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Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by LarrySun(op): 8:50pm On Nov 28, 2012

semid4lyfe: @ Larry-Sun, Congrats and more ink to your pen.

Wishing you the best and hope you get published. . .. .

THANK YOU, Semid. THANK YOU.

GOD BLESS YOU.

Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by LarrySun(op): 2:27pm On Nov 28, 2012

kanechimex: larry,if you don't post the sequel to the brand of cain,i will do to you what cain did to Tolu.
P.s..I loved the story

HELP!!!

Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by LarrySun(op): 1:19pm On Nov 28, 2012*

semid4lyfe: Questions:

1. Larry-Sun, has the story finally ended, as in THE END?

^^
Meanwhile, you need to go over the story from the very installment/first page to paragraph & space it out and sorry for all your bans by pyguru

Also, a few typos here and there. I think some of your paragraphs are too long. Shorter conversation style paragraphs make for easier reading

Semid, you know not how much I appreciate this post of yours. Arigato.

coming down to your question:

1. The story hasn't ended. But THE BRAND OF CAIN has ended. There is a sequel, but I'm not planning to feature that on Nairaland...at least, not now. At the end of this first book, I chipped in TO BE CONTINUED; that continuation comes forth in the second book.

I tried to space them, but I think the task is too much for my phone to perform...everytime I try to do it, the phone spoils the alignment of the text. Can you PLEASE help me out? Or rather I wait until I use the PC. Perhaps, I should write Mr Pygurus a letter soliciting his eviction on my threads. LOL.

I admit...the errors are enough to piss-off readers, I'm sorry about that...deeply sorry. I sincerely hope the editors would catch the errors and do justice. About the paragraphs and the dialogues, all I'll say is that I'm still an aspiring writer who hopes that, with time, I'd burst into a professional.

Thank you, bro.
Bless you.

Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by LarrySun(op): 12:58pm On Nov 28, 2012

'yindamola:
Impressive larry!!

Bless you, 'Damola. I'm glad you liked it.

Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by LarrySun(op): 12:56pm On Nov 28, 2012

Splendblex: Chai....!Larry U too much jor

Splenblex, merci...this is just a cog in a large wheel.

Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by LarrySun(op): 12:41pm On Nov 28, 2012

Iaz93: See connections. . Interesting....kudoz Larry

Thank you, Iaz.

Romance › Re: Can You Use Your Partner's Toothbrush? by LarrySun(op): 11:28pm On Nov 26, 2012

poshdiva: *Yawns
The fight isn't even interesting
*looks for another thread

No one is really fighting.
The apple of discord lies on toothbrushes.

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Romance › Re: Can You Use Your Partner's Toothbrush? by LarrySun(op): 7:55pm On Nov 26, 2012

RudySmith: Gibberish is not an insult, it means that what u wrote is not understood by this person, pls don't get my words wrong.
It is just a polite way of saying that u make no damn sense
No need 4 insults here.

Do I detect here a faint whiff of innuendo? Give politesse a chance, buddy.

Romance › Re: Can You Use Your Partner's Toothbrush? by LarrySun(op): 7:51pm On Nov 26, 2012

KINGwax: you're sick. Why can't u use d brush?

Friend, I feel a little bit of umbrage by your comment. Christ! Where did you keep your hospitality?

Romance › Re: What Really Turns You On? by LarrySun(op): 10:23am On Nov 26, 2012

My landlord's daughter. LOL!

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Health › Re: How Often Should You Change Your Toothbrush? by LarrySun(m): 10:11am On Nov 26, 2012

Nonleviki: @larry And wia did u c bosom? I meant my teeth and i dnt care weda u gv a dam or nt.

When teeth are now referred to as 'bosoms', then English is really screwed up.

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Romance › Re: Drop A Flirty Line by LarrySun(op): 10:07am On Nov 26, 2012

Adeniyi A.:
na flirty line i go dey take my brain create wen i never belle ful... abeg i get beta tins to think

Take the next turning by the left, sadist.

Health › Re: How Often Should You Change Your Toothbrush? by LarrySun(m): 9:54am On Nov 26, 2012

Nonleviki: I cnt rememba d last tym i changed my own, and it is stil strong nd effectiv. Stil proud of my white big tit nd my black gums. Lol!

Christ on a chariot! Who gives a bosom about the size of your bosoms? Goodness!

Health › Re: How Often Should You Change Your Toothbrush? by LarrySun(m): 9:50am On Nov 26, 2012

kamdyjenny: Why is nobody speaking my mind..if my toothbrush does get missing or something,I keep using it,hv used dis present one for lyk a year now,will change it wen it gets missing if not ride on

I bet you've been using one since Hitler's birth.

Health › Re: How Often Should You Change Your Toothbrush? by LarrySun(m): 9:43am On Nov 26, 2012

1121: pls pardon my ignorance. What does it mean to 'give head'

To cut off your head and give as charity...

Health › Re: How Often Should You Change Your Toothbrush? by LarrySun(m): 9:36am On Nov 26, 2012

What toothbrush? I use bitterleaf stems, 'paako' and foams...very effective, me-think. cheesy

Nairaland General › Re: "The Place Of Rest: Wasimi Chronicles" Gist Thread by LarrySun(m): 1:12am On Nov 26, 2012

Succeeded in sending my ventricles afflutter again, Ish.

Romance › Can You Use Your Partner's Toothbrush? by LarrySun(op): 12:54am On Nov 26, 2012

We kiss and suck tongues, but when it comes to using the second party's toothbrush, I have reservations. The thought alone makes my entrails panic.
What about you? Can you? Would you?

Music/Radio › Re: Your Current Mobile Phone Ringtone And Why Did You Use It? by LarrySun(op): 2:19pm On Nov 25, 2012*

Now 'My Time Is Now' by John Cena.

Jokes Etc › Re: What Would You Like Written On Your Tombstone? by LarrySun(op): 12:58pm On Nov 23, 2012

shenaz: Here lies a man who has no more phucks to give.

Exactly. LOL!

Music/Radio › Re: Your Current Mobile Phone Ringtone And Why Did You Use It? by LarrySun(op): 7:17am On Nov 23, 2012

Bye Bye remix by Mariah Carey ft Akon & Wayne.

Literature › Re: The Brand Of Cain (A Complete Novel) by LarrySun(op): 11:09pm On Nov 21, 2012*