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5age: Go back and reprint it few days after the reg close, den u will seen d date and time for ur exam

Barbar2ndey: Gud day,bro n sis..as we all know d post-utme form iz out..letz apply b4 d deadline...don't let ur jamb score discourage u,as long as u scored 180 and above..when i did mine,i scored 202 in jamb and went on to score 64% in the post-utme...i was admitted for economics...i pray God will crown all our efforts in jesus name..AMEN!..add me on 2go wit username:Ejanla0.

lastpage: Dont worry, he will "prophesy" after watching the match on Satellite Channel.. to people wey no get electricity/Generator for dem house!

Fine, wayo man, that TB Josh!

Lastpage!

Chanchit: Mtcheeeew.. Rubbish, so anyone that does not turn against them will not die...? Even if its true, what will they be doing with Paris Hilton..? Another warning, remove my Alicia keys from that ur useless list..!

Darustic: this makes sense. *thumbs up* mainly because i undastood it at a glance nd it was on point. More ink to ur pen

Abi o

Tonisious504: i won't cal dat criticism, she is only givin her say abt d write up. @gloatkenf has a great potential in writing bt he jst nid 2 put more effort 2 makin d poems best of all. Thumbs up 2 u @gloatkenf,u can do beta n evn best.

Hausa: so when are u gonna publish dis?
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u really remind me of olastep back in d days

Olastep1: thats great of u. U must be a brilliant chap, mehn. Though i'm not an Art student, English has been a major part of me. Infact, i was writing a book some times back but quits due to some reasons like its gonna affect my real studies. I will surely revitalize it and i know it'l be wonderful. English language is very interesting and unique as well even though its our second language. Its not as hard as some peeps do think, that is, if u know what u're doing. hey mr gloatkenf, its alright, huh? No more need of bashing and counter-bashing! Please and please. Lets stop it and it also starts from you. Are u on facebook? If yes, wats ur Id? If no, any other 'webchats'?

biggiesoft: hey nigga...u fink say nah only u sabi spit* abi...naw i muz confez i woz suprisd 2 v found out dat a good-thinker(tho dat haz chngd o) lyk u wuld react in such an akward manner...ogbeni farabale?? Do u tink diz thread iz ful of dumb-asses dat u laydown a write-up 4 nd jex laud u widout givin in a concrete crosscheck... A ladie with high level of maturity tuk d tym 2 rid ur God-4sakn Poem nd decided 2 help ur career by lettin an ass-hole lyk u knw ur mistakez..instead of u appreciatn dat fact.. u decided 2 bhave lyk 1 whu jex got d chance 2 voice out hiz ignorance or shuld i say stupidity online...u nid 2 reshape ur mindset...learn!!!

Olastep1: na wa o. So all this e-criticism is going on right behind me, huh? I think i should drop my macintosh and pick up my bullet-proof vest cos i may be hit by a stray e-bullet.
This gloatfenk never cease to amaze me... I can see u have a great flair towards writing but u dont realy know the basics. Permit me d sharp criticism. Trust me, i wouldnt call ur writings a peom. I would rather call it a figurative write-up. A poem dont just start from no where n ends somewhere. It doesnt involve so much slangs n abbreviations. My guy, i'm not poisoning ur mind. I'm telling u in a better position, that is, that u shud try learning what poems means. Do a little googleing.
And dont forget in a poem, u dont loose contact with ur audience. See, there's nothing bad if u accept what i said. The fact remains i strained my eyes to get 75% of what u mean. Though, its not bad but u can do better....

*wears my bullet proof vest already*

GodzBELOVED: *deep sigh* I sincerely do not know how to reply you. Who ever said we don't have flaws,huh? Everybody does! You see, I'm not the kind of person who gives mild correction. If I take my time to read thru ur poem and I find sumfn to point out, I wouldn't keep quiet. I'd point it out,cuz I know yu can do better,it's now left for yu to check it. If sum1 else doesn't c ur wrongs and tell u,how wud u knw them? If I write and somebody corrects me on sumfn or rates my work 0.5 over ten or tells me a better way to write, I wouldn't get all angry and reject it- in fact, i'd even be happy to receive the correction. The person may not even know how to write buh I'd still heed the advice. Well,mr man, no man is an island,they say. U need contributions to make u grow. U need criticism to make u better. I don't regret anytin i've said so far- i jus regret that I gave yu valuable correction on my own part. I'm very sure that sum1 else wud point dis out to you sooner or later. I'm nt feeling important buh i'm sure of that. Mark my words.

GodzBELOVED: *deep sigh* I sincerely do not know how to reply you. Who ever said we don't have flaws,huh? Everybody does! You see, I'm not the kind of person who gives mild correction. If I take my time to read thru ur poem and I find sumfn to point out, I wouldn't keep quiet. I'd point it out,cuz I know yu can do better,it's now left for yu to check it. If sum1 else doesn't c ur wrongs and tell u,how wud u knw them? If I write and somebody corrects me on sumfn or rates my work 0.5 over ten or tells me a better way to write, I wouldn't get all angry and reject it- in fact, i'd even be happy to receive the correction. The person may not even know how to write buh I'd still heed the advice. Well,mr man, no man is an island,they say. U need contributions to make u grow. U need criticism to make u better. I don't regret anytin i've said so far- i jus regret that I gave yu valuable correction on my own part. I'm very sure that sum1 else wud point dis out to you sooner or later. I'm nt feeling important buh i'm sure of that. Mark my words.

Lickingleks: madam, wich 1 u don ryt? Gloatkenf, nyc 1 jare. If at dis age, u're able 2 deliber8ly depict confusion in an appealin manner, i cn only dare 2 imagine wat u'ld do in d nxt 10 yrs. Godzbeloved, no offence is intended, bt such criticism at dis stage cld ruin a persn's drimz. Leave him be pls

Hausa: King James version english.
Am clapping

GodzBELOVED: lol. I shake my head and smile ruefully. It's obvious you don't want to be corrected and yeah,that's okay. If you think I meant any hard and dream-killing criticism,then you need to think well. I only commented 'cuz I felt that although, you have a sense of writing, you still need to work on it and I pointed out things that you should do to help you. One wud expect yu to take to correction and learn. Do you think it's everybody who wud have time to start reading yur works and start telling u where ur flaws are? Think, please. If you have a p with being corrected or criticized, then that's one very bad trait I must tell yu....and I can't vie on dis case with yu,that wasn't my intention in the 1st place.

P.S: I am not a guy, I am a girl!

GodzBELOVED: *sigh* First of all, I'm not a bro. Second, you can't compare this poem to any of Shakespeare's. If you want to write like him, i'd advise you to read more of his works. Shakespeare's poems are usually deep, not always easy to comprehend BUT his lining, his ideas, they link to support waheva he's writing. Concernin ur poem, to be sincere, if I were to rate it, I'd give u a 3 over ten. I've read a number of poems that are hard to understand but if you read deeply,you'd understand d sense in them. They aren't just abstract[like this is], they lead somewhere. If you want your poems to be hard to comprehend like Shakespeare's, read and study more of his poems!

GodzBELOVED: This is a poem,yeah?? My comment: I sense a talent of writing in you,however you MUST learn to:
1. Know how to put your words in a clear way; A poem or any other piece of writing wouldn't be meaningful if you don't know to put your words.
2. Stick to a particular point while writing- and your lines must link to support the point you're trying to get across. In your poem, I think the main point was abt ''A CONFUSED PERSON'',right? Buh you put in too many diverse lines[or ideas] that weren't compatible. Stick to a mode of lining, don't brush in lines anyhow[if you're to be a good poet/writer].
Nice write-up by the way. I'd have rated this over ten but I won't.

GodzBELOVED: This is a poem,yeah?? My comment: I sense a talent of writing in you,however you MUST learn to:
1. Know how to put your words in a clear way; A poem or any other piece of writing wouldn't be meaningful if you don't know to put your words.
2. Stick to a particular point while writing- and your lines must link to support the point you're trying to get across. In your poem, I think the main point was abt ''A CONFUSED PERSON'',right? Buh you put in too many diverse lines[or ideas] that weren't compatible. Stick to a mode of lining, don't brush in lines anyhow[if you're to be a good poet/writer].
Nice write-up by the way. I'd have rated this over ten but I won't.

GodzBELOVED: This is a poem,yeah?? My comment: I sense a talent of writing in you,however you MUST learn to:
1. Know how to put your words in a clear way; A poem or any other piece of writing wouldn't be meaningful if you don't know to put your words.
2. Stick to a particular point while writing- and your lines must link to support the point you're trying to get across. In your poem, I think the main point was abt ''A CONFUSED PERSON'',right? Buh you put in too many diverse lines[or ideas] that weren't compatible. Stick to a mode of lining, don't brush in lines anyhow[if you're to be a good poet/writer].
Nice write-up by the way. I'd have rated this over ten but I won't.

Hausa: havnt u seen ur name on jamb? Y d fuss