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[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]Why am I here this morning hoping to see something that would interest me?[/quote]cranky morning to you too

[quote author=Mynd_44]When I said reviewed, I did not mean saying "It was good" and the likes......you should realise I was not only refering to Ishi or anyone. I don't read what I type before uploading and so I rely on people to tell me what mistakes I make and that was what I was talking about. Considering the fact that I was battling a fever while typing that, I am expecting a truck load of errors in it.

Maybe the fever is just driving me insane...[/quote]I understood you perfectly the first time. I was on something else but that's for another day, when your fever is down. Permit me to say through this whole ordeal, the NDC and the NWC you have been ignorant Mynd.

Now that that is out, back to base. I read your story, but will leave Ishi to do her job, I am kinda lazy to edit the whole thing. She seems to be a pro at that too...

[quote author=Mynd_44]I would ignore the subtleties HBG......did you think she might have have just been speaking generally? And you need to know that people are real busy and might not have time to sit down and review thing right now.[/quote]I know that people are really busy! Very busy.

People 'reviewed your work'. Me included, stop being so absorbed in yourself.

Damex333: why did u say dat, nobody reviewed his story even d eagle-eyed aunty ishi.. So he want 2 rest,but dont rest o.

Ishi said she neva got around to reading it, she also said she knew mynd won't disappoint! What does that mean to you?

Why shouldn't I rest?

[quote author=Mynd_44]Seems like there are no reviews for my chapter......

It is back to hibernation for me. Larry, mail me if anything comes up[/quote]enjoy o...

Wonders shall never end!

[quote author=Larry-Sun]Where have you been, HBG? Missed you.[/quote]around, you are the stranger

jo!

repogirl: Alright, and here we are finally, at the end of our story. *sob* I'm going to miss Tekena and Deifa. Okay ummm this conclusion is a huried version for my nairaland readers. If you'd like the action plus wonder filled version you'll have to watch out for my ebook which I'll let y'all know when its done.

Thanks all for building my confidence, y'all kept me going. Will definitely be writing another story soon, not sure how soon yet anyway, but trust me it will be hotter than this one.

Thanks a lot guys, you cant imagine how grateful I am to you for your comments and all.

*sobs* your welcome dear

repogirl: Thank you.
@humbledbygrace, wow, thanks a lot, I know it isn't neat , but will do better next time, thanks for reading and even commenting. You can't imagine how good I feel right now reading this glowing commentary coming from you. I have been humbled by humbled by grace. Thanks a gazillion.

lol....your welcome. As for the erm name change....will get back to you

Nairaland is fun....Ishi dear, your doing a great job.

luvmijeje: You stated that the reason why Malaika acceptetd abuse from Femi was due to the training she receive from her parent which begs the questions-
Does it mean every young lady in that country have that same mindset or is it just Malaika's family?
Why would a young beautiful lady that came a from a good family particularly has a strong mother accept an abuse from a guy she barely knew for more than a month? This is an answer I hope to find in your subsequent updates.

your smart....I will do my best to answer yours truly in a satisfying way.

luvmijeje: Lol.

Repogirl....*clears throat* hmmmmmmmm, I love the storyline, your style of writing is superb. But your work is not neat. No! Still five star storytelling dear. At first, I didn't know where to start, I bookmarked it and read as a guest, been hooked since yesterday morning. I will put the book in my shelf for future use.

lemme stop this

I loved this great work. More ink to your pen, as I heard them saying

Damex333: madame, interprete please.

it means 'right back at you'

luvmijeje: This is a question to the house, is there any female that enjoyed her first sex?
HBG back to the discussion I want to have with you.

ok, is this question part of the discussion?

Let's look at this ;

Malaika: He was a gentle yet thorough lover, moving with liquid ease, he guided
her to the plateau of fulfillment.

his gentleness made everything to go smoothly, the pain didn't matter because it didn't last. 'Plateau of fulfillment' means... Ok, I give up.

Damex333: Gracie, now a lot of people are now following ur stories, thanks i ds lovely story u re sharing wit us,

its nice doing what I love, hoping that somewhere, someone will learn from my work

Damex333: NAKUPENDA

Haki ya nyuma saa wewe

BukkyDan: Yo sis! Nice write-up.
I learnt something...you know...#smiles#

thanks.

Tell me what you have learned

luvmijeje: HBG,what a beautiful writing,good storyline, I especially enjoyed the international flavour you bought to your story.
Before I engage you in a discussion, the love scene you describe,is that Malaika first sex?

thanks dear, I hope I am not in trouble. Yes its her first time

princesa: nice work...
another item in my 'following' cart

have I eva told you that your posts makes me smile?

Thanks Princesa

bolakale30: i am a writer too, plagiarism is a serious offence in the writing world... tanks for your patronage... even if ...

finish that your sentence...I would prefer to credit you for what's rightfully your.

bolakale30: tanks brother, but the write-up aint mine... it;s just meant for nlers pleasure

Oh boy.

[quote author=frank3.16]hi HBG, pls how do i say 'i love you' in that language of ur?[/quote] Oh dear....





NAKUPENDA

[quote author=Larry-Sun]Are you trying to say that violence can sometimes awaken sex.ual passion?[/quote]yes sir....some girls enjoy it after an argument, something called 'make up sex.'

[quote author=Larry-Sun]Nice job though; less errors in this one.[/quote]a year older, we are not growing backwards are we?

[quote author=Mazi_Omenuko]Nice one HBG!

I've been following but had to comment after your last update: the love-making scene was one of a kind, I totally loved it, smooth and easy to digest.

Waiting for your next update so we can climax together [/quote]you need Jesus....that was just it, nomore.

bigsholly: Am enjoying it piece by piece weldon HBD
Bt pls mk ur update frequent

thanks, will try my love