Literature › Re: The Bond That Can Never Be Broken by joanee20(f): 12:26am On Oct 25, 2016 |
shurley22: Try and read all over, maybe then you'd notice when they switched to calling after texting each other. thanks..I see it now |
Literature › Re: The Bond That Can Never Be Broken by joanee20(f): 12:09am On Oct 24, 2016 |
If na message you send cara how eniola take hear the conversation? pls correct it o..nice story 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Amanda (A Choice Between Love And Revenge) by joanee20(f): 11:35pm On Oct 11, 2016 |
Great story, following |
Literature › Re: "THE SEXY MONSTER" :Short Story By Drstan by joanee20(f): 11:31pm On Oct 11, 2016 |
Following bumper to anywhere |
Literature › Re: Mercy Said No! - A Christian Romance Story by joanee20(f): 11:27pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
Olajhidey22: "Mercy Said No!" - Written by Eni Ola
I do hope you find this story interesting and worthwhile...
Source: http://gospelbreed.com/2016/09/mercy-said-no-episode-1/
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Comments will be duly appreciated, .
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Story Source: http://gospelbreed.com
Facebook Page: https://facebook.com/GospelBreed pwesently present.. let me read now 2 Likes |
Literature › Re: Good Morning Mr President.. A Fictional Short Story by joanee20(f): 11:22pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
Following o.. |
Literature › Re: Penstruation by joanee20(f): 3:27pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
amberacious: Thanks... Hope to see your comments and criticisms in subsequent chapters... No problemo..following 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Nightmare Story By Dindy by joanee20(f): 3:26pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
Dindy: laughs.....it has ended oo, no other episode......thanks alot!!!....super thanks! OK o.. you welcome |
Literature › Re: Rose by joanee20(f): 3:25pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
Chimeluv: @ Joanee20 thank you.... You welcome |
Literature › Re: The Poet (A Beautiful Poem II) by joanee20(f): 3:24pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
cooncudee: If you read books, go read Dan Brown's Da Vinci code, then, I guess you shld be able to read the poem, if you want to read it. Sure will..thanks. We learn everyday 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Dusk by joanee20(f): 3:23pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
ngaz: Thanks dearie You welcome |
Literature › Re: Obedient Child by joanee20(op): 3:20pm On Oct 10, 2016 |
ozila: no it can't end there na. you started cheating on him because you don't love him. you must continue oh Lol..are you serious? don't have anything more to write o.. na trial ooo. Boss I hail o 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Penstruation by joanee20(f): 3:43pm On Oct 09, 2016 |
Wow!! nice indeed. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Nightmare Story By Dindy by joanee20(f): 3:40pm On Oct 09, 2016 |
If the nightmare has just begun then am following to know how it ends....nice one dindy |
Literature › Re: Letter To Ochuko by joanee20(f): 7:43am On Oct 09, 2016 |
Ezekielosahon: Lol. ..it's just a letter from an aggrieved brother.... I see |
Literature › Re: Obedient Child by joanee20(op): 7:38am On Oct 09, 2016 |
TheNathan: We following Its kinda ended..thanks for commenting |
Literature › Re: The Goodgal (A story) by joanee20(f): 5:47pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
Following.. nice one |
Literature › Re: The Poet (A Beautiful Poem II) by joanee20(f): 4:39pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
cooncudee: its wasn't meant for just anybody to read If you say so, am not used to it sha..  |
Literature › Re: Rose by joanee20(f): 1:52pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
Beautiful.. you write good. |
Literature › Re: Letter To Ochuko by joanee20(f): 1:42pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
Wow nice letter Mr Christian..lol |
Literature › Re: Don’t Be A Hero – A Short Story By Emmanuel Okoro by joanee20(f): 1:39pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
Nice one.. |
Literature › Re: Choices by joanee20(f): 1:36pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
Always following, I dey Ur back 1 Like |
Literature › Re: The Poet (A Beautiful Poem II) by joanee20(f): 1:03pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
How is someone supposed to read that? |
Literature › Re: See These Incredibe Art Drawings By Nigerian Boy, Georgesketch by joanee20(f): 1:00pm On Oct 08, 2016 |
Wow, cool |
Literature › Re: My Collection Of Flash Fiction. by joanee20(f): 8:21am On Oct 08, 2016 |
Nice collection, enjoyed them..thumbs up 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Dusk by joanee20(f): 12:50am On Oct 08, 2016 |
You really write well.. nice one 1 Like |
Literature › Obedient Child by joanee20(op): 12:43am On Oct 08, 2016*. Modified: 11:04pm On Feb 03, 2024 |
Am just trying to see if I can write, what should I call this one, flash fiction or writing? Lol. Criticism please.
Divepen1 Ozila missmossy
He detested deceit and infidelity. Marriage, to him, meant putting an end to promiscuity—or was it adultery?
How did I end up in this mess? I never thought I'd get caught, especially not like this. I married a man I felt nothing for. My parents pressured me, and I couldn't refuse.
"He's a good young man," they insisted. "A devout Christian. He loves you like no other. What more could you want, dear?"
"But Mom, I don't love him. I don't want to hurt him. I love someone else."
"Listen, Ng, I speak from experience. Don't dismiss a good man. If he loves you deeply, it's for the best. He'll treat you right. He doesn't smoke or drink. Consider it," Mom urged, seeking Dad's support.
"Angel, your mom's right. We can't deceive you. We love you and want the best. You may think it's old-fashioned, but we just want your happiness," Dad added.
"But Dad, I can't live with someone I don't love," I cried. "Please don't make me do this."
I was so confused. My head spun as if there were a party inside. My heart was in turmoil. Who am I to defy my parents' wishes? That's how I ended up in this sham of a marriage. But now, caught in a hotel room with another man I love, by my supposed husband, I wished I had disobeyed my churchy parents just once. |
Literature › Re: AJEGUNLE : The Tale From The Ghetto by joanee20(f): 11:52am On Oct 03, 2016 |
fikfaknuel: thanks, ma'am. You're the one who made me start this. Sorry for the other story. I couldn't just complete it. No problem... I only hope you finish this one, thumbs up |
Literature › Re: AJEGUNLE : The Tale From The Ghetto by joanee20(f): 11:22am On Oct 03, 2016 |
fikfaknuel: sleemoon ebukav jumizie13 dominicnuel ashatoda kingdave30 joanee20 spikedawson slimhan daeveed Rex1 prettydock22 favou iamlukas sharonnnn donpoker9 mattkent fiyah ddonoflife herzern rosalieene datjohn starrylady young03 angelsss laddybay TheSociopath gattus amyvals (appears) what did I miss? thanks for the mention..great story you have here.. |
Literature › Re: AJEGUNLE : The Tale From The Ghetto by joanee20(f): 8:41am On Oct 03, 2016 |
fikfaknuel: sleemoon ebukav jumizie13 dominicnuel ashatoda kingdave30 joanee20 spikedawson.... slimhan daeveed Rex1 prettydock22 favou iamlukas sharonnnn donpoker9 mattkent fiyah ddonoflife herzern rosalieene datjohn starrylady young03 angelsss laddybay TheSociopath gattus amyvals (appears) what did I miss? thanks for the mention... |
Literature › Re: Choices by joanee20(f): 12:14am On Sep 19, 2016 |
Nice..ride on Joe, missmossy come and see o.. 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Choices by joanee20(f): 9:56am On Sep 16, 2016 |
Na so so "wish" the guy dey wish sef...ride on 1 Like |