) by EvaJael(f): 2:13pm On Jun 07, 2017
Nnenna biko please mbok ejo let them win. I'll cry if they don't o
LiteratureRe: United In Betrayal by EvaJael(f): 10:27am On Jun 07, 2017
Michael's accusations are so annoying. I wonder what text messages he's receiving now. Well done pamelB
1 Like
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 9:51am On Jun 07, 2017
Lilyjoe567:
Thanchu......

Now, I saw wedding, should I start dancing now or later. Even though he said it angrily and to prove a point, I still read wedding....
Lol. I advise you to keep practicing the dance (in private tho). Probability of a wedding is......
LiteratureRe: Love Hiccups by EvaJael(f): 8:42am On Jun 07, 2017
Congratulations kimberlywest. You made fp
LiteratureRe: CHOICES AND Chances(a Story) by EvaJael(f): 8:40am On Jun 07, 2017
This is getting interesting
1 Like
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 8:39am On Jun 07, 2017
Lilyjoe567:
Can I get a whoot...whoot
I guessed right
Whoot whoot
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 8:38am On Jun 07, 2017
Akinwale14:
EvaJael weldon ma
Tanchu
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 8:37am On Jun 07, 2017
queenitee:
Can you see? I was right. Neil has a twin. Evajael, please update early tomorrow morning, please
Your wish has been granted ma
LiteratureRe: Hidden Diamonds by EvaJael(op): 8:36am On Jun 07, 2017
Jathniel

"Elliot?"
"Jathniel." He replied.
"What the hell are you doing here Elliot?"
"Gosh! It's my only sister's birthday of course. I had to come here."
I laughed. "So after four solid years,you remember today that March 17 is Gloria's birthday right?"
He ignored me and came closer to where Mille and I stood. Mille was watching us with her mouth agape. He stopped right before Mille. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath.
"Respect yourself Elliot."
I opened my eyes to see his palm on Mille's cheek. The poor girl was just staring with her eyes wide open at him. I threw a punch at his face immediately. He staggered backwards.
"Jathniel! What the hell was that for?" He said,caressing the part of his face I punched.
"Never you,Elliot,I said never you lay a hand on her again in your life."
The idiot smiled at me.
"I see she's your latest catch. Don't I get to know her better?"
"Elliot!" I yelled and his grin became even wider. Mum and Gloria came running to where we were. Behind them were the others. Elliot didn't see them coming because he was backing the doorway.
"Relax Jathniel. Isn't she a little bit too young for you to destroy her life like you did the others?"
I kept mute and he continued.
"Come on bro. You're silent now. For your information,I wasn't ready to struggle any company with you so I left."
"Shut up Elliot. You're a bloody liar. Get out of here before I lose the last iota of sense left in my brain."
He laughed. "Jathniel, Jathniel. You never change." He turned to Jamille. "I'll surely get you pretty face."
Before I could say Jack Robinson, Mille landed a heavy slap on his face.
"I will not let you humiliate me Elliot or whatever you call yourself." She said with tears in her eyes and my heart sank. It was at this point that mum yelled. "Elliot that's enough." He spun around to meet several pairs of eyes watching him. He pulled the trick he was notorious for since we were both little.
"Mum,I didn't do anything. You saw when this lady slapped me."
Jason pushed his way through them and before Elliot knew what was going on,he was on the floor.
I pulled Jason away from him.
"How dare he lie against my sister?" Jason yelled. Aunt Liz came forward to pacify him.
"Elliot,how could you?" Mum was sobbing.
"Mum,I..."
"Let me finish Elliot. I let you come here after you promised you'd be good and now you do this."
"What?! Mum so this was a conspiracy between you two."
"No son. You can't call it a conspiracy."
"Fine , get me a better word then. You knew he was coming and you didn't even say a word."
"I just wanted to surprise you son."
"I must say you did both. You surprised me and yet you didn't surprise me. You know Mille's birthday means a lot to me and you still went ahead to allow this thing visit at this time on this day of all days."
"I am not a thing." Elliot retorted.
I ignored him. "Yet,you didn't surprise me with your action. You've always loved Elliot more than me. You thought I never noticed right? I won't be surprised if you allow him kill me on the eve of my wedding."
I held Mille by the hand and took her inside. I grabbed my keys from my room and went out. Neither of us said a word as I drove with no particular destination in mind. I was driving at 40km/h. I looked in her direction and the tears were dropping ever so slowly.
"Why didn't you tell me Niel?" She asked.
"I don't know. Maybe I was just waiting for the perfect moment."
"Where are you driving us to?"
"I don't know. I'm just driving."
"Take me home Niel."
"Mille, I..."
"Home Niel."
I kept quiet and drove her home. When we got there was when she realised that the key was in her purse and we left it at the house. She suggested we stayed in the sit out till they came back. The security lights were on so it wasn't all dark.
"Mille,I'm really really sorry."
"For what Niel?"
"Everything that happened this evening. I never imagined Elliot would show up tonight."
"Tell me about him." She said quietly,almost in a whisper.
"About who?"
"Elliot. I'm interested in him."
"You're what?"
She smiled and placed her hand on mine. "I didn't mean it in that way Niel. I meant I'm interested in his story."
6 Likes 1 Share
LiteratureRe: Love Hiccups by EvaJael(f): 8:35am On Jun 07, 2017
KimberlyWest:
Hahahaha. Where is Queenite by the way? I brought free kuli-Kuli for you girls.
Tanchu... She'll appear soon soon. Shey na queenitee na
LiteratureRe: Love Hiccups by EvaJael(f): 7:26am On Jun 07, 2017
KimberlyWest:
Most step mothers are like that, always causing rift between her husband and step kids.

Don't worry, they won't spoil him. I dey here, i won't let them.
Oya chop kiss. I learnt that one from queenitee
LiteratureRe: Entangled by EvaJael(f): 11:01pm On Jun 06, 2017
Shalomdee biko mention me when you update
1 Like

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 ... 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 (of 59 pages)