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teddybiyasi:
dad(kr0ne) & coogar what nah you guys have been snubbing your mentions lately oga ooooooh



gladyys must you kill someone for crying out loud kilode the guy provoke you reach that level

My sweet daughter, how can I snub you na? How are you?

lagunna1:
kunle.. u scarce for that end o..

u dey hide ni?

Hahahaha! I no scarce o. Na hustle dey pull me back at times. How far, bro?

Obainojazz, go and post ur verse quick.

ELYMAXiimus:
gladyys asked me to tag her in the thread, when it's out!...

I mean your retort to Ladyboss.

Open for Votes

Emaprince
Lagunna1
Ibime
Coogar
Guykhena
Krone

Elymaxiimus, please edit ur comment in that thread. Chai!

obainojazz:
Posting my verse....
Krone and darkrebel...if he doesn't post
Close the thread

Please wait for him a bit. Don't post yet.

laykorn:
*cherlene with an 'e', sir.

Oh, I didn't notice. Thanks.

sinizia:
Kr0ne, message sent. Any no-show, don't post my bars.

Ok, but if she posts, I'd like u to post ur verse yourself.

LadyBoss1:
Accepted oga krone hope say u dey good

Always good, dear. Thanks

Geoxpress:
Thanks brother mi. Abeg check my flow for ffr. I don wack finish

Na me wack pass

ELYMAXiimus:
ladyboss1... I apologize . didn't know you were familiar with krone n co.

thought you were one of those guest that just come and start posting in battle threads anyhow. pls read the rules next time. ndo!

Elymax, they're the sponsors of this tourney. I was told to copy them. Please be kind to them.
Apologies, Ladyboss1 and Charlene.
Please accept this flower.

sinizia:
Reply so i can mail you my verse. Service is poor here. Only post my bars when you see that of Gladys'.

Send it to kroneanozie@yahoo.com
But why don't u wait a bit. Gladdys doesn't pull no shows.

Geoxpress:
Lol so all of una forget me abi ?.kr0ne and Elymax . Even una

Where u go before? Anybody dey pursue you?
Welcome, bro.

The Holocaust Tourney[WOME][week of main event][first round]

[size=28pt]Lyricyst Vs Obainojazz[/size]


voting criteria

•opener - 1 point

•rhymes - 2 points

•similes/ metaphors - 2 points

•punchlines -3 points

•personals - 2 points

•flow - 1 point

•wordplays - 2 points

•closer - 1 point


Rules & Regulations✘

•Bar limit:-10 bars[10 quatrains]

•Deadline:- 18th June 2015 [8pm]

•Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date

•No biting[stealing/plagiarizing], no stretching, feeding & no recycling of lines

•No smearing comments about any bar or biting accusations without proof

•The rest of the rules can be found on this thread:-
https://www.nairaland.com/2375473/holocaust-tourney-preliminary-stage-wome-week

•Goodluck..

laykorn:
Vets, please someone wants to record an acapella audio with his computer and he needs am application that will give his audio a near-studio effect.

Who knows of any?

Kr0ne
Emaprince
gottoboy
sosiqdude
Gladyys

cc: Jreyez

The Holocaust Tourney[WOME][week of main event][first round]

[size=28pt]Sinizia Vs Gladdys[/size]


voting criteria

•opener - 1 point

•rhymes - 2 points

•similes/ metaphors - 2 points

•punchlines -3 points

•personals - 2 points

•flow - 1 point

•wordplays - 2 points

•closer - 1 point


Rules & Regulations✘

•Bar limit:-10 bars[10 quatrains]

•Deadline:- 18th June 2015 [8pm]

•Verses should be posted by both battlers on or not later than deadline date

•No biting[stealing/plagiarizing], no stretching, feeding & no recycling of lines

•No smearing comments about any bar or biting accusations without proof

•The rest of the rules can be found on this thread:-
https://www.nairaland.com/2375473/holocaust-tourney-preliminary-stage-wome-week

•Goodluck..

cc: Charlene, Ladyboss1
courtesy: Darebel666

ELYMAXiimus:
yeah, that's lime's fault.

but I'm saying this for subsequent battles.
as I have noticed some of you are not usually online during that 8pm.

I was online till 9pm yesterday.

Heywhizzy:
oga Krone,you fit help me analyze my bars..make I know corrections to make

Your build-ups, bro, they're overstretched and they weaken your final punch; try curtailing them. And reduce ur fillers too.
I noticed your rhymes have improved a lot. Kudos!

ELYMAXiimus:
you judges should always give verds on time. latest 30mins after the battlers post
delaying verdicts is annoying, tiring and boring ...
no vibes at all.

The last time I checked that thread, battle was closed...and so I went to sleep. Just logged in now and saw my mentions. It's not my fault.

Warriblood, shame on u for the no show. Shame on u!

Opener - Limerick

Rhymes - Dark

Metaphors - Limerick

Punchlines - Limerick

Personal - Tie

Wordplay - Dark

Flow - Tie

Closer - Dark

Mvgt - Limerick

I thought this battle was closed before

Hussl3r:
lmao....whr ve u be bruh.....
busy makin a name foe ur self on NL ryt

Not really, bro. Since I've left the other side, I decided to pitch my tent here. Been a long time o. Really missed u, no homo.

Heywhizzy:
don't expand the issue of personnel..Google it or check your dic,then cùm and thank me later

Go and script jo! You're facing a formidable opponent tonight, the one and only King Of Wordplay (K.O.W). So be extra serious.

Hussl3r:
thanks man...u av no idea hw much uve hlpd me

Bluntler, broooo!!!

laykorn:
A growing menace? This is the best of jive, I guess, that I will ever behold from you, sir. This is the grand blarney! You remain a model, ever. Thank you, sir!


How do I work on my executions?

Your rhymes, bro, your rhymes. If you're doing 3 syllables in a quatrain, make sure it remains 3. Secondly, I noticed that, on few occasions, you fix your punchline in the middle, but that's wrong. Always let your punchline come in the last line, unless you're doing double punches. But whichever way, always ensure your punchline is the last thing to come in every single bar in your battle verse.

danbrowndmf:
Vector did a wordplay like this on "kingkong"

Who the hell is Vector. There's only King Of Wordplay I know, and that's Warriblood.

However, I think we should introduce 'vickybash' as a synonym for 'no show'. We can always substitute them in the battle rules.
Eg, "verses must be dropped by both contestants on so-so time. A vickybash will lead to a lengthy ban"

Emaprince:
Laykorn, you've improved massively. Your ideas are near-perfectly executed. The personal was the bomb! Is there a song titled 'no show' ? If there is, then you executed that part like a vet.(Whatchu think, kr0ne?)..you just need to improve in rhymes..like..trying multisyllabic rhymes. Even if its 2syllables because, vicky woulda obliterated you in that aspect. Go check her previous verses.

With this kinda material, you could have easily wiped out Tashaa.

All in all, you are good to go.. Keep working hard, bro!

I think I've seen one TV program entitled "The No Show". But I don't know if that's where Laykorn pulled the idea from. I find the 'Swiss Rome/in Italy doing time' punchline rather fascinating. The concept is dope, though the execution is not perfect. I see Laykorn as a growing menace in this rap community

This battle is yet another disappointment. I expected more from Obesemf because he's experienced. Danbrowndmf impressed me a lot with his ideas. He just needs to work on his rhymes and setup, and also avoid repeating words in one bar. I like that "share/nothing to offer line a lot. Kudos!

Mvgt - Obesemf by a very little margin.

sinizia:
LOL. I don't know if it's only me feeling pained because of this. It's hard for me to script a tight punchline, then after brainstorming to come up with one, my contestant pulls a no-show? The thing dey pain me seriously.

Kr0ne, i'll send you my bars on Thursday by 4pm latest. If you don't see Galdys' lines before 8pm, don't paste mine please. No-one has any excuse after like one week earlier notification.

Alright.

laykorn:
I understand your pains, brother. I fell the same way myself too. I sacrificed a lot to have that scripted. Now, I just feel I could have done something faster and I would still win. So what was the essence of my sacrifice? I think niggas ain't taking the contest any serious.

Don't let that bother you. You've moved on to the next stage is all that matters. Your sacrifice is not wasted. It's part of the game. . . .definitely there'll be some letdown. And I should add that you start working again; you don't know who you'll meet next.