shurley22:


Try and read all over, maybe then you'd notice when they switched to calling after texting each other.

thanks..I see it now

If na message you send cara how eniola take hear the conversation? pls correct it o..nice story

Great story, following

Following bumper to anywhere

Olajhidey22:
"Mercy Said No!" - Written by Eni Ola

I do hope you find this story interesting and worthwhile...



Source: http://gospelbreed.com/2016/09/mercy-said-no-episode-1/

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Comments will be duly appreciated, .




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pwesently present.. let me read now

Following o..

amberacious:


Thanks... Hope to see your comments and criticisms in subsequent chapters...

No problemo..following

Dindy:
laughs.....it has ended oo, no other episode......thanks alot!!!....super thanks!

OK o.. you welcome

Chimeluv:
@ Joanee20 thank you....

You welcome

cooncudee:
If you read books, go read Dan Brown's Da Vinci code, then, I guess you shld be able to read the poem, if you want to read it.

Sure will..thanks. We learn everyday

ngaz:


Thanks dearie

You welcome

ozila:


no it can't end there na.
you started cheating on him because you don't love him.
you must continue oh

Lol..are you serious? don't have anything more to write o.. na trial ooo. Boss I hail o

Wow!! nice indeed.

If the nightmare has just begun then am following to know how it ends....nice one dindy

Ezekielosahon:
Lol. ..it's just a letter from an aggrieved brother....

I see

TheNathan:
We following

Its kinda ended..thanks for commenting

Following.. nice one

cooncudee:
its wasn't meant for just anybody to read

If you say so, am not used to it sha..

Beautiful.. you write good.

Wow nice letter Mr Christian..lol

Nice one..

Always following, I dey Ur back

How is someone supposed to read that?

Wow, cool

Nice collection, enjoyed them..thumbs up

You really write well.. nice one

Am just trying to see if I can write, what should I call this one, flash fiction or writing? Lol. Criticism please.

Divepen1
Ozila
missmossy





He detested deceit and infidelity. Marriage, to him, meant putting an end to promiscuity—or was it adultery?

How did I end up in this mess? I never thought I'd get caught, especially not like this. I married a man I felt nothing for. My parents pressured me, and I couldn't refuse.

"He's a good young man," they insisted. "A devout Christian. He loves you like no other. What more could you want, dear?"

"But Mom, I don't love him. I don't want to hurt him. I love someone else."

"Listen, Ng, I speak from experience. Don't dismiss a good man. If he loves you deeply, it's for the best. He'll treat you right. He doesn't smoke or drink. Consider it," Mom urged, seeking Dad's support.

"Angel, your mom's right. We can't deceive you. We love you and want the best. You may think it's old-fashioned, but we just want your happiness," Dad added.

"But Dad, I can't live with someone I don't love," I cried. "Please don't make me do this."

I was so confused. My head spun as if there were a party inside. My heart was in turmoil. Who am I to defy my parents' wishes? That's how I ended up in this sham of a marriage. But now, caught in a hotel room with another man I love, by my supposed husband, I wished I had disobeyed my churchy parents just once.

fikfaknuel:

thanks, ma'am. You're the one who made me start this. Sorry for the other story. I couldn't just complete it.

No problem... I only hope you finish this one, thumbs up

fikfaknuel:
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(appears) what did I miss? thanks for the mention..great story you have here..

fikfaknuel:
sleemoon ebukav jumizie13 dominicnuel ashatoda kingdave30 joanee20 spikedawson.... slimhan daeveed Rex1 prettydock22 favou iamlukas sharonnnn donpoker9 mattkent fiyah ddonoflife herzern rosalieene datjohn starrylady young03 angelsss laddybay TheSociopath gattus amyvals

(appears) what did I miss? thanks for the mention...

Nice..ride on Joe, missmossy come and see o..

Na so so "wish" the guy dey wish sef...ride on