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mayemy:
@ Andrew44 u have a pont dere, dey might become sworn enemies, because basket never saw Rhoda be4 she left and he might meet Rhoda be4 black in d nerest future and fell inluv with her,sir Larry sun tnx d update

Thank you, too, for reading, and also for connecting the obvious dots.

afamjb:
afamwashere...!!!

Is it the same famous Afamdman?

Missmossy:
Hmmm i reserve my comment on Black and Rhoda its getting more interesting kudos LarrySun.

Thank you so much, ma'am. We are still on the preambles.

adeh39:
Dis is serious oooo.....m still dancing Azonto over Basket recovery....... but Rhoda??, I'm really sad about d parting....... sooo sad, Nd dis Basket nd Black issue, I hv a feeling dey will hv a big misunderstanding in future or great enemies sef.... because one of dem mentioned his dream of becoming a Policeman........ nd i think dat dream is gonna come true.

So i'm expecting one to be A respected policeman nd the other one A professional armed robber.

*Scratches head* Me just predicting ni......... I dnt knw wat Larrysun has in mind.

Thanks for d updates. Expecting more.

You are so awesome, ma'am. Let's see what direction the tale would lead us.

Ollyfad:
dnt tell me she wuld b married d nxt tym dey meet or dey wuld b meeting as enemies witout dem knwin.......
dnt wanna tink of anytin dat bad....m still celebrating basky's resurrection.

Sometimes, friendship can be a dangerous necessity.

plainmirror:
I sense their re-union but not in the best of moments

They would definitely meet again. How they would meet is the single fatal straw.

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kayemjay:
Choi! Larrysun! There is God o!

Oya me I want to challenge you to a duel of grammar in a higi-haga, crincum-crancum, obi okpor kakistomoboplutocracy.

Oya, lets start!

Shey you think you can yab abi? Oya I dey wait for you.

Lol! Bro, we've both gone a long way together. I dare not take up your challenge. I know whose fabric I should not pull.

But some melt-brains like IDFWU need some occasional reformations.

IDFWU:
Whew! Boring! I'll take this as ya low life autobiography though. And hey, less I forget how could you be so daft not to realise this take them shoes of your mouth & quit running your mouth is a metaphor huh? Go review ya figure speech dude. Because my time is too precious to insult you thoroughly, STFU & GTFO, take the hint Punk!

It's 'lest I forget'. Clearly, you need help.

kenwins:
Easy now, I. All larrysun did was to let dave know there were errors and he wasn't the only one who did that. Besides, larry proved himself right already so why continually picking on him?

What's larry called a writer and a reader for if he doesn't put writers in the know of their errors (typo.. or gramma...).

Seriously, the tone you used trying to tell larry he was wrong about re-read(which is right afterall) was rather a high pitch. These things are not done this way ooo.

Cc: Standd, D9ty7, Kayemjay.....

Thank you, ma'am. I wanted to give the baboon a serious ear-cleaning, but because of your comment, I will only warn him.

IDFWU:
"Write in a correct grammar yourself". Oops! Mr right just made a blunder. Anyways I'm Ray Charles to ya BS, I couldn't agree less, just like I suspected you so full of sh*!. You go about picking on other peoples mistakes rather than correcting them. Doesn't that make you worse than they are? Take them shoes off your teeth & quit running your mouth dude.

I suppose, to your diminishing mentality, the bolded is a correct grammatical construction. I wonder who your role model is.

And, goodness! See this pathetic marsupial trying to correct my expression with a ridiculous but unnecessary input of an article. Your English teacher should be weeping. Your folly is an insult to stup!d!ty. Just look at how dumb you just appeared! You just shot yourself in the foot because it itched you. Come on, cut down on your beans intake because you're so full of flatulence right now.

Apparently, in reality, your mouth must be preceding your brain (well, if you call that pap God deposited in your head a brain). I don't claim to be all-knowing, but it is not an excuse for a torn condom like you that would square off with me on grammatical constructions. From their obscenities, we shall know them.

Please, don't let me insult you, sir.

The next time you reply me with your head still in your anus, I will take you down to the chat thread and give you the whipping you deserve. I know you will still display your talent in mental-depreciation by replying me. We all know that showing how stupId you are is a reflex action.

Kindly forgive me, Davidflo. It was not my intention to derail your thread, but some runaway kangaroos will keep bleating. It's annoying in the least. This is the last time I will reply this knuckleheaded piece of garbage HERE.

God bless you, Davidflo. Keep up the good work.

IDFWU:
Easy man don't talk crap @ me. Its "reread" with no hyphen. Visit ya dictionary, difficult people everywhere...SMH next thing u be like re-cap, re-post over recap, repost. It may look wrong without the hypen but that's the right way don't spice it up, its no dish!.

It's such a pity. Read these:

Verb 1. reread - read anew; read again; "He re-read her letters to him"
↔ read - interpret something that is
written or printed; "read the
advertisement"; "Have you read
Salman Rushdie?"

Source:

www.thefreedictionary.com/reread

Question: Which is correct? 'reread' or 're-read'?

Answer [by Robert Charles Lee]: Either is fine. Reread (solid) and re-read (hyphenated) are used in equal measure in all sorts of writing. Once you use one version, stick to it throughout the copy.

Source: www.quora.com/Which-is-correct-reread-or-re-read

Besides, IDFWU, if you aim to correct someone else's English expression, at least write in correct grammar yourself. There is a difference between Its and It's. Perhaps, that dictionary that has been confusing you can still rescue you from your ignorance.

IDFWU:
There is no such thing as "re-read" b4 u pick on people's errors, try working on yours 1st. MISTAKE, that's why we called human. But davidflo no offence man the typos are really much, try 2 review b4 posting.

I will not stoop to your level of mediocrity. I'm surprised that your intellect is not honed enough to understand the significance of the prefix 're'.

Very hilarious!

My favourite line: '...some people in my village are pulling strings.'

Really funny.

Ishilove dear, homepage beckons.

Post the story already.

For Conspiracy, read Alan Folsom. For Sailor, read Clive Cussler.

Paragraphing would make your work more interesting to read, sir.

laykorn:
It's okay sir.

Sent.

This is a nice article. Well done, OP. However, there are still some obvious errors in the posts. Kindly edit.

laykorn:
I think I saw a reply too, but it was blank.

Oh! I'm sorry about that. I'll re-send immediately.

You need to place the paragraphs well. And the alignment of your first post is confusing. It looks as if you copied and pasted the work from another thread or site.

Let the OP kindly change every lone 'i' in the post to 'I'. Thanks.

laykorn:
Larrysun, did you see my mail sir?

Yes, sir. And I replied it.

Short and precise. Nice. You should have complemented the poem with a picture.

The OP should kindly re-read his post and make necessary corrections. Thanks.

ArrowAssassin:
My favorite Author so far. I'm new. Maybe this section can get better.

Thank you so much, AA. Yes, this section can definitely get better.

kingphilip:
A partnership that'll last a long time have been founded right from the first day they met by fate.. They compliment each other perfectly and I guess they'll go far notwithstanding the obstacles that they may come across

Rhoda coming in between the two?? I don't see that happening but the only thing I can see happening is Rhoda trying to change them from thieves to something better but along the line she'll be pregnant get dumped by ha parents and they'll go back to stealing and Rhoda joins the clique

Larry decides but we only think or predict.. Like in d case of betting some clicks others cut the already going and rightly predicted

Ride on uncle Larry we can only be a part of this piece we have no other choice

A very nice imagination you have there, sir.

ritzeluv:
Nice update Larrysun.

Thank you, ma'am.

moseph:
I am very happy basket mouth sorry basket is alive.Larrysun you are very talented.

Lol! @ Basket mouth.

Nickymezor:
OMG ! Oga Larry ur really sometin else Jst see hw u used our heads Nice twists n turns .Wow so hapi my Basky made it....it feels guuuuud....Tnx for d loveli update

You're welcome, ma'am. Thank you, too, for reading.

But...your Basky?