Ibime:

Stingers

thanks man

gottoboy:

RG? RGA which?
Between Vinci na Hector abi?

rg....Sunday 9pm. yes...hector is Vinci

Kineticist:

A demon just left hell,..Lucifer's search patrol on his tail/
They can't see him as he is in FFR getting a head/
Hold up..I am not a gay/
I mean I am in FFR with a machete getting a head/

A whole complete verse is yet to come but I'm already getting the likes/


Mehn I gat dope 16's like a drug-proned sophomore class in high school

you have a lot of intelligence..keep it up...just keeping rhyming and you will improve in no time you will be feared.

Love the first line. Just needs a little brush up

kr0ne:

Yes, at this crucial stage we can tolerate excuses to ensure we satisfy all contestants so nobody would come crying on our necks if there's any mishap. So, for now, the semis is fixed on Wednesday.

okay....make i concentrate on my battle with king vinci on fb then

kr0ne:

Alright, Wednesday it is then.

Wednesday for the semis? Please confirm its the semis you are talking about

Geoxpress:

Losing streak.. According to airmark Sha

lol......i'm asking how life is in general...textceeing isn't that important na

Geoxpress:
Mehn liricyst do.pe lines u got

Thanks geoxpress...how things?

danbrowndmf:
HBD Ellymaxiimus,neva stop keeping the pen bleeding!


Supermiy im sending my bar to krone 2mao...8bars only,im busy this days(NL standard)


Lyricist Mhen u improve day by day with what u pen

obesemf ur incredible also

Darkrebel Vs elymaxiimus(battle to watch)

but i had luv to see lyricist vs Darkrebel sha..""

Thanks bruv....
There's a third place brawl
No matter the outcome of both brawls....i will get to battle either elymax or darkrebel

gottoboy:
#teamLyricyst

We go win am

obesemf:
Liricyst , we reach far. From newbie tourney final to Holocaust semi final. We go give em 3rd straight classic

lol....yea.

Emaprince:
This kinetic guy, you get sense well well.

You are almost same as liricyst - executing ideas perfectly.


The fart/mess play is generic and weak. If it was a battle, it won't get you anything. You did good generally with some other new/original ideas. Same aplto Obesemf's 'running mate' line. Yes, he made it look more interesting due to "good luck" is part of it. Plus we can all relate to it. Running mate is generic.

You can do all that in FFR, but in battles, stay away from used ideas. We do not applaud them here.

Yes i know it was generic....its the total/connive that i hightlighted....just to lead to why i had to line the four up. I didn't start scripting on time so i had to row with setups. That said, my bars are always about my end punches....i would put more work in setting em up sha

ELYMAXiimus:

... Thanks bro.

Happy birthday bruv.......

Coogar's present to you was darkrebel

Why are the gods so interested in obesemf vs liricyst

Lol

i would have wanted ELYMAXiimus or darkenedrebel....i have battled obese twice na

Sha...no biggie....

Obesemf start scripting

Shekson:

I’ll make a total mess of them if the randy farts connive/

When I line the four & slash em like the tally mark for five!

@ Liricyst!!!!

lol....i believe that was my best line in my verse in the cypher..thats why i started with it. Thanks

darkenedrebel:


well, emcees think alike. what language?

python. ..it's a programming language.

darkenedrebel:


I also wanted to play roof/dylann before you did

lol...yea....i knew i had to quickly use that cos it wouldn't stay unused.
Someone else used something sef that i excluded from my verse at the last minute

The python thing from jig.....i'm currently learning the language, i pulled it out cos it still felt raw, needed cleaning up

coogar:


not really structured well....
it had no direction, it was all over the place.

wetin do my own verse

coogar:


nice idea from darkrebel - but cucumber is a vegetable, not a fruit. rebel needs to start fine-tuning his bars so as not to become another modenine. he does come up with brilliant ideas but he can do better with the way he words some of his bars.

Yea...true that. But still, i like reading bars crafted from things happening around. Its always nice. That said....he still had the best verse according to the judges so the rest of us need a lot more than fine tuning

JigsawKillah:


Lemme return a favour bro
You don't have to quote me

sorry jare..geez i was pissed then. Person for work annoyed me big time

JigsawKillah:


Oga goan vote and wrap that shît up
It seems Laguna and Cooger are not coming today
3 votes are enough

Calm down....at least two more votes are needed

kr0ne:
[b]Darkenedrebel's Verse:


sadistic sadomasochist..known for bruising the boobs/
stuffed cucumbers in vag1nas ...tagged it fruit of the womb /

Lol....

i actually was thinking about doing a punch with that cucumber in vag1na thing....chai..that babe rep go don die for her school. Cucumber girl

Deadshotz:
Ahaaaa! Oga krone i want in this cypher pls

Bro, its for our tourney..we need to eliminate one of the five glads...you are two rounds late already

kr0ne...sorry to disturb your mentions o

my first bar, third quatrain...i made a typo

it should read

I’ll make a total mess of them IF the randy farts connive

and not OF...thanks in advance o kind judge

kr0ne:

Yes, I've done it again. I highlighted those I feel are relevant, but if I still miss some lemme know.

Thanks bro ...you did good..even highlighted those i didn't highlight..thanks

highlight these those for me

satisfied the wise gods, executed gladyys & fulfilled all righteous

they will be found on the same bar..in the 3rd and 4th quatrains. Thanks

JigsawKillah:


I don't know who's confusing who here
Kr0ne mentioned criteria then said they should pick top 5 verses.

Calm down....no need to quote me....
reason along...if you were to use criteria for five people...how would you do it?
Try it yourself

i thought each judge were supposed to just pick their four best.....how will criteria be used for five glads?

kr0ne...seems you have edited..but its still incomplete...there was a reason i highlighted some of those

kr0ne

My verse isn't italicized at all.....
i hightlighted some stuff in the verse i sent you...my verse here is plain

that leaves jig

Jigsawkillah....please send your verse to kr0ne

kroneanozie@yahoo.com

kr0ne:

I saw it you sent it.

This wide smile....shey obesemf don kill us abi?

kr0ne:

When you're ready, send your verses to kroneanozie@yahoo.com
I don't want that post-first-I-follow-later affair; it kills battle threads.

Cc: Danbrowndmf

Okay..make i send am now...

Please italicize it how i did o abeg..... i trust the judges would get me....but make others understand too