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ELYMAXiimus:
lol. You're rhyming only one
syllable.
If you're to rhyme only two syllables, then all the syllables must rhyme. Why?
Cos they must start nd end with rhyming words.... Awsome will rhyme with JUST COME,,, nd so on

Basically
ALL MULTIS START ND END WITH RHYMING WORDS....

Here's a better way to make your example a multis

I'm the Most awsome/ while this foe's fearsome/ ?.?.?.?.?

Complete the scheme with that bosom punch

No! I wasnt talking about just two syllables with my example. The SOM sound is not what ends the multies but what starts it.. But all the same i get ur point clearer now..

De Most awesome/Dis foe's fearsome/
Devour bosom/Dicktate more sum/ all these are 4 syllabic right?

Now! Look this exmaple! Each bar contains 4 lines:

First bar::
5 syllabic rhymes/4 syllabic rhymes/5 syllabic rhymes/4 syllabic rhymes

2nd bar:
6 syllabic rhymes/4 syllabic rhymes/ 6 syllabic rhymes/ 4 syllabic rhymes

Is that a rhyme scheme? Or its a rule that all multies in a bar must contain same number of syllables?

No updates so far. Not even observations from those watching

It is well!

007Bruce:
ksslib
raptechniques./2011/08/13/how-to-rhyme-multi-syllables-like-eminem/

Thanks. I ll check out the link.

ELYMAXiimus:
okay. Lets say syllables instead of words...

in the second bar.... I decided to rhyme 4syllables...
E.g: eff ing re ble= 4

so here's the scheme for the bar
Effing rebel/very able/ yellow label/

notice that each of the first syllable of these phrases have the sound ER... They rhyme

Nd each of their last syllable Sounds BULL....

Hence the whole phrases are multi-rhymes



Effing reBLE/ VEry aBLE/ YEllow laBLE/

I put the main(prominent) rhymes in capitals..

The small letters are the kyna silent(not salient.... Sorry),..

Ehen. This is more like it .

Now, Rebel Very and Yellow all have two syllables each. When doing multies, rather than Ryhming the first syllable, can one get away with rather rhyming the second syllable.

E..g like I did with.
Awesome fearsome and bosom

And still have the first syallables------- Awe/ fear and Bo counted as part of the multies?

Or its a general rule that multies start counting only if the first syllables rhyme?

lumeviewscom:
I didn't even know you were a guy until this moment. Thought I was TEASING a lady rather than ACCUSING a guy.

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ELYMAXiimus:
.... This dude aint HEALTHY IN THE BRAiN/
he should stop preTENDING HE IS SANE/
cos he wouldnt draw the battle line...........
If he used his PENCILS "n" HIS PAINTS.....


Check this


K is captured by this EFFing reBEL
he needs help, nd i'm VEry aBLE/
so i'm bringing down these bars . ..... To make "Liberty" like lipton YEllow laBEL/ you get?

just an example though

Heavy sigh. I still dont get it.

I quote again----- EVERY FIRST WORD OF EACH LINE MUST RHYME. THE LAST WORDS TOO.

what do you mean by first word of a line? Point the first words of your lines that rhymed.

ochon:
LOL!!

It wasn't a joke. If it was, then it's an expensive joke. You used to read my former diary, have I ever sounded like sexist? If for anything, I've advocated for female rights on NL, so his accusation is preposterous.

I almost forget say you no dey use woman matter play.

ochon:
Me a sexist? The same guy against the insult on Mira while Luis is made a don?

The same guy that have standing up for Lilian?

You must've failed English in your WAEC!!

Most comedians in our country are males, it's very rare to see female comedians. They're very few. So I was complimenting her for being funny, not being sexist or whatever crap you came up with.

Ode.

That was a joke. . Maybe

ELYMAXiimus:
the highlighted words/phrases spoilt the multi-rhyme scheme....

When using a multi rhyme scheme.. Every first word of each line of a stanza must rhyme, nd every last word of it.....

Now the middle words should rhyme too, but some words are salient. These salient words can be ignored nd matched with another salient word which may not even rhyme with it ......

I dont get you. Come again or or better still, use examples.

Lagunna:
We want to see..

coogar vs kr0ne..

elymaxiimus vs iamaromolaeran.. the rematch

geoxpress vs illness.. the rematch

elymaxiimus vs teddybiyasi

ksslib vs mikuz

Na for my own you con put teeth shebi ?

You know, at first, i always felt rhymes only meant matching something like hook with book, crook, look, fluke.. e..t..c Not until i heard about multies i..e Multi syllabic rhyming..

Like i've been told many times, my lines lack multies. Truth is, its not like doing multies is too difficult for me to master but i always find myself subconsciously wanting to just rhyme the end word rather than the syllables cos it sounds better..
E..g i find it strange rhyming something like chair with cup... stool/fan--- though the syllables rhyme.. Same with table/oven ... Button/handle e..t..c cos the pronounciation aint even close.. It just sounds not cool and i end up just rhymin the end words rather..

Well, i ll like to master multi syllabic rhyming and know whats its really ALL about cos i believe i am perhaps missing something that makes it so cool.

Lemme give an Example with 4 bars:: Now i ll try as much possible to sacrifice rhyming the end words like i normally do ...
..

I silence this nigga, no re-mute control/cuz you throw slow punches like BB phones booting your blows/
..... erryone refutes you dO.p.e/ cos your line's like stagnant gutters! dude, you's needing a flow/!

I lunch daggers and stab the f@g/hes a fake nigga, a lying lad/
I make venues crowd in millions just by spitting facts/
But @his last show, he dropped a 'wind blower on its feet' & claimed he got 'standing fans'/


Lib converse with gods/cuz am smart and awesome with words/...... this dumb lad his mum denied ' br£ast milk'... so i showed why am fearsome with swords/
When i slayed to make the nigga rest @ da 'bosom' of the lord/!

This bout is like a scuffle with his helper/ cuz i wont punch but teach texts! hes awful with the letters/ even offline, his speeches aint clever/
And wont be a smooth talker even if his lips we ruffle with sand paper/!



Now pls point out the multies in those bars. Why they rhyme or not. And why you started counting the multies from a particular word... If you didnt find any or it wasnt stable, let me know what i did wrong..

Coogar and Krone, your inputs ll be appreciated. I ll have other questions to ask pending the nature and depth of the answer i get.. Thanks!

Rajesh really tried with his indian accent.

azeeza:
Lwkmd! You badt gann

Lol. If you had watched her diary session, you ll understand.

Her own don dey too much.

russello:
Ladies and gentlemen!!!!

Behold your xfactor bba hotshots winner!

Lmfao!

Lol.

Biggie can you kindly drag over Sabsabi out of the diary room? or better still, send your goons.

Its getting to 3hours already and shes not making any sense whatsoever. Keeps going in circles and trying to force fake tears that doesnt even fit her. She does have alot to learn from KC moore afterall. Actress my nyash.

Isnt Sabina just the most delusional person ever to grace BBA?

Abeg comot for my TV screen make I see road. Old mama wey no gree give pikin br£east finish cos of BBA.

shoefreak:
okay. Hehehehe... I meant 'lynch'

***nods head*** . Thats good.

Dannyxy:
here, there is no page without macvites goons making noise, 24/7...

Hmmn thanks.

I go just kuku visit the page sometime to see for myself!

What da hell?

shoefreak:
I wanna drip all over him

Na guykhena go open thread?

I hope by 'drip' it means you want to lynch him & not what iam thinking.

Yes

Dannyxy:
abeg make una go bba Facebook Page too.

#tayothexfactor

mac2 boys have infested the place, na only mac2, mac2 dey reign there.

maybe I should snap shot the page, those guys no dey joke at all...

Yea. Pls do. Snap as many as possible.

safarigirl:
wetin make una dey insult Trigga ma nigga like this?

I will not stand for it! Trezagah is far more entertaining than Macky0.1...he's the talking point, when he coughs twitter explodes. What is Macky0.1?

I take God beg una, make una no compare Trigga to that mime wey Zambia put for house say na artiste. Trigga is the Poo

Hahaha!

Dannyxy:
baba na how far?, jiki ya yi soki ko?

Eh mutumi na. Ya yi soki Sosai.

Mun gode allah.

shoefreak:
Olubukato!!! You hereby called out. 16 lines. Tomorrow. Don't you Dare chicken out ooo!!! I been dey look you since... now I don get your time. before I go kukuma throw away the key to your... you know I hold it, right?

Guykhena, oya!

ochon:
What's this X-factor thingy all about and is there any price for it?

Yes. The price will be given to the deserving housemate who won via the diary room.

ochon:
This is damn serious my brother. I noticed it earlier but ignored it; but since Safarigirl brought it up, I decided to investigate and boom!! She's right!!

I've even gone back to previous Hotshot's highlights and 70% of the comments are all about Wacky2. This is so unfair. How can someone that rarely get talked about on this platform or that of others, get so much attention? This is not fair on other HMs. Just see how Mira was evicted cos she's not as popular as that wood, Trezegah. This show is getting lame!!

If not for Trezagah, wacky would have been the Trezegah of the house .. smh

Well, for starters, lets see if he wins the X factor thingy.

ochon:
So I just came back from reading the BBA BORINGshots FB page...

Oh boy!! Wacky2's goons have got that place on lockdown, same as Twitter.. Any post, related or unrelated to Wacky2 will attract praises and hypes from his goons. It's like he paid these goons before he entered Biggie's house. What makes it more annoying is that Wacky2 has not had any update dedicated to him. He's like a spectator in that house yet his goons are all over the place disturbing tha peace!! If that nigga wins this BBA, then it's safe to say BBA is fùcked up.

Even the update about Tayo's reconcilation with HMs, which has nothing to do with Wacky2, had almost all the comments talking about Wacky2. I don't read comments anymore cos those annoying goons have nothing valuable to update other than Wacky2's campaign. Tufiakwa!!

Hmmmn. Na wa o.

So its this serious sef?

I wanted to post a pic of Lilian twerking this night but changed my mind before una cut off my head.

Good night.