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EvaJael:
419 views and no comment...lol...I understand wht nairaland writers are so frustrated sometimes.
Abegiii make person talk small for kinkini encouragement biko

MhizDherbee:
Lol! Thanks... I kinda admire u alot thou and wish we could get to know each other on a more personal level. Its jez one of my many wishes!!!

bollyjaysmart:
Biko, my brother... This your story was meant for the cinemas. May God help you to acquire that desired goal. Am indeed glued to a story for the first time all night. Felt like a true life story, Go get your scripts ready. I pray you find a link soon.

MATBILL10:
good story this is the best story i have ever read on nairaland i have been reading since yesterday i just finish now honestly it's worth the time, i'll advice u convert this to a movie good starting great finishing. thumbs up to u @kay80

Rhayne:
Nice one...started it last night,just finishin it n it was worth my semi-sleepless night

Basit99:
nice story

corpershun:
Wawu!!! I had a great read, just kept on smiling till I finished, great suspense, great story, great ending.

I like that the little boy got your name... Oluwakayode.
It will make it hard to forget the writer and the story... Thumbs Up.

tyeenigga:
What a story to recommend for friends, couldn't stop until I finished the story. Nice piece more from you

MhizDherbee:
Kayo80, it seems u haf a thing for unfinished stories... Please do finish your not completed stories! I still love you thou....

Macdawid:
Mehn!... Tbh, i've never really had to read any story on NL, but for the very 1st time after reading this i must confess that it was very interesting; that should even be an understatement. The storyline is very chilled and unpredictable (unlike de norm in 9ja). Don't waste it man (convert it to a movie, and please do give it an excellent ending... That's if u do consider converting it), earlier the better u know. More inspiration to u, wish u well.
Kudos!

Terver90:
Wow you are really good a whole anti reading like me finished it and I am in quest for more

DoctorCraft:
This is one of the best story I have ever read on N.land
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@kayo80
jah bless for the write up... :DThis is one of the best stories I have ever read on N.land.

Divasoress:
Wow! kudos..Very interesting piece.

Del17:
This is a great piece, the story line, the suspense...waoh! Keep it up

lakezone67:
If only every writer on nairaland was like you, I would read every story posted... not leaving a single story

BrickMan:
I say this is not regular a bit.
Pleas hastily edit this for a Named publisher. It is good for the press already but for just a little more polishing.

It is such a wonderful read. Please be encouraged to do more. keep it this real and simple. I see awards on your path!

Warm regards,

Nickibeauty:
Wow wat a lovely story more knowledge bro

PastorAji:
kk bro one love........and may your ink never run dry........

PastorAji:
My name is Oluwande Towoju.....the Kayode Odusanya I know well is a writer and he is a friend of mine on Facebook

lharstborn:
Nah you don't need to write a sequel...the new twist will put the readers on another platform of bated breath and suspense which will make them deduce what next is to happen to the characters, by continuing the story by themselves in their minds.

All the same..great story bro

lharstborn:
@ kayo80.. This is a very lovely piece..I enjoyed every bit of it,an was held spellbound all through to the end.

Actually I was expecting a twist at the end of the story when Dupe called Dapo to tell him she was leaving the country and won't get to see him or contact him again. I thought the twist there was gonna be she had gotten pregnant for him also.

Forgive my dry sense of humour but that would have blown the whole suspense of the water and given the story a whole new angle.

More ink to your pen bro..keep it up.