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Literature / Re: Dusk by llaykorn: 4:02am On Sep 29, 2016 |
I don't know why I read this at midnight. No, it's not horrific, it's just funny how darkness fuels grief. I can only hope, ngaz, that no part of this piece will fail to be fiction. Shock me, did this happen? I've heard a lot about epileptic seizures but this is the first time I'll witness one. Your descriptions are just as vivid as it would be if I watched one two yards away from where I stand, if they are not a little bit more. I'd have loved to point out a few things I noticed that you might want changed if you did too, but I feel morally obliged not to do that until I have your permission. This might just mean so much more to you than commas and full stops. 1 Like |
Poems For Review / Re: Help Needed by llaykorn: 7:48pm On Sep 28, 2016 |
KOKOwonder: I'm just seeing this. I hope you were able to get a poem that made her feel you. And, please be fast about it and change her from 'crush' to 'wife'. |
Romance / Re: Ladies Stop Inserting Sex___toys Inside Your Pusssies by llaykorn: 6:03pm On Sep 23, 2016 |
danbrowndmf: Pleeeeesae! |
Poems For Review / Re: The Shot by llaykorn: 7:54pm On Sep 21, 2016 |
timpaker: The last line had a tear in my eye. Shot is a collection of beautifully heartbreaking pieces. Chance made me check; I never knew you added to the first poem. Please don't stop this. There are still too many stories to tell of unforgettable shots. 1 Like |
Education / Re: Can I Still Continue With This CGP Or Do I Give Up On Education? by llaykorn: 5:45pm On Sep 20, 2016 |
AgbenuAnna: Call the ambulance, I have want to die... |
Poems For Review / Re: Fempire by llaykorn: 5:30pm On Sep 20, 2016 |
Fempire. Is it only a coincidence that the word starts with the prefix fem-? This one is raw; I love it. In the line where you made a remark about the heart's possesion of photography, was that a representation for memory? TheAgba, your signature kills me. Are you for real, man? |
Romance / Re: What Do You Admire About The Opposite Sex? by llaykorn: 12:35pm On Sep 18, 2016 |
oblak00: The angels have read the last sentence in your post and God has promised to answer your prayer. 3 Likes 1 Share |
Phones / Re: Amazing Smartphones Below ₦20,000 (20k) In Nigeria by llaykorn: 11:40am On Sep 17, 2016 |
Let's be a little frank here, bro. There is no 'amazing' smartphone that sells for 20,000 naira or less. 4 Likes |
Celebrities / Re: Moesha Boduong Wanted By Goodwill Zwelithini KaBhekuzulu As His 7th Wife [PICS] by llaykorn: 7:24am On Sep 17, 2016 |
danbrowndmf: Dan Brown feeling like Eminem. |
Poems For Review / Re: Life by llaykorn: 7:04am On Sep 17, 2016 |
Oh no! There is too much magic in this poem. You stole my attention completely, and I at a point found myself following your instructions as dutifully as possible. This poem just raised my spirits a hundred levels higher. Thanks for sharing. PS: This deserves to be on the frontpage; it will help many a battered a soul. 6 Likes 1 Share |
Poems For Review / Re: Happy Amberacious Day by llaykorn: 9:14pm On Sep 15, 2016 |
Amberacious! Celebrate, dear accomplished poet. 1 Like |
Career / Re: 7 Jobs Nigerian Parents May Never Ever Understand by llaykorn: 9:13pm On Sep 11, 2016 |
CaptEColeJnr: LMAO! 4 Likes 1 Share |
Rap Battles / Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 8:29am On Sep 10, 2016 |
ELYMAXiimus: 1 Like 1 Share |
Poems For Review / Re: my poem for review2 by llaykorn: 9:07pm On Sep 05, 2016 |
Kruzilano: Hi Kruzilano. This poem striked my heart in a pleasant way. Your concluding line was read over probably a hundred times. The truth is plain; only love - enough of it can make young whatever is deemed old. This would have ended in the previous paragraph if not for your opening sentence by which you indicated that the poem is to be of three limericks. I think your idea of limerick is slightly different from mine. A limerick is a five line per stanza poem with a rhyme scheme of aabbc and it is usually humorous in nature. It's very uncommon to see limericks express strong emotions like you're trying to do in your poem. That's what knew. Is this a variant style of the limerick just like we have for the two sonnets? 1 Like |
Poems For Review / Re: The Dying Poet by llaykorn: 10:50am On Sep 03, 2016 |
elfico: Thank you, sir, thank you! |
Poems For Review / Re: The Dying Poet by llaykorn: 10:49am On Sep 03, 2016 |
OMA4U: Don't go and come and be whining me, sir. Chief, you have resurrected. What happened to your numbers, sir? |
Poems For Review / Re: Twenties by llaykorn: 11:35pm On Aug 30, 2016 |
TheAgba: A poem like Lukas Graham's 7 Years Old? That's beautiful. It seems like everyone in the world is trying to lose weight. I am too, so are all the members of my family. |
Religion / Re: Witch Turns To Owl At Enugu Crusade, Falls And Dies - Eyewitness Claims by llaykorn: 11:29pm On Aug 30, 2016 |
MrCork: Punchline! |
Poems For Review / Re: Twenties by llaykorn: 8:06pm On Aug 30, 2016 |
TheAgba: This poem has almost fried my brain, but God The Almighty won't let it. From the first three lines, I got a story. And from the next two, I got another. There was another story in the last line. Please are you just trying to lose weight? |
Crime / Re: How Nigeria’s SSS Is Violating The Law And Illegally Parading Itself As DSS by llaykorn: 10:55am On Aug 27, 2016 |
AnonyNymous: I thought they were two different organizations. 1 Like |
Politics / Re: This Is The First Thing PMB Reads In A News Paper (pic)--presidency by llaykorn: 6:35am On Aug 27, 2016 |
These crackheads don't know crap about media and publicity. He laughs and laughs? In this situation we are living in? The president needs to sack these clowns. Nothing different from what we had from Okupe and Abati. 8 Likes |
Celebrities / Re: Destiny Amaka Rocks Panties And Bra (Photo) by llaykorn: 6:21am On Aug 27, 2016 |
danbrowndmf: If I see money buy airtime today, I go surely hala you. Hala na to contact person abi? |
Poems For Review / Re: AND SHE LOOKS INNOCENT by llaykorn: 6:18am On Aug 27, 2016 |
This is an awesome one, kester113. It's not uncommon to harbor doubts about the potentials of a member of the female folk, whether in a positive or negative direction like yours. Your first two stanzas are beautiful. The imagery paints beautiful pictures. But, I looked up 'Tashi' and I found nothing. With your usage, I expected it to be a symbol of something significant to your theme. Have I not searched enough? I think your third stanza, like Kruzilano rightly said, needs a little bit of modification. I'm not saying it's not poetry. But it doesn't sound rich enough (that's to me, though). Take a look at your simile in the fourth line where you wrote 'like I'm riding honda'. I have never known that people who ride Honda also wonder. And in the fourth stanza, how is your desire godly? I don't really know how to say this, but I find the imagery in the rest of the fourth stanza a little unpolished. It's just a personal opinion, though. The concluding stanza is free to go. But, what is 'heart's rhyme'? I saw your mention on Joseph's thread. There is some vague memory coming back over that thing we discussed way back that prompted the message, but I can't retrieve it completely. Please forgive me. 2 Likes |
Celebrities / Re: Destiny Amaka Rocks Panties And Bra (Photo) by llaykorn: 5:19pm On Aug 26, 2016 |
danbrowndmf: Dan Brown, the kind things wey your eyes dey see these days ehn; e be like say you done hammer. No be poor man dey notice boobs for this economy again o. |
Education / Re: Adeyeye Olorunfemi Rusticated In UNILAG For Facebook Write Up by llaykorn: 4:21pm On Aug 26, 2016 |
babyfaceafrica: Spewing trash? I bet you can't read. Where is the trash in what he spewed? And tomorrow morning, you'll join your friends to criticize the Nigerian situation when a little attempt at changing things is viewed as trash by you. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Romance / Re: Fadeke And Tunde's Grecian Themed Pre-Wedding Photos by llaykorn: 7:17pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
jopretty: The man who did it the first time; was he Greek? |
Romance / Re: Guys, Becareful! Girls Can Never Be Trusted! by llaykorn: 11:02pm On Aug 21, 2016 |
Oahray: Now, I love the sound of this. 1 Like |
Sports / Re: Morolake Akinosun Won Gold Medal For USA by llaykorn: 8:52pm On Aug 21, 2016 |
Freakypinky: How many mature ways do you know? 1 Like |
Rap Battles / Re: NL Rap Battles chatroom by llaykorn: 7:02pm On Aug 21, 2016 |
Poems For Review / Re: Arugba by llaykorn: 6:17am On Aug 20, 2016 |
You just made me so super-proud to say I'm from Osgobo. When poetry is employed to celebrate culture, the art produced is ever a vibrantly colorful one. I enjoyed your poetry, and your analysis is right on point. Thanks for sharing, amberacious. 2 Likes 1 Share |
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