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Fashion › Re: Miss Nairaland Contest 2016 - Elimination Round 2 by LarrySun(m): 10:41am On Jun 21, 2016

I vote Refiner.
cc: NLjega

Romance › Re: Ivyy Is Not Guilty Of Plagiarism by LarrySun(m): 3:42pm On Jun 16, 2016

CrudeGold:
Writer, Refiner's team has declared war on Ivyy's team.
It would get dirty!
Omenka, I hope you're following this?

I can't wait to see it get dirty.

Romance › Re: Ivyy Is Not Guilty Of Plagiarism by LarrySun(m): 2:52pm On Jun 16, 2016

The drama is not even interesting.

Literature › Re: Untitled 01 by LarrySun(m): 11:23pm On Jun 11, 2016

Vantee20 is back! Awesome! Please don't stop.

Literature › Re: Resources For Young Writers by LarrySun(m): 9:22am On May 29, 2016

Fantasyisland:
Hello Larry, I tried reaching you a while back via the PM thingy.
I wanted to ask if you take on editing jobs.

I do, ma'am.
Contact me via larrysun4real@yahoo.com

Family › Re: Gay Couple Wins Custody Battle Over Surrogate Mother, Jubilation In Hell. by LarrySun(m): 9:42am On May 15, 2016

Ishilove:
I've let it go, Monsieur Postmann. When I said he should shove his forgiveness where the sun don't shine, that's my way of waving the white flag with my middle finger .

I'm cool, seriously, bruv. Thanks for thy concern.

As to the bolded, guy you have such a fantastic way with words. You are a very fine writer, one of the best, non-literature writers I've had the pleasure of coming across on Nairaland, rivalled only by Jakumo. The poetic cadences that flow through your writing speaks of an artistic soul. I'm very envious

Larrysun come and meet Postmann

It's nice meeting you, Sir Postmann. cheesy

You are really good, sir. Like it or not, I'm following you like a shell. Thank you, my Ishilove, for pointing out the right orator again.

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Christianity Etc › Re: Two Brothers Batter Church Ushers Over Indecent Dressing by LarrySun(m): 1:24pm On Apr 25, 2016

Caption should go like this:

The faithful ushers of our local parish were pounded hard, but the faithfuls in question did not turn the other cheek.

It's high time our churches started requesting the services of bouncers rather than ushers.

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Crime › Re: 81-Year-Old Woman Raped And Robbed In Ghana By 3 Men by LarrySun(m): 1:41pm On Apr 21, 2016

They would be raped too by their great grandchildren.

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Nairaland General › Re: Fish Eats Drowned Guy At Elegushi Beach (PHOTO) by LarrySun(m): 1:02pm On Apr 21, 2016

RIP to him. The fish started with the fleshy part of his body. I guess the fish have seen how we use to eat them too.

Piranha.

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Literature › Re: Resources For Young Writers by LarrySun(m): 8:15am On Apr 21, 2016

Beautiful. Thanks, UjSizzle. This will help a lot.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 6:59pm On Apr 20, 2016*

COMPLETE BOOK NOW AVAILABLE FOR DOWNLOAD HERE:

http://okadabooks.com/book/about/black_maria_book_one/20094

larrysundynasty@gmail.com

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Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 9:05pm On Apr 19, 2016

Adasun:
na true talk.and most at times after the lustful act comes guilt and shame.

it's as if spakes has just been remove frm ur eyes.u wil c the repercussion of ur act.

Bt larry don't u think those children(black & rhoda) are in love?

Only time will tell.

Literature › Re: An Ace For Oscar (A Short Story) by LarrySun(op): 8:42pm On Apr 19, 2016*

Removed

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Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 7:46pm On Apr 19, 2016

Skimpledawg:
whaayasay .....dz is gon get hotter Dan buhari vs Jonathan's presidential elections!

slimzjoe, wats inside d zip?

Oga Larrysun, u alwz know how to wow me with your stories! keep it coming boss

Thank you, sir. So many things happen behind closed doors.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 7:41pm On Apr 19, 2016

Vicoch:
Wow, i foresee something happening......

Spoken like a prophecy.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 7:40pm On Apr 19, 2016

Adasun:
choi!!!!

blackie i feel ur pain and emotions,no one is perfect and we are bound to make mistakes.

I just da pray make oga baskie no catch them o

Love isn't selfish, lust is. We are left to discern between the two.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 7:38pm On Apr 19, 2016

blushing:
Oga larrysun, you're the bomb. can you be my crush? I'm Blushing

I might get crushed. cheesy

Health › Re: How Do You Explain This by LarrySun(m): 5:46pm On Apr 17, 2016

Those guys must be the people he trusts with his life.

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Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 12:03am On Apr 17, 2016

Nmeri17:
After Larrysun read deez lines ^^^, he be like https://s22.postimg.org/ju5oj0a35/boy_running_with_a_tyre_zimbabwe_a19pnk.jpg

That wasn't me rolling the tyre. it should be Peter Black.

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Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 11:59pm On Apr 16, 2016

ibokoharam:
Totally unfair to basket but still black should get back what's his!!!

Extreme situations call for extreme measures.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 11:51pm On Apr 16, 2016

JeffreyJamez:
lol so this story is still alive afterall

Even dry bones rise again.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 11:50pm On Apr 16, 2016

CopyLearner:
So I just started this story yesterday and here I am.....LarrySun you are something. Your characters jumped to life and it felt more like seeing an addictive movie. Thanks for making my weekend. Looking forward to more updates.
Btw, being a Rhoda/Amara is one of the most unfortunate positions to be in...been there

It's a cycle of dilemma.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 11:48pm On Apr 16, 2016

Adasun:
na waoo,2 solid friends is gradually breaking

Twenty kids cannot play for twenty years.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 10:34pm On Apr 16, 2016*

COMPLETE BOOK NOW AVAILABLE FOR DOWNLOAD HERE:

http://okadabooks.com/book/about/black_maria_book_one/20094

larrysundynasty@gmail.com

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Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 12:49am On Apr 15, 2016*

COMPLETE BOOK NOW AVAILABLE FOR DOWNLOAD HERE:

http://okadabooks.com/book/about/black_maria_book_one/20094

larrysundynasty@gmail.com

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Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 12:06am On Apr 12, 2016

Nmeri17:
^^^ amazing update

Lol!
The third ecclesiastical walk before the first space of time.
I'm sure you can decode that. wink

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 7:28pm On Apr 11, 2016

I would not have started it if I wasn't planning to finish it.

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Literature › Re: My Rapist by LarrySun(m): 9:55am On Apr 09, 2016

This is indeed a very nice story.

But it seems like it is being written in a rush. You need to pay attention to your word usage and descriptions. The characters should be better described for us to have a perfect mental picture of them. You didn't tell us about the rapist, for example; all you said was that he was very handsome. Explain those qualities that made him handsome.

Also, you should endeavour to give proper descriptions to surroundings and emotions. All these would give life to the story.

Lastly, kindly observe your tenses. You've been switching tenses a lot. Pick one tense form and be consistent with it.

I hope your next updates would be better. Above all, you're doing a nice job. Thanks. You can also decide to space out your paragraphs for more reading comfort.

I can't wait for the next post.

Literature › Re: Black Maria by LarrySun(op): 9:50am On Apr 07, 2016*

COMPLETE BOOK NOW AVAILABLE FOR DOWNLOAD HERE:

http://okadabooks.com/book/about/black_maria_book_one/20094

larrysundynasty@gmail.com

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