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iykekelvins:
[color=#099999]Lol, "Girl I want to marry".. So fast?

I just hope they find Sam in one piece. And these men are too emotional, Shedding tears? [/color]

DarkRebel101:
You are a very bad and naughty girl, Lleigh. Guys, I think Lleigh is Sam.

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The storyline is captivating and fresh. It's been a while since I read something on femdom so I'm definitely enjoying the novelty of your story.

More grease to your literary elbows.

Divepen1:
As my Gf( to be) *lol* said, I am moving randomly.

The story is a series but I keep confusing people by writing the future first.
So, I'll stall that and start the first part in the Nlwriters...

I'm working on Award for you, Lleigh, Leriebloom etc

Divepen1:
It's not compulsory..
I didn't win this one too. I finished the draft offline but I had to stop posting for a reason very long to explain.

Creeza:
bibi am a bit scared, I need your advise too Lleigh.

My story plot is winding into sub plots that would require more characters. My heart ache is how my readers will easily identify with new characters.

I dnt want a scene where some says 'Where the hell did he pop out from?
i cant take it, my head will scatter.

Advice please, thanks

Creeza:
You got me there lleigh, nice. Now the twist is unfolding. Cant wait to see where this leads.

OLUWAREMILEKUN see as name long. Chai Afonjas came give name like 'what happin? Shuuu? This one is sentence on it own.

bibijay123:
I think it's word processor, don't know what the S stands for but it's just like Microsoft word but WPS is on fone .

bibijay123:
lol thank you dear, I use Wps so I checked views n it showed the word count

bibijay123:
I hve migraine headache.

bibijay123:
m sick dear, don't think I can manage. oya Divepen show o

bibijay123:
Hi, so its two days to go... I hve gotten the required number of words but I don't know if its compulsory to end the story on the 23rd. cc divepen1

Creeza:
Waiting!

iykekelvins:
[color=#099999]Are we getting an update? [/color]

iykekelvins:
[color=#099999]MM must mean a lot to Bayo, to make him cry when she's missing..

Something is fishy.[/color]

StupidYorubaFool:
spreads mat.

your write up is stupendous.... you deserve an accolade.

swann:
I believe that this should be a test... Maybe MM wants to know how much he cares for her in a non-sexual way and if he'll be able to replace Micheal...

Creeza:
First, to get an audience, you need to be an audience. Comment on other threads and hey do it genuinely .

Why? Nairalanders are intelligent ,they can tell if you're just too good to be true.
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Step two, to be a better writer, be the best reader. This means read more of those stories you find interesting and adopt their methods : dont copy or plaglarise( I hope I got the spelling), just adopt their style.
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Before you post that story, proof read and detach unnecessary details- give the reader the chance to figure out somethings by themselves.
Example

I went on and on in the middle of the forest , the nigt was still young and I could hear the foosteps of my trailers behind me. - This garulous and gibberish.

Try this instead.

I fled through the dark night aided only by the rays of moonlight, my deepest fear was the footsteps that closed in on me.

*Show, dont tell.


Again, mention monikers. This does the trick. Beware, too much of it leads into two unmitigated disasters : banned for spamming or you simply get them irritated.

Cc Bibijay123 jagugu88li mirob yinks89 tunjilomo veekid and eniqurl you guys are invited.
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Last but not the least on the preference list.
Be consistent, reply comments and complete the story.


Nobody likes it when the author absconds with their fav. Characters.

#I REST MY PEN

jagugu88li:
This is "The Medium" reloaded.

I almost stopped reading when you warned flagrancy, I'm glad I decided to continue. I read when the sun is up though, cant risk it

The say what a man can do, a woman can double it. Our lady wont be spooked, no. Avenge the boy

elskillful:
Present.
i love your writing skills.
everyone dislikes linda.
but for me Linda all the way
N£XT pls.

Creeza:
Took a while tho!

" When Remi sat speechlessly on the table thinking to himself how he was gonna give it to her hard and raw.... Team Remi all the way..

girlhaley:
So bayo knew something all this while

I hope Sam is still alive

More ideas to ur story Lleigh

jagugu88li:
If Matt/Remi performs as expected, they might have a deal. The deal being that she unmasks herself.

With that statement and the fact that they are having another meeting scheduled for the coming Sunday, I'm bound to believe she meant allowing Matt/Remi to see her unmasked.

We'll watch as it unfolds


While jagugu88li sips her drink