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Mrshroud:
thanks bro. I'm settled now. I'll give you guys a blockburster tomorrow.

Alright, thank God for journey mercies.

Mrshroud:
At present I'm traveling to Lagos from port-harcourt, when I arrive I'll drop episode 6 . Endeavor to Drop by, comment and also wish me safe journey.

Have a safe trip man.

Mrshroud:
your understanding of my writing style is humbling . I must say I'm deeply impressed. Thanks for following ardently. You remain my arch supporter. your opinion regarding the question I posed is appreciated and will be acted upon in due time too. Thanks for the love bro.

Your welcome man, and thank you for entertaining us with your stories, I appreciate it.

Mrshroud:
No offense taken bro. You've been following up real Good and I appreciate. You're very right about the departure from style and structure. And of course I indicated something close in the announcement paragraph of the story. I however re-assure you , and quite honestly too; that the story is entirely my intellectual property, and with time you'll feel me in it . Thanks a lot. And I want you to re-read the announcement paragraph and tell me what you think. Should we still stick to the campus themed stories or broaden up? Your opinion counts. Whatever you decide, the campus themed stories will still dominate the project. Thanks.

firstly I have to say that you have convinced me that the Caroline story is truly yours. Why I initially doubted it was yours was because of the structure of the Campus stories, they appeared rushed and full of typos, but in the Caroline story it was obvious you really took your time to construct the whole package, hardly did I come across a typo, everything about the Caroline story was just smooth, and what finally convinced me was your reply to my last mention, it was smooth, just like the Caroline story.
As for you wanting to branch out into different stories, personally I would not advise that because these stories will tend to confuse your readers, it is best you focus on one story and complete it then move on to another story, except in the case where the Caroline story somehow at a point branches into the Campus story, I.E, the Caroline story is related or linked to the Preye etc stories.
Just my opinion bro. Whichever way you choose to play it, I do think you are doing a good job. Kudos.

Mrshroud, my observation is that you are not the one who wrote the Caroline story, believe you either had someone else write it, or you copied the story from somewhere, I do not mean to sound offensive, but the whole Caroline story is totally different from your normal stories both in writing form and structure. Just my observation tho.

where di OP Mrshroud ?? this is not fair nah. Okay fine we understand you have a life and possibly a job as well and other stuffs which take your time, but have mercy on us nah, is it our fault some of us have become addicted to your stories? afterall na quietly I dey on my own o before your story waka come. now wey I don dey buy the market you come dey form say you no sell again, abeg no try am biko.

Mrshroud:
ok thanks for been the most ardent follower of this story series. Like I always say , thanks for the love, episode 5 will be posted later in the day. Its just some factors here are delaying me, not that I deliberately intend to keep you guys waiting. Pls bear with me.

thank you for sharing this episodes with us, the days are less boring now.

Mrshroud:
Lol. At least you should comment on 4 now, what do you think. How's it going so far? Thanks for been there, seems like everybody else don desert me. Expect 5 by 2morrow evening. My apologies.

I am not a literary expert so I can't say much about the plot/arrangement of your story or it's delivery, only fault I have found so far in your story is the typographical error and that is common cos everyone makes such mistakes at different times. Its not as if the typos are so much, just a few here and there, nothing to stress yourself about, and if your readers are too lazy to read through the story and mentally reconstruct the typos into how they want it to be, then they should just pay you for your story which you are sharing with them and that way you can afford to employ someone to proof read your material before making the story available to such paid subscribers.

DoctorShroud:
I'll update 5 shortly , sorry for the delay, it was because of the issues I had with the anti-spam bot. Please continue to drop your comments , they're encouraging . Thanks for the love

I don finish episode 4 o, na 5 I dey wait for and I no go sleep till I see am. If I no see am na im be say I go visit you for dream o, and trust me you no go like my visitation .

DoctorShroud:
I'll update 5 shortly , sorry for the delay, it was because of the issues I had with the anti-spam bot. Please continue to drop your comments , they're encouraging . Thanks for the love

before I read episode 4 I want to see episode 5... i yaf tire for the long throat you are doing to me

harjibolar10:
bros, abeg forgive me, for I have offend you, and I will still offend you still, abeg no vex


The thing wey happen be say, ayam occupy right now, I will be back anon, so beat with me till then


Jah bless

no problem man. just know say when you come back na double dosage you go dey give us o, cos if you no do like that, na that time me go vex.

DoctorShroud:
I don't know what happened , I was trying to upload yesterday, on my Mr Shroud Account, but unfortunately I guess due to some tech errors on my end or Nairaland servers was overwhelmed, I was blacklisted. So for now , I'll be uploading from This Account pending when I'm able to post with the other account.

okay no problem, we full ground dey wait.