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metalgear11:
Yeah, I plan to drop something today.

metalgear11:
Na wa oh.

Maka91:
By the way of the story! Eliza was the first love to Richard, who think she(eliza) can have him back by raised up her dirty stuff like what she did with the massage boy and maybe she'll still doing with her colleauge(weatherman)... Eliza just digging up a plan in order to have Richard to herself that is, the things that would make Richard to hate her (anthena)

gal10:
I’ll come back when Richard and Athena are back together �� I’m tired of Avery

Rosemary33:
Ladies and Gentlemen.
It's been a pleasure sharing this story with you. There is little left of it and we will be drawing it to an end very, very soon. Every other thing remaining will be left for your imagination ��

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royalguy123:
Thanks for the updates and steady apologies if the updates are delayed YOURE A GOOD LEADER
To the storyline Dr Richard will settle for Athena that I believe,
Avery will not be his wife due to Eliza 'treat to her,she will either be killed or she will run for her dear life
Richard will stand by his ex wife if any scandal befalls her
That I have seen !!!!!

gal10:
Haaaa me I don’t like this o��

queenemelda:
I totally get you. However, in my opinion, Chioma is a soft daddy's girl, she can't go through this alone. She'll need James' help. Besides, all that attraction between them can't just go to waste.

Moura7:
What's rural rugged?

Moura7:
Abeg oo... Make una no vex. Something came up last week, was a rumor flying that nysc camp was to start on Wednesday 12 Oct and so I started rushing preparations cause I hadn't even started at all. Now, we're hearing another date. Pls make una no vex, I'm still prepping but let's see how this weekend to Monday would be... Would try to update. Have a nice weekend

Moura7:
Next update, this weekend. Continue to have a great week. Make una try dey go for WOSE at Salvation Ministries sha o

Moura7:
My people, happy weekend... New update soon.

Xavier5:
I'm surprised that some people now thinks George is the bad guy, not James. Dearies, James is the bad guy. What you're just seeing is James being a good gamer, and Rosemary33 dancing buga with your heads --- it's typical of writers, I do it a lot.

If James isn't the bad guy

* Why wasn't he interested in exposing George from the beginning? Why was he interested in seducing Chioma, and stalking her on Social Media.

* Why is the whole casting doubt thing coming after the failure of his seduction and stalking?

* Explain the "Ride or Die" call with Fola's pic on James phone.

* If George was the one that made the call, explain how George wasn't fiddling with his phone when that call popped up on James phones? Also, explain Fola's pix.

* Explain why Fola will tell chioma to;

--- tell Oliver to stop, a pointer that she knows James is in Chioma's life.
--- save herself all thanks to her being in the web.

* Explain what the Nissan Altima that picked up Fola was doing in James' office.

* Explain the "bleep" exclamation from James after the "ride or die" revelation from Chioma.

* Explain James' anger and demand for Chioma to leave his office, the same lady he has been dying to see?

* Explain James' subtle threat to Chioma to back off Fola's case.

* But what if George sexed, raped and killed James' wife, and dropped the "ride or die" message on the scene which had made James to return for revenge with the intention of doing same to George's wife?

Good angle, but if that's the case, explain the "ride or die" call with Fola's pix on James'phone. Shouldn't that be on George's phone? Also, explain George anger, "bleep" statement, and subtle threat to Chioma, after her revelation.

* This story is told from Chioma's perspective, and from the looks of things, it's Chioma recounting her experience, and this recounting of hers started with James being LECHEROUS. That's a pointer.

James is the fvcking bad guy, Rosemary33 is just being a good writer with her twist, but also, in being a good writer, she has dropped Easter eggs or teasers... pointers to the villain of the story.

James is attempting to cast doubt on Chioma's mind because his seduction failed. His plan was simply, seduce, if that fails, stalk, and since that failed, next is cast doubt on her mind about her husband, and if that fails, he will utilize threats.

As a matter of fact, from the story so far, James is playing the doubt game on both George and Chioma. He is casting doubt on George about the infidelity of Chioma, and to Chioma, the character of George. And of course, if he is casting doubts on their minds, definitely, he will plant the evidence.
The aim is simply to create problems between the couple in other to leave Chioma vulnerable to his ambition.

In other to properly nail James, Chioma should show or send a picture of James to Fola for confirmation. If yes, which it is or will be, she should walk up something from there especially since she's involve. But if no, she should manipulate Fola into getting the info since she's also involve, all thanks to Fola's statement/ warning.

I suspect that James killed his wife because,

* He caught her cheating, which made him angry, driving him into commiting such abomination. The "ride or die" message on the crime scene was to pass the message that his wife is his and his alone and not another.
The awareness, hurt and anger must have pushed him into developing an obsession for married women. If they fvcked his wife, he has to fvck other people's wife

Or

* He had the fetish of dating and marrying women, either single or married, whom he subjects to enormous sexual and abusive practice, as he is doing with Fola. This sexual and abusive practices eventually leads to the death of the women which affirms the "ride or die" message.

It's difficult for writers and filmmakers to take me unawares. Only few of them have been able to do so, this is because as a writer, I read and see films from a writer's perspective. So let's see if Rosemary33 can take me unawares, but what are the odds?

Absolutely beautiful and excellent story you have here Dr or soon to be Dr Rosemary33. More Pentecost experience to your writing. But abeg, when Line In Between go return from vacation nah?



#Xavier

Moura7:
Hey guys... Really sorry on not coming through like I said but would compensate this week. I'll try and do a double. Pls don't be too mad. Have Happy and produvtive new week

Moura7:
Weekend again, Thank God... New update Sunday as usual or latest Monday evening. Make una sha help me o cus only God knows how many times I've changed the ending of this story and extended it.

Moura7:
Weekend again, Thank God... New update Sunday as usual or latest Monday evening. Make una sha help me o cus only God knows how many times I've changed the ending of this story and extended it.

Monoke:
RIP English

PumpumPrince:
ok helo. my uncle is lookin for strong beaitiful lady like u who can do house girl work & earns N15,000 a months meanin u will earns upto 100,000 a years includin free bedroom, free educations were u can spek english & maths & learn subjects, free food plus free electicity.
please are u still intaressted please? U WANT?

Rosemary33:
I will drop next episode tomorrow. Let me do school assignment today, I'm running my PhD program. And assignments are piled up

Dunkjames5:
Doing good.

Dunkjames5:
Ok

Dunkjames5:
are you there?

nationalnwa:
Why do all writers on this platform do this all the time..Why start what you know you won't finish?
Instead of stopping halfway and start referring readers to your blog or links,why not post chapters here and the next two or three there (link,blog)..
But pleased always try to be consistent.
Nice story by the way