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What isit about u leaving for sometime?
U're not making me proud?
If that's how u do it, then, I'm gone for ,
Hala me when u back

Congrats fluid Mac.
Where is genial? I can't wait to see his magic.
@somegirl,
What's going on sis?
Take good care of urself,
We're really concerned here.

No mind Sam o!
No be just painting him wan do,
Ask am well well, wetin him dey do?
Sam no vex o, na just slip of fingers.

@ Sam,
come to think of it,
that use to be my nickname in secondary school.
thanks but no thanks.
u know now, how we dey do am, just poetry.

@ Godmother,
Thank God u said seem adorable,
What's age here?
Numbers, the mind, and probably, your style.
What else?

@ DP,
No vex abeg, I want u to paste your pic,
No offense

Later could be eternity,
But for u, it's soon.
just make me proud

I thought u would read btw the lines.
U did great, but turn around,
Sam is behind u, he is moving real fast.
That kid is good, for his age, I think he is reall GOOD.
What is it with all the love pics u paint,
HMMMMMMMMM!
Are u from Calabar?
Just kidding sis,
am I?

Here I go, just hope the joint likes this.
[center]' Peace '

A conscious tranquility,
Silence, and stillness, and nothingness,
Serenity with an heavenly quality,
You, a beautiful parkland, that calmness.

A soft spiritual music, nature,
That luminous sky, colours flitting and wavering,
An alluring magnificent mixture,
That kind endearing feeling.

You, sleep, rest,
Life at its best,
Where troubles vanishes, it's but His grace,
Nothing, just His divine face.

The greens get greener,
And the streams bluer,
What I feel when i write, my peaceful phase,
Far from a mental state of haze.[/center]

if that's true life,
that i hope u're now strong.
show me that brother, and he'll pay for it.
nice poem, keep it flowing.

not bad, won't mind having u on poetry contest.
check that topic out.

@nilla,
yes friend, was kidding about crying, ,
but i sure missed ur presence.
mine is ready, came online to type it.

we all feel bad after sin,
that's if our heart is in that good state,
vow to be good,
but we remain human.
u're human my friend,
just but be good enough to let us know the next episode.

and the tussle for my Sam begins,
I'll prefer ur godmother, she's gat a pic on her profile,
not a ghost called Dollie-Pie,
but I'm not u.
No offense DP, just kidding.

@sam,
u could have won,
but u were in a hurry to paste it,
if u don't call urself a romantic writer with that
then many of us arent.
u really make me proud.
just take ur time,
u're too just great

@ Nilla & Sam
thanks for thinking it's good,
i'm flattered.

@ Mac,
good to ave u back, what kept u out there so long,
it was lie forever.

now, i think the joint is hot again.
Nilla don't go some disappearing act again,
i don't wanna cry anymore , plzzzz.

where has Genial gone?
that guy works magic with words,
i can't the urge of becoming ur student.
will u accept me?

Just saw ' peace ' as the next title,
if it isn't late,
i'll bring it in soon.

thanks, one family, one love.

Never knew Sam had a Godmother.
It's really nice to know that someone is looking after a creative seer.
Nice to meet sis,
i'll would have loved to his Godfather,
But he is just too good with his pen.

this is wonderful,
u leave me speechless.
never knew u were this, what's the word now, I'll tell u later.

@ somegirl,
Where have u been all this while.
Back in time to join the contest.
You still got time to paste " sunset ".
Go work on it,
The room wnts it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

I'll give it to Genial.
He works magic with words.
A genius miles apart from his likes

U remind of a playa called M, John Obi.
And u still have the guts to say u're staying true to her?
Jesus, this is >>>

[center][b]' Sunset '

[/b]A serene but powerful influence,
An undiluted artistic sequence,
When the gods call one of its own,
To sleep in the heart of its throne.

In the middle of undulating lushes,
Sitted as my flair paints with touches,
A ritual that's timeless,
A routine that's poetically priceless.

As it sets,
The earth losses one of its pets,
In different shades of yellow,
A colourful departure of a fellow.

Slowly and weak into the west,
It disappears into rest,
Long enough to strongly rise in the east,
Until it's but another summon for the friendly beast. [/center]

@ genial,
I know, I'm working on it.
It's going to be ,

[center]" Law of the Jungle "

It was expected that they talk and walk as the grew,
It expected them to be mannered and intelligent,
Products of a functioning social set-up,
What they had in mind,
Vision of patriots.

As adults,
A diligent rise through the cadre,
Qualified and hungry,
They expect to be provided jobs,
A level playing ground for business,
An economy as friendly as mosquitoes,
Product of hardwork and lives lost,
A democratic society.

Lavished with poverty,
Mirage fills the air,
Reality for a very few,
An illusion that's deprived  many,
A nation at it's own throat.

But, it's still expected they're successful,
Court and start a family,
Take their wards off the street,
Victims of a failed nation,
Descendants of revolutionary seeds,
A nation at the brink of destruction,
We, face-to-face with jungle destiny,
A nation and the life circle of it's citizenries.[/center]

Good joint.
Sam are u gonna let a lady spank ur ass and all what u gat to say is ', speechless' ?
U break my heart real bad.
We've got two judges in the joint already, so make someone proud b4 it's too late.

It's a good creative piece,
but not perfect like someone said,
It's still a draft of ur work, i can tell from the style.
It's really fun to read,
Real fun I mean.
Hope u slapt urself for,
IMOA
stumble on some more plz,
I really can wait to read Verse II.

Nothing have really changed since I , ,
I like the idea of the title stuff,
' sunset' ?
Is it game?
Can't wait to write mine.

Not bad for ur age,
I like it.
U sure will get lots of them from me, anytime anyday.
can u do something for me?
can u write a poem about ur night?
really want to see how creative u are.