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[quote author=Larry-Sun]I don't form seriousness. I'm always serious when I need to. You cannot expect a clown in everybody.[/quote][quote author=Larry-Sun]I've got a perfect reply for this statement, but the speaker wouldn't like it, so I'll pass.[/quote]

Rap maestro: oga, kul dat ya shaky body jorh

[quote author=Foxy_Ultimate]When Larry... Efe and HBG dey form boss why e no go boring. If we wan catch fun, dem go carry dia head dey come form seriousness... Mtchw[/quote]why don't ya'll catch some fun?

M not bossy jeez

brokoto: ok Ooº°˚˚˚°º‎​oO .

Thing is, if you are describing the effect a drug has on an individual it should be specific enough to avoid any ambiguity or misinterpretations. You just wrote that he enjoyed the burning sensation it gave him. That's non specific and I doubt anybody reading it would bother to check what the drugs do and would just assume that he was using them for a high. I didn't say you shouldn't use the 2 drugs you used, only that using the word Dianabol methandrostenolone is incorrect.
The detailed explanation you just gave would have made for better comprehension if it was included in the story in the first place. Nobody is an embodiment of knowledge I guess and me referring you to google was a one off thing to clear up the air on eclampsia, nothing to be pissed about.

ok noted

[quote author=Larry-Sun]Very great job, Frosti. I really did enjoy reading your chapter. Revealing, suspense-filled and smooth. Kudos, sir.

I noticed some few errors, which I outlined/corrected (according to how I see them) below. Please make necessary correction. I'll revisit the second part of your post later. Thanks.

Bless you, sir.[/quote]Larry? Omw! Hmmmm ok

brokoto: 1) dianabol is the trade name of methandrostenolone and as such the you can either use dianabol alone with the symbol (r) attached or use methandrostenolone alone not both of them side by side like you did. Its confusing and technically incorrect.

2) dianabol is an oral steroid and the expression "took out a syringe, which he filled it
with Dianabol methandrostenolone and
injects it on his right thigh." is also technically wrong since you swallow an oral tablet not inject it.

3) both drugs, dianabol and somatropin are steroids and the impression you gave while he was using it was of someone using either psychedelic or opioid drugs. Steroids hardly cause 'highness' as they're mostly body building substances. If you must, there are other better drugs to use there e.g LSD, halothane, heroin etc.

Just for the work to be accurate though. I hope i didn't bother you too much, thanks.

I wasn't using those for him to get high and that's not the impression I gave there...you read into that because maybe your a pharmacist the only thing I implied on dianabol was one of its side effect aggressiveness and then I used HGH because of this;
Energy and sexual function increase
As a powerful aphrodisiac, HGH (Getropin) restores sexual potency and sexuality in men.

And lastly I used them as mere body builders, we are talking of a murder here and I didn't see any medical restriction that says people shouldn't use them both. And the google your always reffering me to brokoto showed me that there is a liquid dianabol

brokoto: lol. Its just about some of your medical terms and the context you used them.

yes?

[quote author=Larry-Sun]It's not late.[/quote]as long as I don't have to change a certain characters wateva! I hate being on the swing. We write after all, this thing is hard

brokoto: I noticed some errors on HBGs post. Is it too late to make corrections? I just read it today.

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!

Copy and paste asap....

free2ryhme: thank God for oyinbo and snipping tools

how come u managed to screen grab only that?

Idowu what's the problem?

Rap maestro: lest i 4get, while scrolling thru ya diary, I saw that u acknowledged me... May your pen's ink never go dry, more grease to your elbow....

lol thank you jare

*take a bow*

Your such a free spirited jovial soul.

Frosti...I love your work

*batting eyelashes* when are you updating? Lol. Simple well written piece dear, just a few typos here and there but its good.

Ollyfad: HBG if i read witout cmentin its definitely a sin. U r jst superb!!!u gav d story a total new aspect nd we readers,atleast myself didnt c it cmin or tink of it at all.i luv d twist nd am wonderin jst ow d nxt wryta wil cope nd jst wat island he wil tak us 2 4 a discovery adventure.u guys r jst da bomb!!!wish 2 c dis publishd it wil definitely mak a bestseller all ova d world nd i wil b proud 2 say dat a wrk of nairaland writers

Thank you....we are all trying. If it wasn't for you and the rest of our readers our work would mean nothing.

God bless you