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zikmarty:
larrysun; beautiful as usual and as my new developed habit, I kinda have a end I think wasn't well knotted

why did Sam have those what I feel I should refer to as visions or should I say revelations ?
why did he, why Sam,why not anyone else?

okay,what if we say sam once had an injury to the head from an accident hence had frequent shocks or got those visions while he was in a coma and had only just remembered or maybe he was from a family of seers,they considered it a gift as they were born with the ability, his grandfather, his father,their fore fathers and now him?

just my own opinion though
ok bye

adegwurulez:
i find this initiative laudable but have few reservations. If the criticism is going to be done in another thread away from the original, what guarantees do we have that the writer is going to see it? I've had cases where i get a mention but dont get the notification until another person quotes the first mention. Without the writer seeing that he's been criticised, this place could as well be an avenue for gossips.

zikmarty:
nice piece larrysun
but there are some strings you could've knotted better like why did Anastasia betray Dada?
you can add a twist that she discovered he was cheating on her with a secret lover whom he genuinely love and was just using Anastasia like every other pawn piece and blablablaaaa....just my little cent tho

keep the fire burning.

repogirl:
Sure why not? Not like its going to make any difference anyway...but I would like to see what you think.

repogirl:
I just feel I should add that writers whose works are criticised shouldn't feel bad about it, its really to help one improve.

I look forward to having my work dissected also.... LarrySun, care to do the honours

oloyolo:
So my days in anambra were quick and exciting I was in the alter boys association but never had the nerve to serve in a real mass that right I was a very shy guy so I didn't even stand a chance when it comes to wooing the opposite sex but my best friend was a different story I don't even know if I should call that guy my best friend because I had so many best friends but this particular one was a bad guy he dates even older girls didn't know how he dose it but I never really asked so as a city boy a good number of girls were struggling to get my attention but I was too shy to make any move so because of my low self esteem I forgort about girls (First and foremost, the use of full stops and other punctuation marks would have given this work more life.)
I just joined the typical village boys and did I tell you I was a sisi boy I culdent play foot ball or any sport nothing was special about me or so I thought. (It's nice to see one punctuation mark here. The writer can do more if he tries.) I spent 2 years in the village before going back to abuja to complete my jss 3 my one year In abuja was also intresing ohh and did I tell u that I was the type who gets into trouble almost every day seriously I was a very complicated human being sha I later moved to lagos to further my senior secondary school and that was the making of a player
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gentlelily:
FELICITATION MESSAGE
Am so grateful to God who kept us from january I to this day,of a truth he is God. I also want to use this medium to thank and bless my nairaland friends who has made the year an exciting one,special thanks goes to my great nairaland writers who also made the year worth fun with their writing. You guys impacted so much on me not minding I hardly comment on any of your thread d good lord will inspire you people the more,shout out to a woman of great valour that made me become a member of nairaland with one of her great piece UNFULFILLED PROMISE in the person of Tiffanj,one love to flakkydagirl,oga larrysun,coolval,naijasinglegirl,oga D9,prettyspicey,candilicious candy,Dan writes,TDan and some many great writers I can't remember their moniker now,u guys are a star to your generation. Wishing my fellow readers both silent and active members,oga seun and his crew a beautiful and glorious christmas. ONE LOVE

kingphilip:
Larrysun never disappoints and he's not disappointing with this

Such a captivating and enthralling piece he's dishing out here

Fingers crossed expecting the remainder..
Thanks for the piece boss

viickerz:
yh, i kinda like your short brief stories than the long ones..

If i may recall, arent you the one that wrote 'The nemesis of daddy' ?

viickerz:
This is a masterpiece.. Thrilling, i must say

lalasticlala, check this awt

plainmirror:
Breathtaking