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morganacanta:
Oh shut it tramp ! You might have an affiliation with mediocrity but I don't .So don't disturb my mention again. There should be no constructive criticism with this embarrassment to literature .

Your last warning kiddo.

Whatever spice you're using, I need it.
It rocks my socks.

Morganacanta.

If you need to critique a piece, always know that it must be constructive.

I will critique your say. Please don't downgrade others by comparing that piece to a so called six-year old still learning the nursery rhyme.

You seem to have opened a new account I gather, so you are either a newbie, an ex-convict (banned), or a cloned oldie.

Mind your manners please.

Regards.

timpaker:
Joseph1832

Tolutweety

Firestar

How often do I read huh.

More than just often. Every morning, as nature rouses me from slumber, I partake of soul food from the scriptures. As okele can't be eaten without stew/soup, likewise I cannot stay without reading from it even if it's a proverb.

Graphic novels, E-books, Mp3, Youtube, good ol'paperback...

Seun.
Sagamite.
Sigmundfreud.

I had red hands last night. ..
Cut palms extracting shards

Grievous

Twasn't so before the peels
Before the wet curtain
...Before the work of the day
...Before travels from the nest
Before Selfies of Fam
Before sleeping off a flu
Before joyful shouts of:
Welcome Uncle!
Before realization
...

Stay away from me
For my fingers extract
Shards...
From the water spring
*Squelch*
*Clatter*
I have got to remove everything.
...

Please... please pass the ointment
That it may heal...
Can it scab before dawn?
It hurts too much
Numb it completely
I don't want to feel
...

My face is flushed with burgurd
Eyes are puffy
I can't go to work like this!
The world would see

The keen may sight red:
On the bridge
On the crow's feet
In unsteady breaths

Ice on the blinds
Water for the spring
The land is parched
The birds won't sing

The moon has set
With the land provoked
Lightning and Fire
Will be met

Nina4u:
wow ...u guys are good ..wish i could verbaly hear it beeing spoken with all the dramatic effect ...here is mine ..it is called Getto ... Wrote it afrer a school shooting long time in usa ...


Expectation
Mitigation
Instigation
FUC*ED UP NATION

Two little boys
One's a pim*p
The other-
A natural born killer
Stealin' guns
stealin' vans
Next thing you know
Members of the Klan
Fire in the school
Nah,fire in their brains
Inside and outside
Murder is sane
Slayer of the girls
With the pearls and the curls
Humanity
Morality
It means nothing to them
Electric chairs and eavning stares
To the cell they will be sent
Talk of the bible
Or sit there and cry
Keep cryin' little boy
Cause youre gonna fry!!!

This.

It's about to go _down.

We are my friend,
Going to mention usernames,
And mix 'em in a creative blend...

Harddon with the quill
Slice pieces of flavours
If you will

Seun are you there?
Let's bring to the fore poetically
What we ink in here...

On the platform of Naira we tread...
The land which started in Two thousand and five which Seun led...
A trickle of users started small...
And now ten years Seun and his army braved it all...
From when we were sane and nerdy...
To fashionistas and machinery to all things quirky. ...

Good evening, Seun, Nairalanders...

We be dedicating this thread to usernames who inspire us to ink in creative ways possible...

...because we are inspired by the past, present and be a reference for future posts.

...

Please note, that all works from here are copyrighted in the username who inks and is approved by the NPC Board.

...

Best regards,

Tee A.K.A firestar.

Introducing Roast.

kITATITA:
The dew
feeds
the yews

The child contemplates:
Daddy is late.