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scopiicaar:
callous medics #b&balive#

Very callous indeed.

supernet4:
Hmmmmmm, I just av to say sumtin am a silent reader I hardly comment. These re my guesses; basket will be rescued by a good samaritan while black will be saved but they re definitely gonna lose contact nd meet yrs lata to be sworn enemies. I wish my guess is right sha anyway larrysun keep up d good wrk it's been a worthwhile ride with u so far

You've got a brilliant imagination, ma'am.

PBeni:
The last post got a brother sobbing. I pray Black doesn't die.

Larry keep up the good work, you sure are the best...

Thank you so much, sir.

LogoDWhiz:
Horrible!

LarrySun the master twister.

Looking at how Black will escape this alive.

But I think one of them will die. Since black is d protagonist, Basket myt b one to leave this world.

It's so sad. Terrible things happen without notice.

Missmossy:
Aww this is really saddening. Beautiful piece LarrySun kudos. Please keep Black alive.

Thank you so much, ma'am. Your word encourage me immensely.

ibolomo:
If either Black or Basket dies, I will beat that pharmacist black and blue. somebody hold me before I kill somebody oooo.

*Holding you, sir*

ProfGday:
"laws are like the cobweb,catching powerless flies but tear to shreds by fat cows.-Prof Gday.
Fat Cow-big time public looters. Powerless flies-petty thiefs
Feeling so sad...... Larryson,u're amazingly creative.

Nice quote, Prof. Thank you so much, sir.

Ollyfad:
sum1 had beta hold me b4 i dcid to give dis stupid pharmacist d beating of his life! cnt e undastnd dat stealing drugs worth two naira wuld b d last tin on a thief's mind? drug na food?? y r sum ppl jst damn heartless! its jst lyk beating sum1 dat stole bread nd all d person kips doing z stuffing his mouth wit d bread nd yt d beating wont stp bcus d fools refusd to c dat e z only trying to preserve his miserable life!
cwiuzly! i dnt tink sango's anger cn match mine ryt nw!
sum1 tld u anoda lyf z on d verge of being lost nd all u cn tink of z two naira!
larry i nid his address...e nids sum cwiuz talling to!
i knw black cnt die yt bt pls jst make dose fools c reason nd allow black gt bk to basket in tym to save his life!
*phew!* feels gud to lt d anger out
once again u av succeeded in making me forget dat d characters r only modelled on world realities nd i cnt gt a hold on any of dem unless i wanna gt a hold on society itself wich is rada impossible.
kudos nd tnks for sharing once again.....dis r d kind of stories dat nids to win d awards dat some excuse for a story r winning.
*i av one particular woman in mind*

I can only imagine how angry you would be right now.

I know that particular woman. She's awesome!

mayemy:
This is so touching. life is not fair, i feel 4 those helpless boys, larry u are just d best words can't discribe how gud u are

Thank you so much, ma'am. Without you, there is no me.

domido:
Larry, pls don't make Basket die. The story is getting emotional. I can only imagine d story Black is gonna tell when he finally makes a breakthrough. But if there's one thing I know about Larrysun,it is the twist d story is gonna take @ d end especially where I said he's gonna make a Success.

Let's wait and see.

omotalkie:
Chai! All for his friend. because of dis, Larry pls dont let any of dem die pls

It's beyond my power.

labaski:
Larry, if u kill peter or basket, their blood ll be on u o.pls don't kill dem its dangerous plss.. d update was quite long.. thanks..

I hope this doesn't make me a bad storyteller.

Jollyjoy:
Oh larry! Plz do nt basket die. U are doing Great work here.

Thank you so much, ma'am.

Sleekyshuga:
Great job, Larry...


Basket shouldn't die pwizzzz ..


Still, I follow...

Thank you, ma'am. Some terrible things are beyond our controls. Even, sometimes, prayers are not answered. But the great tragedy may only happen to pave way for the greater good to manifest.

Ollyfad:
*fervently praying* God please let dis b one of those sickness dat u tink u euld die bt end up surviving it.
av cried enof already...if basket dies my roommate myt end up binding nd taking me to a doctor.
pls pls pls dnt condemn black to a lonely lyf again...

I'm so sorry . At least, he would not be lonely anymore. Someone loved him.

Patebere:
Nice work

Thank you, sir.

Adinije:
I have strong feelings that Basket will survive but he might end up becoming a Policeman, then friends will became foes. More grease to ur elbow Larry.

When your friend suddenly becomes your enemy, that means he has been hating on you right from day one.

I don't think that is the case between Black and Basket. Their own case is tragic.

Nickymezor:
Basket must nt die oooo..... I hope he makes it cuz Black is gonna be devastated...well done, Oga Larry

It's so sad.

discoprophet:
Omoh ehn, oga Larry u dey do nice job here.

Thank you, sir. I dig your moniker.

stuff46:
I hope Larry does not take black into the hands of a Native doctor.

Btw, lovely update. Hoping Peter Black succeds in this his quest.

LOL! @Native doctor. The introduction of a native doctor would foil the storyline.

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D9ty7:
Good point bro, but readers on nairaland dnt criticize they only read and tell you how much explosive power you've got cos you are the bomb

One of the readers I give the most respect is Kingphilip. I think he should be among the critics; he's read a lot of people's stories, and he critiques nicely. If we're going to include the readers, I suggest we start with Kingphilip.

I hope the nominated writers will have the time to perform their jobs.

Colospor:
You have an assignment.

LOL! Okay, sir. As your Lordship pleases.

Colospor:
Okay, I'll frequent here often and try my best, and I also concur with D9ty7, we might have one or two things to learn from the sesquipedalians, e.g Larrysun, royver and so on.

I don't know the meaning of that word - 'sesquipedalians'.

joseph1832:
The question is, how does a stallion fucccck? And has she ever seen stallion fucccck?. lmao!.

You know sometimes I just feel like hugging Ishilove and sometimes I feel like slapping her!. Lol.

Don't corrupt my innocent mind, sir!

Ishilove:
Sorry for the late response, i get so many mentions so i sometimes miss some.

An update to a story, in the context which it is used on Nairaland means a post.

A story with sexually explicit content which will make a thread unsuitable for the homepage is a story that has graphic descriptions of the genitals, graphic descritpions of the art of lovemaking, and strong sexually explicit language.

for example: "He brought out his massive, throbbing dick and rubbed it on her dripping wet puzzy. The puzzyy was vibrating for his thrust

She moaned and screamed "Yes baby, fvck me hard, Fvckkkkkk me like a stallion!!!!!!!"




I hope you get me?

Oh! God gracious! It was vibrating for his thrust? Does that really happen? Vibrating for a thrust?

And, like a stallion! Now this is my most hilarious simile of the month! I just can't stop laughing hard!

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JeffreyJamez:
oh no...Basket dont die too na

I don't understand why all these are happening to Black.

ibolomo:
did i not say so? Basket won't make it to the end of the story. Larry please I am still special-ordering that ''Kanu: the journal of a rogue'' oooo... More than the watchman waits for the morning, I WILL WAIT FOR IT.

I like Basket.

I'll try to update the Kanu story tonight, sir.

Lyzbet:
One of the things I respect and like about your work is your command of the English language. You wield it like a samurai does his sword. I cant just help but to comment. Weldone bro.

Thank you so much, ma'am. I'm only trying me best. And I can get better if you point out my errors, ma'am. God bless you.

kingphilip:
It seems LarrySun's perspective of things fall apart will get to enlighten me more than the book itself


Larry has gotten past the mountain n is heading towards d skies

Ride on Larry it's in u

Thank you, sir. I can only see far by standing on the shoulders of giants like you.